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Attention Wal-mart Shoppers...

What happens when Ventus is left to watch over his trouble making twin at Wal-Mart? Insanity that's what. Read on if you like epic randomness.

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Chapter 1 - Hell comes to Wal-mart
Submitted: October 4, 2011 • Updated: October 4, 2011
Word count: 6193 • Size: 31k • Comments: 4 • views: 148

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deathheldwithinstuffing on October 6, 2011, 12:00:00 AM

deathheldwithinstuffing on (Chapter: 1)
deathheldwithinstuffingLmao. Awesome were Onee-chan. Shat was funny XD next we gotta do a story where Shadow gets his Psp! Also Uncle shadow knows all! Run Ven he'll corrupt you like he did Sae!

SweetxinsanityxSarah on October 6, 2011, 6:13:48 AM

SweetxinsanityxSarah on (Chapter: 1)
SweetxinsanityxSarahThankies, also get your booty to posting im dying of boredom here! xD (Or get your phone back to texting. As I said my Yahoo e-mail IM went kaput. xx)

Ven: But but...Uncle Shadow is kewllll

Alphonse: T_____T!

Ven: Ack sorry Uncle Al you are cool too! x.x

Anime_Ellie on October 4, 2011, 1:00:58 PM

Anime_Ellie on (Chapter: 1)
Anime_EllieI kept laughing all through this! Especially when Ven yelled " Leggo my Eggos!" XD

SweetxinsanityxSarah on October 4, 2011, 1:13:02 PM

SweetxinsanityxSarah on (Chapter: 1)
SweetxinsanityxSarahRealleh? I thought the evil toilet was the funniest part. And Ventus being a germaphobic made it even better. xD

Anime_Ellie on October 6, 2011, 9:30:06 AM

Anime_Ellie on (Chapter: index)
Anime_EllieYeah, I guess so. ... I know how he feels. D: