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Konoha High: The Homecoming by winxgirl21
Complete View as PDF, Submitted: 2007-07-23, Updated: 2008-01-20, Chapters: 28, Size: 177K, Words: 36426, Comments: 951, Views: 5236   
Anime/Manga (0) > Naruto series (2778)
The gang from Konoha High is back, and guess what? Homecoming is fast approaching! Join the Naruto characters as they struggle yet again with classes, grades, friends, enemies, and romance. Note: This is the sequel to Konoha High.
Chapters
1 - chapter 1 - Submitted 2007-07-23 Updated: 2007-07-23 - 272 views, 1142 words, 5k
2 - chapter 2 - Submitted 2007-07-28 Updated: 2007-07-28 - 191 views, 1161 words, 6k
3 - chapter 3 - Submitted 2007-08-03 Updated: 2007-08-03 - 193 views, 1634 words, 8k
4 - chapter 4 - Submitted 2007-08-07 Updated: 2007-08-07 - 187 views, 1525 words, 7k
5 - chapter 5 - Submitted 2007-08-11 Updated: 2007-08-11 - 198 views, 1657 words, 8k
6 - chapter 6 - Submitted 2007-08-15 Updated: 2007-08-15 - 203 views, 1355 words, 7k
7 - chapter 7 - Submitted 2007-08-23 Updated: 2007-08-23 - 187 views, 1161 words, 5k
8 - chapter 8 - Submitted 2007-09-03 Updated: 2007-09-03 - 161 views, 1609 words, 8k
9 - chapter 9 - Submitted 2007-09-08 Updated: 2007-09-08 - 163 views, 1239 words, 6k
10 - chapter 10 - Submitted 2007-09-14 Updated: 2007-09-14 - 167 views, 1361 words, 7k
11 - chapter 11 - Submitted 2007-09-21 Updated: 2007-09-21 - 159 views, 1221 words, 6k
12 - chapter 12 - Submitted 2007-09-28 Updated: 2007-09-28 - 161 views, 1146 words, 6k
13 - chapter 13 - Submitted 2007-10-06 Updated: 2007-10-06 - 136 views, 1337 words, 6k
14 - chapter 14 - Submitted 2007-10-13 Updated: 2007-10-13 - 143 views, 1260 words, 6k
15 - chapter 15 - Submitted 2007-10-20 Updated: 2007-10-20 - 157 views, 1508 words, 7k
16 - chapter 16 - Submitted 2007-10-26 Updated: 2007-10-26 - 117 views, 1203 words, 6k
17 - chapter 17 - Submitted 2007-11-02 Updated: 2007-11-02 - 150 views, 1246 words, 6k
18 - chapter 18 - Submitted 2007-11-09 Updated: 2007-11-09 - 118 views, 1019 words, 5k
19 - chapter 19 - Submitted 2007-11-16 Updated: 2007-11-16 - 125 views, 1180 words, 6k
20 - chapter 20 - Submitted 2007-11-24 Updated: 2007-11-24 - 127 views, 1404 words, 7k
21 - chapter 21 - Submitted 2007-12-01 Updated: 2007-12-01 - 105 views, 1292 words, 6k
22 - chapter 22 - Submitted 2007-12-07 Updated: 2007-12-07 - 105 views, 1149 words, 6k
23 - chapter 23 - Submitted 2007-12-15 Updated: 2007-12-15 - 103 views, 1318 words, 6k
24 - chapter 24 - Submitted 2007-12-22 Updated: 2007-12-22 - 91 views, 1243 words, 6k
25 - chapter 25 - Submitted 2007-12-30 Updated: 2007-12-30 - 95 views, 1162 words, 6k
26 - chapter 26 - Submitted 2008-01-05 Updated: 2008-01-05 - 89 views, 1084 words, 5k
27 - chapter 27 - Submitted 2008-01-12 Updated: 2008-01-12 - 102 views, 1189 words, 6k
28 - chapter 28 - Submitted 2008-01-20 Updated: 2008-01-20 - 112 views, 1621 words, 8k

350 Comments
AlleyCat17
Feb 4, 2008 11:43 AM by: AlleyCat17 chapter 28
yeah they are both together again anyways very sweet chapter also i wonder what couple is next in going to have trouble maybe ino and Shikamaru and i hope you update soon so i can see what happens next =3
 
winxgirl21
Feb 4, 2008 01:23 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
you'll have to wait and see, lol. ^-^ thnaks for commenting!
 
kogalover2013
Feb 1, 2008 09:32 PM by: kogalover2013 chapter 28
omg dat was soooo awsome
 
winxgirl21
Feb 2, 2008 08:07 AM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
I'm glad that you think so. ^-^
 
finalfantasy
Jan 24, 2008 03:46 PM by: finalfantasy chapter 28
lolz...*sigh*
i just luv happy endings!
now, why dont any of my stories have them?
-____-
 
winxgirl21
Jan 24, 2008 03:59 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
lol, because you wrote them that way! ^-^
 
GreyPichu
Jan 23, 2008 04:57 AM by: GreyPichu chapter 28
oh my gosh yay!*gives standing applaud*^^
 
winxgirl21
Jan 23, 2008 02:26 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
thanks! ^-^ wow, a standing applaud. o.o thankies! *hugs you*
 
GreyPichu
Jan 24, 2008 05:11 AM by: GreyPichu chapter 0
*hugs back* np, u totally deserve it!
 
winxgirl21
Jan 24, 2008 01:10 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
aww, thanx!! ^0^
 
kagome99
Jan 22, 2008 01:19 PM by: kagome99 chapter 28
I luved it!!!!!!
That was the bestest story eva!!!!
I cant wait for the next one.
And about the other thing,thanx..
well.thanx..
PEACE OUT YO!
^_^
 
winxgirl21
Jan 22, 2008 02:19 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
np. ^-^ she won't come in immediately, but once the story gets rolling, she should be in there. ^-^
 
eelchic
Jan 22, 2008 01:00 PM by: eelchic chapter 28
YAY!!!!! every1 is 2geder Xept Lee&Akane boy they should relly get 2geder!!!!!

2 birds wit 1 stone funny lolz!!!

I luv luv luv this chappe and i so happy u gunna continue!!

It seems like only yesterday that The 1st chappe came out 4 it!!!
 
winxgirl21
Jan 22, 2008 01:11 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
Hopefully they will end up together! ^-^

I love that expression, I use it(among many others) all the time.

I would never consider stopping here and not continueing. hehe, maybe it's just because i've gotten so many ideas, but this story is my favorite thing to do in my free time. You're right, it does feel like I just started writing this yesterday....
 
nextguardian
Jan 20, 2008 07:04 PM by: nextguardian chapter 28
Great chapter, and good luck with the next story!
 
winxgirl21
Jan 21, 2008 08:40 AM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
thanks! ^-^
 
puppydog2
Jan 20, 2008 04:59 PM by: puppydog2 chapter 28
Sweeeeeet cant wait till the next series
 
winxgirl21
Jan 20, 2008 05:09 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
thanks! hopefully it'll be up soon!
 
zerotimberwolf
Jan 20, 2008 04:46 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 28
Awesome way to finish that puppy. I cant wait for the next one in the series!!
 
winxgirl21
Jan 20, 2008 04:51 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
thanks! It'll hopefully be up soon! ^-^
 
cloudaeris
Jan 20, 2008 04:34 PM by: cloudaeris chapter 28
Good chapter.I can't believe it has ended.
 
winxgirl21
Jan 20, 2008 04:39 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
The next part will be up soon, though. ^-^ i really only ended it because by the time i got to the end of the chapter, I had zero ideas left for this part of the story. XD
 
AnimeAngel87
Jan 20, 2008 03:31 PM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 28
That's To Cool. NejiXTenTen FOREVA!

I Wonder what happened to Lee...(he better not find another gurlfriend or u kno who will kill him)

:)

killing two birds with one stone

I <3 that expression
 
winxgirl21
Jan 20, 2008 03:34 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
Don't worry, there'll be more on that pairing in the next story. ^-^ lol.

I love that expression, too! ^-^ lol.
 
AnimeAngel87
Jan 23, 2008 05:32 PM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 0
OMG! ^-^
 
winxgirl21
Jan 23, 2008 05:42 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
^-^ lol.
 
nextguardian
Jan 16, 2008 11:58 PM by: nextguardian chapter 27
Good luck to Sakura and Ino. C'mon Sakura, you're a genius, you should be able to offset Ino, lol!
 
winxgirl21
Jan 18, 2008 02:41 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
lol, hopefully they'll do something that won't blow up in their faces this time. ^-^
 
kagome99
Jan 16, 2008 12:15 PM by: kagome99 chapter 0
great chappie!!!!I luved it!!!
Hey, here's an idea.Why don't you somehow get the other boys like Naruto and Sasuke involved in it.
I was wondering if my OC can be in it.You don't have to say yes.I just was wonderin.

Name:Kara Imidhimori
Age:same as everybody elses
Family:sister Satsuki,step-brother Riku,step-mom(has no name),mom,dad,and Sakura(cousin)

hair color:dark purple
eye color:changes(usually green)

style:mostly punkish(goes all out)
love interest:Gaara(?)

story:She just moved to Konoha from the Village Hidden in the Snow,her mother and Riku stayed back in their village.(suggestion:might move later)When her mom became pregnant Satsuki, her dad divorced her mom and met Riku's mom and married her.Satsuki was born with a very,very bad heart problem and was never able to leave the house.They are 7 years apart and Riku is the same age as Kara.Kara and Riku act like they were blood related.Like Neji, Riku is very protective of Kara and Satsuki.
Sakura and Kara are really close.

I think I got everything.If you need anymore info just ask.(if you want to use her or not.That's up to you.)


g2g.w/b plz.
~Crazii
 
winxgirl21
Jan 16, 2008 12:31 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
I was going to get Naruto involved in it, but I'm not sure if Sasuke would agree to it. XD lol. If i have a place for your OC, i'll use her, but it might not come up. The next part in this series (I already have one chapter of it...XD) she might come in. i can see a few places for her there...
 
kagome99
Jan 18, 2008 11:39 AM by: kagome99 chapter 0
Why thank you very much!!
This really cheers me up.I had to delete my stories and everything.That made me sad.=[
But you cheered me up!At least part of me will be on here.(hopefully.)=]
Thanx!!
*Gives you 15 choco chocalte cookies.*
 
winxgirl21
Jan 18, 2008 02:38 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
choco chocolate cookies?! o.o Omg! yay! lol. ya, i'm pretty sure she'll be usable in the next part of the series. I'm going to work on posting that once i reslove thigns with this one...
 
AnimeAngel87
Jan 15, 2008 03:19 PM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 27
*Slaps Neji's Head* Bad Bad! Be Nice

Neji: O.o Rotation?

Me: HA IT WONT WORK!

Neji: *Restraining Order*

Me: D:
 
winxgirl21
Jan 15, 2008 03:38 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
hah, sily neji, i say no restraining order allowed! *hits gavel on table*
 
AnimeAngel87
Jan 15, 2008 03:15 PM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 26
>:D OH YES DEFENSE DEFENSE!

Ahem

Soooo Much Drama. Neji's So Angrily Mad(O.O)

AWESOME CHAP!
 
winxgirl21
Jan 15, 2008 03:36 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
hehe, drama is fun, though XD
 
AnimeAngel87
Jan 15, 2008 03:13 PM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 25
POPCORN!

*Gobbles Off Floor*

Everyone: O.O

What?!
 
winxgirl21
Jan 15, 2008 03:32 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
O.O hope the 10 second rule applied....lol.
 
AnimeAngel87
Jan 15, 2008 03:10 PM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 0
O.O

I missed alot

TIME TO READ :D
 
winxgirl21
Jan 15, 2008 03:31 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
yay reading! lol. ^-^
 
kogalover2013
Jan 12, 2008 10:01 PM by: kogalover2013 chapter 27
great chappie my inner peps r screaming
 
winxgirl21
Jan 13, 2008 06:35 AM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
Thanks! ^-^
 
zerotimberwolf
Jan 12, 2008 01:32 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 27
of course Neji is one of the most stubborn characters so this should prove some difficulty lol
 
winxgirl21
Jan 12, 2008 02:24 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
just a little bit of difficulty! lol.
 
eelchic
Jan 12, 2008 09:01 AM by: eelchic chapter 27
OMg poor Ten poor akane!! Neji so hardheaded,oh well thats why we love right?! I tote loved this chappe and it is fantastical!!!! great job!!!^^ can't wait 4 next one!!
 
winxgirl21
Jan 12, 2008 09:13 AM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
i don't think we'd love neji if he was any other way. XD Thanks so much for commenting! ^-^
 
eelchic
Jan 12, 2008 09:27 AM by: eelchic chapter 0
Yupyup and no prob anytime!!
 
winxgirl21
Jan 12, 2008 09:49 AM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
^-^
 
cloudaeris
Jan 12, 2008 07:13 AM by: cloudaeris chapter 27
Poor Tenten....good chapter.
 
winxgirl21
Jan 12, 2008 07:30 AM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
thnx! Everything should work out for her, if things go as i planned in the beggining, lol. ^-^
 
Kohakucrazy
Jan 12, 2008 06:40 AM by: Kohakucrazy chapter 27
I can't get mad at Neji right now... Plus he's my faveorite Character in Naruto.. I might be slowly becoming a Neji Fangirl.... But great chapter... Poor Tenten though.... FIX IT!!!!



Zakuro
 
winxgirl21
Jan 12, 2008 07:27 AM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
hopefully everything will be fixed...^-^ lol.
 
GreyPichu
Jan 12, 2008 06:15 AM by: GreyPichu chapter 27
yeah! i love this story, can't wait for the next chapter!
 
winxgirl21
Jan 12, 2008 07:16 AM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
I'm glad that you love it! ^-^
 
nextguardian
Jan 10, 2008 07:22 PM by: nextguardian chapter 26
Great stuff, nice plot twist!
 
winxgirl21
Jan 12, 2008 04:44 AM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
Thanks! ^-^
 
kagome99
Jan 9, 2008 12:31 PM by: kagome99 chapter 26
OMG!!!POOR TENTEN!!! Poor Neji too. He thought he was being used.Can't wait for next chappie!
 
winxgirl21
Jan 9, 2008 01:21 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
ya, hopefully thigns will work out. ^-^ I'm aiming for a Saturday morning update.
 
kagome99
Jan 10, 2008 11:37 AM by: kagome99 chapter 0
Cool.^_^
 
GreyPichu
Jan 8, 2008 02:24 PM by: GreyPichu chapter 26
OMG! i think i might cry, this was such a good chapter! i can NOT wait till u update!
 
winxgirl21
Jan 8, 2008 03:10 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
Thanks so much! Update will most likely be Saturday morning if i can get some typing in after homework. ^-^
 
kogalover2013
Jan 5, 2008 10:02 PM by: kogalover2013 chapter 26
how dare u cut me off
 
winxgirl21
Jan 6, 2008 06:16 AM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
huh? What do you mean? @-@
 
kogalover2013
Feb 1, 2008 09:22 PM by: kogalover2013 chapter 0
i dont remeber
 
Kohakucrazy
Jan 5, 2008 05:17 PM by: Kohakucrazy chapter 26
I don't like you.... one word.. UPDATE!!!
 
winxgirl21
Jan 6, 2008 06:13 AM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
i should update next Saturday depending on how much schoolwork i get throughout the week. ^-^
 
AlleyCat17
Jan 5, 2008 05:15 PM by: AlleyCat17 chapter 26
sweet chapter and poor tenten im sure she will be with neji soon.
 
winxgirl21
Jan 5, 2008 05:51 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
Thanks! Don't worry, it'll all work out, eventually. lol. ^-^
 
eelchic
Jan 5, 2008 04:25 PM by: eelchic chapter 26
Aw poor Tenten its so sad that Neji wouldnt even look at her!! :( But great chappe its just filled with drama ooooo I just love it!!!!!! ^.^ I hope everything works out for Ten!!!
 
winxgirl21
Jan 5, 2008 04:30 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
things shoudl work out. ya, i would hate to be her, too. I'm glad you love the drama. ^-^
 
zerotimberwolf
Jan 5, 2008 04:17 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 26
Oh crap 0_0' this is not good at all. I hope things work out.
 
winxgirl21
Jan 5, 2008 04:20 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
It should all work out...maybe...lol.
 
puppydog2
Jan 1, 2008 02:38 PM by: puppydog2 chapter 25
Sweet chapter, I couldnt help but laugh when Inos plan screwed up
 
winxgirl21
Jan 1, 2008 03:12 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
lol, her plans always tend to get messed up, and most often blow up in her face.
 
waterbender00
Jan 1, 2008 05:04 AM by: waterbender00 chapter 25
Seeing the same movie. I don't think think that this is part of Ino's plan

Rating Abismal: Oh Sh**!!
 
winxgirl21
Jan 1, 2008 05:21 AM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
lol, it's definately not part of Ino's plan. I <3 drama, though. ^-^
 
Kohakucrazy
Dec 31, 2007 05:47 PM by: Kohakucrazy chapter 25
oh no! A thriller story... .. AWESOME!! What's gonna happen next?
 
winxgirl21
Dec 31, 2007 06:53 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
lol, you'll have to wait and see! ^-^
 
cloudaeris
Dec 31, 2007 06:13 AM by: cloudaeris chapter 25
OMG!!! Drama! Drama! LOL! If Neji finds out well...it's been nice knowing you Lee.
 
winxgirl21
Dec 31, 2007 12:19 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
lol, yes, drama! Hmmm..Lee might live. Although he might also have to go to the hospital....
 
kogalover2013
Dec 30, 2007 08:46 PM by: kogalover2013 chapter 6
i forgot how great this chap was
 
winxgirl21
Dec 31, 2007 12:18 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
lol, glad you think so! ^-^
 
GreyPichu
Dec 30, 2007 08:32 PM by: GreyPichu chapter 25
I LOVE THIS STORY! and happy new year to u too^^
 
winxgirl21
Dec 31, 2007 12:06 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
Thanks! I'm glad that you love it! ^-^
 
kogalover2013
Dec 30, 2007 08:24 PM by: kogalover2013 chapter 25
awsome i love drama my mom even calls me a drama queen anyways me & my inner peps are sooooo excited
 
kogalover2013
Dec 30, 2007 08:25 PM by: kogalover2013 chapter 0
p.s. byebye lee dun dun dun dundun dun dundundundun da dun
 
kogalover2013
Jan 1, 2008 06:55 PM by: kogalover2013 chapter 0
i was joking die die lee die {jk lol}
 
winxgirl21
Dec 31, 2007 12:02 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
He might live...lol.
 
kogalover2013
Dec 30, 2007 08:24 PM by: kogalover2013 chapter 25
awsome i love drama my mom even calls me a drama queen anyways me & my inner peps are sooooo excited
 
winxgirl21
Dec 31, 2007 12:01 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
lol, i <3 drama, too!
 
eelchic
Dec 30, 2007 08:08 PM by: eelchic chapter 25
OMG OMG OMG NERVE WRACKING!!!!! I JUST KNEW THERE WOULD BE DRAMA!!!!! GREAT CHAPPE YOU RELLY KNOW HOW TO LEAVE ME IN SUSPENCE!!!!>.< CAN'T WAIT!!!! I TOTE LOVED THIS CHAPPE AND I WOULD JUST LIKE TO SAY MY FAREWELLS TO LEE NOW!!!! *ME WAVING TO LEE AND CRYING IT WAS NICE READING ABOUT YOU YOU SPANDEX DUDE* *SNIFF* *SNIFF* AND AGAIN AWSOME CHAPPY!!^^
 
winxgirl21
Dec 31, 2007 11:59 AM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
lol, I <3 drama. It's one of my favorite things to wirte...and Lee...well, he might survive, although i haven't decided yet.
 
zerotimberwolf
Dec 30, 2007 07:42 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 25
Oh man! If Neji finds out he's going to have Lees head!
awesome chapter
 
winxgirl21
Dec 30, 2007 07:43 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
Thanks! Hmm...you just might be right, lol.
 
zerotimberwolf
Dec 31, 2007 09:33 AM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 0
lmao
 
nextguardian
Dec 30, 2007 07:24 PM by: nextguardian chapter 25
Great chapter! This is really well written, not to many authors on FAC can take two seperate plots and make them into one excellent story like this!
 
winxgirl21
Dec 30, 2007 07:30 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
Thank you so much! It means a lot that you think that. i do my best to make the two plots fit together like that. ^-^
 
puppydog2
Dec 29, 2007 07:10 AM by: puppydog2 chapter 0
awsome story!
 
winxgirl21
Dec 29, 2007 05:21 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
Thanks! ^-^
 
Symphoniaprincess101
Dec 27, 2007 08:59 PM by: Symphoniaprincess101 chapter 24
O_O YAY NEJITENTEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^^ ^^
 
winxgirl21
Dec 28, 2007 08:50 AM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
ya, I know! ^-^ lol
 
kogalover2013
Dec 25, 2007 10:39 AM by: kogalover2013 chapter 0
recent chap is awsome sorry this may come out wired
 
winxgirl21
Dec 25, 2007 07:25 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
lol, don't worry about it, and thanks!! ^-^
 
kogalover2013
Dec 25, 2007 10:32 AM by: kogalover2013 chapter 24
omg finally me&my innerXEAHIJX peps r sooo excited p.s. let me finish
 
kogalover2013
Dec 25, 2007 10:38 AM by: kogalover2013 chapter 24
 
 
Kohakucrazy
Dec 25, 2007 10:21 AM by: Kohakucrazy chapter 24
YAY FOR NEJI!! I'm happy for Tenten!
 
AnimeAngel87
Dec 23, 2007 06:33 AM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 24
GMO NEJI DIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDIT
DIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDIT
DIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDIT
DIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDIT
DIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDIT
DIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDITDIDIT
DIDIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

:D I's sooooooooooo happeh!!

even with chesy linesXD

Lee took a Slide Glance Owo

XD

KEEPING UO UR GOOD WORK YO!!!
 
winxgirl21
Dec 23, 2007 06:36 AM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
lol, thanks so much for the review! Yes, he finally did, and yes, he did! lol. I'm going to try to keep it up. ^-^
 
zerotimberwolf
Dec 22, 2007 09:29 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 24
Neji you sly sly dog ;)
 
winxgirl21
Dec 23, 2007 04:59 AM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
lol. ^-^
 
GreyPichu
Dec 22, 2007 09:03 PM by: GreyPichu chapter 24
awesome chapter, i'm so happy for Neji and Tenten!btw, Happy Holidayes to u too!
 
winxgirl21
Dec 23, 2007 04:54 AM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
Thanks so much! ^-^
 
nextguardian
Dec 22, 2007 08:35 PM by: nextguardian chapter 24
Nice job! You did really good with Neji's part, you're right, he's hard to keep in character at times, especially in akward situations like that one. ANyway, nice job and merry Christmas to you too.
 
winxgirl21
Dec 23, 2007 04:50 AM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
thanks! ya, i kept buging my sister, asking her if it sounded too OOC, adn I think she started to get annoyed. I tried a few differnt ways, but this one seemed the best way to do it. ^-^ lol.
 
eelchic
Dec 22, 2007 08:28 PM by: eelchic chapter 24
OMG THEY ARE FINALLY GOING OUT!!! YEEP!! SO HAPPY LEE AND AKANE SEEM LIKE GOOD COUPLE!! LOVED THAT CHAPP!!
 
winxgirl21
Dec 23, 2007 04:45 AM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
Thanks! Ya, lol, I couldn't wait any longer to have them going out. And i think so, too...
 
zerotimberwolf
Dec 21, 2007 07:32 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 0
Neji and Lee sound like how I would act
 
winxgirl21
Dec 22, 2007 07:41 AM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
lol, realli?
 
zerotimberwolf
Dec 21, 2007 07:31 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 23
that was a little confusing but I was able to follow. Good work
 
winxgirl21
Dec 22, 2007 07:37 AM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
That's good. Thanks for reviewing! ^-^
 
zerotimberwolf
Dec 21, 2007 07:24 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 22
LMAO!!! this is ging to be fun
 
winxgirl21
Dec 22, 2007 07:36 AM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
yupz, lol. ^-^
 
AnimeAngel87
Dec 18, 2007 04:41 AM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 23
XD Last Weeks News Papers

XDDDDD

Awesome Chapter! Thank goodness Akane isn't cheating with Byakuagan(She's known to do that -.-)
 
winxgirl21
Dec 18, 2007 09:40 AM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
lol, ya, i was hoping someone would find that as funny as i thought it was. XD

I don't think it's even come to her mind...lol.
 
nextguardian
Dec 15, 2007 07:44 PM by: nextguardian chapter 23
Great stuff! lol, thinking ahead isn't Ino's strong suit, I guess.
 
winxgirl21
Dec 15, 2007 07:49 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
not exactly. lol. ^-^
 
Kohakucrazy
Dec 15, 2007 05:18 PM by: Kohakucrazy chapter 23
Ino is SUCH a blonde.... -___- Good chapy though.
 
winxgirl21
Dec 15, 2007 07:34 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
ya, she is. But I <3 blondes. they're funny. lol. (no offense to any blondes, i go based by my little sister...)
 
NightWing101
Dec 15, 2007 02:21 PM by: NightWing101 chapter 23
!!!!
SOoo COOL!
Sorry I havent commented but.. Here I am!
I cant wait to read what happens! I think Nejis going to ask her to be his G.F.!!! XD
*gives a cookie* good job!
 
winxgirl21
Dec 15, 2007 07:30 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
Don't worry about it. ^-^ Hmm..maybe....lol. It will happen eventually, though. I'm hoping taht I might make an update friday, but with exams, an actual update date is hard to be sure. I'm working on it though! lol. ^-^
 
waterbender00
Dec 15, 2007 12:50 PM by: waterbender00 chapter 23
Neji really knows how to treat a girl.
 
winxgirl21
Dec 15, 2007 07:28 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
ya, he does. ^-^
 
rffraff05
Dec 15, 2007 12:13 PM by: rffraff05 chapter 23
YAYNESS! i would never find my way out of that maze, it is too much brain work!
 
winxgirl21
Dec 15, 2007 07:24 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
ya, it is too much brainwork. i'd probably end up walking through the hedge and out of the maze. XD lol.
 
kogalover2013
Dec 15, 2007 07:30 AM by: kogalover2013 chapter 23
cool my inner peps are screaming
 
winxgirl21
Dec 15, 2007 07:23 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
^-^
 
eelchic
Dec 15, 2007 06:42 AM by: eelchic chapter 23
I tote & complete loved it Poor Hinata and Tenten she has to put up so many of Ino and Sakura's shcemes lolz! Check out my pro i Have pic of my story and if u want i know where u can get a fun pic of ur Konoha High pic!! If yah want!! great chapp ^-^
 
winxgirl21
Dec 15, 2007 07:21 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
Ya, they do put up with a lot of their schemes. I probably would have given up on dealing with them. lol. Wher can i get a pic? lol, I'll go check out the one on your profile as soon as I'm done here. ^-^
 
cloudaeris
Dec 15, 2007 06:07 AM by: cloudaeris chapter 23
Nice! ^^
 
winxgirl21
Dec 15, 2007 06:27 AM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
Thanks! ^-^
 
eelchic
Dec 12, 2007 02:08 PM by: eelchic chapter 0
Omg that was so awsome! Akane seems so pretty they do good work! The resturant seems so romantical!!!! Can't wait!! ^-^ <3
 
winxgirl21
Dec 12, 2007 02:20 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
Thanks, ya, they do do a good job, don't they? lol. I'm hoping to update again friday. ^-^
 
kagome99
Dec 12, 2007 12:24 PM by: kagome99 chapter 22
coolio!!!
Can't wait to read the next chappie!!!
=D
<3 ya!!!
~ Joe [My nickname!!=D]
 
winxgirl21
Dec 12, 2007 02:04 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
Thankies! ^-^ I'm hoping the next chapter will be up by friday.
 
zopponde
Dec 8, 2007 12:35 PM by: zopponde chapter 22
AHHHH NOOOOOOOOO! MILITARY TALK! As if my brother fresh from a paintball game isn't enough! TT.TT
:runs screaming:
 
winxgirl21
Dec 8, 2007 12:41 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
sorry, i love talking on walkie talkies like that. ^-^' Thanks for reviewing!
 
zopponde
Dec 8, 2007 12:54 PM by: zopponde chapter 0
You're welcome, and I understand and all...it's just become a habbit to be annoyed by official Mission-Speak.
 
winxgirl21
Dec 8, 2007 01:01 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
lol, i understand that. ^-^
 
Symphoniaprincess101
Dec 8, 2007 10:49 AM by: Symphoniaprincess101 chapter 22
oh boy i feel trouble brewing too.way to keep me in suspence^^
 
winxgirl21
Dec 8, 2007 12:24 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
Thanks for reviewing! hehe, ya, trouble is definately brewing. ^-^
 
nextguardian
Dec 7, 2007 09:45 PM by: nextguardian chapter 22
Another great ch. lol, Ino had some great lines!
 
winxgirl21
Dec 8, 2007 07:44 AM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
Thanks! lol. ^-^
 
kogalover2013
Dec 7, 2007 09:05 PM by: kogalover2013 chapter 22
awsome but do ihave to wait till friday 2 c the next chap cant u put it in like monday:)p.s. my inner peps are soooooooooooo screaming p.s.p.swheres my hansom saskue i need my saskue
 
winxgirl21
Dec 8, 2007 07:39 AM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
I'm sorry, but there's no way it'll be up by monday. I have loads of homework to do, and then my family is decorating the house for Christmas. I haven't even started the next chapter yet...I normally do't even get a chance to start the next chapters until wednesday or thursday...^-^'
 
GreyPichu
Dec 7, 2007 06:45 PM by: GreyPichu chapter 22
lol awesomeness i'm glad u updated!^^
 
winxgirl21
Dec 7, 2007 06:48 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
Thanks! I wrote most of the chapter last nd finished it up today..hehe...I barely got it up. ^-^
 
AnimeAngel87
Dec 7, 2007 06:17 PM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 22
Awwwww Too Cute^^

Lee is so Nice. And Neji is Mr. Hyuuga

And Ino is Just...Wow.

XD

Awesome Chappie^^
 
winxgirl21
Dec 7, 2007 06:32 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
lol, ya, that's Ino. XD Thanks for reviewing!
 
AnimeAngel87
Dec 8, 2007 07:25 AM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 0
Lol Ya. Arigatai^^
 
waterbender00
Dec 7, 2007 06:07 PM by: waterbender00 chapter 22
Neji's such a gentleman as is Lee *Glomps both*. More guys should be like that.
 
winxgirl21
Dec 7, 2007 06:31 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
ya, more guys should be like that. ^-^
 
cloudaeris
Dec 7, 2007 05:36 PM by: cloudaeris chapter 0
yay me like
 
winxgirl21
Dec 7, 2007 05:46 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
thankies ^-^
 
kogalover2013
Dec 7, 2007 04:38 PM by: kogalover2013 chapter 0
wheres my chap:{
 
winxgirl21
Dec 7, 2007 05:13 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
It's up!
 
AnimeAngel87
Dec 7, 2007 02:14 PM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 0
GMO CAN'T WAIT MUCH LONGER!!!!!!!!
 
winxgirl21
Dec 7, 2007 05:11 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
the chapter's up!!
 
AnimeAngel87
Dec 7, 2007 06:17 PM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 0
Oh
 
winxgirl21
Dec 7, 2007 06:29 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
ya, lol. ^-^
 
nextguardian
Dec 4, 2007 09:10 PM by: nextguardian chapter 21
Really nice work!
 
winxgirl21
Dec 5, 2007 11:49 AM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
Thankies! ^-^
 
AlleyCat17
Dec 3, 2007 07:20 PM by: AlleyCat17 chapter 21
sweet chapter and i can't wait for the nest chapter and i hope the girls do get to carry away.
 
winxgirl21
Dec 4, 2007 03:04 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
Thanks! lol, i have an idea of what's going to happen, but not entirely yet. ^-^
 
kogalover2013
Dec 3, 2007 06:47 PM by: kogalover2013 chapter 21
noooooo i cant wait all my inner peps are sooo excited icat wait till next chap friday right ;)
 
winxgirl21
Dec 4, 2007 03:01 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
Hopefully...I've gotten the computer taken away (my mom's not paying attrention to my "homework" at the moment, so i slipped onto FAC...) so i don't have a lot of free typing time. it's a homework only thing. i can only type when she leaves the house...
 
kogalover2013
Dec 3, 2007 06:29 PM by: kogalover2013 chapter 20
oooooooooooo my inner peps are oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooing
 
winxgirl21
Dec 4, 2007 02:55 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
^-^
 
cloudaeris
Dec 2, 2007 01:01 PM by: cloudaeris chapter 21
Sweet! Can't wait.
 
winxgirl21
Dec 2, 2007 02:39 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
^-^ thanks for the review!
 
zerotimberwolf
Dec 1, 2007 07:17 PM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 21
Neji sounds like he has a plan of his own =D
 
winxgirl21
Dec 2, 2007 05:23 AM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
ya, he pretty much does. lol. ^-^
 
Symphoniaprincess101
Dec 1, 2007 04:13 PM by: Symphoniaprincess101 chapter 21
awsome^^500000000 boxes of pocky for you^^
 
winxgirl21
Dec 1, 2007 04:29 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
Thankies! Yay! Pocky! ^-^
 
GreyPichu
Dec 1, 2007 03:55 PM by: GreyPichu chapter 21
yeah! ino's got a ringtone by Fergie.^^ this is so awesome,and that's why i keep reading the chapters^^'
 
winxgirl21
Dec 1, 2007 04:03 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
Ya, she does. ^-^ lol, thanks!
 
AnimeAngel87
Dec 1, 2007 12:06 PM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 21
Ino Be totally going overboard

and I have a feeling Neji's found out about this

*Suspense Music*

Ino's ring tone is ubervonn Kewll
 
winxgirl21
Dec 1, 2007 12:11 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
yes, but if she didn't, who would? lol. Hmm..I don't think so...yet!! lol. And i totally <3 that song. It's my sisters ringback tone on her cell. Thanks for the review!
 
kagome99
Nov 30, 2007 02:39 PM by: kagome99 chapter 20
Nother great chappie!
 
winxgirl21
Nov 30, 2007 03:42 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
Thankies! ^-^
 
nextguardian
Nov 27, 2007 06:59 PM by: nextguardian chapter 20
Another great ch!
 
winxgirl21
Nov 28, 2007 01:34 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
thankies ^-^
 
kogalover2013
Nov 27, 2007 06:00 PM by: kogalover2013 chapter 20
awsome i finally read it my inner sakura and freinds cant wait for next chap :}
 
winxgirl21
Nov 28, 2007 01:30 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
Thanks! ^-^
 
GreyPichu
Nov 26, 2007 04:52 AM by: GreyPichu chapter 20
yeaH!I finally found time to read it, and it's so great.
 
winxgirl21
Nov 26, 2007 03:10 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
thanks. ^-^ I'm hoping that the next chapter is a lot better,though.
 
rffraff05
Nov 25, 2007 06:17 AM by: rffraff05 chapter 20
awesome!!!! mental high five for a great chapter!
 
winxgirl21
Nov 25, 2007 01:27 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
Thanks! Mental high five accepted! lol!
 
Symphoniaprincess101
Nov 24, 2007 06:28 PM by: Symphoniaprincess101 chapter 20
oh boy i'm smelling trouble.
 
winxgirl21
Nov 25, 2007 01:25 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
ya, trouble's on it's way! lol.
 
Kohakucrazy
Nov 24, 2007 04:48 PM by: Kohakucrazy chapter 20
AWESOME!!!!!!!! Keep it up!!!
 
winxgirl21
Nov 28, 2007 01:26 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0
Thanks ! ^-^