Mask of Innocence by cry_dark_raven

, Submitted: 2004-09-01, Updated: 2004-09-01, Chapters: 1, Size: 1K, Words: 147, Comments: 7, Views: 140
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a free verse. its copyrighted. this poem is for those who've betrayed you, and expect sheer pity to comfort you....

7 Comments

Jan 16, 2005 10:40 PM by: kaname_yasha5689 chapter 1

Man Jordy-chan I just recently whent through this,but at least I know not all people are evil,and I have a much better BF because of it.I love the way you write its just great.

Oct 15, 2004 06:22 PM by: shadow_kitten chapter 1

wow jordan if you want to talk i'll listen. well awesome job! it really goes deep!

Sep 12, 2004 04:50 PM by: blue_dragon35 chapter 1

ah,i get now...yea,wat megan said.i hate wen ppl act like that twords me & my pals!-__-

Sep 1, 2004 04:43 PM by: cry_dark_raven chapter 1

grace you dont know who this person is, but they have betrayed us all. they act all their pity out on you its all bull what they talk about....and their is more than one of them. you dont see who they are because they lie to you....

Sep 1, 2004 04:41 PM by: blue_dragon35 chapter 1

omg...jordan,y did you write
this...r u okay?im
there for you jojo,u know that.
talk to me

Sep 1, 2004 04:41 PM by: cry_dark_raven chapter 1

im sorry if any one has ever suffered this kind of pain....