Good chapter ^^ Cool sounding festival. Poor Kiyera, I really feel for her.

Hey! ^^ I really loved this chapter, too. It gives a lot of insights to the characters so far, and introduced some spiffy new people, so it definitely isn't boring. :)

I FINALLY started actually working on Generation EbonStar again, and I have it pretty much planned out, so expect updates in the near future.

Nice chapter ^^ I liked that it was about Ypae mostly, we needed more info on this little thing ^.~
Xyza is awesome, I've decided xD How do you prononce her name?
Hee hee, horsies! Kat is awesome, what a wild little child. And Shyra almost hit Azshiu! *craks up* Loved that too. Not boring to me, I actually think it was the most entertaing chapter yet. The classes aren't my thing, I'm not so proper myself xP But you know that.
And the pretty girls never know that they're pretty is so true too *points to you* You're beautiful! *insert hearts here*
I think that's it. Damn, long comment. These chapters are like novels campared to my mini chapters in Devil's Whore xD I'll be waiting for the next chapter ^^

Yayyy!! -^^- I finally got to read it! Haha, thank GRIM for school computers.

The bold letters were a surprise, lol. I was like "WOAH." But I really liked this chapter. We're getting more insight into the real character of your characters. :) Poor Bain...
It's almost sad how Azshiu almost seems to go out of his way to make Shyra irate. XD They are so cute, lol.
*stomps on Kyra* :D

Yeah, guys, sorry about the format difference and the big bold print in the center of the story; I don't know what's going on. Anyways, I hope you guys enjoy this chapter ^^

well, I finally got to reading it ^^ Good job, nice chapter. I'm honestly much more interested in what Kiyera is doing then Shyra. YAY FOR VIOLENCE! ^^ ANyway, keep it up, next chapter is being awaited for ^^
Can you believe I'm commenting on this account?? I just uploaded a really random story...and I'm too lazy to log out... xD
BAINxAZSHIU FOREVER! *falls out of her chair laughing and has a sizuire*

-^^- Yeeeeee!!! I'm so happy the second chapter came out, and I can't wait for the third! It was an unexpected surprise; Shyra being a tomboy and Kiyera being so girly. XD Excellent twist.

Lol, Iku reminds me of my character, Tism. :3 He's a rabbit-cat, too, lol... different coloring, though, and his paws are pretty large. How cute. ^^-

...God was that a long read...nice job, I must say ^^ Very nice, I like Mira...I like characters with white hair...o.O not sure why...and Shyra is very tomboyish...wow...nice job again, I can't wait for more...and I'm not really sure what else to put here...*fave* first story to be faved on thid acocunt! w00t to you! ^^

O.O That was awesome! You did such a great job on this story! You MUST comtinue! *starts bugging the shoot out of you to continue* Man, that would make a great movie! ^^ Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep it up! ^^

OO; I just finished reading the entire chapter (cuz it's long...awesomely so. ^_^) and WOW. OMGRIM. You should DEFINITELY keep writing this. It's SO awesome. I can invision almost everything perfectly in my mind...

And I am a Ramyna fangirl. XD Yay. Go Ramyna!

continue continue CONTINUE!! DAMMIT CONTINUE!! IT'S GOOD!!! Go you! You actually started your story and it's good!! I'm gonna keep saying that. IT'S GOOD IT'S GOOD!!!