Allon (Prototype) by Bippety-Bop

Allon (Prototype)

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Allon, another original character of mine. From the same storyline as Adrian--though neither are the main character, that would be Dione, who I have yet to upload a pic of to my computer--in my story idea "Second Nature." Basically one of Dione's comrades, Allon is a human warrior who currently wears armor that ish t3h suckage. The bandana's a keeper, though I'm not too sure about the other armor...any suggestions? His names means 'strength,' so it should be bulky, but not too unflattering. I mean, come on--look at that pretty face! He's adorable! D:

EDIT: His hair was supposed to be brown, but Photoshop decided to be a b****. D=

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Category Fantasy » Characters » Fighters or Warriors
Date Submitted May 6, 2006, 5:50:38 PM
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E1pnvn on July 9, 2006, 1:10:30 PM

Hello there. Isn't Photoshop a "b****" period? Lol. Anyway, this is a great pic. I love his expression. And yes, he is very pretty, hehe. ^^

As for armor... Hmmm... I kind of like that spikey doohicky on his shoulder. I think you should keep it. As for other things... Maybe he could just have nifty chainmail or something. If this story of yours allows, maybe it could be all magic-y or something, like some mysterious creature's skin that's almost impossible to break. But that wouldn't be very bulky... Maybe you could have an elaborate breast-plate or something and some things on his thighs and shins. Maybe they can be magic-y too. Sticking with the weird creature idea, the armor could be made from the shell of some strange beast or something. That could allow for really weird, nifty designs on it. But I dunno. I'm terrible at coming up with attire, lol. XD

Sorry for saying "or something" a few too many times. O_o

Bippety-Bop on May 7, 2006, 8:24:06 AM

Ehh, he DOES look like Vincent Valentine, just noticed that...maybe it's because I had to crop the top of his head out. The hair's very, very different on top--I hope.

JHanna on May 7, 2006, 12:06:06 AM

COOL!!! *__* *faves*

tsutanai_vigaku on May 6, 2006, 9:00:51 PM

He is rather adorable, though reminds me a great deal of Vincent Valentine. I really love his expression! I'm not too good with armour so sorry I can't be of any help.