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Demons on the Outside by setokaibaslittlesis
View as PDF, Submitted: 2006-08-08, Updated: 2008-06-22, Chapters: 25, Size: 202K, Words: 40876, Comments: 110, Views: 1737   
Anime/Manga (0) > Naruto series (2778) > Fan Characters (OC's) (5118)
Keiko lived in the leaf village for many happy, quiet years. Then the day after she passes her genin exam, everything goes horribly wrong. Thought to be mentally unstable, she is barred from passing the normal way. Can she get through it all and become a better person?
Chapters
1 - The Name Means Lucky: Barred From Passing - Submitted 2006-08-08 Updated: 2006-08-08 - 133 views, 976 words, 5k
2 - Unrequited Love:Hatred all Around! - Submitted 2006-10-02 Updated: 2006-10-02 - 104 views, 524 words, 2k
3 - Grab and Go: Get the Bell! - Submitted 2006-10-30 Updated: 2006-10-30 - 97 views, 1212 words, 6k
4 - Every Day Brings New Growth - Submitted 2007-01-08 Updated: 2007-01-08 - 79 views, 1275 words, 6k
5 - On the Sidelines: Rogue Ninjas Attack! - Submitted 2007-03-09 Updated: 2007-03-09 - 71 views, 1244 words, 6k
6 - Out of the Action: The Shortest Chapter EVER! - Submitted 2007-03-09 Updated: 2007-03-09 - 74 views, 213 words, 1k
7 - The Wonderful World of Filler: - Submitted 2007-08-02 Updated: 2007-08-02 - 71 views, 1509 words, 8k
8 - Battle on the Bridge! - Submitted 2007-11-25 Updated: 2007-11-25 - 57 views, 1825 words, 9k
9 - New Friends And A New Challenge! - Submitted 2007-12-02 Updated: 2007-12-02 - 57 views, 2257 words, 11k
10 - Make It Or Break It: The Chunnin Exams Begin! - Submitted 2007-12-03 Updated: 2007-12-03 - 52 views, 1698 words, 8k
11 - Forest of Death: Does History Repeat Itself? - Submitted 2007-12-03 Updated: 2007-12-03 - 75 views, 2358 words, 12k
12 - Make it or Break it: The Pre-Lims Begin! - Submitted 2007-12-10 Updated: 2007-12-10 - 61 views, 1061 words, 5k
13 - Kaori Vs. Kristen: Let The Battles Begin! - Submitted 2007-12-11 Updated: 2007-12-11 - 58 views, 1916 words, 10k
14 - Are They Over Yet? The Chunnin Exams Continue! - Submitted 2007-12-17 Updated: 2007-12-17 - 59 views, 1887 words, 10k
15 - Blah Blah Blah, More Chunnin Stuff - Submitted 2007-12-19 Updated: 2007-12-19 - 57 views, 978 words, 5k
16 - Keiko...Doesn't Really Enjoy Hugs - Submitted 2007-12-21 Updated: 2007-12-21 - 75 views, 1896 words, 9k
17 - A Perverted Old Guy And A Crazy Sand Ninja - Submitted 2007-12-22 Updated: 2007-12-22 - 60 views, 1894 words, 9k
18 - Can You Tell I'm Running Out of Chapter Names? - Submitted 2008-01-10 Updated: 2008-01-10 - 62 views, 2226 words, 11k
19 - Finally the Finals - Submitted 2008-01-22 Updated: 2008-01-30 - 72 views, 2691 words, 14k
20 - Let's Get Going: Saving Konoha! - Submitted 2008-01-30 Updated: 2008-02-04 - 119 views, 1897 words, 9k
21 - Oh Em Gee! Straw's Updating! - Submitted 2008-04-11 Updated: 2008-04-11 - 76 views, 3042 words, 15k
22 - The Badly Written Sappy Funeral Chapter of Wonder - Submitted 2008-05-09 Updated: 2008-05-09 - 36 views, 1407 words, 7k
23 - Stage Two: A New Team - Submitted 2008-05-22 Updated: 2008-05-22 - 47 views, 1951 words, 10k
24 - Missions for Some, Visitors for Others - Submitted 2008-05-23 Updated: 2008-05-26 - 57 views, 1299 words, 6k
25 - Unfinished Chapter- Post Ideas for Story Below - Submitted 2008-05-27 Updated: 2008-06-22 - 98 views, 1640 words, 8k

90 Comments
NamidaNara
Jul 5, 2008 07:44 PM by: NamidaNara chapter 25
Remember the idea I gave you?
 
PandaChan21
Jun 19, 2008 12:24 AM by: PandaChan21 chapter 25
hey, good job so far! When do kristen and akara show up? I have a pretty funny idea for akara, and a cute bit of fluff for lee and kristen, if you want to know...
 
NamidaNara
Jun 15, 2008 08:45 PM by: NamidaNara chapter 25
Luv it!

I kinda had a cute idea to how Keiko and Nara start to connect, if you wanna hear it...
 
ladychaos
Jun 15, 2008 02:31 AM by: ladychaos chapter 25
awesome update^^
 
YuckFou
Jun 14, 2008 10:54 PM by: YuckFou chapter 25
Oooh, nice update! cant wait for more! ^_^
 
YuckFou
Jun 13, 2008 08:03 AM by: YuckFou chapter 24
Wow, I liked this one! You really know the personallity of my boys...I LOVE IT!
 
YuckFou
Jun 13, 2008 07:57 AM by: YuckFou chapter 23
Hey! SWEET! You added my SEn-sei! =3

I love Midori...Shes awesome! ^o^
but she dont have a face FULL of pericings, just a nose stud and a stud on her chin. I think she has 3 or 4 pericings in both ears...I dont know.

BUT YAY! lol Tai the @$$ and Jami the golden boy...cute. <3
 
shinypikachu2608
Jun 7, 2008 03:30 AM by: shinypikachu2608 chapter 11
woah.....
 
shinypikachu2608
May 30, 2008 02:13 AM by: shinypikachu2608 chapter 2
keeeewl....
hinata shouldnt just bail on keiko like that though.
 
ladychaos
May 29, 2008 08:12 AM by: ladychaos chapter 24
awesome chapter!
from the sounds of it Itachi is holding something over Selina's head
 
FluffysPrincess2968
May 28, 2008 09:52 AM by: FluffysPrincess2968 chapter 23
lmao. xD nice, i love how you made her attitude. :P
 
QuestionMarks109
May 24, 2008 09:21 AM by: QuestionMarks109 chapter 23
KayEedubleYouEl CHappie. ;] . Ishizu really hit iot off with those studens -_-;. Lawl. AWESOME KERP ERT ERP!
 
setokaibaslittlesis
May 24, 2008 07:45 PM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 0
Wow. I don't think I understood half of that.
 
QuestionMarks109
May 31, 2008 01:23 PM by: QuestionMarks109 chapter 0
Lawl. xD
 
Nekogal411
May 23, 2008 07:35 PM by: Nekogal411 chapter 21
^_^ I love this chapter! -Goes off to read more-
 
ladychaos
May 23, 2008 01:29 PM by: ladychaos chapter 23
awesome chapter
it is intresting what the teachers really think of their students
 
PandaChan21
May 18, 2008 11:35 PM by: PandaChan21 chapter 22
wow...that fit perfectly. It fit us all. I nearly cried...
 
setokaibaslittlesis
May 19, 2008 02:25 PM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 0
I'm glad you thought so. ^^
I, personally, hated this chapter.

I can't write depressing non-angsty things to save my life. ;_;
 
YuckFou
May 12, 2008 08:05 PM by: YuckFou chapter 22
Thats REALLY good. Kinda sad at the same time.

Poor old man.
 
hflp
May 9, 2008 09:25 AM by: hflp chapter 22
I liked it. Every story needs a highly emotional scene in it.
 
ladychaos
May 9, 2008 09:23 AM by: ladychaos chapter 22
it's a very sad chapter, not only did Keiko have to go to the 3rd hokage's funeral but she had to cremate Balki. poor thing, i can understand why she didn't want to talk to anyone
 
PandaChan21
Apr 15, 2008 06:12 PM by: PandaChan21 chapter 21
Ooh, very nice! I loved it, and you always characterize Akara perfectly. Funny fact: Akara is terrified of scorpions.
 
NamidaNara
Apr 12, 2008 07:05 PM by: NamidaNara chapter 21
Awesome!!

But....You still didn't add Nara! Unless I read wrong...
 
ladychaos
Apr 11, 2008 10:33 PM by: ladychaos chapter 21
awesome chapter, i like the fight scenes
you described Selina's controled demon form very well XD
 
YuckFou
Apr 11, 2008 08:12 PM by: YuckFou chapter 21
That was so awesome I loved it Straw. But...Who is Midori? All I know who Midori is is Tai, Jami and Selina's Sensei (belongs to hi-lary on dA) whos this one?
 
hflp
Apr 11, 2008 06:26 PM by: hflp chapter 21
Good chapter. Worth the wait. But that ending was so sad. T.T
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Apr 11, 2008 07:30 PM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 0
0.o
You read my story?
 
sailoraqua13
Apr 11, 2008 06:18 PM by: sailoraqua13 chapter 21
Ohhhhhhh...TTTTTTTTTT____TTTTTTTTTTTTTT Please add the next chappie soon! Hey, little fact I forgot to mention about Reiko:
She has a wolf demon they all call the Shiomi inside her. It only comes out when she's really angry and when it comes out of her her chakra turns green.
 
YuckFou
Mar 17, 2008 07:36 AM by: YuckFou chapter 0
UPDATE!
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Apr 11, 2008 06:05 PM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 0
I DID!! =D
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Mar 9, 2008 10:05 AM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 1
ON NOES!
I deleted the GOOD chapter one!
NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!
 
FluffysPrincess2968
Mar 7, 2008 06:42 PM by: FluffysPrincess2968 chapter 6
nooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;_;
 
FluffysPrincess2968
Mar 7, 2008 06:40 PM by: FluffysPrincess2968 chapter 0
Blarg. I r laazzzzzzzyyy. =/ i've just been skimming through this, even if I can read really fast. =/ Which chapter does Ishizu and Murasaki come in? or have I skimmed to much? =/
 
PandaChan21
Feb 9, 2008 06:01 PM by: PandaChan21 chapter 20
Update soon! I'm practically withering away and dying over here!
 
KionaKina
Feb 8, 2008 05:31 PM by: KionaKina chapter 20
WHAT WILL HAPPEN?!
 
NamidaNara
Feb 6, 2008 02:41 PM by: NamidaNara chapter 0
Amaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaazin!

And yeah! You said Nara would be in this chappie!!!
 
ladychaos
Feb 5, 2008 09:16 AM by: ladychaos chapter 20
oooooo awesome chapter XD
 
can't wait for more
 
YuckFou
Feb 4, 2008 06:42 PM by: YuckFou chapter 20
YAHOO!
Great chapter! The suspence is killing me! O___O
 
YuckFou
Feb 3, 2008 11:29 AM by: YuckFou chapter 20
Me too! Its getting good!
 
KionaKina
Feb 2, 2008 12:01 PM by: KionaKina chapter 20
Tell me when the chappie is done
 
ladychaos
Jan 30, 2008 09:37 AM by: ladychaos chapter 19
that was an awesome fight with keiko and kaori^^
 
PandaChan21
Jan 23, 2008 04:57 PM by: PandaChan21 chapter 19
Hurry up! I wanna see the next part!
 
YuckFou
Jan 23, 2008 10:04 AM by: YuckFou chapter 19
=D
 
KionaKina
Jan 22, 2008 05:48 PM by: KionaKina chapter 19
Darn, Kaori lost. Oh well, it was a really good fight. Let me know when the chapter is done ^_^
 
ladychaos
Jan 13, 2008 01:05 PM by: ladychaos chapter 18
awesome chapter^^
 
one little thing though, Selina dose not have the demon sealed inside her, she was born half a two tailed demon (her dad was a demon her mom was human)
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Jan 13, 2008 03:56 PM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 0
Ahhh.
>_<
Well, I feel stupid.

I'll fix that as soon as I can. Which will probably be tomorrow when I get home from school.
 
ladychaos
Jan 15, 2008 01:30 PM by: ladychaos chapter 0
you don't have to re-wright the chapter if you don't wan to^^
in a future chapter you could write it that it was Kaori's idea that she had the demon sealed inside her or something like that
 
PandaChan21
Jan 11, 2008 04:30 PM by: PandaChan21 chapter 18
Best chapter name ever! I like how you portrayed Akara. It sounds just like her!
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Jan 13, 2008 03:56 PM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 0
YAY!
At least I'm protraying one person correctly!
^^
 
KionaKina
Jan 11, 2008 04:16 PM by: KionaKina chapter 18
Ok, 1. Brilliant Chapter name. I started laughing when I read it.

2. I...fell...so...special *Glomp* YOU ROCK!! But who's gonna win our match? wow...I'm totally stoked!

UPDATE!
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Jan 13, 2008 03:59 PM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 0
^^ I'm glad everyone likes the chapter title. I really just randomly typed it in.

And why do you feel special?
XD
I'm attempting, but everytime I get on the computer with that intention, I get distracted.
Mayhaps I'll get stuff written during school tomorrow and will update it. I'll be updating more now that my little brother's saxaphone lessons have started up. That gives me about two hours with the computer to myself.
 
SnowKitty
Jan 5, 2008 06:52 AM by: SnowKitty chapter 17
Ooh! Very nice chappies!
 
PandaChan21
Jan 4, 2008 02:22 PM by: PandaChan21 chapter 17
Nice...I gotta use that quote sometime...
 
finalfantasy
Dec 28, 2007 09:09 PM by: finalfantasy chapter 17
ooohhhh...
hehe, burn, gaara...
 
finalfantasy
Dec 28, 2007 09:07 PM by: finalfantasy chapter 16
heyyy....
sorry i havent been posting regular comments...
ive been really busy...
but, the story rox! i just finished reading all the new chapters. comment me when u update!
:P
 
CupidStunt
Dec 23, 2007 07:08 PM by: CupidStunt chapter 17
Is Tai and Jami not gonna be in here again?
awell...
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Dec 24, 2007 03:03 PM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 0
They aren't going to be in every chapter.
The story is told in third person limited, meaning if Keiko isn't there, it isn't being told in the story.
I may change that in the near future.
Rest assured that I will be putting them in before the Chunnin Exam Finals. =)
 
CupidStunt
Dec 24, 2007 06:38 PM by: CupidStunt chapter 0
ok
 
KionaKina
Dec 22, 2007 04:44 PM by: KionaKina chapter 17
O_O ... *Points and laughs insanely at the part with Jiraiya* THAT was bloody hysterical!!! *Falls over laughing*
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Dec 24, 2007 03:03 PM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 0
XD Thanks
 
ladychaos
Dec 22, 2007 12:28 PM by: ladychaos chapter 17
lol Choji isn't going to be happy
awesome chapter
 
PandaChan21
Dec 21, 2007 10:44 PM by: PandaChan21 chapter 16
Right then...no killing Sasuke in the immediate future, then...
 
PandaChan21
Dec 21, 2007 10:41 PM by: PandaChan21 chapter 15
Hey! Gimme back my confetti!
 
KionaKina
Dec 21, 2007 04:54 PM by: KionaKina chapter 16
Hey, it's Jami! And Selina! *Laughs* I love this chappie, it's awesome...but i'm afraid to mess with Selina now... O_O She seems mmmaaaaaddddd.
 
CupidStunt
Dec 21, 2007 05:52 PM by: CupidStunt chapter 0
No one loves Tai...:(
 
ladychaos
Dec 21, 2007 01:51 PM by: ladychaos chapter 13
awesome fights, although i thought Kaori would end up the winner...oh well
 
ladychaos
Dec 21, 2007 01:48 PM by: ladychaos chapter 12
now that is going to be an interesting fight, wonder who will win
 
ladychaos
Dec 21, 2007 01:46 PM by: ladychaos chapter 10
Anko's entrance was always to coolest
nice chapter
 
ladychaos
Dec 21, 2007 01:06 PM by: ladychaos chapter 6
WTF! Kakashi is a jerk hitting Balki like that, poor little guy
 
ladychaos
Dec 21, 2007 12:50 PM by: ladychaos chapter 4
Kakashi is so cruel to Keiko
great chapter though
 
ladychaos
Dec 21, 2007 12:38 PM by: ladychaos chapter 3
awesome chapter
 
ladychaos
Dec 21, 2007 12:30 PM by: ladychaos chapter 2
wow, i never would have expected Hinata to act like that...
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Dec 21, 2007 12:37 PM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 0
Meh...yeah. I need to write the first few chapters again. I changed too many cannons' actual personality.
 
ladychaos
Dec 21, 2007 12:28 PM by: ladychaos chapter 1
that's a shame they arn't letting her pass, poor Keiko
 
ladychaos
Dec 21, 2007 12:25 PM by: ladychaos chapter 16
awesome chapter, i like how you've captured the emotions of all the characters
lol it sounds like Selina is PMSing
 
CupidStunt
Dec 21, 2007 12:01 PM by: CupidStunt chapter 16
This is really interesting! I love it! Thanks so much for adding my charaters in! ^_^

I hope Tai gets a bigger part too next chapter. He's basically my alter ego, for my bratty side and Jami is my shy side.

Im faving this!
 
KionaKina
Dec 19, 2007 06:14 PM by: KionaKina chapter 15
awesomeness!! your story is totally awesome!!!
 
PandaChan21
Dec 17, 2007 08:37 PM by: PandaChan21 chapter 14
*freaks* OH MY GOD, JACKERAH! *still freaks out*

Good chappie! *faves story to infinity*
 
KionaKina
Dec 17, 2007 04:22 PM by: KionaKina chapter 14
Aww, I remember that fight agaisnt Gaara and Lee. It was really awesome but so sad.

Well, good chappie!
 
PandaChan21
Dec 13, 2007 05:13 PM by: PandaChan21 chapter 13
I agree with Kay-chan and Ki-chan...POOR HINATA! Oh, and the fight was awesome!!!
 
SnowKitty
Dec 12, 2007 05:35 AM by: SnowKitty chapter 13
Agreeing with KionaKina on this one. Our fight was awesome! Great chappie! ^-^
 
KionaKina
Dec 11, 2007 07:01 PM by: KionaKina chapter 13
HINATA!!! *Panicks* OMG!! GET SOME HELP!!! *Freaks out*

And I loved my fight...BUT HINATA-CHAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Dec 11, 2007 07:01 PM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 0
Man...
0.o
You read that fasssst.
 
PandaChan21
Dec 10, 2007 09:32 PM by: PandaChan21 chapter 12
*stares, then collapses to ground*

Gaara: Oh great, now guess who has to wake her up...

Kay: Oh...that's easy! *pokes me*

Me: AHH! OKAY, I'M UP! *bows to you* Arigato, good work. Read my story, there's more on my attacks in the new chappie!

Everyone: SAYONARA!!
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Dec 11, 2007 12:58 PM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 0
I'll make sure to that before your battle. ^^
 
SnowKitty
Dec 10, 2007 07:03 PM by: SnowKitty chapter 12
Whoa. That's interesting. I'm gonna be fighting Kaori?! I look forward to seeing how that's going to turn out. Your story is pretty good, although I've only read this chappie! Good job! ^-^
 
KionaKina
Dec 11, 2007 07:01 PM by: KionaKina chapter 0
yuppers, tis a good fight...you stab me ^^;;
 
KionaKina
Dec 10, 2007 07:01 PM by: KionaKina chapter 12
O_O I GOTTA FACE MEH FRIEND?! *Falls to knees* NNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!

btw, update soon! ^_^
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Dec 11, 2007 01:00 PM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 0
Yeah, Sorry about that.
I didn't want to change the attacks and we had enough people.
If it makes you feel any better, orginally you were going to fight Jackerah, who is on your own team.
But now I have enough people so teams don't have to fight each other.
And...and...
-feels slightly guilty-
 
PandaChan21
Dec 9, 2007 06:39 PM by: PandaChan21 chapter 11
I'm speechless.

Gaara: *is in teh emo corner* You didn't have to glomp me that hard...now I can't feel my legs...

Meh: *smiles* Good work. Here's a cookie...*gives you cookie, then throws confetti in the air*
 
KionaKina
Dec 4, 2007 05:09 PM by: KionaKina chapter 11
Wow...that was just...wow

I LOVE your fic, it's so dramatic and well-written!!
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Dec 5, 2007 01:08 PM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 0
Thanks!
That means a lot to me, KionaKina.
 
cherryblossom93
Dec 3, 2007 06:36 PM by: cherryblossom93 chapter 10
Jeepers creepers. Ibiki is intimidating.

Yosh! I love Anko and all of her brash idiocy-ness. Cool chapter, I can't wait for the Forest of Death arc.

^.^
 
KionaKina
Dec 3, 2007 06:16 PM by: KionaKina chapter 10
I loved that part of the test, it was so funny how they all were like "WTF!? Ya mean that was a fluke?!" It's awesome...

CHUUNIN EXAMS ROCK!!! Let me know if you need details on Kaori for it
 
sasuke4kun
Dec 3, 2007 04:55 PM by: sasuke4kun chapter 10
it was good reminds me of the naruto exam i like.
Keiko seems a howle lot like naruto which is cool.
I love Anko's entry LOL she is ready.(:
but i haven't read your other ones yet i just might you never know when you will get a comment from me.
OOO OO ja you are the first one i have comented on a stroy ever congrats. JK
im out.
 
KionaKina
Dec 3, 2007 06:18 AM by: KionaKina chapter 9
Wooow...KAORI!!! *Cheers* Thanks for including me!!!
 
cherryblossom93
Nov 26, 2007 01:20 PM by: cherryblossom93 chapter 8
Awesomeness. Great job on the chapter! This is one of my favorite arcs in the series, so I love reading fanfictions on them.

Update soon!

^.^
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Nov 25, 2007 07:04 PM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 8
;___;
Why doesn't it accpet my punctuation and paragraphs?
WHHHYYYY?
 
cherryblossom93
Nov 26, 2007 01:24 PM by: cherryblossom93 chapter 0
Oh, you're submitting it as a document that you saved in your computer. FAC is stupid like that.

It replaces all quotes with weird little squares, when you submit a chapter from a file already on your computer. Just copy and paste everything from the original document (after clicking the BB version of submitting a chapter).

Ah....I stink at giving instructions, don't I? XD

Feel free to ask if you have any questions.

^.^
 
finalfantasy
Aug 2, 2007 05:17 PM by: finalfantasy chapter 7
YAY! thank u so much for updating, i have been waiting for forever! i love it!
 
finalfantasy
Jul 5, 2007 09:15 PM by: finalfantasy chapter 6
omg! after this, im gonna HATE kakashi!
 
cherryblossom93
Apr 6, 2007 04:21 PM by: cherryblossom93 chapter 6
Eep! Kakashi doesn't like puppies very much, does he? STOP HITTING THE PUPPY! IT'S A PUPPY! You don't hit puppies, you just don't. Sicko. Lol, sorry, but I have two dogs (one of which is a puppy). Sorry for the lateness of my comment...But great chapters! Okay, I only have one small piece of advice that you really don't have to listen to, cause it isn't a big deal. If you feel like it, space everything out a little more. It makes the story look longer and it's easier to read. Just a suggestion, because I know that I want some critism from people on my stories...All I get are compliments or threats when I don't update fast enough...Mostly threats...(I'm afraid to sleep at night...)XD
 
cherryblossom93
Jan 10, 2007 05:53 PM by: cherryblossom93 chapter 4
Yay! Can't wait to see what happens next...^^
Thanx a bunch for lettin' me know!
 
cherryblossom93
Oct 30, 2006 03:16 PM by: cherryblossom93 chapter 3
great chappie...still luvin' it!!!!

And just so ya know, i finished Sasuke gets amnesia and started a sequel cause it was kinda short...(its called The Sequel:Naruto Gets Amnesia....i know...how creative am i?)

^^
 
cherryblossom93
Oct 2, 2006 02:24 PM by: cherryblossom93 chapter 2
Keep going! I never knew kakashi was so evil....poor Keiko....gullable Hinata....o well, thats life...WRITE MORE!
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Sep 28, 2006 01:51 PM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 1
Oh my gosh. This chapter is so horribly written even I can't stand it.
 
setokaibaslittlesis
Sep 28, 2006 01:49 PM by: setokaibaslittlesis chapter 1
Meh. I can't get the first fist chapter to delete. curse you FAC system! Please read the one that says something at the top about editing instead. The Original was full of things that weren't realistic.
 
cherryblossom93
Sep 27, 2006 04:36 PM by: cherryblossom93 chapter 1
thats great! please write more! ^_^
 
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