Story idea, thought i'd write it down
Blog Entry: Story idea, thought i'd write it down
Blog Entry: Story idea, thought i'd write it down
I've never written anything largish before so it will likely be simple, clichéd or just poorly written. None the less the idea of writing a story about what will be a teen aged male running into a similar to left 4 dead situation cause by psychologists was too good to pass up so i just wrote a tiny bit to see if anyone's interested in the idea.
If I get poss feedback I'd love to post another chapter for something to do.
January 23rd 1530 – Prelude
“Warden, how are the subjects down in isolation?”
“I’m still not sure about your private little experiments.” The large man stands flexing his shoulders under with grey pin suit. “All of your subjects have calmed and are sitting close to the door in each cell”
“Then our one time antidepressants are working, it’s…”
“No! You’ll need to see, they don’t stand or eat, they are hunched sitting and just mumble.”
“Daniel Honz, need I remind you your place in this, our agreement is you supply the subjects and my team conducts and analyses the experiments.”
“You quacks are a scary bunch”
The slender man adjusts his glasses approaching the door throwing a green wad clad loosely in a gold lined silver money clip.
“These criminals have done there time, isn’t it time another crime is committed”
Daniel sits slowly bitting his lower lip for a second, Then picks up the phone.
*** *** *** ***
January 29th 0915
“What has changed why aren’t they awake yet it has been almost two weeks”
“The amount of chemicals have changed, if I had to guess I’d say end of summer we can see some effects, so just a few days.”
“About time, this wardens getting nosey too”
“something else, they are all changing the same way, the exact same physical and mental changes”
The man straightens as a excited mist touches his glasses.
“The same thoughts? And chemical changes? We should release our work.”
“Not the same changes, think one mind, one body, many clones”
Lips stretching a grim smile across his young futures, glasses almost white with mist.
“We should cure this facility”
*** *** *** ***
February 1st 1750
“His is warden Honz reporting a riot at IMC prison, Sydney. All guards have been subdued. Convicts, civilian scientists and nurses now control all weapons and are bitting and eating all others. I am locked in my office which I have barricaded. Over.”
“We receive, a rescue party will be assembled. Over”
“No, send the whole thing, the yard looked like a frackin’ jerky factory last time I looked, I don’t want to die here
*Loud thuds and snapping sounds*
Name. Thy kingdom come, thy will be done again”
“Are you still there, we are going to send some ambulance personnel with escorts, just hold on, help is on the way.” “Hello”
“I we all am are PRIDE!”
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If I get poss feedback I'd love to post another chapter for something to do.
January 23rd 1530 – Prelude
“Warden, how are the subjects down in isolation?”
“I’m still not sure about your private little experiments.” The large man stands flexing his shoulders under with grey pin suit. “All of your subjects have calmed and are sitting close to the door in each cell”
“Then our one time antidepressants are working, it’s…”
“No! You’ll need to see, they don’t stand or eat, they are hunched sitting and just mumble.”
“Daniel Honz, need I remind you your place in this, our agreement is you supply the subjects and my team conducts and analyses the experiments.”
“You quacks are a scary bunch”
The slender man adjusts his glasses approaching the door throwing a green wad clad loosely in a gold lined silver money clip.
“These criminals have done there time, isn’t it time another crime is committed”
Daniel sits slowly bitting his lower lip for a second, Then picks up the phone.
*** *** *** ***
January 29th 0915
“What has changed why aren’t they awake yet it has been almost two weeks”
“The amount of chemicals have changed, if I had to guess I’d say end of summer we can see some effects, so just a few days.”
“About time, this wardens getting nosey too”
“something else, they are all changing the same way, the exact same physical and mental changes”
The man straightens as a excited mist touches his glasses.
“The same thoughts? And chemical changes? We should release our work.”
“Not the same changes, think one mind, one body, many clones”
Lips stretching a grim smile across his young futures, glasses almost white with mist.
“We should cure this facility”
*** *** *** ***
February 1st 1750
“His is warden Honz reporting a riot at IMC prison, Sydney. All guards have been subdued. Convicts, civilian scientists and nurses now control all weapons and are bitting and eating all others. I am locked in my office which I have barricaded. Over.”
“We receive, a rescue party will be assembled. Over”
“No, send the whole thing, the yard looked like a frackin’ jerky factory last time I looked, I don’t want to die here
*Loud thuds and snapping sounds*
Name. Thy kingdom come, thy will be done again”
“Are you still there, we are going to send some ambulance personnel with escorts, just hold on, help is on the way.” “Hello”
“I we all am are PRIDE!”
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