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What I still remember by ZeldaGirl9793
Complete View as PDF, Submitted: 2007-11-13, Updated: 2007-12-05, Chapters: 12, Size: 42K, Words: 9070, Comments: 50, Views: 869   Offensive Language: Mild
Anime/Manga (0) > Naruto series (2778) > Couples/Pairings (2159) > Naruto/Hinata (231)
What if naruto returned in six years instead of two? Naruto relizes that he loves Hinata, so he asks her out, Only to realize that she's Kiba's Fiance. Will she stay faithfull to Kiba, or be with The one person she's wanted her whole life?
Chapters
1 - the boy - Submitted 2007-11-13 Updated: 2007-11-13 - 103 views, 666 words, 3k
2 - The kiss - Submitted 2007-11-13 Updated: 2007-11-13 - 79 views, 969 words, 4k
3 - the promise - Submitted 2007-11-13 Updated: 2007-11-13 - 81 views, 1191 words, 5k
4 - the battle - Submitted 2007-11-13 Updated: 2007-11-13 - 77 views, 821 words, 4k
5 - the embrace - Submitted 2007-11-13 Updated: 2007-11-13 - 74 views, 902 words, 4k
6 - great news - Submitted 2007-11-29 Updated: 2007-11-29 - 65 views, 380 words, 1k
7 - a woman's heart - Submitted 2007-12-02 Updated: 2007-12-02 - 65 views, 1010 words, 5k
8 - goodbye - Submitted 2007-12-02 Updated: 2007-12-02 - 66 views, 1168 words, 6k
9 - The real goodbye - Submitted 2007-12-02 Updated: 2007-12-02 - 63 views, 399 words, 2k
10 - Never an Absolution - Submitted 2007-12-03 Updated: 2007-12-03 - 60 views, 416 words, 2k
11 - Unable to stay, unwilling to leave - Submitted 2007-12-03 Updated: 2007-12-03 - 75 views, 600 words, 3k
12 - Epilogue - Submitted 2007-12-05 Updated: 2007-12-05 - 66 views, 548 words, 3k

25 Comments
MaliceKiotsu
Apr 30, 2008 01:21 PM by: MaliceKiotsu chapter 3
Ahhhh dude this is like sooo messed up but it is soooo bad @$$ man.Naruto and Hinata was ment for one another
 
GreyPichu
Dec 6, 2007 04:48 AM by: GreyPichu chapter 12
YEAHS!Ur doing a sasusaku story!i'm SO GLAD!!!i'll be sure to read it too.^^
 
hflp
Dec 5, 2007 07:26 PM by: hflp chapter 12
That was amazing
 
ZeldaGirl9793
Dec 5, 2007 07:27 PM by: ZeldaGirl9793 chapter 0
awww, thanks so much!:-)
 
cherryblossom93
Dec 5, 2007 07:16 PM by: cherryblossom93 chapter 12
OH-EM-GEEEEEEEEEEEE.

You are good at updating. And the epilogue made me smile.

(OMGWTFBBQ. You're doing SasuSaku next. Yesshums.)

This was an awesome story, and I can't wait for your next!

NARUHINA IS TEH SHET!

^.^

And, you get a camel, of course...

*:3
 
ZeldaGirl9793
Dec 5, 2007 07:27 PM by: ZeldaGirl9793 chapter 0
Awww, thankyou so much!!! ^-^
I cant wait to start writing my next X3
And thankyou for all the comments you gave me on this fanfic, they're always so nice XD
and Ha, I like the whole OMGWTHBBQ phrase, very nice!
Yay camel!!!!
*:3
 
GreyPichu
Dec 5, 2007 05:49 PM by: GreyPichu chapter 11
AWESOMENESS!u know, u should make another story similar to this, but with sasusaku in it. that would be SO cool!just suggesting that, though.^^
 
ZeldaGirl9793
Dec 5, 2007 07:23 PM by: ZeldaGirl9793 chapter 0
Awww, thankyou so much!:-)
And you sooo read my mind, lol. I am definatly planning on writting a sasusaku fanfic next! ^-^
And thankyou so much, Your comments are always so nice!X3
 
puppydog2
Dec 4, 2007 12:58 PM by: puppydog2 chapter 11
this entire story is awsome!!!!!!
 
cherryblossom93
Dec 4, 2007 12:28 PM by: cherryblossom93 chapter 11
Yay, a lil' random SasuSaku (you know my obssessions...).

See? Hinata's smarter than you think, Kiba. *blows rasberries*

I love how they yell when they proclaim their love to each other. Very cute.

Can't wait for the final installment!!!

^.^
 
ZeldaGirl9793
Dec 4, 2007 02:04 PM by: ZeldaGirl9793 chapter 11
haham i know, very random, right?
I was like "hmmmmm, I must make a very random twist that no one will think of" But i have a feeling this was a little too random though.... lol
And thankyou very much :-)
Woah, it smells like rasberries!
 
cherryblossom93
Dec 4, 2007 02:33 PM by: cherryblossom93 chapter 0
Hahahahaha.

Funny.

^.^
 
cherryblossom93
Dec 3, 2007 06:01 PM by: cherryblossom93 chapter 10
Aw. Naruto's totally gonna crash the wedding last minute and win lil' Hina's heart.

...D-R-A-M-A-!

Teehee. Update soon, dearie.

^.^
 
puppydog2
Dec 3, 2007 04:19 PM by: puppydog2 chapter 10
more more more!
 
GreyPichu
Dec 2, 2007 06:25 PM by: GreyPichu chapter 9
oh my god i thought this ended the story, but i guees u said there are a couple more chapters.YEAH!^^cant wait
 
GreyPichu
Dec 2, 2007 06:21 PM by: GreyPichu chapter 8
OMG!This chappie was SO sweet!loved it way too much!
 
ZeldaGirl9793
Dec 2, 2007 07:07 PM by: ZeldaGirl9793 chapter 8
aww, thankyou :-)
 
cherryblossom93
Dec 2, 2007 05:48 PM by: cherryblossom93 chapter 9
Suspenseeeeeeeeeee. EVIL.

Hee, awkward turtle time. *makes akward turtle*

Anyways. Poor Hina-chan, stuck in the middle. Hope she gets out okay.

Update sooooooooon.

^.^
 
cherryblossom93
Dec 2, 2007 05:46 PM by: cherryblossom93 chapter 8
Aw. Sweetness.

Ha, Naruto used pink highlighter. And drew hearts.

...He MUST be in love.

^.^
 
cherryblossom93
Dec 2, 2007 05:43 PM by: cherryblossom93 chapter 7
Choices, choices.

Ha, love Naruto's little solo there. Very nice.

Off to the next!

^.^
 
ZeldaGirl9793
Dec 2, 2007 07:05 PM by: ZeldaGirl9793 chapter 7
aww, thankyou! :-)
 
Kouni46892742
Dec 2, 2007 02:40 PM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 0
These last two chapters were amazing!!!
 
ZeldaGirl9793
Dec 2, 2007 04:28 PM by: ZeldaGirl9793 chapter 0
aww, thankyou:-)
 
cherryblossom93
Nov 29, 2007 06:06 PM by: cherryblossom93 chapter 6
Ha, can't wait to read about the partyyyy.

Naruto should totally try and sneek in. Cute chapter, post the next up real soon!

^.^
 
gaaralover1
Nov 13, 2007 04:25 PM by: gaaralover1 chapter 5
Crap... Now I wanna cry...................
 
ZeldaGirl9793
Nov 13, 2007 04:29 PM by: ZeldaGirl9793 chapter 0
aww, lol, dont cry X3
thankyou for the comment!:-)
 
Kouni46892742
Nov 13, 2007 04:20 PM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 0
Poor Hina-chan!

Wish I could help!
 
Amazing chappie!!
 
ZeldaGirl9793
Nov 13, 2007 04:29 PM by: ZeldaGirl9793 chapter 0
aww, thankyou so much!:-)
 
cherryblossom93
Nov 13, 2007 04:19 PM by: cherryblossom93 chapter 5
My, my... Men are so... possessive.

Poor Hinata. So confusing, these boys are.

Mixed signals, much?

Another awesome (and fast) update. Woot.

^.^
 
ZeldaGirl9793
Nov 13, 2007 04:22 PM by: ZeldaGirl9793 chapter 5
Amen sista! boys are possessive. lol X3
thankyou so much again. I love getting comments, I thought my writing sucked X3
 
MaliceKiotsu
Apr 30, 2008 02:10 PM by: MaliceKiotsu chapter 5
Hell no your writting is some of the best i have ever seen in my whole life of reading fanfics. Kudos
 
cherryblossom93
Nov 13, 2007 04:25 PM by: cherryblossom93 chapter 0
Too modest. XP

You are a much better writer than you give yourself credit for. I, however, can say that I suck. But you can't say that you do. Because you don't.

*:3 (camel with a flower)
 
ZeldaGirl9793
Nov 13, 2007 04:31 PM by: ZeldaGirl9793 chapter 0
lmao, thankyou very much but u are crazy, woman! you are an AMAZING writer, seriously, even nathan and the camel think u rock!
*:3
 
cherryblossom93
Nov 13, 2007 04:34 PM by: cherryblossom93 chapter 0
*huggies*

(Not the diaper brand, I swear. That would just be weird.)

*bows ridiculously low* I AM UNWORTHY OF THE CAMEL'S PRAISE.

...right. Anyway.
 
ZeldaGirl9793
Nov 13, 2007 04:39 PM by: ZeldaGirl9793 chapter 0
lmao, ur so silly!! XP
*huggies* but hey, i like diapers too...lol
*:3
 
cherryblossom93
Nov 13, 2007 04:41 PM by: cherryblossom93 chapter 0
Silly isn't the word for it.

I think they call it shizophrania, where I go to see the nice people in the white coats.
 
ZeldaGirl9793
Nov 13, 2007 04:48 PM by: ZeldaGirl9793 chapter 0
lmaoo, do the people in white coats give you cookies?
 
cherryblossom93
Nov 13, 2007 04:49 PM by: cherryblossom93 chapter 0
No.

Only oddly shaped candies. That make me tired.

They taste funny.
 
ZeldaGirl9793
Nov 13, 2007 04:52 PM by: ZeldaGirl9793 chapter 0
lmao, haha! candy...interesting
 
gaaralover1
Nov 13, 2007 03:39 PM by: gaaralover1 chapter 4
HURRY IT UP WILL YA!!!!!
 
ZeldaGirl9793
Nov 13, 2007 04:19 PM by: ZeldaGirl9793 chapter 0
kk, lol X3
I just added chapter five. ^-^
 
Kouni46892742
Nov 13, 2007 03:38 PM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 0
This is amazing!!
 
The last chappie kinda made me wanna cry, but this story is beautiful!

When will you update again!?
 
ZeldaGirl9793
Nov 13, 2007 04:19 PM by: ZeldaGirl9793 chapter 0
Aww, thankyou so much! ^_^
I just added chapter five a few minutes ago ^-^
 
cherryblossom93
Nov 13, 2007 03:13 PM by: cherryblossom93 chapter 4
Mm. *stomach growls* Hungry for more.

Someone's true nature comes out in stressful situations. Like Kiba. Meanie. Eat dog food. XP

Naruto would never insult someone like that. Not willingly, anyway.

Update soon, pwetty pweeze.

^.^

*faves*
 
ZeldaGirl9793
Nov 13, 2007 03:19 PM by: ZeldaGirl9793 chapter 0
lmao, i kno. kiba is a butt head in this chapter! X3
i am actually working on the next chapter right now, i might have it up tonight ^_^....i hope

lol, thankyou so much again
 
cherryblossom93
Nov 13, 2007 03:06 PM by: cherryblossom93 chapter 3
Aw, I heart awkward love triangles. *nods head*

And this is one of my favorites. Any other pairings appearing in here? Maybe a smidge of ShikaTem, or ChoIno? An OC for Sai (er... if he's even here in this universe...)

*coughs* I feel so demanding.

^.^
 
ZeldaGirl9793
Nov 13, 2007 03:16 PM by: ZeldaGirl9793 chapter 0
thankyou, actually, i might sove some choino, or shikatemi, i'm not sure yet :-) but I'm so happy u like it ^_^
 
cherryblossom93
Nov 13, 2007 03:02 PM by: cherryblossom93 chapter 2
Sneaky, sneaky, Naru-chan...
 
cherryblossom93
Nov 13, 2007 02:58 PM by: cherryblossom93 chapter 1
And, finally, Naruto and his oblivious self has eveolved. A little late. (bum bum BUM)

OM-EM-GEE, I would type more, but my beloved little puppy just attempted to rip my arm off by latching onto my BRUISED hand (Dani hit me with the remote, and HARD) with her evilly sharp teeth and tugging like there's no tommorrow. And now it's more than a little sore. Ouchies.

Loving it so far, and glad you're writing again. Off to the next chapter!

^.^
 
cherryblossom93
Nov 13, 2007 02:59 PM by: cherryblossom93 chapter 0
Evolved, I meant EVOLVED. Stupid keyboard.
 
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