Ravenstar's story pt3
Ravenstar's story pt3
Ravenstar's story pt3 by Wishsayer
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here is the first and second
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pt3 here we do
(1)"She ran to the top of Tallrock."
"The fight had taken place at the reflecting pool?"
"Yes.(2) She gave the loudest and probably the most anguished sounding battle cry, I think anyone has ever heard. Suddenly everyone stopped fighting, and looked up to see who had let out such a horrific yowl. Ravenstar yelled as loud as she could, 'Don't you see what you are doing?! I am blind and yet I see more then you! Look around, look at all your fallen comrades, your fallen kin and friends. YET! YOU continue to fight!' (3) She jumped down saying, 'Do any of you even remember why we are fighting?'." Brightpaw's eyes got bigger and bigger with every word. Spikefur smiled.
"Cats from all over started to say, 'because of trespassing.' 'because of prey stealers.' (4) But she wasn't listening. She had walked up to Goldensun's body, and rested her nose on Goldensun's head. Then she went to Redstar, and all the other cat who were dead."
Golden was one of the very few cats who believed in Raven and was very close to her much like a second mother, what is really sad though is not even Raven's own mother really believed in her. the gray and red cats in 3 are the cats talking.
well that's it sorry for crappy coloring
comment and enjoy^^
heres 4
http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-764126.html
oh and if you've seen my other pix of Ravenstar you are probably wondering why she has no white on her keep reading to find out
http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-763739.html
http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-763897.html
pt3 here we do
(1)"She ran to the top of Tallrock."
"The fight had taken place at the reflecting pool?"
"Yes.(2) She gave the loudest and probably the most anguished sounding battle cry, I think anyone has ever heard. Suddenly everyone stopped fighting, and looked up to see who had let out such a horrific yowl. Ravenstar yelled as loud as she could, 'Don't you see what you are doing?! I am blind and yet I see more then you! Look around, look at all your fallen comrades, your fallen kin and friends. YET! YOU continue to fight!' (3) She jumped down saying, 'Do any of you even remember why we are fighting?'." Brightpaw's eyes got bigger and bigger with every word. Spikefur smiled.
"Cats from all over started to say, 'because of trespassing.' 'because of prey stealers.' (4) But she wasn't listening. She had walked up to Goldensun's body, and rested her nose on Goldensun's head. Then she went to Redstar, and all the other cat who were dead."
Golden was one of the very few cats who believed in Raven and was very close to her much like a second mother, what is really sad though is not even Raven's own mother really believed in her. the gray and red cats in 3 are the cats talking.
well that's it sorry for crappy coloring
comment and enjoy^^
heres 4
http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-764126.html
oh and if you've seen my other pix of Ravenstar you are probably wondering why she has no white on her keep reading to find out
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Category Books » By Author Name » Erin Hunter » Fan Characters (OC's)
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Category Books » By Author Name » Erin Hunter » Fan Characters (OC's)
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darkwolf333 on August 11, 2009, 3:27:49 PM
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oh nice job. Hehhe Ravenstar has a good point^^
Wishsayer on August 12, 2009, 4:25:20 AM
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