Ravenstar's story

this is a comic i am starting talking about Ravenstar and how she became leader and overcame her blindness
it starts out with Spikefur and Brightpaw his apprentice talking darkwolf333 just made a pic of it for me http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-763676.html but wanted to elaborate on it so here goes
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"Spikefur?" Brightpaw asked stretching after finishing his training for the day.
"Yes, what is it Brightpaw? Don't tell me you want to train more?" Spikefur teased as he sat down
"No. I was just wondering how Ravenstar became leader? I heard the elders say she was never a deputy." Brightpaw said a small smile on his face, that quickly disappear as Spikefur started to explain. 5
"You see there was a great battle (2), and all three clans were fighting. Our leader Redstar was on his last life. Both he and our deputy Goldensun, died. (3,4) And not just them so many others were dying." He started to cry thinking of all his friends who had lost their lives.(2)
(5)"I saw what happened and told Ravenstar-who at the time was Ravenfeather-to run back to camp and tell Mapletail, the former medicine cat."

well that's it for this one hope you like sorry it's so bloody but it is a battle so...yeah i stink at doing blood
comment and enjoy^^

heres 2 3 and 4

http://www.fanart-central.net/pictures.php?pid=763897

http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-763984.html

http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-764126.html