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Everyones afraid of something. by Sayka
View as PDF, Submitted: 2004-08-31, Updated: 2004-09-04, Chapters: 9, Size: 14K, Words: 3316, Comments: 22, Views: 416   
Anime/Manga (0) > BeyBlade (769)
The Bladebreakers get trapped in a huanted mansion!
Chapters
1 - Come into my parlor said the spider to the flys... - Submitted 2004-08-31 Updated: 2004-08-31 - 78 views, 422 words, 2k
2 - Trapped like rats... - Submitted 2004-08-31 Updated: 2004-08-31 - 93 views, 414 words, 2k
3 - Stuck in the web... - Submitted 2004-08-31 Updated: 2004-08-31 - 94 views, 451 words, 2k
4 - The larger group... - Submitted 2004-08-31 Updated: 2004-08-31 - 76 views, 271 words, 1k
5 - The missing three... - Submitted 2004-08-31 Updated: 2004-08-31 - 87 views, 283 words, 1k
6 - Discoveries! - Submitted 2004-08-31 Updated: 2004-08-31 - 86 views, 367 words, 2k
7 - Fighting Back! - Submitted 2004-09-04 Updated: 2004-09-04 - 89 views, 504 words, 2k
8 - Evening the odds! - Submitted 2004-09-04 Updated: 2004-09-04 - 92 views, 345 words, 1k
9 - The calm after the storm. - Submitted 2004-09-04 Updated: 2004-09-04 - 85 views, 259 words, 1k

22 Comments (Most recent 10). Show All
SoraYamato
Oct 16, 2006 05:09 PM by: SoraYamato chapter 9
Cool. Be careful of spelling errors, but that's about all I've got to say. Nice job and keep up the good work.
 
SoraYamato
Oct 16, 2006 05:07 PM by: SoraYamato chapter 8
FREEDOM!
So what lesson have all the good girls and boys learnt?
TEAMWORK!
 
SoraYamato
Oct 16, 2006 05:05 PM by: SoraYamato chapter 7
Cheating's is for losers! Go Meena, Luna and Kai! Get in there everyone else!
 
SoraYamato
Oct 16, 2006 05:04 PM by: SoraYamato chapter 6
So Meena only shows her fear when her little sis isn't around. The strong Big Sister.
I wonder what those three found...
 
SoraYamato
Oct 16, 2006 05:02 PM by: SoraYamato chapter 5
Somebody kill those spiders already!!
Uhh, I'm guessing Kia=Kai, right?
 
SoraYamato
Oct 16, 2006 05:00 PM by: SoraYamato chapter 4
Lol. Nice work with the comedy/slapstick.
Again, good use of the 'catching phrase' at the end
 
SoraYamato
Oct 16, 2006 04:58 PM by: SoraYamato chapter 3
WAAAH!! DIE SPIDERS!!!!!!!
So Kai isn't afraid of ghosts.
Poor Meena
 
SoraYamato
Oct 16, 2006 04:51 PM by: SoraYamato chapter 2
Max and Mariam = Cute. ^_^
Kai's scared of ghosts? Interesting. Nice use of tension, ending this chapter with a scream
 
SoraYamato
Oct 16, 2006 04:48 PM by: SoraYamato chapter 1
SOund's like this is gonna be interesting
 
Pocky_PixieSticks_Anime
Jan 12, 2006 10:17 PM by: Pocky_PixieSticks_Anime chapter 9
cool! that was so awesome! =^_^= *favs* *gives pocky and pixie sticks* this rocks!!!!!! =^_^=
 
Pocky_PixieSticks_Anime
Jan 12, 2006 10:16 PM by: Pocky_PixieSticks_Anime chapter 8
cool! that was awesome! Go, Meena! =^_^=
 
Pocky_PixieSticks_Anime
Jan 12, 2006 10:14 PM by: Pocky_PixieSticks_Anime chapter 7
ooh! cool! beybattle! =^_^= that jerk's cheating! Get him, Meena, Luna, Kai!!!
 
Pocky_PixieSticks_Anime
Jan 12, 2006 10:11 PM by: Pocky_PixieSticks_Anime chapter 6
no... not spiders. agh! this is cool (except the spiders). =^_^=
 
Pocky_PixieSticks_Anime
Jan 12, 2006 10:08 PM by: Pocky_PixieSticks_Anime chapter 5
ah! not the spiders again! this is so cool (aside from the spiders). =^_^=
 
Pocky_PixieSticks_Anime
Jan 12, 2006 10:06 PM by: Pocky_PixieSticks_Anime chapter 4
cool! =^_^= this awesome! i usually don't like creepy stuff but this is pretty cool. =^_^=
 
Pocky_PixieSticks_Anime
Jan 12, 2006 10:04 PM by: Pocky_PixieSticks_Anime chapter 3
scary! i hate spiders! ooh! i can't wait to read more. =^_^=
 
Pocky_PixieSticks_Anime
Jan 12, 2006 10:01 PM by: Pocky_PixieSticks_Anime chapter 2
ooh! creepy! cool! =^_^= i always thought Max and Mariam would make a cute couple.
 
Pocky_PixieSticks_Anime
Jan 12, 2006 09:58 PM by: Pocky_PixieSticks_Anime chapter 1
ooh! awesome start! i can't wait to read more. this is gonna be good. =^_^=
 
heartless-sinner
Feb 24, 2005 04:12 PM by: heartless-sinner chapter 9
SO AWESOME.TO TELL YOU THE TRUTH MEENA WAS FUNNEY. SHE REMINDED ME OF SOMEONE.HMMMMMMM...^-^
 
SilentSoul92
Sep 29, 2004 04:04 PM by: SilentSoul92 chapter 9
THAT WAS AWSOME!!! I had scary movie songs playing in the back ground and it totally fit. that was a great story! cant believe there are no comments. come on people you wouldnt know a good story if it hit you in th face. anyway great fic :)
 
Sayka
Sep 4, 2004 05:04 PM by: Sayka chapter 9
Oh poo. No ones commenting :(
PLEASE COMMENT!
 
Sayka
Aug 31, 2004 01:21 PM by: Sayka chapter 1
This is something I came up with while I wrote it- I hope you all like it! (Please comment)
 
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