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The crane of the blue

The crane of the blue

The crane of the blue by Live17
The crane of the blue by Live17

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Live17
Just something I wrote and I think it sounds neat

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mangacheese1818 on June 3, 2006, 9:26:41 PM

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mangacheese1818Cool.
Might I advise line breaks?

rascal_died on November 10, 2004, 12:22:32 PM

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rascal_diedit sounds really cool but i just gotta say...u spelled shatter wrong! ^^ sry, my mom has been known to b called 'the spelling police' so i guess im the spelling police's daughter!

WolfAquarius on September 4, 2004, 8:24:32 AM

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WolfAquariuslove it, buddy.

Darkest_Flame on December 13, 2003, 3:48:59 AM

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Darkest_FlameI love this poem. Shows how fragile lives are to me...

brittnee on March 11, 2003, 1:02:25 AM

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brittneevery good