please update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i really want to know what happens to them!!!!!!!!!

PLEASE ADD MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M DYING TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS.......PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

faves x100000000
write more i beg of u P L ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ

this is good!!!!!!!!!!! update asap!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WHAAAAAAAAAAAA! So sad! I'm nothing but an emotonless husk and I almost cried reading this.

Good so far, but a little sappy for my tastes

Words cannot describe how good this is.

You are evil! And good news the mean old nun isn't going to be back for a few months! But you are still evil!

I'm going to takea page out of my sis's book(the nun) and say this. Cruelty to Ryou is unforgivable.
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... I was here a long time ago, and still like this?!?

Come on!! Next chapter!! I'm begging you please next chapter! I love your fiction!

OMG THAT WAS THE BEST EVER, except for the first chapter. Man I haven't seen you for awhile. How are things going? Oh back to the comment--THAT WAS SOOOOOOO AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU ROCK!!!!!!!!!! This is kind of like my story except for your's is more darker then mine. Oh please read mine if you haven't already because I must know if it's good or not. It's called "A Tomb Robber's Story" Oh other people that are reading this comment please read my Bakura story. YOUR STORY ROCKS AND CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER TO COME OUT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please tell me also and love to here from you ^^
Favs ^_^

OMG! I love it! Please write more!

please write more

That is a great story. Please write more!

Awwwwwwwwwwwww, more please!!! Me like!!!!!

me want more please!!?!?!?! thats so awesome *fave*

Ooh, nice turn. Me likes your story!! You = very coolness. XD Keep it goin'!

Aroooo~ooo, nice nice NICE fic!! Gah please continue this!! It's so different than all the happy-fluffy-nobody-gets-hurt-happily-ever-after fics that I'm so tired of seeing!! 'TIS A WORK OF GREATNESS!! Praise! Praise I say!!

*CRYS ALOT* *kick yamis @$$ like Dementor and find, revives, and takes ryou to MY house*
CONTINUE PLEASE

How cute Abusive Love
sorry that just poped into my head gtg marik yell at YB again

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA YOU FINISHED THE THIRD CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It was good!! No not good GREAT!!!!!!!! When did Ryou get all worked up when talking to Yami and Yugi? Yami doesn't need to get into Ryou and Bakura's sistuation. They can handle it. Bakura is being morr then a jek then usual. Again NICE JOB AND THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!! *favs infinity*

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! what happened to him?! who was getting closer?! was it his yami?! I need ANSWERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Is he gay or something? i hope he loves brotherly way! it's still preety sad though DAMN EVIL BAKURA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OMG THAT IS SOOOOOOO SAD! Poor Ryou has to suffer from Yami Bakura and now it's caused him to leave the house weak and tired and now he is on the ground in the middle of a park in the pooring rain. Why must he suffer so much at once. Nice story and keep writing or typing.:) *favs* *puts on coat to go find Ryou after kicking sleepy Yami Bakura's @$$.*

Whoa that was mean of Yami Bakura to treat Ryou like that. I mean who would want to hurt that cute adorible person. HE MADE HIM BLEED FOR GOD SAKE! I would love to go over and kick Yami Bakura's @$$ so hard that it would bleed. He makes me mad at times but he is ok until he pushes it by hurting my little brother. Nice story. *favs* *growls at Yami Bakura as I sheild Ryou from that damn knife.*

please continue this was so good