Aliana Dragon Form V3.0
Aliana Dragon Form V3.0
Aliana Dragon Form V3.0 by Queen_Asheer5600
Description
Description
Version 3 of Aliana's dragon form. I am still not satisfied with the results. I am doing all the pictures so I can get the feel for how I want her to look, not because I just want to. It's showing her evolution rather than me just constantly changing her. <br />
Things I Need to Work on......<br />
1. Work on the hands, they look wonky. Raptor style in the design.<br />
2. Love the feet, work on legs more. Make them longer slightly.<br />
3. Give her a more sloutched body, more Raptorish in style.<br />
4. Tail's way to stiff, needs to be loosened up some.<br />
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Aliana both Dragon and Regular form (c) ME SO NO TOUCHY!<br />
Art (c) ME<br />
Time: 16 hours<br />
Tools: .05 Mechanical Pencil, Crayola and Prismacolor Pencils, 10x12 drawing paper sheet.
Things I Need to Work on......<br />
1. Work on the hands, they look wonky. Raptor style in the design.<br />
2. Love the feet, work on legs more. Make them longer slightly.<br />
3. Give her a more sloutched body, more Raptorish in style.<br />
4. Tail's way to stiff, needs to be loosened up some.<br />
<br />
Aliana both Dragon and Regular form (c) ME SO NO TOUCHY!<br />
Art (c) ME<br />
Time: 16 hours<br />
Tools: .05 Mechanical Pencil, Crayola and Prismacolor Pencils, 10x12 drawing paper sheet.
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Moon_Bind on January 13, 2005, 10:51:12 PM
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Very cool. Keep improving ^-^
Stratadrake on January 13, 2005, 2:00:17 PM
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Looks like the best of her evolutions so far. That scar on her arm, was that new in the 2nd form or has it been there all along?
The black gem definitely has better placement this time, and the little highlight on it helps.
Not much else that I can comment on, the tail risks being a little too thick, and the way the wing joints connect to her torso seems a little odd. it's a decent placement and thickness, maybe its upper linework could use a little upwards curvature right where it hits the torso.
Her feet, the actual feet parts, seem a little small in comparison to the ankle and thigh areas, but maybe that's just my preference for creatures whose hind legs have large (quadroped-style) foot areas.
The black gem definitely has better placement this time, and the little highlight on it helps.
Not much else that I can comment on, the tail risks being a little too thick, and the way the wing joints connect to her torso seems a little odd. it's a decent placement and thickness, maybe its upper linework could use a little upwards curvature right where it hits the torso.
Her feet, the actual feet parts, seem a little small in comparison to the ankle and thigh areas, but maybe that's just my preference for creatures whose hind legs have large (quadroped-style) foot areas.