capter 1 neko kitten adventures

review-
this chapter I had some trouble with
not just by getting it on here, but with Dimitri
I have trouble getting his character right
I mean the vocabulary they have for him in the games
isn't as understandable as I hoped, in an alternate chapter
he says something egosentric at the end, but I took it it out
any ways i don't know what else realy to say bout the chapter
I guess just - enjoy ^^