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shadow-angel84's contest by BrokenMoonScar
shadow-angel84's contest by BrokenMoonScar

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BrokenMoonScar
 The Story piece: I opened my eyes and sat up. Quickly I take in my surroundings and
 find the room I’m in is my own. It is somehow unfamiliar to me, I feel strangely out
of place now I’m finally home. ‘A dream, it was all a dream.’ I cry tearlessly and
without thinking I grabbed for the light spewing from my window seal. "Why must
you taunt me!" I ran into my closet. "Why does light have to ruin everything?" I said
unctuously. I opened my closet door and went into my bathroom. As I washed my
face in the sink, I noticed that under my right eye a symbol was incarved to my skin,
 the symbol of those without hearts. At that moment I remembered that just moments
 before I had hidden from light.  Was I, . . . am I a heartless?? I go outside my room
and walk down the hall and unlike most days, no one was home. I walked outside
into the daylight, and my eyes could no longer see. It was like walking around
in the dark. My other senses kicked in and all controll was lost as I found myself
ripping someone's chest open and stealing their heart.

 
 
(japanese says: Am I a heartless?)
 
 
Oh. . . . . I love Kingdom Hearts so much. . . . . .

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Category Games » - by Publisher » Square-Enix » Kingdom Hearts series » Heartless
Date Submitted
Views 1308
Favorites... 2
Vote Score 2
Comments 5
Media Oekaki
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BrokenMoonScar on September 3, 2009, 7:51:57 AM

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BrokenMoonScarI should re-draw this. ♥

KaitouNeko on August 31, 2007, 5:06:17 PM

KaitouNeko on
KaitouNekowow you love kingdom hearts aswell?! yay! kingdom hearts rocks ^^ wanna enter my contest too? (draw a keyblade)

luckylace222 on August 5, 2007, 12:11:53 PM

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luckylace222D: That's so cool. *favs*

moog1895 on August 4, 2007, 3:36:28 AM

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moog1895thats amazing!

shadow-angel84 on August 3, 2007, 6:59:23 PM

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shadow-angel84nice work! All criteria are met you're in. you're a good writer!