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Hate You

Hate You

Hate You by Shinigami-no-Kaze
Hate You by Shinigami-no-Kaze

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Shinigami-no-Kaze
PG since this is so harsh. There's no language or anything, it's just harsh.<br />
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Anyway. Explination: ANGER. I got REALLY mad at an unnamed person and you all can believe whatever you like, I will neither confirm nor deny anything. Don't try to read the text--you'll get a migrane.<br />
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Why is it that you always<br />
throw me aside <br />
lik a broken doll?<br />
I care so much, <br />
yet you have a total <br />
disregard for me<br />
After I talk to you<br />
I always want to cry<br />
How dare you make me feel that way?<br />
You always act<br />
like you just don't care;<br />
I'm beginning to think you don't<br />
Maybe it's because<br />
no matter what happens,<br />
I always come back to you<br />
But I HATE you so much...<br />
...so much...<br />
there are so many things that...<br />
I HATE you!<br />
Why don't you realize<br />
how much I hurt myself<br />
just for you?<br />
You want my - our - love,<br />
you say that often<br />
Well, you don't deserve it<br />
You only tear us apart<br />
bit by small bit<br />
with the littlest things<br />
not realizing <br />
that all the while we...<br />
...I...just...<br />
HATE you

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Sorakoibito on June 25, 2003, 7:15:32 PM

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SorakoibitoIt's so sad! And the text is so beautiful! I think I can really see what you've been feeling when you drawed this one. *sniffs* And the angel is so nice! Especially her facial expression! I really like this one.

InsaneStuffedPenguin on April 21, 2003, 10:46:57 PM

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InsaneStuffedPenguinI don't know how u can write all that. Very touching. Personally I've never felt that way, tho I have been mad a someone(I'm unique...not)In fact I'm mad at some1 right now(grrr) I loves the wings! Great side view.

Sanoshi on February 16, 2003, 12:19:56 AM

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SanoshiWell the drawing fits the words and feelings. >>;; Don't hurt me... But i'm a geek when it comes to writing. So... i'm gonna try to analyze this.. (Remmeber pleaseee dun get angeryyyy, i'm just praticing for upcoming English quizzes) >>;; <br><br />
Anyway, hummm.... In perspective, of the 2 people seemingly in conflict,.. ahh cut that crap. Bascially, this is what see. A person (girl) gives her whole hearted self to the other person (guy). Thing is, the guy negelects her caring feelings towards her. She's angery because everytime she gives herself out to this one guy, it seems its either 1) not good enough for him or 2) he just doesnt understand. It sorta describes the guy as a person who just doesn't know what to do, because first of all he degelets he girl's feeling toward him, and he also wants her love. Though he can't handle the little realtionshi going because seems like he "...tears us apart bit by small bit with the littlest things not realizing...". It seems like shes been going through the pain of the guy not caring, so long she just can't stand it. She feels also insulted and greatly hurt because of the way he express it. Still much confusing i think, though..... >O u shouldn't leave people hanging!<br />
This is what i got from your words. ^^;; soo yeaa. But i think i feel the persons feelings, cuz i was in a realtionship almost exactly like that.<br />
How is it going though? Hope its all well!