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IF I Only Told You How I Felt I Would Be Given Wings To Fly

IF I Only Told You How I Felt I Would Be Given Wings To Fly

IF I Only Told You How I Felt I Would Be Given Wings To Fly by Falconlobo
IF I Only Told You How I Felt I Would Be Given Wings To Fly by Falconlobo

Description

Description
Falconlobo
From Samurai Pizza Cats


Big Cheese x Polly pic with poem story description

IF I Only Told You How I Felt I Would Be Given Wings To Fly


Story Poem description not completely to do with the pic but partly to do with it

And partly to do with the end of a certain episode


Big Cheese's Thoughts on how he truly feels about Polly when trapped in the past were

If only I could tell her how I feel.

To hold her hand in mine and to kiss her lips would be as sweet as wine.

To Only let her know how I truly feel I Would Be Given wings so that I could fly.

But to know this could or may never be I may die on the inside.

I will still live but to live without her or let her know how would it go?

Would she have me or throw my love out the window?

Darn my words did not comply with my thoughts.

Though my thoughts are free the cost of my idiotic choice of words have betrayed me.

Oh gee I called or ugly and she blew up at me, and I ended up as history.

I ended up in the past and hurt her so.

This was not the way I wanted things to go and now I'm being chased by a Dino.

If I Ever get back to the Future I must tell her how feel and hope that her feelings will heal.

I must hope for the best and pray that I will see her again and win her over on another day.

Yeh my lame attempt at a poem cute pic though

I used colored pencils

General Info

General Info
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Category Anime/Manga » - Other series not listed
Date Submitted
Views 1692
Favorites... 3
Vote Score 5
Comments 20
Media Colored Pencil / Crayon
Time Taken 25 minutes?
Reference none

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Goku_fan on July 1, 2007, 6:18:55 AM

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Goku_fanI think it's a lovely poem because I happen to suck at poetry so awesome job! And the pic is also very lovely! ^^

AnimeX on June 30, 2007, 4:03:56 PM

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AnimeXAwesome! i see the connection between the poem and pic! I really like it^___^
great job

luckylace222 on June 30, 2007, 1:41:44 AM

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luckylace222XD YYYEEESSSSHHHHH!! Flllyy!!! Flyy!!!!

*starts flapping wing around like an idiot* :D THIS IS REALLY GOOD! I like the colors and the title has so much meaning!!!

XD I LOVE THE POEM AS WELL! GREAT JOB! *Favs*

mew54 on June 29, 2007, 2:10:34 PM

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mew54cool i love it

taurus92 on June 29, 2007, 7:48:22 AM

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taurus92i thought it was really good!
and the pic, too
they go together so well! ^^

Gee on June 28, 2007, 11:28:01 AM

Gee on
GeeWow, you wrote a qutie nice poem, and the pic is cool too!;D

ginathehedgehog on June 28, 2007, 1:31:41 AM

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ginathehedgehogawwww, so cute! Nice poem too!

omegafrieza666 on June 27, 2007, 7:43:19 PM

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omegafrieza666WOW!!! great poem, it really captures his feelings as does the picture, great job

ladychaos on June 27, 2007, 6:11:22 PM

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ladychaoscute^^