Naruto's Dream: One Year of Training by rffraff05

Jun 6, 2008 01:52 PM by: Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND chapter 27

Woo! Advertisements galore! Loved everything you wrote...only problem is I WANT MOOOOOORE!

Jun 3, 2008 06:25 AM by: Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND chapter 2

Lolness! Loving every part of this, a great mix of humor and suspense, plus you've got the characters perfect ^__^

May 27, 2008 02:36 PM by: TTfan1 chapter 17

KILL SASUKE.

I'll do anything! ANYTHING!

Do you want money?! You can HAVE MONEY!

AND ITACHI-SAMA'S COOKIES!!! *throws cookies*

Itachi: HEY! Those were peanut butter!! >:|
Naruto: Shut up, she's trying to get rid of him!!!
Itachi: How is that a good thing?! o_o
Naruto: He took over my series! I'll NEVER forgive him! >:
TTfan1: AND he tried to rape you!
Naruto: That too! >:
Itachi: Well, maybe he was drunk...!
Naruto: HE'S ALWAYS DRUNK!
TTfan1: The MENACE! *shakes fist*
Naruto: Sixteen and a half LONG years with that man and I never could understand him. -_-
TTfan1: ...I thought you were nineteen.
Naruto: Well, he left, remember? T_T
TTfan1: Oh YEAH! ....How'd you do that in your head so fast? ._.
Itachi: It's ONLY TWO!
Naruto: And a half. U_U
Itachi: And a half! >:
TTfan1: Oh. Well, you all know I'm an idiot, so.... >_>;
Sasuke: *suddenly there* Whatcha talkin' 'bout? ^__^
Naruto: EEK! *ducks*
Sasuke: *stares*
Itachi: ....Go away.
Sasuke: Why? It's FUN here!
TTfan1: Do you even know where we ARE? T_T
Sasuke: .....No. >_>;
Itachi: We are currently commenting on this wonderful story here. :)
Sasuke: ...Oh. *swigs vodka* :3
Itachi: *snatches it* Give me that! Ludicrous little underage vagabond! >:|
Sasuke: *ignores him* Why the heck is the comment so dang long? >:
Naruto: *hisses* BECAUSE.
Sasuke: Because why? ._.
Naruto: Don't make me hurt you. =_=
Sasuke: Why would you hurt me, love?
Itachi: *restrains Naruto* He's hormonal. Don't screw with him. U_U
Sasuke: But it's fun to screw with hormonal people! ^_^ *wiggles Naruto's nose*
TTfan1: .....Whatever. Just PLEASE kill him, rffrff05! PLEASE!!!!
Naruto: PLEASE! O_O
Sasuke: YOU WANT TO KILL ME?!! O__O;;;;
Itachi: *drinks Sasuke's vodka* >_>;; ...Hey, this stuff is actually pretty good! o_o What kind is it?!

May 27, 2008 02:18 PM by: TTfan1 chapter 26

.....You kept spelling Yondaime wrong. *twitch*

May 27, 2008 02:16 PM by: TTfan1 chapter 1

.....Put Raphael in there. It would be fun. ^_________^

That's what I do, anyway.

And a random topic, too, like, uh, cheese, or.... even Swiss cheese taht's been out in the sun too long but nobody knows and they eat it anyway because Orochimaru did it on purpose because he wanted to see Sasuke throw up because he think it's sexy when people throw up. And he succeeds, but then he forgot that the cheese was no good, so he ate it too and now he has leprosy. U_U

...It doesn't look so good, but nobody cares, because Oro's a loser and we fangirls usually hate losers (or at least make their lives miserable to the extent of our power). And since HE ate the really bad part, and the only other thing worth mentioning is that since Sasuke stole Naruto's piece, Naruto went hungry and Saqsuke got double the ptomaine poisoning, since a deer shoot on it and all.

...Am I rambling? ._.

May 27, 2008 02:10 PM by: TTfan1 chapter 0

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHH!!!!

I'm interested now.

Apr 10, 2008 11:51 AM by: hflp chapter 20

Isn't Kabuto dead?

Apr 5, 2008 06:24 AM by: erandor3 chapter 26

XD LOL YOROICHI YAY!

Jan 9, 2008 11:58 AM by: kagome99 chapter 27

XD This story is AWESOME!!!
WTF? What the heck's a shetland pony?!
LOVED IT!!! 143!!!

Dec 31, 2007 10:56 AM by: SquishyNinaChan chapter 0

OMG i finally remembered i have to read this....*forgot what FAC even was*
ummm well great story!......er...well, so far..........

Dec 15, 2007 03:15 PM by: erandor3 chapter 12

nice chapter

Dec 15, 2007 03:33 PM by: rffraff05 chapter 0

thank you!

Dec 14, 2007 08:55 PM by: GreyPichu chapter 27

YEAH! GO PONIES!

Dec 15, 2007 02:30 PM by: rffraff05 chapter 0

YAY PONIES!Q!

Dec 7, 2007 09:02 PM by: Kohakucrazy chapter 4

I'll just have to go to the next chappie.

Dec 8, 2007 03:05 PM by: rffraff05 chapter 0

YAY FOR NEXT CHAPPIES!

Dec 7, 2007 08:54 PM by: Kohakucrazy chapter 3

OOOH! What's he gonna cook?

Dec 8, 2007 03:04 PM by: rffraff05 chapter 0

he gonna cook fish

Dec 7, 2007 08:43 PM by: Kohakucrazy chapter 2

What's gonna happen?

Dec 8, 2007 03:04 PM by: rffraff05 chapter 0

CLIFFHANGER!!!

Dec 7, 2007 08:35 PM by: Kohakucrazy chapter 1

This is cool... BUt why doesn't Lady Tsunade know where she's sending everybody?

Dec 8, 2007 03:04 PM by: rffraff05 chapter 0

it's a secret!

Dec 7, 2007 08:27 PM by: Kohakucrazy chapter 0

This is... ok...I guess.... I mean the stranger was kinda creepy... Who IS it?

Dec 8, 2007 03:03 PM by: rffraff05 chapter 0

you'll find out!

Dec 6, 2007 06:04 PM by: GreyPichu chapter 7

lol i was listening to a song by Hawk Nelson when it said Every little thing in ur story.ha, i find that funny^^

Dec 6, 2007 06:59 PM by: rffraff05 chapter 0

nice!

Dec 5, 2007 06:13 PM by: GreyPichu chapter 3

lol that was so funny!yes i've finally gotten to continue this story again!^^HOORAY!

Dec 6, 2007 05:53 PM by: rffraff05 chapter 0

make sure to comment on every chapter! for you know... tax reasons

Dec 4, 2007 03:25 PM by: Nekogal411 chapter 26

^^ awesome chappie!

Dec 6, 2007 05:52 PM by: rffraff05 chapter 0

thank you!

Nov 28, 2007 06:06 PM by: FluffysPrincess2968 chapter 0

Just thought I would throw this out here....

HOLY CRAP!!!!! THIS STORY IS HIGHER RANKING THAN SUPER SONIC TRUTH OR DARE!!!! :O!!!!
THATS ONE OF THE MOST POPULAR STORIES ON FAC!!!! :O!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dec 4, 2007 04:27 AM by: rffraff05 chapter 0

fluffy? care to explain what that means to me? i have no idea about what you are talking about

Dec 5, 2007 03:50 PM by: FluffysPrincess2968 chapter 0

uhhh... look at my favs stories list ON MY PROFILE. u kno how it says them to the side under ur featured art? it moved above SSTOD. :D

Nov 27, 2007 11:33 AM by: moog1895 chapter 27

*pulls out pad* Shet...land...Pony! There, got it!

Dec 4, 2007 04:33 AM by: rffraff05 chapter 0

thanks bunches! *huggles*

Nov 27, 2007 11:32 AM by: moog1895 chapter 26

Awww! I love cats!

Dec 4, 2007 04:33 AM by: rffraff05 chapter 0

Yay cats!

Nov 27, 2007 11:31 AM by: moog1895 chapter 25

Ahhaha! Yaaay! I was in this one! ah!

T_T Gaara's a bittersweet sorta dude, huh? =] GREAT!

Dec 4, 2007 04:32 AM by: rffraff05 chapter 0

i wouldn't call him bitter, just clueless when it comes to social activities

Nov 25, 2007 12:09 PM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 0

When be Akane comming in?

Dec 4, 2007 04:30 AM by: rffraff05 chapter 0

she'll be coming soon in the sequel

Nov 25, 2007 08:17 AM by: sasukeXsakuraforever chapter 27

A shetland Pony?....what?!
Haha, you are something...but I can't quite put my finger on it...

Ok, I don't know if I can promise you the pony, but I can advertise for you. ^_~. Like you said, you want to looks impressive! :P

And good luck on the pony idea, I give you the best of luck! haha! ^^

~Celine

Dec 4, 2007 04:29 AM by: rffraff05 chapter 0

i am... AWEESOME TIMES 10 TIMES YOUR MOM!

Nov 25, 2007 08:13 AM by: sasukeXsakuraforever chapter 26

lol, almost everyone below me is like..spazzing out in caps lock....hey, if you can't beat em', join em'
...eh hem...
ZOMG THAT WAS SO COOL! DAN YOUR STILL SO MYSTERIOUS, WE KNOW NOTHING ABOUT YOU! THAT WAS SIMPLY FANTASTIC!
MORE MORE MORE!!!
*catches breath*
Alright, thats enough yelling for one day. Nice Chappie, love it!^^

Dec 4, 2007 04:29 AM by: rffraff05 chapter 0

i like being mysterious!

Nov 25, 2007 08:00 AM by: sasukeXsakuraforever chapter 25

Hahaha, zomg I feel so bad for choji! T_T
lol, funny chapter, it seems like alot of people hate you, Dan! *snickers*

Anywho, sorry I wasn't around lately, I've been super buisy with school, fogive me! ~_~
Well, off to the next chapter!^^

Dec 4, 2007 04:28 AM by: rffraff05 chapter 0

i felt bad about choji, but then i was all like... it's funny so why not?

Nov 24, 2007 09:15 AM by: eelchic chapter 26

interesting what Naruto learns and is going to learn very awsome!!!! ^-^ <3

Nov 25, 2007 06:10 AM by: rffraff05 chapter 0

thank you!!! i do indeed believe Yodaime is alive!

Nov 24, 2007 09:12 AM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 27

XD wtf?! Shetland Poneh?

I be wanting a Unicorn

Nov 25, 2007 06:10 AM by: rffraff05 chapter 0

YESSSSS a shetland pony!!

Nov 24, 2007 09:11 AM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 26

OMFG SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO COOOOOOOOOOOOOOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

BLEACH YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nov 25, 2007 06:09 AM by: rffraff05 chapter 0

GO BLEEACCH!!!

Nov 24, 2007 09:11 AM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 25

DUN STEAL CHO'S FOOD

Dan is being Sneaky
<.< >.>

Nov 25, 2007 06:09 AM by: rffraff05 chapter 0

I IS SUPAH SNEAKY!!

Nov 25, 2007 12:07 PM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 0

SUPAH!!!!!!!!

Nov 24, 2007 08:55 AM by: eelchic chapter 25

funny,but bad stealing choji's food its worse than calling choji the F word F-A-T i like it

Nov 25, 2007 06:08 AM by: rffraff05 chapter 0

it's very bad

Nov 24, 2007 05:19 AM by: winxgirl21 chapter 27

Shetland pony's are so cute! lol. I'll advertise in my next chapter, kk? ^-^

Nov 25, 2007 06:08 AM by: rffraff05 chapter 0

thank you!!!!

Nov 25, 2007 08:03 AM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0

np. ^-^

Nov 24, 2007 05:18 AM by: winxgirl21 chapter 26

Oh my gosh!! This is sooo awesome!! I'll have to look up some Bleach stuff since I don't know much about that...lol.

Nov 25, 2007 06:07 AM by: rffraff05 chapter 0

thanks! you could watch episodes on youtube if you want

Nov 25, 2007 08:02 AM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0

I think i'm going to check the manga out from the library. My computer oesn't like youtube...>.< it takes forever to load videos...lol.

Nov 24, 2007 05:11 AM by: winxgirl21 chapter 25

Ooo, I wodner who Dan's going to meet? Awesome chapter!!

Nov 25, 2007 06:07 AM by: rffraff05 chapter 0

it's a secret!

Nov 25, 2007 08:08 AM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0

secrets are revealed eventually. =D

Nov 23, 2007 10:00 PM by: angelfox chapter 27

what the hell is a shetland pony? O.o

Nov 25, 2007 06:06 AM by: rffraff05 chapter 0

it's like a midget horse

Nov 23, 2007 08:05 PM by: Symphoniaprincess101 chapter 27

lol the last one was funny lol.

Nov 23, 2007 08:11 PM by: rffraff05 chapter 0

Who doesn't want a shetland pony?

Nov 23, 2007 08:30 PM by: FluffysPrincess2968 chapter 0

SRSLY!!! only i would want a Clydesdale horse...

Nov 23, 2007 08:42 PM by: rffraff05 chapter 0

what's a clydesdale horse?

Nov 24, 2007 09:37 AM by: FluffysPrincess2968 chapter 0

haven't u ever seen the Budweiser horses?

Nov 23, 2007 08:05 PM by: Symphoniaprincess101 chapter 26

that's awsome your mixing Bleach and Kingdom hearts with Naruto i give you 10 cakes for that awsome^^

Nov 23, 2007 08:10 PM by: rffraff05 chapter 0

10 cakes!!!! ILIKEEMCAKEGUUUUUD!!!!!!

Nov 23, 2007 08:01 PM by: Konohasdarkshadow chapter 26

..............OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS THE BEST STORY EEEEEVVVVVEEEERRRRR!!! you have naruto and now bleach and kingdom hearts...wait so Dan is a Shinigami Ninja?...cccooooooolllllll...NICE JOB BB

Nov 23, 2007 08:10 PM by: rffraff05 chapter 0

don't tell anyone but full metal alchemist is coming later... ooops.... oh well

Nov 23, 2007 08:15 PM by: FluffysPrincess2968 chapter 0

OMFG!!! CROSS-OVER-NESS!!! YAY!!!!

Nov 23, 2007 08:23 PM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 0

W00T!!!

Nov 23, 2007 08:26 PM by: rffraff05 chapter 0

so apparently every one likes crossovers?

Nov 23, 2007 08:30 PM by: FluffysPrincess2968 chapter 0

I DO!!!! but i suck at them.... )=

Nov 24, 2007 04:36 PM by: Konohasdarkshadow chapter 0

im with you fluffy-san...BUT NIISAN IS GREAT AT THEM!!!!!^_^

Nov 23, 2007 08:01 PM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 0

OMGOMGOMGOMG!!!

THESE WERE ALL AWESOME!!! YESS!!!!

Nov 23, 2007 08:09 PM by: rffraff05 chapter 0

thanks!!!!

Nov 23, 2007 08:17 PM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 0

Really! Now you need to submit again soon! I can't take the suspense! It's killing me!

*dies*

See what I mean?!

Nov 23, 2007 08:34 PM by: FluffysPrincess2968 chapter 0

*pulls a Kool-aid* OH YEEEEEEAAAAAAAAHHH!!!! *dies*

Nov 23, 2007 08:23 PM by: rffraff05 chapter 0

yeah, i know what you mean

Nov 23, 2007 07:54 PM by: FluffysPrincess2968 chapter 26

O.M.F.G.... THOSE WERE SO COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL!!!!! OMFGOMFG OMFG!!!!! THAT WAS AAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWEEEEEEEEEESSSSSOOOOOOMMMEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!! w00T!!! GO BLEACH AND KINGDOM HEARTS!!!! WOOT!!!! *goes into fangirl mode* OMFG URAHARA IS SOOOOO AWESOME!!! WILL HE BE IN IT!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? OMFG!!!! *explodes*

Nov 23, 2007 07:55 PM by: rffraff05 chapter 0

he'll come fluffy, he'll come

Nov 23, 2007 07:57 PM by: FluffysPrincess2968 chapter 0

YAAAAAAY!!!! :D In that case... *Goes t tell SquishyNinaChan* If her OC isn't with him... I think she'll slef-destruct... sending all of FAC into the firey pits of hell.... O_O

Nov 23, 2007 08:07 PM by: Symphoniaprincess101 chapter 0

fluffy you're a spazz.

Nov 23, 2007 08:15 PM by: FluffysPrincess2968 chapter 0

o_O

Nov 23, 2007 07:51 PM by: Symphoniaprincess101 chapter 25

oh bot wat's dan got up his sleeve? awsome new chappter off to read the next one^^*5000000 boxes of pocky was on the ground*

Nov 23, 2007 07:52 PM by: rffraff05 chapter 0

yay for pocky!!!!

what's pocky?

Nov 23, 2007 07:54 PM by: FluffysPrincess2968 chapter 0

it's like, a thng from Japaen... I think it's like a biscuit-stick covered in different falvored candies or something....

Nov 23, 2007 07:55 PM by: rffraff05 chapter 0

yay! sounds like a cookie... ILIKEEMCOOOOKIESGUUUUD!!!!!!!!!

Nov 18, 2007 01:57 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

OMG THOSE LAST 3 CHAPPS WERE AMZING I LUVED THEM EXPECIALLY WITH NEJI AND HINATA CANT WAIT 4 NEXT UPDATE!!!!!! ^-^ <3

Nov 11, 2007 08:49 AM by: RockLeeLuver chapter 24

aaahhh suspence >.< can't wait for next chappie!

Nov 8, 2007 02:42 PM by: sasukeXsakuraforever chapter 24

Haha! You go Shikamaru!! lol. And I'm agreeing with Winx, I must know!!!... and I also agree with AnimeAngel...HALF BODY! haha! jk jk. Nice chappie, bro! ^^

Nov 14, 2007 04:54 PM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 0

XD

Oct 29, 2007 02:48 PM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 23

That mountain isn't gonna be a mountain for much longer. More like an ice pit. Nara's gonna be the one to injure herself because she's so stubborn.

Oct 29, 2007 04:23 PM by: rffraff05 chapter 0

I'll make sure to add that later, but i still have like 5 new techniques to think of, but it will come!

Oct 29, 2007 02:14 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 24

Hmm...ya, I'm with Sakura. I wanna know what it is....I can't wait for the next chapter! ^-^

Oct 29, 2007 02:33 PM by: rffraff05 chapter 0

you won't find out what it is exactly, at least not now. don't worry, you'll find out!

Oct 29, 2007 02:51 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 0

yes! lolz. I'm glad we'll find out.

Oct 29, 2007 04:16 AM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 24

half body XD

Oct 28, 2007 06:02 PM by: Symphoniaprincess101 chapter 24

oh snap leave me in suspence why don't ya awsome^^8000000000 boxes of almond crush pocky for you^^

Oct 28, 2007 05:43 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 23

lolz! OMG! Now i wanna try and move a rock with my mind! *stares at rock* darn it! it won't move! lolz! Awesome chapter!

Oct 28, 2007 05:43 PM by: FluffysPrincess2968 chapter 24

ZOMG CLIFFY-ness... ish... thingy.... WRITE MORE!!!

Oct 28, 2007 08:06 AM by: Symphoniaprincess101 chapter 23

cool yea fluffy's part craks me up lol^^you get 300000 boxes of pocky^^

Oct 27, 2007 03:26 PM by: FluffysPrincess2968 chapter 23

LMAO!!! DIE ROCK!!! *stares at rock*

*nothing happens* DAMN YOU!!!

Oct 27, 2007 01:48 PM by: Nekogal411 chapter 23

Shweet! ^^

Oct 27, 2007 11:35 AM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 23

Nice Chap *Thumbs up*

Oct 27, 2007 11:11 AM by: sasukeXsakuraforever chapter 23

Dang, I love all those technique's!
And Fluffy's hilarious, you go girl! ^_~
Awesome chapter, please hurry up and make another one! *gives you the Lee thumbs up and my teeth sparkle*

Oct 26, 2007 07:00 PM by: Symphoniaprincess101 chapter 22

coolness^^you get 100000000 boxes of pocky^^

Oct 26, 2007 05:24 PM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 22

OMG DAN LIKE...Know the 8 trigrams move and things...

Hey just wondering no pressure. When does My O.C come in>

Oct 26, 2007 05:22 PM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 21

K-K-K-K-K-KEWLL CHAPP!

Oct 26, 2007 05:21 PM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 0

Sorry 4 the late reviews i havent been on 4 a while

Oct 26, 2007 05:20 PM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 20

I Heart this Chappie

Oct 26, 2007 05:18 PM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 19

Nice Chappie!!!!

Kewl use of Dialouge

:D

Oct 22, 2007 08:23 PM by: Konohasdarkshadow chapter 22

NICE CHAP BIG BRO!!!!...and sorry for not keeping up with the deal...its because my basketball tryouts are on this coming up thursday and i practice for a long time until like 10 pm so when i come home i am SUPER UBER tired!!!!!...but anyways...NICE CHAP!!!

Oct 22, 2007 05:01 PM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 22

I luv how the girls have to get up! Funneh! Here's Nara's reaction!
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Nara: *crawls under the bed and hides under a blanket* I-is it over?

Oct 22, 2007 04:57 PM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 22

AWESOME CHAPPIE!!! Just....please....can you involve Nara just a bit more?

Oct 22, 2007 02:11 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 22

Awesome chapter! Haha, i bet Ino adn Sakura are still going at it. I hope they don't kill each other...great chapter!

Oct 22, 2007 08:19 AM by: pizza24 chapter 22

OMG! nice job yo! i can't wait for thr next chapter!!!!^^

Oct 21, 2007 06:55 PM by: sasukeXsakuraforever chapter 22

lolz! Dan your so mean! How dare you cause mischief and break the girls into fighting!...but it was pretty funny! haha! Awesome chapter! Hope the next one is TWICE as good! ^_^

Oct 22, 2007 08:30 PM by: Konohasdarkshadow chapter 0

well....i hope its TRIPLE times as good

oooooohhhhhhh what now Celine? huh? huh?...oh yeah thats right you got NOTHING!!!....OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHH YOU JUST GOT SSSSSEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

...lol...my friend AJ did that to my friend Javi (haw-vee) and everyone laughed so hard...Javi had chocolate milk coming out of his nose!!!!!!!XD

Oct 23, 2007 12:08 PM by: sasukeXsakuraforever chapter 0

Haha, nice!...

well I hope it's QUADRUPLE times as better! *smirks* Oh, what now, Jamal?! Huh?! Huh?! Bring it on, little boy! *sticks out tounge* OHHHHHH! NOW WHO GOT SERVED, HUH?! THATS RIGHT LIL BRO! ^_~ WHAT NOW?!

Oct 23, 2007 01:24 PM by: Konohasdarkshadow chapter 0

well...i hope its INFINITE times as better

YEA U AINT GOT NOTHIN ON DIS

Oct 23, 2007 01:30 PM by: sasukeXsakuraforever chapter 0

I got nothing, eh?

Well INFANINTY PERIOD times better!

Oh, BUUUURN! Ouch, thats gatta hurt there, dawg!

Oct 23, 2007 01:40 PM by: Konohasdarkshadow chapter 0

ok you win...or do you?

A GOOGLEPLEX TIMES INFINITE BETTER!!!!

u got iced

Oct 23, 2007 03:05 PM by: rffraff05 chapter 0

know what? i can school you all!

A FLOOOOPPITY JILLLLLION TIMES BEEEETTTTTER!!!!

what now?

Oct 23, 2007 06:49 PM by: sasukeXsakuraforever chapter 0

Hey! You can't do that, your the one who's writing the story in the first place! haha! and besides... *looks left to right with a smirk* A girl can SOOOOOO totatally out-serve a guy when it comes to comeback! :P
BOOYAH!

Oct 24, 2007 04:56 PM by: FluffysPrincess2968 chapter 0

OH YEAH!?!?!? I GOTS A EVEN BETTER ONE!!!!!!!

A WAFFLESMORFAGOOGLENRETARDMOOSEYMOO GAGGILIION INFINITYMOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! TIMES MOOOOORRRE!!!!!!

Oct 24, 2007 04:59 PM by: sasukeXsakuraforever chapter 0

Hey! I think we should team up against the guys! Me and you against Jamal and Dan! What do you say? We could SOOOO KICK THOSE BOYS BUTTS! ^_^

Oct 24, 2007 05:16 PM by: rffraff05 chapter 0

you know what? bring it! oh and i don't need to out serve you in insults, i can do it on the volleyball court celine! what now!

Oct 28, 2007 06:02 PM by: FluffysPrincess2968 chapter 0

OH YEAH!!! WELL YOU DON'T KNOW WHERE THE CRAP I LIVE!!! SO THERE!!!! oh... and...

AGOOGLESMORFORIFICNESSFULMOOCOWJOOISDESHIZNITBIZNATCHBASSTURDFULLSCRAPOLOONEY TIMES MORE!!!!

Oct 28, 2007 06:04 PM by: FluffysPrincess2968 chapter 0

TIMES A GOOGLELEYPLEXMOO!!!!!! MULTIPLY THEM TOGETHER!!!!

Oct 28, 2007 06:05 PM by: FluffysPrincess2968 chapter 0

OH SNAP SON! WATCHA GONNA DO NOW!?!?!?

Oct 28, 2007 06:06 PM by: FluffysPrincess2968 chapter 0

AND THEN MULTIPLY IT TIMES... times... YOUR MOM!!!! OH BURN!!!

Oct 21, 2007 06:47 PM by: angelfox chapter 22

sweet

Oct 21, 2007 06:25 PM by: moog1895 chapter 22

ahahah aww jamal loves me!

Oct 22, 2007 08:26 PM by: Konohasdarkshadow chapter 0

o///o

Oct 21, 2007 06:23 PM by: moog1895 chapter 21

Jamster...oi

Oct 21, 2007 06:19 PM by: moog1895 chapter 20

:DD i love your stories

Oct 21, 2007 06:14 PM by: moog1895 chapter 19

ooooh sweet FIGHING HAHAHAHAHA

Oct 21, 2007 06:09 PM by: moog1895 chapter 18

T__T dammit i lost again... HAHA great chapter!

Oct 21, 2007 05:49 PM by: FluffysPrincess2968 chapter 22

ZOMG AWESOME!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!

Oct 21, 2007 10:48 AM by: sasukeXsakuraforever chapter 21

Woah, I wonder if they would consider putting Sasuke's new weapon in the manga! That would be awesome, I wonder if they ever thought about it before? << hehe, nice fighting chapter, it was quite enjoyable^^

Oct 21, 2007 10:42 AM by: sasukeXsakuraforever chapter 20

Holy cow!!!... idk, I just wanted to say that. Awesome chappie, it pretty much answered all my questions that I was going to ask you, heh^^ I'm excited to read the next chappie, It's so good!

Oct 20, 2007 04:06 PM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 21

This chappie was AWESOME!!!!!
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(Um...could you please involve Nara a bit more? In each chappie, she's only had like one or two lines at the most.)

Oct 20, 2007 01:48 PM by: Symphoniaprincess101 chapter 21

whoa wicked^^

Oct 20, 2007 07:38 AM by: eelchic chapter 0

INTERESTING WAT WILL SASUKE DO? WILL HE BETRAY DAN OR OROCHIMARU? WAT WILL NARUTO LEARN? JUST WAT IM WONDERING FANTASTICAL CHAPPY CANT WAIT 4 NEXT 1 CAKE 4 U ^-^!!!!

Oct 19, 2007 07:10 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 21

Awesome chapter! Very awesome, indeed! I can't wait for the next one! ^-^

Oct 19, 2007 02:14 PM by: FluffysPrincess2968 chapter 21

SWEETNESSS!!!!!!!! AWESOMENESS!!! WOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! lol to Konohasdarkshadow's comment.

Ishi-chan: I SHALL USE TEH FLAMING BLADES TO POKE OUT MICHEAL JACKSONS BRAINZEZ!!!!

Me: STOP WITH THE FREAKING MOUNTAIN DUE!!!!

LOL, she's not really like that though. XP

Oct 19, 2007 09:46 AM by: Nekogal411 chapter 21

^^ Sweet!

Oct 18, 2007 08:40 PM by: Konohasdarkshadow chapter 21

WOOOH!!!...beware evil villians (micheal jacks-...i mean orochimaru) for i will use a cork screw sword to stab your brains out!...nice chap!^^

Oct 18, 2007 04:48 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 20

omg! Sasuke's goin to betray them!! I can't believe it!! Awesome chapter! And don't worry about having taken a break, everyone needs one at some point ^-^. Great chapter, btw!

Oct 18, 2007 04:12 PM by: Symphoniaprincess101 chapter 20

i'm a kill him when am i comeing in the story come on hurry up><but never the less awsome like always 100000 boxes of pocky for you.

Oct 18, 2007 03:29 PM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 20

Sasuke is a traitor! You meanie, Sasuke! Once Nara finds out, oooh, busted!

Oct 18, 2007 12:53 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

xiting chap!!!! who will learn the flashes technique? this is wat im lookin forward 2 Yah

Oct 17, 2007 07:09 PM by: nextguardian chapter 20

nice work!

Oct 17, 2007 06:55 PM by: vesblondie chapter 20

*gasp* I see all meh friends in there XDDD YAY! I liked this chappie! *hugs* lol Fluffy, you're insain!
Awwwwws! Naruto and Hinata! I love it! :D Very very good job!

Oct 17, 2007 06:54 PM by: Konohasdarkshadow chapter 20

dan...YOU CHEATED!!! (obviously)...sasuke your a traitor...a double traitor!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...NICE CHAP!!!^^

Oct 17, 2007 06:40 PM by: FluffysPrincess2968 chapter 20

*GASPEH*!!!!!!!! OMG!!! SASUKE-TEME!!!!! RAWR!!!!!!!!! *coughcough* *gains composer* YAY Fluffy wierdness. WEEEEEE!!!!! WIERD!!! IT RULZ ALL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! once again (and i know this gets annoying, but i cant help it) when with Shitatzu come in?

XD XP LOL poor Neji and Hinata

Oct 17, 2007 06:38 PM by: Nekogal411 chapter 20

^^ So awesome! :3 Great job!!

Oct 6, 2007 10:36 AM by: Symphoniaprincess101 chapter 19

wicked^^

Oct 5, 2007 11:53 AM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 19

Awesome chappie!....But my name isn't even in it again...

Oct 4, 2007 07:28 PM by: sasukeXsakuraforever chapter 19

Duuuude! Thats so cool!! Geez, why can't I have skills like that?! Geez! Lolz, just kidding :P. Can't wait for chapter 20!!^^

Oct 4, 2007 05:58 PM by: FluffysPrincess2968 chapter 19

SWEET!!! UPDATE SOON!!! Also, don't forget what I told you about Fluffy... its really important to her personality...

Oct 9, 2007 12:09 PM by: FluffysPrincess2968 chapter 0

RAWR!!! UPDATE SOON OR I WILL EXPLODE!!!!!

Oct 16, 2007 02:58 PM by: Symphoniaprincess101 chapter 0

i'm with ya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oct 4, 2007 05:19 PM by: Nekogal411 chapter 19

Sweet! ^^ Good job!

Oct 4, 2007 01:54 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 19

Awesome chapter! Gaara's trap was a brilliant idea, too bad for him taht it didn't work...

Oct 4, 2007 12:49 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

awsome chap cant wait 4 next one!!!!!!

Oct 3, 2007 09:20 PM by: nextguardian chapter 19

Nice work!

Oct 3, 2007 07:25 PM by: Konohasdarkshadow chapter 19

WOOH!!!...NICE ONE BIG BRO!!!...oh wait....now i have to make another chap...brb...im gonna go make the next chap or 2

Oct 3, 2007 07:22 PM by: vesblondie chapter 19

Wow...poor Neji-kun. That was pretty cool, though.
Aw. That whole thing with Gaara and Dan was really awesome!!! *nods* This chapter was really good!!! I can't for more >X3

Sep 28, 2007 01:39 PM by: eelchic chapter 0

awsomeness cant wait 4 next one!!!!! ^-^

Sep 24, 2007 08:11 PM by: SharinganKakashi chapter 0

the preview for that chapter was great lol im still behinde 2 chapters il have to read it tomarrow later dude and that's very clever this will be very no extremly long not only that but itl be great mabey some day theyl make it into a chapter or movie in the REAL show i wouldnt put it past them in 18 chp youv had 1000 veiws
in my 3 chapters iv had 50 veiws -_-" oh well im not cut out for storey writeing.

Sep 24, 2007 01:19 PM by: winxgirl21 chapter 18

sorry it's taken me so long to review! Awesome chapter! i can't wait to see what hapens next!

Sep 22, 2007 11:09 AM by: Nekogal411 chapter 18

awesome!! ^^

Sep 22, 2007 01:20 PM by: rffraff05 chapter 0

thank you!!!

Sep 22, 2007 09:41 AM by: Symphoniaprincess101 chapter 18

coolness^^

Sep 22, 2007 01:19 PM by: rffraff05 chapter 0

do i get cookies?

Sep 22, 2007 05:58 PM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 0

*Gives All the Cookies The Teh World!*

Sep 26, 2007 02:28 PM by: Symphoniaprincess101 chapter 0

hey i wanted to do that>< oh well^^

Sep 28, 2007 12:46 PM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 0

lol

x]

Sep 22, 2007 09:21 AM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 18

:o!

NEXT CHAPPIE! NEXT CHAPPIE!

Sep 22, 2007 01:19 PM by: rffraff05 chapter 0

okay, okay!

Sep 22, 2007 08:11 AM by: zerotimberwolf chapter 18

ooooh Im exited for the next chapter

Sep 22, 2007 01:18 PM by: rffraff05 chapter 0

i'll try to update as soon as i can!