When She's Lost She Can Only Rely on Herself...Even if it's all lies...

I dont like it...(gets paper balls thrown at by friends)(my friends dont like it wen i say "i dont like it"^^') Well, here are the reasons why:
1. its REALLY sloppy
2. its a coppy of the original penciled one(im afraid to ink my original right now) so there are pencil lines everywhere...
3. I didnt finish the background cuz i kept messing up..
4. I rushed(I really wanted to get it colored)
5. (Dark) Maria's leg's r too fat
6. Their hands r totally messed up(It was hard to see in the original's)

There's a scene in my manga(that i hope that i will start soon) where Maria turns evil. (Ill explain everything right now) First she loses her memories to stay away from the twilight(yes, this is from legend of zelda, its wat got me started in drawing so i made a little tribute to it being placed in my mang...and wat better bad guy than Ganondorf?lol) So Selene(her sealed memories) tries to contact her(i got this idea from Chobits with Chi and Freya)(Maria didnt take her memories she tried to save everyone by sacrificing herself to defeat the twilight but nobody wanted that so they took her memories away) Selene and Maria have now become good friends(like Yugi and yami....weird...i just realized that now lol) and Maria goes to Selene for help or has questions about her memories. Ganon takes a shadow creature and invades Maria's heart taking over Selene. The shadow creature(its still Selene but shes basically been turned evil(think hotaru and Mistress 9)) now contacts Maria and then takes over Maria (kind of like killing her soul?)

Im still kind of happy wit the results tho^^

Reference: http://www.otakugallery.com/Generale/gallery.php?pic=Art%20Books/Chobits%20-%20Your%20Eyes%20Only...
Maria©SailorCosmos119(DA)
Shadowlover8(FAC)
Drawing©SailorCosmos119(DA)
Shadowlover8(FAC)
Sailor Moon©Naoko Takeuchi