Everyones afraid of something. by Sayka

Chapters

1 - Come into my parlor said the spider to the flys... - Submitted 2004-08-31 Updated: 2004-08-31 - 78 views, 422 words, 2k
2 - Trapped like rats... - Submitted 2004-08-31 Updated: 2004-08-31 - 93 views, 414 words, 2k
3 - Stuck in the web... - Submitted 2004-08-31 Updated: 2004-08-31 - 94 views, 451 words, 2k
4 - The larger group... - Submitted 2004-08-31 Updated: 2004-08-31 - 76 views, 271 words, 1k
5 - The missing three... - Submitted 2004-08-31 Updated: 2004-08-31 - 87 views, 283 words, 1k
6 - Discoveries! - Submitted 2004-08-31 Updated: 2004-08-31 - 86 views, 367 words, 2k
7 - Fighting Back! - Submitted 2004-09-04 Updated: 2004-09-04 - 89 views, 504 words, 2k
8 - Evening the odds! - Submitted 2004-09-04 Updated: 2004-09-04 - 92 views, 345 words, 1k
9 - The calm after the storm. - Submitted 2004-09-04 Updated: 2004-09-04 - 85 views, 259 words, 1k

22 Comments (Most recent 10). Show All

Oct 16, 2006 05:09 PM by: SoraYamato chapter 9

Cool. Be careful of spelling errors, but that's about all I've got to say. Nice job and keep up the good work.

Oct 16, 2006 05:07 PM by: SoraYamato chapter 8

FREEDOM!
So what lesson have all the good girls and boys learnt?
TEAMWORK!

Oct 16, 2006 05:05 PM by: SoraYamato chapter 7

Cheating's is for losers! Go Meena, Luna and Kai! Get in there everyone else!

Oct 16, 2006 05:04 PM by: SoraYamato chapter 6

So Meena only shows her fear when her little sis isn't around. The strong Big Sister.
I wonder what those three found...

Oct 16, 2006 05:02 PM by: SoraYamato chapter 5

Somebody kill those spiders already!!
Uhh, I'm guessing Kia=Kai, right?

Oct 16, 2006 05:00 PM by: SoraYamato chapter 4

Lol. Nice work with the comedy/slapstick.
Again, good use of the 'catching phrase' at the end

Oct 16, 2006 04:58 PM by: SoraYamato chapter 3

WAAAH!! DIE SPIDERS!!!!!!!
So Kai isn't afraid of ghosts.
Poor Meena

Oct 16, 2006 04:51 PM by: SoraYamato chapter 2

Max and Mariam = Cute. ^_^
Kai's scared of ghosts? Interesting. Nice use of tension, ending this chapter with a scream

Oct 16, 2006 04:48 PM by: SoraYamato chapter 1

SOund's like this is gonna be interesting

Jan 12, 2006 10:17 PM by: Pocky_PixieSticks_Anime chapter 9

cool! that was so awesome! =^_^= *favs* *gives pocky and pixie sticks* this rocks!!!!!! =^_^=

Jan 12, 2006 10:16 PM by: Pocky_PixieSticks_Anime chapter 8

cool! that was awesome! Go, Meena! =^_^=

Jan 12, 2006 10:14 PM by: Pocky_PixieSticks_Anime chapter 7

ooh! cool! beybattle! =^_^= that jerk's cheating! Get him, Meena, Luna, Kai!!!

Jan 12, 2006 10:11 PM by: Pocky_PixieSticks_Anime chapter 6

no... not spiders. agh! this is cool (except the spiders). =^_^=

Jan 12, 2006 10:08 PM by: Pocky_PixieSticks_Anime chapter 5

ah! not the spiders again! this is so cool (aside from the spiders). =^_^=

Jan 12, 2006 10:06 PM by: Pocky_PixieSticks_Anime chapter 4

cool! =^_^= this awesome! i usually don't like creepy stuff but this is pretty cool. =^_^=

Jan 12, 2006 10:04 PM by: Pocky_PixieSticks_Anime chapter 3

scary! i hate spiders! ooh! i can't wait to read more. =^_^=

Jan 12, 2006 10:01 PM by: Pocky_PixieSticks_Anime chapter 2

ooh! creepy! cool! =^_^= i always thought Max and Mariam would make a cute couple.

Jan 12, 2006 09:58 PM by: Pocky_PixieSticks_Anime chapter 1

ooh! awesome start! i can't wait to read more. this is gonna be good. =^_^=

Feb 24, 2005 04:12 PM by: heartless-sinner chapter 9

SO AWESOME.TO TELL YOU THE TRUTH MEENA WAS FUNNEY. SHE REMINDED ME OF SOMEONE.HMMMMMMM...^-^

Sep 29, 2004 04:04 PM by: SilentSoul92 chapter 9

THAT WAS AWSOME!!! I had scary movie songs playing in the back ground and it totally fit. that was a great story! cant believe there are no comments. come on people you wouldnt know a good story if it hit you in th face. anyway great fic :)

Sep 4, 2004 05:04 PM by: Sayka chapter 9

Oh poo. No ones commenting :(
PLEASE COMMENT!

Aug 31, 2004 01:21 PM by: Sayka chapter 1

This is something I came up with while I wrote it- I hope you all like it! (Please comment)