Aliana Dragon Form V2.0
Aliana Dragon Form V2.0
Aliana Dragon Form V2.0 by Queen_Asheer5600
Description
Description
All right this is my second shot at drawing Aliana in her dragon form. I really liked the first one better but I guess this ones good, I know I made so many mistakes on it so don't tell me what to fix when I KNOW! I really get ticked off when people do that to me, if you spot something that I miss then let me know.<br />
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Things to work on.....<br />
1. Wing joint is up to high, move it down slightly.<br />
2. Wings are just a little to small.<br />
3. Make the Black Materia look better, not like it's just glued to her body.<br />
4. To much of a Centaur styled body.<br />
5. Body is to thick, make leaner and skinner.<br />
6. Leg long enough, make structure more dragon like rather than horse like.<br />
7. Work on left foot and leg more, to straight.<br />
8. Arm to skinny, make more muscular.<br />
9. Tail is to thick, make it slightly thinner.<br />
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Aliana dragon and regular form (c) ME SO NO TOUCHING WITHOUT MY PERMISSION!<br />
Art (c) ME<br />
Time: 19 hours<br />
Tools: .05 Mechanical pencil, Prismacolor and Crayola color pencils, 10x12 drawing paper
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Things to work on.....<br />
1. Wing joint is up to high, move it down slightly.<br />
2. Wings are just a little to small.<br />
3. Make the Black Materia look better, not like it's just glued to her body.<br />
4. To much of a Centaur styled body.<br />
5. Body is to thick, make leaner and skinner.<br />
6. Leg long enough, make structure more dragon like rather than horse like.<br />
7. Work on left foot and leg more, to straight.<br />
8. Arm to skinny, make more muscular.<br />
9. Tail is to thick, make it slightly thinner.<br />
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Aliana dragon and regular form (c) ME SO NO TOUCHING WITHOUT MY PERMISSION!<br />
Art (c) ME<br />
Time: 19 hours<br />
Tools: .05 Mechanical pencil, Prismacolor and Crayola color pencils, 10x12 drawing paper
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Queen_Asheer5600 on January 13, 2005, 1:31:54 PM
I have accually just started up on Shading. I usually never used shading for scales because i find it hard to shade each individual one. I might do that on V4.0 since V3.0 is done, scanned and I really don't feel like working on it any more since it's still not up to the finalized state.Stratadrake on January 13, 2005, 1:28:14 PM
Stratadrake on
I have to agree, I sorta like the first one better. I think it's the legs this time, I can't shake the impression that they look backwards. The number of joints in them is okay, but like you said, they look more like centaur-style forelegs than dragon-style hind legs.It's funny how when you work on a drawing multiple times, the last one doesn't always come out looking the best... been through that myself, although I didn't upload all of the examples. I seem to draw a new character every time, and when I do draw a repeat character, it's usually one that I haven't drawn in a long time and thus it comes out looking better almost as a rule.
Still, a little more shading and the drawing quality would be perfect. Textures are always nice, but they can be difficult to "wrap" properly sometimes so a little extra shading here and there can help make up for it.
Moon_Bind on January 12, 2005, 10:51:33 PM
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OW! This is nice for the pose but I liked the first version bether ^^DreamOfFire on January 12, 2005, 2:38:43 PM
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lol,wowzie!have I really been gone that long? u have about 50 new pics!@@!!lol!^^all your new stuff's great!^^ wowzie!@@I LOVE your"Swift Runner Species"pic!^^and MY WORD "Tenka Demon Form Colored" and "Cloud's Dragon Form" THOSE ARE SOOOOOOOO awesome! I love the antler things!^^
YAY!^^ you are getting better and better!^^
GO u!^^