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Damn this Hell we call Earth

Damn this Hell we call Earth

Damn this Hell we call Earth by Slippingthroughreality
Damn this Hell we call Earth by Slippingthroughreality

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Slippingthroughreality
Wasn't sure where to put this picture??? It's just a sketch that one of my idols Fred Gallagher made but it doesn't belong anywhere.<br />
Made this when I was depressed and wrote the peom the same day.<br />
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Is this my life?<br />
Is this all whats left?<br />
Stood on the edge of time<br />
Have I let it all go?<br />
Have I died and no ones told me?<br />
Is this my life?<br />
<br />
Has the world stopped spinning?<br />
Sands of time run out?<br />
Before the end its just the beginning<br />
Am I losing track of time?<br />
Someone somewhere <br />
Is trying to tell me something<br />
Am I losing my mind?<br />
<br />
Have I been left behind?<br />
Forgotten, rewriting your history<br />
Left for the dust to find<br />
Am I more alive or dead?<br />
Cant find myself<br />
Dont know where to look<br />
The sun that my universe revolved around <br />
Has shut down<br />
<br />
Is this my life?<br />
Is this all whats left?<br />
Stood on the edge of time<br />
Have I let it all go?<br />
Have I died and no ones told me?<br />
Is this my life?

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inuyasha902105454 on September 22, 2005, 10:22:35 PM

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inuyasha902105454That pik is kick @$$. do you do reckquest?

Raining_Tears on August 24, 2005, 7:44:34 AM

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Raining_Tearsoy...that is the best poem in the world edgar allen poe is dyin man write more aw man your good im fav everything at this wow...i love this i can even put this in words but you express my feelings a bit too almost thank you for posting this...it kicks @$$!

OMG_U_killed_kenny on June 22, 2005, 3:19:30 AM

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OMG_U_killed_kennywow that's hella hot, man!

Lucky-Dragon24 on June 3, 2005, 1:19:06 AM

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Lucky-Dragon24Really cool picture & poem!

Anime-Chick on October 4, 2004, 12:12:36 AM

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Anime-Chickyou rock!! so does your poem..i have lots of poems in my room..they're literally spread over the floor O__o...anyway..nice picture and nice poem..everybody says your so good at poetry so i'll go check your other poems..(if you have them) byee!!!

DarkDusk on May 5, 2004, 7:23:10 AM

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DarkDuskoh my gosh I love your art style and your poems! but I can only see like have your art since some of theese animes I've never seen befeore *shrugs* oh well I like it and I will wait for more of your art to come!!! YAY! I can't believe you draw so good though and you have good poems too! *worships you*

PeachsNCreamSoda on May 2, 2004, 2:44:31 AM

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PeachsNCreamSodacool

Trinity_Fire on April 19, 2004, 5:39:19 AM

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Trinity_Firehehe, so true... ^____^ awsome job i love all your pics!! ^______________^

Slippingthroughreality on March 24, 2004, 5:05:40 AM

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SlippingthroughrealityAww thanks for the compliment, thats a great poem and its okay it didn't depress me. You should post it in the writing section where it will get the credit it deserves. Good luck and keep writing and drawing.<br />
^-^

foltzfarm on March 22, 2004, 9:29:32 AM

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foltzfarmI like both the art and the poem.. great job at the poem though.. umm, this is kinda akward (or is it arkward..*shrugs*) but can you tell me if this poem is good? I know I can post it in the writing section, but I want you to see it personally. Your one of the best poets on this whole website,so here it is...(I hope it's not to long..) <br />
(Title)Feel another's soul<br />
Dig your dieing soul<br />
in his dieing life.<br />
See that your not the only one,<br />
without a life of glory.<br />
Triumphant Brazairr,<br />
carry me away.<br />
Sing your precious song,<br />
along the crawling waves.<br />
Dark and resigned, <br />
is my life.<br />
And your shining glory, <br />
isn't here to save me.<br />
I laugh but,<br />
cry inside.<br />
I wish that I could<br />
die tonight.<br />
I hope ot didn't depress you.. (Thanks for your time..)<br />