...Write more...Please!!

this story is SO COOL um just one teeny tiny problem.. sorry but you gotta remember to edit the story before sending it in especially spaces. Just letting you know.. no offense

please get the next chapter. i wanna read more

O_O!!! *gripping the computer screen with a death grip*

Dang, tense-ness! Wow, just wow. Even without memories, Link's personality and habits seem right on!

(Writing this as I read it)
"...great room with several servants willing to jump off a building if he told them to."

My parents gave me a weird look when I laughed at this sentence...I love it! One thing though...I noticed the name Mulan a while before this sentence...Did you mean Malon or is this a new character...O_o?

Oh, good description, walking into the castle stables...

Hehe! Got to keep the hat!

Awwww, cute Link and Zelda scene! Ack, but there's the Mulan again! It must be Malon...*Is slightly obsessive about names, my apologies*

O_O!!!!!!

Uh-oh...Evil laughter...that can't be good...Dun dun dun...
Nice one on the suspense there!

Oh, brilliantly written! You use of vocabulary is great and you put together a great mix of action and description!

Wow, I like so far! ^^

I just got finished reading the translated version of the OoT manga, and you used fabulous description in your writing, I could easily comprehend here, as to what I read. Luff your style!

Hope to see another chapter, keep it up! ^___^

Thanks! it's not finished, I am still working on it... ^-^

My Lord, You're Story Is Awesome!!!
Check Out My Legend Of Zelda Fanart Plz!

Well, it looks like I am doing another fanfiction, but this time it is about OoT, one of the best games in the world! Hope you enjoy the first chapter. Comments appreciated! ^_^