"A Broken Heart" by lost_broken_confused

, Submitted: 2004-09-11, Updated: 2004-09-11, Chapters: 1, Size: 1K, Words: 180, Comments: 6, Views: 174
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a poem about a girl's heart that was broken by some asshole; pretty sad

6 Comments

Dec 21, 2005 07:07 PM by: Kaizer13 chapter 1

this is a really good poem that is sometimes true.

nice job *favs*

Sep 21, 2005 09:42 PM by: sofiadivine chapter 1

Sad but true... Too many people are left with nothing but a broken heart after a hope at more than life. Yet after those falls how many people actually want to lend a hand and help you out. Great poem.

Jan 9, 2005 07:00 PM by: weewoo chapter 1

that was cool. i could see the picture in my head as i read this. your going in my favs! ^^

Nov 29, 2004 11:06 PM by: shamanic_princess chapter 1

nice poem, but quite sad.

Sep 15, 2004 03:36 PM by: weird_klown chapter 1

so sad.....yet sometimes true....you did a great job! ^_~

Sep 11, 2004 11:33 AM by: Emotionless_Dragon chapter 1

thats a really good poem...yet sad.i can feel the emotion. thats deep. **adds 2 faves after does first comment dance**