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coco bandicoot machine rise

Blog Entry: coco bandicoot machine rise

Blog Entry: coco bandicoot machine rise
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Posted by: slifer
Posted: August 28, 2008, 11:38:09 AM
this was the first story i wrote based on thc crash bandicoot series im coming up with (i try putting this on the chapter thing but i wont let me)

this is the first story of how my series started.
tell me if it good enough for a game.
The story takes places at Dr. Neo Cortex castle, in Dr.N.Gin lab.
Dr.N.Gin is looking for his blueprints when he stumbled across a black laptop with a skull-like face on the top of its glossy surface. He decided to see what secrets it may hold. After five minute, the black laptop was starting to spark, and then flashing bright lights was coming out too. And then the lap top exploded. The n gin couldnt see anything because of the smoke. Then a gust of wind blow the smoke aside and he was surprised because in front of him, there is a giant floating machine head. Dr Cortex ran through the door and he shouted at Dr n gin.
What going on here?
The giant machine head quickly turned Cortex a chicken, then turned around to Dr n gin and said
Youre coming with me.
Viruse (the floating machine head) took n gin to his mountain base and took him inside the base.
N gin couldnt believe his eyes when he saw hundreds of robots working and building on bigger robots and weapons. Viruse took Dr n gin to his metamorphic chamber where they met a doctor robot called Cell (V-022).
Viruse to cells its time to release satellite robot Astrobot to scan the planet for some humans so we can transform them into power jewels to power up the new androids yes sir said cells and walk over to the control panel and press the big yellow button and while in space. One of the asteroids blew up and an astrobot was release and was send a message that has instructions for what to do and got on with his mission. A couple of moments later, he send a couple of locations for where Viruse can find some humans that would fit the bill.
Cells got the results from astrobot and then he summoned his seekers and gave each one of them a different location to go to and the seekers gone to fetch them.
N gin said to viruse are you even bother about crash bandicoot? I have little time to worry about some field rat but he once stop the Doominator then viruse interupes him and shouted BECAUSE THE DOOMINATOR WAS JUST A TOWER OF JUNK AND THE CORTEX FAMILY COULDNT EVEN STOP A BANDICOOT
The seekers came back and brought back the humans that viruse wanted and were taken to cells so he can operate on them. Viruse noticed that one of his seekers were missing.
VIRUSE said where that other seeker, he was meant to be here with that human.
He paused for a second while he mused Oh forget him, Ill send Boohoo the clown to bring him here and robotersize him.
At the same time, c.d just returned coco bandicoot to her home after a week with him on his island.
C.d went to the other side of Sanity Island and Boohoo came out of nowhere and throws a knockout gas and c.d was out cold. Then Boohoo left a note on his turbo boat and took C.D back to Viruse mountain base, in the chamber were Viruse, Dr.N.Gin and Boohoo watched c.d get strapped him down and cells started to operate him from human to android but something startled Viruse. He notices that c.d was already part machine but they continuo anyway. They didnt know that unknown (viruse counter part) had a tracker inside C.D. At the same time somewhere, unknown just finish the prototype of a new body and got a message from one of his men that crosser dog (c.d) signal is gone and the last place it was last active was in the mountains. Unknown knew that the mountains where were viruse mini base is and needs someone to retrieve him.
He quickly made a message and gave it to one of mechanicals birds and sends it to the one group that good at these things
At the home of the bandicoots, crash is chasing a chicken because it stolen his boxer with hearts on them. Crunch is working out and coco is secretly talking to sub (one of crosser dog robot friends) to know where did c.d disappears to.
The robotic bird flew through one of the windows and put the message device in the middle of the room and played the message. It was a voice message and it said:

You have been chosen to save the world from a new evil that you have never faced before.
Your mission is to go in secret mountain base, steal a special android and bring it to the location and the mountain base is being downloaded in a lap top that is in this room and I take from there. P S if you dont do it, them you will be in mondo trouble.

The robotic bird took the device and flew off. The group used the map that was downloaded from the device and after carefully following it directions, they manage to find the mountain base.

They hide behind some boulders and coco look for some openings to the fortress on her lap top. A moment after, she found a couple of doors and said to crash and crunch
Ok, there are only two entrances to get in the base, the front gates where their no guards, and there another gate behind the base.
Crunch reply I thought cortex castle was easier to get in. me and crash will take the back gate while you can take the front gate since their no guards, So that way they cant get all of us at once or not at all ok, then let go.
When the group dash to the gates, one of the robotic guards where ear dropping o them and radio Viruse.
Viruse couldnt believe that they found his base, but he didnt really care because they save them the trouble looking for them.
Viruse got to the building room and said to n gin and cells is my new super androids ready?
Dr n gins reply we just finished them but
Viruse got angry and steam were coming out of his head and shouted at the both of them what do you mean BUT? N gin said to him only rocket and kooler are ready, the other two still need more time.
Viruse wasnt too happy that only two of his super android is done. He decides to test the two of them by catching the two who going to enter the fortress.
Crash and crunch found the back gate to the base but dr n gin is standing in front of the gate.
Crash and crunch were laughing out loud thinking that n gin can stop the both of them.
The gate was opening and on the inside of the entrance there are two androids standing aside dr n gin. Crunch said these two walking tin cans are no match against us.
Dr n gin shouted ROCKET, KOOLER ATTACK AND CAPTURE THOSE TWO. The battle kicks out like mad when Rocket started firing out loads of missiles everywhere. Crash and crunch just manage to avoid the missiles but things got worse when Kooler turn the entire ground that they are battling on into ice with his axe-like weapon. Crash was sliding everywhere tile he slide into kooler and was difficult to fight him know with the ground being so slippery. Crunch on the other hand had no problem running on the ice but fighting rocket was difficult. Crash and crunch wasnt doing well against the super android.
Meanwhile coco is making her way up the fortress to the chamber where the special android is being developed. She made it to the room but a robot guard was in front of the door but didnt stop her. Coco run up to the robot guard and kicked the guard into the door so hard that it explode ad took the door with it. She went in the lab and looks around for that android. Coco found the android and activate it and took out of the lab, during their escape, coco realise that she forgot about crash and crunch. Gamma (he the stolen android coco took) said that their no time to get them, the guards are right behind use. Gamma took coco and flew through one of the window. He already knows where to go but coco wasnt happy for leaving crash and crunch behind.
Rocket and Kooler beat and capture the male bandicoots and transporting them to the space fortress.
Viruse was already in his space fortress. He very please that he capture crash and crunch and he wasnt happy that they didnt get coco and he was furious that he she took gamma. He summons Rocket, kooler, and machine golem. Kooler was given instructions and was sent to Hong Kong, machine golem sent to the machine kingdom and Rocket was given instructions to follow Gamma and destroy him and capture coco. Dr n gin was also instructed to look after crash and crunch and the prison unit.
Meanwhile back on earth, gamma took coco to the location which it happen to be a lake (its the base of unknown deep inside the lake).gamma told coco to stay there until he come of the lake.
He jumps into the lake and swam deep until he reach the base. He enters the base and unknown were standing at the entrance and said Crosser Dog? Yes, arent I the lucky one. Can you quickly change my body? Lucky for you I already finish the prototype so yes after the quick body swap, Gamma told unknown not to tell coco his real name until after the battle is over. Unknown agreed and gamma (this the name he chose to cover up his real name for know).
Coco is worrying about crash and crunch.
Gamma came out the lake with a new body that make him looks human, but he is an android now. Gamma properly introduces himself to coco and she was beginning to blushing a bit. Shortly after, a missile came at gamma and hit him.
Rocket jump out of his hiding place shouted out that was easier then a thought, now youre coming with my dear. Gamma ran out of the smoke and gave rocket a nasty punch right in the chest. Coco took a good look at gamma and he wasnt damage. Rocket got back up and told gamma it will take more then a punch to keep me down. He flew up in to the clouds hopping gamma would follow and he did so they can continuo their battle in the sky and what a raging battle is was.
Rocket try to hit gamma, but he keeps destroy his missiles before there reach him. Rocket fired everything that he had at gamma.
Gamma somehow got behind rocket before his rampaging attack of showed missiles and punch as hard as he could and the punch was so hard that it went through his chest, cause rocket to crash to the ground. Gamma went back down to earth to see the damage from the crash He didnt took him long to get back to coco. He got back to coco and show her the strange key that he found after he defeated rocket and coco said where did you find that key I found it when after I defeated rocket. I wondering why he carries a key
Unknown finally came out of the bloody lake and coco shouted WHO ON EARTH ARE YOU sorry about has bin happing so far. It is best if I explain what bin going on lately I bin wondering that too gamma said. I am Unknown, a war machine for peace. The reason all of this is happening because someone release VIRUSE, a robotic monster thats used his empire to concur everything. me and my troops have bin trying to stop them for endless years and the battles went on for a long time until me and he came to this planet billions of years ago, that when I imprison him in two black lap tops and scatter them through the solar system and I stay here just in case this day would come why did he took crash ad crunch then? coco asked unknown
Who knows what sick plans viruse has for them gamma show unknown the key that he found. Wear did you gets this from? I found it next to rocket after I defeated him this is one of the four keys that open the mighty gate on viruse space fortress. There are three more to get and be best to find them just in case we cant get through the gate by force. Unknown just got message that Sahara desert is being out of question to go through because a giant slug like monster is terrorising those who try to travel through.
They group travel to the Sahara desert to sort out the problem. They look for a while but nothing. Coco was getting a bit thirsty and decided to drink some water from her container. While coco was drinking, the sand rise up really high and coco stop drinking and sear tsunami of sand coming her way. Gamma quickly run tours coco and carry her away before the sand could crash landed. They quickly turn and sear the monster coming out of the sand and were a machine that is battling another giant machine but has a cobra like image. They watch the two giants fight each other and the slug monster disable he cobra monster and quickly turn its attaching to Gamma and started to charge tours him.
Coco and Gamma ran in different directions hoping to get the monster confuse but it only chase gamma. He knew that hell be the one to get chase and shouted LETS SEE HOW TOUGH YOU REALLY ARE He then give into the sand and then the slug monster followed but couldnt see where he was and accidentally ran into a field mine which damage it a bit and pop up on the surface and sear Gamma and charge right into him. then gamma jump when the slug was about to ram into him and landed on the back of the mechanical monster and got out more of his little mine bombs and try to get close to the mouth so he can through his little bombs right inside of it. Of course its a bit difficult when it using its arms to try and knock off but couldnt. He finally got the mouth and through a couple of bombs and quickly jump off the soon to be fried monster. Shortly it exploded from the inside and came out a key that landed in gamma arms and met up with Coco and Unknown and show them the second key and unknown told gamma to savage the cobra robot just in case.
Soon they left the Sahara desert and rested in a rain forest. Coco and Gamma started to get the cobra monster to function while unknown works on a device that help them get to the ship. After 20 minutes, Coco and Gamma got the robot working again and it looks at the group and sear unknown and said to him Big Red reporting for duty sir coco and gamma look at each other, then look at unknown.
Unknown said I remember you know big red, your one of the four guards of the machine kingdom. what are you doing here? Machine kingdom? coco asked yes. Viruse destroyed the originally world and left it. That when I decided to turn into a machine kingdom for my troops and any other life forms during the war and I was send here to exterminate the desert monster by the princess big red said to the group. Who the princess coco and gamma said to unknown and he said then the princess is my daughter, Thorn. I left her there during the war.
Unknown used his ability to locate the third key. Amount later he found it in a place called Japan. He finishes the prototype of the teleporting device and teleport the group in Japan. They got teleport outside of Japan and made their through.
When they got to the centre of Japan, they were shock to see that the middle of Japan was frozen solid. Then they heard an evil laugh and then Kooler jump out of his hiding place and said to the group welcome to my frost city and dont think you can escape this time then he pointed his axe-like weapon at gamma and fired at him, turning him in to an ice cube.
Coco told big to get his weapon and crush him. Big Red gone and attack big red and try to get his weapon from him but no luck. Then she gone and attack kooler when he is being distracted and gave him a couple kicks and kicked the weapon from his icy metal clutches and quickly grab it. Kooler is getting annoyed and pick up big red and toss him away from him and ran tours coco and grab her ankle and held her upside down and hold her up high until her face reaches his and said know youre coming with me and Ill being taking my axe back sure. Ill give it to you and she swings the axe across his chest. Which cause him to release coco, being shutdown and sparks came out of him. Coco detaches the key that was on his axe and use it to defrost gamma. A few seconds later, he was relief to be free and coco ran tours him and hugs him and he hugs back and said thanks, coco
Big red held kooler by the head and said excuse me but what should we do with this scum? gamma told him just destroys him. But before big red could, kooler was teleported back to the spaceship.
Unknown told the team go through the portal and wait for me in the forest
They went through the portal and ended up in the same forest they were in before going to Japan. They waited for unknown then he shows up and said to the group sorry for the delay. I had to defrost Japan. Gamma told unknown that good to know because while you in Japan sorting out the ice issue, me and coco bin trying to locate the last key and it not nowhere on this planet coco added which doesnt make unknown day. Well, I guess three keys are our best bet to open the wire box that controls the traps then. Well continuo tomorrow. Then he made a force field to cover up the forest so the Viruses monsters cant get them. Far from the group when its late at night. Gamma took out a photo that reminds him of when he was with coco when he was a cyborg, he looks at the picture for the moment and said to him self Ill get my revenge on you viruse, even its the last thing Ill do.
The next day, unknown got the teleport device set on viruse spaceship. Coco, Gamma and big red met unknown outside of the forest and was waiting for the portal to open. Just before he was about to open the portal, big red got a message from the machine kingdom saying that thy are being attacked by Viruse air fighters and machine golem. Big red told unknown about the message that he just receive and unknown said to coco and gamma Im afraid that we have to go to the machine kingdom. Viruse already send his air fighters and a monster there to delay use further so that he can find his body
Coco and gamma wasnt happy that they have to wait even longer before they can save crash and crunch and get revenge on viruse but this event might have the forth key need.
Unknown reset the warp device for the machine world. They enter the portal one at the time and when gamma was the last one to enter, he was teleported on one of the air fighters.
Unknown, Coco and big red got teleported in one of the ally way and sear the damage up ahead. Big red knows a secret passage way to the palace but coco asked unknown where Gamma. Wasnt he with use? Im sure that hes alright.
Meanwhile on one of the air fighters, one of the others air fighters spotted Gamma one another one and told to destroy him. They started to fire at gamma but he abandons the ship he was on and it was shot down by mistake. He had his jets on and started to fight back at the air fighters which didnt last long with him. Then after he took care of the ships, he sear the palace and went to the gang their
Unknown and the group made it to thrown room and thorn (unknown robotic daughter) is waiting for them and talk to her father about the invasion.
Gamma finally caught up them and big red said to him you took your sweet time getting here it wasnt my fault if unknown device teleported me on those air fighters gamma reply back. Thorn asks him then what happen? I had a wonderful time trashing each and every one of them well thats one crisis taken care of unknown said and gamma reply are you saying there are more work to be done here? Then before for anyone could tell him. They heard a massive crashing sound outside the palace. They ran to the window and sear the machine golem using his body as a battering ram through the main gates. Unknown quickly the group to try and stop the golem but notice the gamma was gone and look outside and sear him shouted YOU CANT STOP HIM ALONE but gamma ignored him and still went after the machine golem. The golem is getting closer to breaking through the gate. Gamma is standing on one of the pillars and jumps off of it and kicked the golem like a football and it crashed into a pile of rocks and transformed from metal ball, to robot and shouted at him IT ABOUT TIME YOU SHOWED UP then quickly turned back into a ball and started to chase him. Gamma ran away from the castle since the golem is trying to road kill him. Coco radio gamma and gave him some locations to fight in. he didnt have long to decide so he went to the closest one and he ended up grinding down the rail thats take him to the portal. He turns around and couldnt believe that the machine golem was able to grind let alone balance on the rail. Then shortly they went through the portal and ended up in a scrape heap and the both of then ended up one the others side of the place. Gamma got up from his fall and turn around to see if the machine golem was about but not in sight. Then he spotted a samurai sword and took it just in case. Then he heard a rolling sound and the M. golem shows up and they started their
Fight.
Both of them fought physically and m. golem is mostly blocking and hurting gamma at the same time. Then gamma decide to used the sword and gave him a couple of blows to the chest which cause him some damage and went back into a ball and try to destroy him that way again. Gamma decides to get rolled over on purpose so he can deliver the final blow. He fell over so his plan could work. Then the golem rolled over him and gamma thinking to himself his spin better be weak for what Im going through. The machine golem transformed and walks over to gamma body to finish the job, so he thinks. When machine golem got close enough to him, he swiftly got on his feets and ram the sword through the golem spin and that ended up causing him to shut down, not exploding (d**n).
He was about to throw his body into the ocean but it was teleported before that.
After the getting back to the castle, there going to be more bad news waiting for him. He got back to throne room and said to the group the golem is going to be tossing itself into anything for a while. Unknown walk over to him and said thats good but Im afraid that he might of release the four androids what do you mean before they attack the castle, one of the ships took the golem to prison island to release his fellow androids. I just dont know which one he freed
Do you want me and coco to check to out? That would be nice where is coco anyway? gamma look at unknown you know where she is she took off when thorn told us about then he ran off as fast as he can to get to the island and unknown shouted where are you going but once again he ignore him this time for the right reason. By the time he got their, coco and big red already check all the cells and he spotted them and quickly catch up with them and shouting for them to wait for him. Gamma, were sorry that we left without you but we check the cells and thorn was right. Only one is still in their but the other three escaped. coco said to gamma and reply they have to be on this island somewhere. Then big red used his scanner to try location the try bandits and shortly after he ended up finding their location in the old ruins and travel to the ruins. When they got into the ruins, its turn out to be an old coliseum, but not been used for sometime. The group enter the coliseum and except big red because he was banished from entering it because he threw a stone at one of the royal guards.
Anyways, the room light up and the door out of the place are shut tight.
Then two of the androids that escape from the prison came out of nowhere and Clump (one of the three androids) took gamma on the second half of the coliseum and coliseum detach itself from the other half and Gamma and Clump started to fight while coco ended up fighting double ganger on the other half of the coliseum. Then a red force field appear between the two divided coliseum so their wont be any contact of any kind. Coco didnt know how to defeat a tank that roughly her size has four arms with drills as hands and has two faces but she still has to defend herself against it. Gamma on the other hand is attacking Clump head on and so did clump with gamma. They fought for awhile and the both of them are getting a bit tired until a smart remark was made by clump about coco which really got Gamma so furious that he punch him so hard that it went straight though his chest and threw him into a pillar and it fell on him. Them gamma got another pillar with a sharp point at the end and slam it on top of the first pillar.
Meanwhile back on the other half of the coliseum. Coco attacks him from the side of his body which cause him to knock over on his side but ended up getting back up. Then she did a drop kick on his second face which she ended up destroying it first face which really got the android mad. She was about to attack it again until she trip over and fell, which gave double ganger the opportunity to use his big drill. the big drill came out of the second body and was already spinning and try to hammer it on coco but she stop it by grabbing on the main drill, trying not to be drill to depth while it was spinning. she couldnt hand it for much longer and quicker kicked the second face and by doing that, she is release from the drill and done a power stomp in to middle of his body (he was on his side when done that) and quickly jump off and took cover when he exploded. She was relief that she doesnt have too take him back to his cell. Then she notice blood in front of her and quickly looks at her paws and sear that she was bleeding a lot from the drill.
The force field disappear and the two coliseums join together again. Then gamma sear coco and ran tours he but when he got their, he sear her paws bleeding and quickly said to her coco what happen? I was holding back his drill with my hand while she was beginning to feel a bit wired from the amount of blood she lost from double ganger and then fell on he knees. Gamma took off his hand and blue wires came out him and he gently put them on coco bleeding paws and was beginning to regain the blood she lost. Wasnt long before she regains all the blood she lost and completely healed her paws without any marks. . She got up and look at her paws and were surprise that her cuts was healed and her blood was restored and turn to gamma and said with joy that she hugs him thank you so much for healing me and she just kiss him on his cheek which was close to his moth. Then unknown was talking through one of their radios and coco pick up hers and he said gamma, coco. Are you alright? have you found the prison cells and did any escape from their cells? ? Yes we did check the cells but three escape from their cells. So far we manage to find two and destroy them coco and gamma said to unknown.
He told them to find the last one and destroy it before it could leave the island then he turn off his radio.
Then they heard giant foot steps from the top of the cave and made their way up to what it appear to be a mountain battle field that is similar to the last one but with cliffs and a raging sea at the bottom with sharp rocks.
They got in the middle of the battle field and the android fire at them but missed when they heard the trigger go off.
After the smoke clear up, they sear the third prisoner Crusher. A hot temper android equip with a heavy plasma cannon as his left arm.
Gamma charge right tours him and punch him right in the face and done a bit of damage. then crusher punch gamma right in the chest which cause him a lot of damage and knocking him back a couple of metres back but that didnt stop him from taking him down.
He got back up and try punching him right in the face which done some damage but then crusher grab his face and threw him straight into a giant rock which was hear the edge of the cliff and manage to get back on his feet. But before he could deliver another assist on him, crusher fire a plasma beam was small but was powerful that when it hit his chest, it went straight through him and destroying his power crystal and since the crystal that was powering him was destroy (like someone charge a sword straight into someone heart) causing him to fall backwards and off the cliff and crashing into the sea.
Coco couldnt believe that she lost another friend that she felt close to and had just lost it when that happen and ran tours crusher and shouted AH! SCUM. He turns around and she kick him so hard that her foot went through his armour and damaging him and he tries to fight back but she wouldnt keep still when she kicking him in different places and taking her anger that she bottle up due to the bad things that happen to her out on crusher.
Crusher couldnt keep fighting due the huge amount of damage he is taking and coco wasnt done with him yet. She quickly climb the highest pillar and jump off of it and done a super power stomp on top of crusher head and that cause him to explode but she got shelter before he blew sky high.
After he was gone, coco fell on her knees knowing now that cant bring gamma back by killing of an evil android. Then she heard a big crash and turns around and sears the critical damage gamma and a android that is shape as a shark called Big Blue. Thank you so much for returning him no problem then he went back into the big blue sea. Shortly after a portal open underneath them and warp them back into the forest and there she meet up with Unknown. What happen to Gamma Crusher was responsible for this and I avenge him I have to go back to my kingdom to collect the parts I need to repair him wait? What am I doing to do if Viruse send monster here then? Dont worry. The whole forest is planted with force field trees everywhere And then he went through the portal and one hour later he came back with the equipment and the parts he needed to repair Gamma. Coco help with the repairs and half way through she ask Unknown why isnt big red here? He is helping with the constructing in the kingdom. By night fall, Gamma was fully fixed but wasnt waking up and coco was worrying about that isnt he meant to be waking up now? Not after a couple hours after repairs. I have to go back the kingdom to see how things are going. You have to stay and watch Gamma then he went through the portal again. Coco seat beside gamma and slowing fell to sleep in tears.
The next morning, coco wake up and sear that gamma is missing. She panic for a moment until she look up and sear gamma hanging up-side down from the tree branch above her and she was relief and said to him when were you up? An hour ago Unknown came through the portal and sees Coco that Gamma is functioning again and walk up to them and says are you two ready for the big day that we going to bust into Viruse ship, save Crash and Crunch and destroy the machine empire once and for all you bet just say the word then he put a control watch which he used to summon the Hawk Mech. it was a massive machine that can travel to space.
It then land down and open a door that lead to the control room. Coco and Gamma wasnt expecting to travel from earth to the spaceship in a smashing machine. They got aboard and gone straight to viruse spaceship, not long before they got to Viruse spaceship. Coco and Gamma got on the spaceship while Unknown hides the mech on the moon. While he was doing that, they got started on putting the keys into their proper slots which de-active most of the traps that are inside the spaceship. Unknown warped his way to the gates where they waited for him. Right this is it. Now Im going with Coco to help her with the jail break. You be careful when you make your way through the ship to reach Viruse because some traps are still active I so cant wait to get my revenge on him yeah! Lets go and kick some butt then gamma smash down the gate and made their way through and unknown gave his watch to gamma just in case.
Coco and unknown manage to find the dungeon where they see crash and crunch bored out of their minds. Before they can free them, a giant door open slowly and when it open completely, It was Dr n gin in a new and dangerous giant robot suit and coco and unknown had to think fast before they are have no chance off saving crash and crunch.
At the other ends of the spaceship. Gamma got through all of the traps, laser soldiers, the exploding spheres and all that and got to a bridge that connect from the outside of the ship and to the room where Viruse is. about half way through the bridge, he encounter another V-serious android called Chains and he holding a spike ball attach with a long chain. Chains ran tours gamma swinging his spike ball and he was ready. He swings his ball at Gamma but he dodges it and punches him right in the chest but didnt finish him off yet. Chains started to swing his spike ball again and hit gamma but he made a quick recovery and ran and took his sword out and struck Chains with a powerful blow.
Chain fell of the bridge do to the damage and crashed on the moon (nowhere near the mech).
After watching him fall, Gamma continuo making his way through the bridge, up the stairs and into the same traps but in a shorter hallway and finally reaches the control room. He busted down the door and enters but no one was in the room. He looks around to see if anyone was hiding and then a head with tentacles which is his neck came out of the shadows and gamma turns around and got his sword ready and viruse said to him well. If it isnt Crosser Dog CAN IT! What the matter? Dont like new body SHUT UP AND FIGHT YOU MONSTER. Then everything turns blank and shortly gamma opens his eyes and said how did I have back out here in space? He turns around and sears Viruse and quickly got aggressive tours him. Viruse raise his tentacles and meteors started to form around him and not long after lots of meteors came forming around him. Then the next thing Gamma sears is a sphere of joined meteors, gamma just remembers about the watch and activating it to summoning the Hawk Mech. it was a massive machine that can travel to space.
It then land down and open a door that lead to the control room. Coco and Gamma wasnt expecting to travel from earth to the spaceship in a smashing machine. They got aboard and gone straight to Viruse spaceship, not long before they got to Viruse spaceship. Coco and Gamma got on the spaceship while Unknown hides the mech on the moon. While he was doing that, they got started on putting the keys into their proper slots which de-active most of the traps that are inside the spaceship. Unknown warped his way to the gates where they waited for him. Right this is it. Now Im going with Coco to help her with the jail break. You be careful when you make your way through the ship to reach Viruse because some traps are still active I so cant wait to get my revenge on him yeah! Lets go and kick some butt then gamma smash down the gate and made their way through and unknown gave his watch to gamma just in case.
Coco and unknown manage to find the dungeon where they see crash and crunch bored out of their minds. Before they can free them, a giant door open slowly and when it open completely, It was Dr n gin in a new and dangerous giant robot suit and coco and unknown had to think fast before they are have no chance off saving crash and crunch.
At the other ends of the spaceship. Gamma got through all of the traps, laser soldiers, the exploding spheres and all that and got to a bridge that connect from the outside of the ship and to the room where Viruse is. about half way through the bridge, he encounter another V-serious android called Chains and he holding a spike ball attach with a long chain. Chains ran tours gamma swinging his spike ball and he was ready. He swings his ball at Gamma but he dodges it and punches him right in the chest but didnt finish him off yet. Chains started to swing his spike ball again and hit gamma but he made a quick recovery and ran and took his sword out and struck Chains with a powerful blow. Chain fell of the bridge do to the damage and crashed on the moon (nowhere near the mech).
After watching him fall, Gamma continuo making his way through the bridge, up the stairs and into the same traps but in a shorter hallway and finally reaches the control room. He busted down the door and enters but no one was in the room. He looks around to see if anyone was hiding and then a head with tentacles which is his neck came out of the shadows and gamma turns around and got his sword ready and Viruse said to him well. If it isnt Crosser Dog CAN IT! What the matter? Dont like new body SHUT UP AND FIGHT YOU MONSTER. Then everything turns blank and shortly gamma opens his eyes and said how did I have back out here in space? He turns around and sears Viruse and quickly got aggressive tours him. Viruse raise his tentacles and meteors started to form around him and not long after lots of meteors came forming around him. Then the next thing Gamma sears is a sphere of joined meteors, gamma just remembers about the watch and activating it to summoning the Hawk Mech. He quickly got in the control panel and ended up where a helmet that looks familiar to him. Then he got the mech fire at the sphere and some of the meteors came off but then somehow reattach to the sphere.
Back at the spaceship in the dungeon, Coco was struggling to find a way to defeat n gin new robot suit so that she can rescue Crash and Crunch. She tries throwing a wumpa fruit at him like crash did to his old mech but didnt have any effect on him. N gin tries slamming it fist on her but she dodge and kicked the joint part of the arm and somehow got a bit loose. This gave her an idea. Every time he tries pounding her, shell dodge and attack the joints. This happen a few times and she got in front of their cells and shouted to n gin HEY BACK STABBER! OVER HERE then n gin turns around and tries the same thing again and history will repeat itself until now because when she kicked it this time, the joint was broken and the fist that was attach to n gin mech came off and he was trick by her and then trying stopping on her for damaging his mech. Then she remember that when she kicked one of Viruses foot soldiers in the mountain base it exploded when crashed into the door . She looks to see if there any foot soldiers are about in the dungeon room and sear one sleeping and threw a piece of metal at the other end of the room and n gin thought she was over there and walk over there to try and crush her under his mech foot. She used this opportunity to stand in front of the robot and shouted at n gin your just as thick headed as I thought which got him to turn around and sear her and try stepping her. She move in time and n gin didnt have enough time to see what he stepped on until the robot exploded and took off his mech left leg and fell backwards and went through the wall and out of space. Everyone was suffocation when all the oxygen was escaping the ship through the giant hole n gin mech made. Then the wall quickly repaired itself just before all the oxygen ran out completely and everyone regain oxygen and coco got up and place the small bombs that where in her pockets and place it on the controls and a second later the bombs went off, giving little explosions that are strong enough to de-activated the plasma bars and Crash and Crunch were free and they hug and she said to them ah man. I miss you guys same here crunch said back and Crash just speaks his languages. Unknown comes into the scene again and said good thats taken care of. Know we got to plant this bomb in the engine room which it will go off and take out the engine and have this ship crashing on the moon who are you? a friend then Crash and Coco went to meet Unknown and Crunch at the exit while they plant the bombs in the engine room. Meanwhile outside of the ship. The giant meteor sphere was beginning to change form and in moments and became a giant serpent meteor dragon and Viruse became the brain and heart of the beast. Then Gamma got his Hawk mech to transform into warrior mode and was ready to fight the monster of hell.
The dragon fire out meteorites at the Mech, he avoid most except one and damage Gamma mech but not close enough.
Gamma then got his mech to fire at the dragon neck hoping the neck would detach and kill the beast but only done little due to its thick skin. The dragon then done a tail wipe at the mech which it knock it back at few miles back but he came back and got its sword out and slice off the monster tail and the beast roar in pain. The beast then fire out meteorites again but this time Gamma mech destroy each one with its sword and one he hit as a baseball and went straight back to the dragon chest and heavily damaging the beast.
Gamma just got word from coco that they going to blow up the ship and need to escape from the ship. Gamma had to finish off Viruse and his dragon shell so he got his Mech cannons out and fire at the beast full power which ended up destroying the entire dragon and believing that Viruse was destroy as well.
He then quickly got his Mech to the space ship. Crash and Coco was waiting for Crunch and Unknown. They caught up and said to them we finally got those explosive ready which we will be a lot of fire works Coco asked unknown how much did you used? a couple of pounds worth.
Then the Mech rip the main gate open with its pure hands and the gang hop aboard the mech and went back to earth. While getting back to earth, Unknown click the trigger and the bombs went off in the engine room wiping out the entire engine and the ship crash landed on the dark side of the moon.
Finally back on earth. They got off the Mech and it went back into space without gamma inside of it.
They were in the house happily except coco, which were near a tree looking at the picture that she and crosser dog were together.
Gamma came in wearing his shadow suit and helmet and crash sear him and told crunch something that made him to through gamma outside the house and he shouted out to them saying IS THIS WHAT I GET FOR HELP SAVING YOU? then storm off.
Coco heard gamma voice and when she got their she sear him storming off in the shadow cycle suit and she remember that only crosser dog wear that. She quickly then type out a note saying enough to crash and crunch and put the note near the photo frame and went off to find gamma to fill in the missing piece to the puzzle.
Somewhere on the other end of the island, gamma (which at this point he not wearing the cycle suit) is looking out at sea thinking why didnt they throw me out as soon as they sear me?. Coco found Gamma and said I thought Ill find you here gamma Gamma turn around and was surprise that coco found him and reply Coco? How did you find me?
Coco reply with a smile I used the tracker to find you silly Gamma quickly open his chest and deactivate his homing signal on the others trackers except coco.
Coco said to him I kind of heard you when you got thrown out gamma had too tell coco something imported Coco, their something I have to tell you I know CROSSER DOG! crosser dog (at this point we are know calling by his real name) couldnt believe what she just said and said to her how did you know it was truly me? he removed the fake skin that was covering his moon mark on his left eye.
Coco answer to him It was the shadow cycle suit that I sear when the first time we encounter when me and crash were riding his motorcycle and you came out of nowhere and Crash wanted to drag race you. Back then I couldnt tell who was in that suit except that moon mark that was showing when your helmet was broken from that fall on that gas truck after you beat crash in that race that day. And when I was staying on your island for the week, I sear you put the same suit away. But I dont understand why you kept it a secret from me when you fake your name when we meet again at the lake?
Crosser dog reply I didnt know how you would react if I told I was capture and you know the rest. That why I had to fake my own name and I was going to tell you this after we have save Crash and Crunch and destroy the machine empire. Then after that I would had told this.
Coco interrupted C.D and said its ok c, I understand now why you didnt tell me in the first place and I think we need time with each other somewhere else Crosser thought for a moment and said Its the Japaneses fire works tonight I love fireworks lets go there Crosser Dog then open up a portal thats leads to china and both of them went through the portal. Going through the portal might had bin quick but when they got through the other end of the portal, it was night time and it was almost time for the fireworks to begin. Coco and Crosser where on one of the most tallest building In china. They waited for a moment and Coco said to Crosser dog I think I know what we can do while we wait for the fireworks to begin then the both of them turn to each other and looks into each others eyes and got closer to each and then they both kiss. A few seconds after they kiss the fireworks started and Coco and Crosser dog stop and look at each other and C.d said to her I Love you I Love you two then they kiss again and then they watch the fireworks and sear all of the different colors and shapes of the fireworks when they go off.
During the firework display. Coco and Crosser dog where amaze and one of the rockets gave off a colorful dragon and they kiss again and watch the fireworks all night and were happy they are back together again.

The next morning. Coco woke up in the same room that she slept in while staying on Crosser Dog Home Island and got up and sear crosser dog outside steering out into the ocean. Coco got out off bed and walk up to Crosser dog and said hi c, what up? crosser dog reply I dont know why I feel like this. Maybe it because after saving the world it feels like.like something next could happen and I might lose you.
Coco said to crosser dog I dont think that would happen c. Me and Crash save the plenty of times and that never happen to us. lets go to Tawna place, if anything new happen. That should cheer you up
Crosser dog reply all right They travel to Tawnas by a giant robotic dragonfly and got to one of the three island that her house on (not wumpa island were crash house is). They walk to her house when they landed. They got to her house and Coco knock on the door a couple of times and a moment later Tawna open the door and was surprise to see Coco and Crosser dog she think. Coco told her Crosser dog kind of changes a lot in appearance and Tawna said to her I want to hear how he change so much since I have nothing to do and invited them in. While their all in her house, not far away there a boxer type robot that was built by Viruse called Comic Punch was he following Crosser Dog since he was on these three islands and said to himself it about time he got here. Now I can destroy him and put the tracker on this Coco Bandicoot
He got out his hiding place and got in front of the house and punches the ground a couple of times which causes an earthquake which would get their attaching.
Crosser dog was the first one to get out of the house to see what going on and sear Comic punch and notice the black V symbol on his belt and know that he one of Viruse creations and got cross and said I THOUGHT WE SEEN THAT LAST OF VIRUSE MONSTERS. OH THATS IT, PROPER TO BE DESTROY. (Hes reactions like this is because Viruse ruin his life and hell never forget that day). He pull out his sword and jump high to strike at him but, Comic punch block his sword and punches him in the face. C.d let go of his sword and punches Comic punch right in the chest. Then Comic punches slam his fist right on top of C.d head which cause him to space out for the moment. Then Comic punch got a hold of a giant rock and Coco shouted C! LOOK OUT! Crosser just regain his conscious and was a bit late to stop comic punch from slamming the giant rock on his head. The ground shock again back the giant rock slam which cause an apple to fall from a tree and hit Tawna makeup bag and she shouted MY EXPANSIVE MAKEUP and ran out of the house and start picking her stuff. Comic punch quick turn around and sear a she bandicoot with blond her and thinks thats she Coco bandicoot. He ran tours her while she wasnt looking and punches her scream in pain and then fainted and putting the micro tracker inside of her.
A sword fire at Comic right arm to took off clean off. Comic punch was steamed about his arm and turn around and sear crosser standing. The both of them charge at each other and punch each other as hard as possible. Crosser hit him in the face but comic punch went for a more effective target, his CHEST. And got one of his cogs in his power generator. He took his fist out of crosser dog and collected his cut off arm while watching him fall apart and then exploded big time and coco shouted C! NOOOOOO.
Comic took open a portal and went through it, leaving Crosser dog in pieces, Tawna in pain and Coco panicking.
She didnt know what to do and radioed Unknown for help. Three days later, crosser dog open his eyes and the first thing he sear was Coco emerald eyes and she said hey c. how are you feeling? I dont know how I feel he thought for a moment and said wait a minute! I was battling that Boxer android and it went black after that punch Unknown walks into the scene and said that because you were destroy and it took us three days to rebuild you I radio him after he andriod left and I was worry that I lost you ever coco said to crosser dog before he could ask how he found him. thanks you the pair of you Crosser Dog said to both Unknown and Coco and Unknown said Crash and Crunch found your note and I had to explain to them about your love and they cool with it and their sorry for kicking you out crosser dog Im over that and tawna is in care from the comic punch attack and she doing alright what about Viruse? Is he gone for good
coco asked and reply im hoping so. Crosser got on his feet and he and Coco went out to do some snowboarding.
Meanwhile in space. A large piece of metoer was floting around with red glowing eyes.

THE END.

i really need some feedback to see if it would be good as a game