Tommy, can you hear me?

It was the morning after I saw the production "Tommy" at HGP. I was listening to the soundtrack and was inspired to draw a picture.<br />
In case you've never seen the play (or the movie), Tommy is about a boy who, after witnessing the accidental murder of his mother's lover by his father, is traumatized into catatonia. As Tommy grows up, he suffers abuse at the hands of his sadistic relatives and neighbors. As an adolescent, he's discovered to have an uncanny knack for playing pinball, and when his mother finally breaks through his catatonia, he becomes an international pinball superstar.(~HGP Tommy playbill)<br />
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The words in red are from a few of the songs from the play. And the tall boy is Tommy as a teenager before he breaks out of his little situation (the kid who played Tommy at HGP really did look like that. boy, was he hott.) The younger boy is Tommy when he was 4 years old, the age he was when he saw his father kill his mothers lover.<br />
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Okay, now, they arent really supposed to have "gray" clothes on. its supposed to be white. And the background should be black. my older brothers scanner is messed up. XD<br />
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