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Sonic Unleashed

Sonic Unleashed

Sonic Unleashed by TheGameArtCritic
Sonic Unleashed by TheGameArtCritic

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TheGameArtCritic
This is going to be the greatest game EVER!!! I am in love with the story-line. Apperiently, Sonic is going to get turned into a werewolf by Dr. Eggman (that jerk! lol) ANYWAY, all i did was use graphite pencil (crap ones)

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Category Comics » Sonic the Hedgehog » Characters (Fanart) » Sonic
Date Submitted
Views 4286
Favorites... 7
Vote Score 10
Comments 857
Media Graphite pencil
Time Taken 2 HOURS!!!
Reference PLAY Magazine May Cover (Sonic Unleashed)

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mechadragon13 on August 29, 2008, 12:13:10 PM

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mechadragon13Me: dont join his side, critic.

Lightning: .........i dont get it. whats going on?? why does the badger-demon suddendly care about eclipse so much????

Mikenno: *eyes widen as if he just realized something* ........... f@#$. *turns to his demon form and busts a hole in the ceiling and flies off into the night*

TheGameArtCritic on August 29, 2008, 2:59:34 PM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: what's his problem?

Mr. Inderretta: I actually have some stunning news that I have realized should help the hedgebat and i bond a little more...

Rosette: oh YEAH? What's that, you pompous PIG?

Mr. Inderretta: badger. Anyway, that piece of information is a secret... but I'm at the same time upset that my good pawn was taken off the chess board...

Rosette: WHAT???

Me: it means he knows Eclipse is going to die.

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 30, 2008, 10:56:18 AM

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FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEndAria: How about I take you off the chess board, Mouse?? *Shakes him violently*

Me: Don't kill him… he might be useful… though, knowing him, he won't be… Rosette, do you know what he's talking about??

mechadragon13 on August 31, 2008, 11:49:33 AM

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mechadragon13Me: *stares up at the hole mikenno made* ........he just realized eclipse isnt gonna live........

Fang: i'll go talk to him. *fliez outta the hole and follows mikenno*

Me: ....he just realized... he was wrong.

TheGameArtCritic on August 31, 2008, 3:30:26 PM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: D:

Rosette: no no no no!

Mr. Inderretta: Er... I DO have experience in the medical area... I COULD help.... if you want me to....

Rosette: WHY??? WHY SHOULD WE TRUST YOU???? YOU MADE ECLIPSE LIKE THIS IN THE FIRST PLACE!!!

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on September 1, 2008, 4:08:08 AM

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FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEndMe: Rosette has medical experience too…

Aria: *throws Inderretta away from her, before mumbling under her breath* Cheap piece of scum…

mechadragon13 on September 1, 2008, 11:42:55 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: if the badger-demon's the only one that can help... i say we try it. we dont need any more deaths.

Me: .......... *eyes widen* he wouldnt......

Lightning: who wouldnt what??

Me: mikki. he's leaving.

Everyone else: O_O!!!!!!

((do we wanna hear the conversation between mikki and fang?))

TheGameArtCritic on September 1, 2008, 12:07:55 PM

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TheGameArtCritic((yes i do))

Mr. Inderretta: so? I don't even know him!

Rosette: *throws a shoe at teh badger*

Mr. Inderretta: *growls, but then picks up Eclipse, and starts heading towards the medical room* hmph. I will find you all there, yes?

Me:...... yeah... *can't stop thinking about Mikenno*

mechadragon13 on September 2, 2008, 10:47:40 AM

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mechadragon13Me: *follows inderetta to the medical room, and suddendly has a chill* ehh.... bad feeling.......... *watch beeps* eh? *holds one hand up to her ear and puts her watch near her mouth to talk into it* talk to me. *listen, listen, then, she gasps* WHAT?? NO FREAKING WAY!!!!

Everyone else: *confuzzled*
Acid: ehhhh... *gets up* oww..... what happened?

Me: *listen, listen, then smiles* you didnt. you did? no freaking way. are you joking around with me? *listens* ......you arent, arent you? *listen* medical room D? okay. i'll take him over there. *disactivates watch* ACID!!

Acid: *starts, then relaxes* ...what?

Me: come 'ere. *walks off to a different hallway*

Acid: ...okay then... *hesitantly follows*

MEANWHILE!!!!

Fang: *is searching for mikki* where in the world did he fly off to?? *looks down and sees him standing near the outskirts of town* MIKKI! *lands near him*
Mikenno: ....leave, fang.
fang: whatsa matter with you mikki? this isnt like you.
Mikenno: i have to leave.
Fang: why?
Mikenno: *turns to his demon form* you wouldnt understand.
Fang: why not??? stop treating me like a kid, mikenno.
Mikenno: i dont want you to get hurt. *suddendly slashes at the air in front of him, and a large slash appears in the air, and it grows slowly until it is a sort of diagonal portal. thw rold beyong is almost exactly like this one, but looks very bleak.*
Fang: ...mikki...?
Mikenno: leave. he's coming........
Fang: who?
Mikenno: *under his breath* ryu...........

TheGameArtCritic on September 2, 2008, 2:54:56 PM

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TheGameArtCriticDUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUUUUUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!! O.O

((Ryu?))

menwhial

Rosette: what? What's going on? *follows Inderretta also*

Mr. Inderretta: *his shoes make a click-clack noice against the floor, echoing in the empty, now peacful halls of Hybrid Nation HQ* *he enters the medical room, and places Eclipse on a bed*

Me: Vera. *grin spreads across my face*

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on September 2, 2008, 8:19:46 PM

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FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEndAria: *Excitedly* Is she alive??

Me: *Following after, still thinking about Mikenno* *Silent*

mechadragon13 on September 3, 2008, 8:44:40 AM

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mechadragon13Me: *walks, almost skips, back to the rest of the group* heeehee ^^
Neo: O.O you're kidding.

*a loud "no f-ing way!!" and a delighted squee are heard from down the hallway*

Me: does that answer your question? ^^

Twilight: *cringes from the high pitched squee* oww. yes.

Me: you can go over there if ya like---- *looks down the hallway and sees an orange aviwolf and a red-orange avichidna walk out of the room, if this was an anime, they'd have HUGE sweatdrops* umm.... lets give them some time XD *gets serious again* so..... has indy done anything?

Neo: we just got here. we're gonna have to wait.....
Zenith: umm, guys? has anyone seen fria?
Twilight: *looks around* scorch is gone too!!!

Me: ...crap.

MEANWHILE!!!

Fang: ryu? who da frick is ryu???
Mikenno: someone i'd rather not have you meet. go. *urgently* NOW. she's a vicious demon. she will destroy you.
Fang: i'm not gonna leave ya alone! if she's as dangerous as you say, you'll need all the help you can get!!
???: yes you will mikki...yes you will..... *malicious laugh*
Mikenno: *immediately turns back to teh portal and growls*
???: *slides smoothly out of the portal, is wearing a long hooded cloak, so she is not visible* well well well. if it isnt my little buddy mikenno...... i missed you.....

TheGameArtCritic on September 3, 2008, 8:53:54 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMr. Inderretta: *gestures the group into the medical room. He stares hard at Eclipse on the bed* I'm going to need a heart moniter, a muzzle, and something to strap Eclipse down.

Me: um... WHY???

Mr. Inderreetta: You'll see.

mechadragon13 on September 3, 2008, 9:07:57 AM

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mechadragon13Me: got it. *holds her watch up to her mouth* i need a heart monitor, a muzzle and some of that indestructible rope ya made. dont ask questions, just get it over here!! *puts her hand down* it's comin'.

Neo: ..so...... whats gonna happen with eclipse? why do we need to strap him down?

me: like he said. you'll see. *door opens and she goes out. she comes in with a rolling heart moniter, a lenth of somewhat clear rope slung around her shoulder and a muzzle clanched in her teeth* *muffled* can fumeone grad fiss?

TheGameArtCritic on September 3, 2008, 9:22:11 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMr. Inderretta: *rushes over and grabs it* thank YOU.

Me: i really can't believe you're going through with this...

Mr. Inderretta: *straps the muzzle onto Eclipse, then ties him down to the bed. He hooks him up to the heart moniter, and turns it on, automatically making it emit a forever "eeeeeeeeeeeee...", and showing a flat line, upsetting Rosette even further*

Me: ok, what now?

Mr. Inderretta: now we give him a little "kick" to get him back up. *gives Eclipse a temporary rabies shot*

Everyone: WTF????????????????????????

Eclipse: *a quick shiver runs through his body, but suddenly, his eyes snap open. They are bloodshot*

mechadragon13 on September 3, 2008, 9:32:39 AM

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mechadragon13Me: eeeeeeeek. thats why.

neo: O.O
Manny: OoO..... *leaves*
Meanwhile!!!

MEANWHILE!!!!

Mikenno: what do you want ryu? you messed with my sight. WHY?
Ryu: i wanted to mess with you, thats all. *grinz* who wouldnt wanna mess with their favorite slave?
Fang: *thinking* slave? what??
Mikenno: i dont belong to you anymore. that contract ended long ago.
Ryu: thats where you're wrong, mikki. you left before the contract ended. so technically, you still belong to me.

TheGameArtCritic on September 3, 2008, 9:41:08 AM

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TheGameArtCriticFeral: RAAAAARRRRRRRRRRGH!!!!! *struggles, and tries to break out of the binds, but fails. When he realizes that his efforts are futile, he whimpers*

Mr. Inderretta: oh do shut up. *places Project Nocturnal on Feral*

Feral: *colors fade to a reverse color, and he becomes puppy-like, and calm. Feral still feels uncomfortable with the muzzle, though. He sneezes. It itches.*

Heart Moniter: *shows the heart beating at a pace much faster then it should be*

Mr. Inderretta: *gets out a styringe and takes a sample of blood from Eclipse/Feral* I'll have to clear out the rabies later...

Rosette: *suspicious* um... what are you doing?

Mr. Inderretta: hm? Oh! Nothing! Nothing!

Rosette: >:(

mechadragon13 on September 3, 2008, 9:52:57 AM

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mechadragon13Me: *accurately and precisely tosses a small wrench at inderetta's hand, knocking the sryinge out of his hand* no ya dont.

Neo: *stops the sryinge from shattering against the ground and floats it up to mish*

Me: *grabs teh sryinge* thanks neo. *hands teh sryinge to critic* do with it what you will........

Meanwhile!!!

Mikenno: *eyes widen, then narrow angrily* you lie.
Ryu: no lie. see? *grabs his right arm*
Mikenno: hey! *at first, nothing. then, a red flame-like mark appears on his shoulder. his eyes widen in disbelief* no.....
Ryu: *grins* yes.
Fang: *stars backing into an alley* *thinking* i gotta get to HQ.....

TheGameArtCritic on September 3, 2008, 9:59:12 AM

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TheGameArtCritic(( DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUUUN!!!!))

Me: *hands the styringe to Inderretta*

Mr. Inderretta: hey, thanks :D

Rosette: WHY DID YOU DO THAT??????

Me: because i need another villain other than Inderretta and Incogneto.

Rosette: *facepalm*

Mr. Inderretta: When Eclipse turns back to normal, i wish not he attack me, so i will leave. *does*

mechadragon13 on September 4, 2008, 8:03:41 AM

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mechadragon13Me: does that mean we should leave too? *looks around* manny's gone XP
*from outside the room* MIIIIISH!!! TWILLYYY!!! LIIIIIIIGHT!!
Me: O.O wtf what? *goez out of the room* fang!!! where's mikki???
Fang: *gasping for breath from flying so fast* mikki........demon.....slave......ryu.......contract........gahh......
Lightning: what? who's ryu???
Twilight: what contract???
Me: *eyes widen* RYU?! ...........f#$%. we have to get over there. NOW. CRITIIC!!! we gotta GO!!! *runs like hell to the airplane hangar, closely followed my fang, lightning and twilly*

MEANWHILE!!!

Mikenno: .....so now what? you just gonna take me back?
Ryu: *grinzz* no.. i have other plans.....
Mikenno: *wide eyez of disbelief* on=h no you wouldnt.
Ryu: *devilish grin* oh, i would..... heheheh......
Mikenno: i refuse. i wont. not in a million years! AUGH!! *falls to his knees, clutching his shoulder, the flame mark burning brightly*
Ryu: *suddendy serious* you cant disobey me without facing the consequences, mikenno. *grinz again* you have no choice.
Mikenno: *disgusted* you're sick.

TheGameArtCritic on September 4, 2008, 8:35:56 AM

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TheGameArtCritic((OH NOES!!!!!!))

Me: it must be bad. *gets Feral out of the bed, and puts a collar and leash on him*

Feral: *grunts at me angrily from the uncomfortable leash*

Me: too bad, doggy-hog! We need to find Mikenno!

Rosette: ooohhh..... i hope he's ok..... *bites bottem lip*

mechadragon13 on September 4, 2008, 10:59:32 AM

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mechadragon13Me: *gets to teh hangar and runs to a big green jet big enough to fit all of them* everyone IN! *hops in the pilot seat*
Lightning: *hops in next to mish*
Twilight: *gets in behind lightning*
Fang: *gets in next to twilly*
Me: aria and fugue are comin' too.

MEANWHILE!!!!

Mikenno: grrrr....
Ryu: come on, mikki..... lets see if this still works. mobian. now
Mikenno: *growls at her, but when the fire symbol burns again, he reluctantly turns back to his mobian form* i hate you.
Ryu: *grins* oh, i know you do.....

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on September 5, 2008, 10:03:14 AM

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FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEndMe: *Follows after* I have a bad feeling about this… *Grumbles under her breathe and gets into the jet*

Aria: Cynic…

Me: Whatever…

((Gah… school is all consuming… my apologies… ))

mechadragon13 on September 5, 2008, 10:10:19 AM

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mechadragon13((omfg i KNOW!!!))

Mish: come on, hurry up and get in critic!! git eclipse in here too!!

MEANWHILE!!

Ryu: come on, eclipse, it'll be just like old times.... just you and me.
Mikenno: i refuse to be your errand boy.
Ryu: you can refuse me and you know it.

mechadragon13 on September 5, 2008, 10:10:50 AM

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mechadragon13*can't

TheGameArtCritic on September 5, 2008, 11:22:04 AM

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TheGameArtCritic(( i also think you mean Mikenno, not Eclipse XD))

Me: *gets in the jet, and, despite Feral's whimpers and struggles to not be put in the scary big flying thing, eventually pulls him in*

Feral: *clings to a chair, wide-eyed and shaking*

mechadragon13 on September 5, 2008, 11:27:48 AM

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mechadragon13((whoops XD))

Me: *opens the hangar door and flies the hell outta there*

Lightning: ...i hope mikenno's ok.....
Twilight: he can take care of himself. so...
Fang: who's ryu?

Me: *cringes at the sound of the name* ehh...... it's a very interesting story....

Ryu is a Chaos Demon with extraordinary power. She's pretty high up in the Demon Ranks...... Mikenno, on the other hand, is the opposite. he has quite a lot of power, but his ranking was almost rock-bottom. Ryu took a liking to him, so she took him in, but also put her symbol on him to make sure no one would try to harm him. in reality, she was marking him as her property....

Meanwhile!!!!

Mikenno: .....so what now? you just gonna take me back? just like that?
Ryu: i have other plans.......... *malicious grin*

TheGameArtCritic on September 5, 2008, 11:34:55 AM

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TheGameArtCriticFeral: *rabies wear off. His heartbeat returns to normal* agh... w-where am - AHHHHHHHH!!!! *clings to his seat even tighter*

Me: it's so ironic. The fact that he's part bat, AND has the ability to fly, and yet he's terrified of flying in machines... anyway, Mish, please go on with your story.

Eclipse: what story?

mechadragon13 on September 3, 2008, 9:12:09 AM

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mechadragon13((whoops mah bad))

MEANWHILE!!!!

Mikenno: what do you want ryu? you messed with my sight. WHY?
Ryu: i wanted to mess with you, thats all. *grinz* who wouldnt wanna mess with their favorite slave?
Fang: *thinking* slave? what??
Mikenno: i dont belong to you anymore. that contract ended long ago.
Ryu: thats where you're wrong, mikki. you left before the contract ended. so technically, you still belong to me.

mechadragon13 on August 22, 2008, 7:25:08 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *seems to be in extreme pain.....*

Acid: *is still smashing his head against the wall* agh!!

TheGameArtCritic on August 22, 2008, 7:31:14 AM

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TheGameArtCriticme: ACID! STOP IT!!

Eclipse: *can't help but laugh at Acid's guilt*

Me: ECLIPSE! SHUT UP!

mechadragon13 on August 22, 2008, 7:43:36 AM

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mechadragon13Acid: *angrily turns to eclipse and weakly hits him with his tail, enough to knock him over, but not to send him flying* leave me alone....... *goes to hit his head against he wall again, but he only hits once before he collapses to the floor in a heap* .................

Mikenno: *is staring at eclipse then acid, his eyes barely open. the blackish-purple stuff is almost across his chest*

Me: *to herself* when it reaches his heart, it's all over....

Fang: *is silently sitting by mish*
Manny: *runs up to where mikenno, fang and mish are, and sits by mish* we can't save him, can we?
Fang: *shakes his head*

TheGameArtCritic on August 22, 2008, 7:49:00 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *turns to Manny* you. Punk kid. Shut the f*** up!!

Me: OY!!! HE'S 9!!!!

Eclipse: no! He's just a stupid snot-nosed kid. He's knows nothing.

Me: oy...

Eclipse: I hope you all die...

mechadragon13 on August 23, 2008, 4:58:28 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *frowns at eclipse, then puts his head down on the ground. he looka around at the others gathered, and has a small smile. then, he closes his eyes, and gets very still.......*

Me: *bows her head* goodbye, friend.....
Manny: *closes his eyes and sobs quietly*

Acid: *senses mikenno's passing and raises his head. he looks over to where he lies, and then..........he completely loses it* HISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!! *his eyes turn a bright purple, and he glares at those in the room* you all will die........... HISSSSSSSS!!!

Lightning: oh no..... acid's gone berserk!!!!!!

TheGameArtCritic on August 23, 2008, 5:02:24 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: foolish Snake! YOU WILL DIE FIRST!! *leaps at him*

Me: NO!!!! AAAAH!!! *ducks* NO CHAOS!!!! CHAOS BAD!!!!! NO!!!! ECLIPSE, SIT!!!! STAY!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!

Rosette: NO NO NO NO NOOO!! STOP!!

mechadragon13 on August 23, 2008, 5:14:09 AM

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mechadragon13Acid: *lunges at him, but recoils when he feels something bite at his tail* HISSSS!!!! *he turns around to see fang chomping on his tail*
Fang: i wont let you hurt my friends!!!!! *bite harder*
Acid: HISSSSSSSS!!!! foolish child. *swings his tail around and prys him loose*

Lightning: *thinking hard* berserk, berserk..... how did we deal with berserk??? *lightbulb* THATS IT!!! Twilly!!
twilight: yeah?
Lightning: we need to immobilize acid!! it'll calm him down!!!
Twilight: yes, sir!! *goes daemon and jumps for acid's head*
Lightning: everyone!!! we need to get acid immobilized!! it'll stop his rampage!!!!

TheGameArtCritic on August 23, 2008, 6:13:32 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: um.... er..... *gets out a BIIIIIIIIIG KO dart gun* knocking him out? mayyyybe it could work...

Eclipse: hmph. *shoots out dark ice EVERYWHERE*

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 24, 2008, 12:37:55 AM

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FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEndMe: *Has been silent in shock*

Aria: Fugue?? Fugue?? *Shakes her shoulder, then let's out a curse* D&*(it, she's no help. *Turns to face Acid* Don't make me kick you…

mechadragon13 on August 24, 2008, 9:56:41 AM

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mechadragon13Acid: HISSS!!! *twists his body around, dodging the ice*

Lightning: that gun might work.... if it doesnt, we gotta try to hold him down.

daemontwilight: i'm on it. *leaps up on acids head and lands HARD, forcing his head to the floor*
Fang: *bites down on acids arm*
Zenith: *is trying to get acid's tail to stop moving, but it getting tosses around* this guy's strong, man!!!
Manny: hiiiiiiiYA!!! *delivers a strong kick to acid's back, causing him to fall over* who's all tough NOW????
Acid: *starts pushing himself back up with his arms, hissing argrily*
Fria: (NO YOU DONT!!) *freezes his hands to the floor*
Acid: HISSSS!!!!! *is straining to free his arms* i wont get caught like this again!!!!! *open his jaws wide and spits venom cobra-style*
Fria: (WHOA!) *dodge* (sheez.......)

Lightning: thats it guys, almost there!!

TheGameArtCritic on August 24, 2008, 1:56:32 PM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: *smacks Acid around with the gun* oh wait... *shoots Acid with a large KO dart*

Eclipse: *sends a huge shockwave at Acid, relentlessly attacking his head*

Rosette: um.. i don't know what to do... I could never SHOOT him... um.... *thinks a bit*

mechadragon13 on August 25, 2008, 10:45:44 AM

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mechadragon13Acid: argh!!! *cringes from the blasts, but the dark bounces off his scales*

Me: his scales are rock hard, nothing can penetrate them!! rosette, if you shoot him, you wont kill him! just give him a bad bruise XD

Lightning: *sends an electric current through acid's tail*
Acid: GGGRAAGH!!!! *tries to get lightning off, but zenith's holding his tail down* grrr.... AGH!! *cries out as he feels someone bite down on his neck. he turns around* HISSSSSSSS---- *stops dead as he sees his attacker* n-n-no way........

Everyone else: *looks and freezes* ....O.O

Mikenno: *stops biting acid and looks around. then he laughs* what? didnt i SAY i couldnt be killed?

Lightning: uhh... *nervous laugh* heheh, oops!

Acid: O.O b-but... you....... *he suddedndly goes limp and his head drops to the ground*
DaemonTwilight: *gets off his head* ......... did he just........ faint???

TheGameArtCritic on August 25, 2008, 11:16:32 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: heh... it looks like he's seen a ghost... *suddenly shocks everyone with dark energy except Lightning, whom he freezes the blood of* now while all you are knocked out, I will finish the job...

Me: you... you traitor.... *falls over*

Eclipse: hm. I never said i was your friend again... *hand charges up with lethal energy, and he gets ready to kill Acid*

mechadragon13 on August 25, 2008, 11:32:06 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *stands in front of him* .......no.

TheGameArtCritic on August 25, 2008, 11:45:39 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: get OUT of the WAY!! *the energy in his hands increases to amazing preportions until Eclipse's hands are shaking uncontrollably* I don't want to hurt YOU, Mikenno - Acid is going to die...

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 26, 2008, 1:25:44 AM

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FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEndME: *Runs in front of both Mikenno and Acid* Don't you dare. DON'T YOU DARE!!! I won't let you hurt either of them!! I won't let you kill!! *Had avoided the energy because she wasn't near everybody else*

Aria: *Has been paralyzed, unlike her friend.* Fugue, you idiot…

mechadragon13 on August 26, 2008, 2:34:10 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: stay out of this fugue. i dont want you to get hurt. *nudges her out of the way and steps forward* why should acid die? all he tried to do was avenge the death of his loved one. does he deserve to die for love?

TheGameArtCritic on August 26, 2008, 9:04:45 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: for avenging death? No. For love? *is a dark voice full of hate* YES....

Me: *struggling from the parylysis* don't.... do it..... Eclipse....

mechadragon13 on August 26, 2008, 9:06:16 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: he does what he likes. but he does NOT. TOUCH. ACID. *turns to his demon form* even if i have to hurt him.

TheGameArtCritic on August 26, 2008, 9:08:59 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *threatening* try it.... *shoots the lethal energy blast at Mikenno* To think i actually CARED if you really died!!!

Me: OMFG DEMON FIGHT!!!!!

mechadragon13 on August 27, 2008, 6:43:05 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *completely ABSORBZ it in his hands* eclipse, eclipse, eclipse.......... *forms it into a BALL* you have much to learn. *shootz teh ball at eclipse*

TheGameArtCritic on August 27, 2008, 8:57:46 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: MIKENNO!!!!! NO!!!!!!! HE'LL -

Eclipse: *does not dodge the energy in time. It hits him, shocking him with, like, i billion volts of dark electricity* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAUUUUUUUUUUGH!!!!!!!! *falls to the ground, twitching, and shaking as energy still pulses through his veins*

Rosette: *screaming so loud that her voice cracks* ECLIPSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Me: oh my god.....

Eclipse: *falls unconcious. His breathing is irregular*

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 27, 2008, 10:00:42 AM

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FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEndME: *has been silent, feeling worthless* What now?? Should we bind him, while we have the chance??

Aria: *Is slowly regaining the ability to move* Yeah… soon… and keep Acid from killing him…

TheGameArtCritic on August 27, 2008, 11:26:48 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: GUYS!!! HEY!!!! THAT ENERGY WAS FUGGIN LETHAL!!!! AAAAAAHHHHH!!!!! LETHAL MEANS DIE!!!! AHHH!!!! I'M GONNA LOSE MY OC!!!! AAAAAAH!!!!

Rosette: *now sobbing* not again... oh god... i can't handle you dying twice...

Me: i know he was trying to kill Acid, and all.... but he WAS out friend.... we need to help him!!

mechadragon13 on August 28, 2008, 6:34:17 AM

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mechadragon13Me: *gets up* oww..... *wide eyez* omg... near-death experience...........

Mikenno: *reverts back to the mobian form and stands quietly for a moment, then turns to aria* i dont think acid will be a problem. *pointz*
Acid: *has returned to his normal self, but is still unconscious*
Mikenno: *walks over to critic* *whisperz* eclipse will not die. if that blast could have killed him, i would not have countered. *starts walking back over to acid when he suddendly freezes*

Me: umm... mikki? mikenno?? OMG what happened???

Mikenno: *suddendly smiles* heheh..... it's a surprise..... *keeps walking towards acid and sits next to him, waiting for him to wake up again*
Fang: okay, lets recap....... eclipse could possibly die, we have a dead rattlesnake in the med room, and a possibly lethal hedgehog-hybrid that could possibly kill us. what now??

Me: ..........

TheGameArtCritic on August 28, 2008, 8:30:15 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: ummm..... i don't know.

Eclipse: *dying*

Me: oh well THAT sucks... fuggin heart-stopping electricity trick... gave him a heart disorder.

Rosette: O_O heart..... disorder? *breaks down sobbing again*

Me: *facepalm*

Mr. Inderretta: *comes running in the scene, then stops and stares at the after-battle. He looks full of anguish* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! NO!! NO!! NO!!! WHAT HAPPENED?????

Me: why do YOU care?

Mr. Inderretta: *completelly ignores me*

mechadragon13 on August 28, 2008, 8:39:44 AM

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mechadragon13Me: whaddaya want, demon-boy? *brandishes her giant wrench*

Twilight: *goes daemon*
Lightning: *growling* we WILL use force, inderetta.
Mikenno: ......hes not here to fight. at least, not yet.

TheGameArtCritic on August 28, 2008, 9:28:57 AM

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TheGameArtCriticInderretta: no... no no no no... no fighting... not now... I'm upset over what happened to Eclipse...

Me: CARING!!!!!!!! WHY??????????

Inderretta: i thought it would we great if we had become friends....

Me: he's not your friend, Inderretta, you twisted him into confusing.

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 29, 2008, 9:32:29 AM

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FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEndMe: *Looks at him* Go away… go away you king of cats… and take your perfidious lies with you…

Aria: *Has regained movement… stumps over to Inderretta and Grabs the front of his shirt and shakes him* What the hell did you say to him?? TELL US!!!

TheGameArtCritic on August 29, 2008, 10:08:05 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMr. Inderretta: *only laughs maniacally*

Me: *flatly* he told him the truth.

mechadragon13 on August 18, 2008, 6:41:05 AM

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mechadragon13Acid: *his voice echoes off the walls, so you cant tell where he's at* coward? heheheheheh..... you're the one who should be afraid.........heheheheheh................... *his voice trails off*

Mikenno: acid's right..... eclipse SHOULD be scared.
Lightning: oh jeez. if mikki's saying that, then we should all be scared....

Acid: *voice echoes again* you should listen to the demon, eclipse..... heheheheh..................
*suddendly someone screams, causing a whole bunch of other people to scream*
Me: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!! what the hell???

*there's a sudden hiss...*

Mikenno: ECLIPSE!!! DUCK!!!!

TheGameArtCritic on August 18, 2008, 9:22:45 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *it takes a minute for him to realize what's going on, but then, Eclipse ducks*

Me: FREAKING GOD, ACID'S SCARING THE CRAP OUTTA ME!!!

Rosette: *is whimpering*

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 18, 2008, 10:47:05 AM

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FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEndAria: This is just like a horror movie!! Sveet!! *Is adrenaline high*

Me: *Slightly freaked out* Only you… Mikenno… can you tell what's happening??

mechadragon13 on August 19, 2008, 4:30:02 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: i can only tell whats gonna happen....... other than that, i can look into their minds briefly to tell their actions......
Daemontwilight: *still seems to be looking around frantically*
Lightning: what do you see, twilly???
Daemontwilight: acid. i can see him in the dark. my senses are better in daemon form. i can see him, hear him, and scent him. he's fast.............

Acid: *echoing again* heheheheheh........

Me: *singing softly, shaking slightly*
It's a thief in the night to come and grab you
It can creep up inside you and consume you
A disease of the mind it can control you
It's too close for comfort.......

TheGameArtCritic on August 19, 2008, 4:55:49 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: I WON'T STAND THIS! FIGHT ME LIKE A MOBIAN, YOU COWARD!!

Me: No matter what, Eclipse, he's trying to kill you. Why get hurt in the process?

mechadragon13 on August 19, 2008, 4:59:21 AM

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mechadragon13Acid: *his voice is suddendly right next to critic* you know she has a point........

*everyone takes a few steps back*

Acid: heheheh. not scared of the dark? you should be...........

Me: *still singing, still shaking*
Your mind is in disturbia
It's like the darkness is the light
And it's scaring you tonight
It ain't use to whatcha like
Disturbia..............

TheGameArtCritic on August 19, 2008, 5:18:58 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! *runs off, and trips, falling on my face*

Eclipse: I don't fear you Acid. How can i fear a cheap failed version of my father?

Me: *on the floor* buuuuuuuuuuuuurrrrrrrrrrrn....

mechadragon13 on August 19, 2008, 5:25:33 AM

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mechadragon13Acid: FAILED? HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!! *his laugh echoes off the walls, and it seems to go on forever* failed? HA! you must be insane. what makes you think im a failure? heheheheh...... i was the prototype. I CAME FIRST!!!!!! your father was a copy of ME!!!

*stunned silence*

Me: *shaking even more, her voice wavers*
Oh what the pretty lights
Your in the city of wonders
Ain't gone play nice
Watch out you might just go under
You better think twice
Make sure you follow the alter
But if you may falter be wise

TheGameArtCritic on August 19, 2008, 5:36:04 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: you may be a prototype, Acid, but you were still the failed version. You can either take a good idea and ruin it, or take a terrible idea and make it better. Guess which one YOU were?

Me: still burning...

Rosette: STOP TAUNTING HIM BEFORE YOU GET HURT!!!!!

TheGameArtCritic on August 19, 2008, 5:50:00 AM

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TheGameArtCritichey, your comment is gone!

wtf?

TheGameArtCritic on August 19, 2008, 5:52:04 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: COME AT ME, THEN, YOU SNAKE!!!

Me: idiot...

Rosette: *sobs again*

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 19, 2008, 9:41:39 AM

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FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEndME: This is getting ridiculous!! Men and their stupid ego trips… at the end of the day, there's going to be hell to pay!!

Aria: Finish this, I don't care how!!

mechadragon13 on August 20, 2008, 3:54:58 AM

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mechadragon13((whoops. its down there.......))

Acid: *hissssssssssss.................*
Mikenno: *his eyes widen, and he starts taking a few steps back* oh no..........

*silence, then, and unexpected noise*

RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRIP!!!!!

DaemonTwilight: *turns her head towards the noise* what the--- *she lets out a mix of a yelp and a gasp, and jupms back, her eyes wide. she's so freaked out, her voice cracks* umm...... guys? we have a BIG problem.
Lightning: how big????
Daemontwilight: VERY big....... bad bad bad bad bad....... *keeps backing away* mish... get the lights.......

Acid: NO! you touch that switch and you face the consequences........... *his voice is slightly different, almost like a hiss..........*

Me: O.O *is freaked out, she shuts her eyes tightly and keeps singing shakily*
when my time comes, forget the wrong that i've done, help me leave behind some reason to be missed...

Fang: I'll do it!!! *flies over everyone and goes right for the switch*
Acid: DONT TOUCH THAT!!!

Me: dont resent me, and when you're feeling empty, keep me in your memories, leave out all the rest, leave out all the rest.......

Fang: rrrrrrah!!!! *pulls the switch and all the lights come on*
*stunned silence, and a few gasps*

Acid: *is no longer just a hedgehog. he has become something similar to a rayquaza, a very large acid-green skake, with a pair of large spikes on it's head, and arms and hands with large talons. his fangs are now about half a foot long. his head was hovering over eclipse, his enormous jaws agape, but when the lights turned on, he recoiled and backed away from him* YOU IDIOTS!! I HAD HIM!!! *HISSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!*

TheGameArtCritic on August 20, 2008, 5:36:45 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: that's right. You almost had me. And now, Acid... now I have YOU! *blasts him right in the face with a dark energy blast*

Rosette: ACID! WTF HAPPENED TO YOU???

Me: right now, Rosette, I think he should be focusing on not getting killed by Eclipse.

Eclipse: HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! *shoots out short dark blasts like a machine gun*

mechadragon13 on August 20, 2008, 5:54:23 AM

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mechadragon13((and now i imitate a really good fanfic im reading ^^))

BOSS BATTLE: Serpent Acid (Hybrid Nation and Eclipse)ok, acid just turned into a giant snake, and is seriously out to get eclipse. His strenth and speed have skyrocketed, and so has his bloodlust!! so ya gotta defeat him before he gets eclipse!! make sure you avoid his fangs, even a tiny scrape can be deadly. also, watch out for his tail, which can knock you around!!

Acid: *laughs like a maniac* HAHAHAHAHAAA!!! my scales are hard as diamonds. you cannot pierce them!!!! *lunges at eclipse, jaws open wide*
Daemontwilight: OH NO YOU DONT!! *bashes head-first into acid's head, knocking him off-balance*
Acid: AGGH! *HISSSS* stupid demon. *knocks Twiight away with his tail*

TheGameArtCritic on August 20, 2008, 5:56:47 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: DON'T CALL TWILLY STUPID!!!!! ARE YOU OK TWILLY?????? I LIKE TO YELL!!!!!!!

Eclipse: *grabs Acid by the tail and throws him across the room*

mechadragon13 on August 20, 2008, 7:06:31 AM

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mechadragon13Acid: *hits a wall, and hisses loudly* cretin. *smacks eclipse with is tail, sending him flying*

daemonTwilight: *stands up* im ok!!! *faces acid again* ACID!! cut it OUT!!!
Mikenno: this requires my intervention. *goes daemon and stands at twilly's side*

Acid: i wont stop until HE *points at eclipse with one claw* is dead!!! *faces eclipse again, and sways back and forth like a cobra being charmed, then suddendly goes for eclipse*

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 20, 2008, 8:35:48 AM

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FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEndAria: Jesus Christ Superstar… has everyone gone nuts??

Me: *Mumbles* Think we were all insane in the beginning, so how can we 'go' Nuts?? *In normal tone* We need to take both of them down, before they destroy everything twixt the two of them!!

TheGameArtCritic on August 20, 2008, 9:56:50 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: RAAAAAGH!!! *charges at Acid as well*

Me: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Rosette: oh no....

mechadragon13 on August 21, 2008, 7:33:39 AM

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mechadragon13Lightning: NO!!!

Mikenno: no you dont!!! *slams into eclipse, knocking him away*
Manny: MIKENNO!
Mikenno: *turns in time to see acid bury his fangs in his side* AAAAGH!!!!
Acid: *picks mikenno up, then tosses him across the room* HISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!! i told you not to get in the way. now look what you have done!!!
Mikenno: *hits the wall HARD, then falls to the ground*

Me: *is completely freaking out* MIKENNO!!!! *starts running over to him*
Fang: *picks mish up and helps her get there faster* i gotcha, mish.

Manny: oh no... did he get bitten????
Lightning: no......... *glares angrily at acid* LOOK WHAT YOU DID!!! YOU KILLED AN ANNOCENT!!!!! *eyes glow strangely, and he starts taking his gloves off* you're paying for this, Acid.

TheGameArtCritic on August 21, 2008, 7:38:49 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: NO!!!! *puts hands on Lightning's shoulder* no... no more death...

Eclipse: MIKENNO DIDN'T DESERVE THAT!!!!

Everyone: *looks at Eclipse, suprised*

Eclipse: HOW COULD YOU???? MIKENNO WAS ALL OF OUR FRIENDS!! HE WAS STILL MINE!!! HE WAS THE ONLY ONE I WASN'T TRULY ANGRY AT!!!! HOW COULD YOU?????????? *runs up and slams his fist against Acid's snout*

Me: NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

mechadragon13 on August 22, 2008, 4:47:56 AM

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mechadragon13Acid: *HISSSSSSSes really loudly at the pain, then smacks eclipse away with his claw* you stupid hedgebat!!! i hadnt meant to hit mikenno, he got in the way!!! *a hint of a tear appears in his eyes* i hadnt meant to hurt him!!!

Lightning: *glares at critic, then his eyes return to normal, and he tugs his gloves back on* you're right. no more.

*mish and fang get over to where mikenno is lying*
Fang: *drops mish near mikenno*
Me: *practically leaps towards mikenno* MIKKI!!!! *kneels down next to him and inspects his wound*
Mikenno: *groans. he has bite marks on his sides, and the area around the two largest holes was rapidly turning dark purple. he groans again, then looks up at mish* sorry 'bout that...... i just couldnt let him get eclipse.......agh...
Me: *is starting to tear up* i know why you did it, and it was the right thing to do, but..... i cant believe you're leaving us.......
Mikenno: *looks her right in the eyes, as if he was telling her something, then glances at his wound*
Me: *looks at his wound. then my eyes widen and my mouth opens as if to say something.*
Mikenno: *stares at mish for a bit, as if to tell her to be quiet, and suddendly, he hisses in pain. the purple area had spread almost up to his arm, and across to his back*
Fang: that looks terrible....... is there anything we can do?
Me: *tears are flowing freely, but she keeps her voice even* no....... there's nothing we can do for him now...... *she lays his head against his side, and begins to sob*

*everyone who was watching from the sidelines bows their head*

Daemontwilight: *returns to her normal form and goes to lightning, resting her head against his shoulder, her eyes watering*

TheGameArtCritic on August 22, 2008, 6:14:56 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *walks up to Mikenno* i thought you said you can't die... YOU CALL YOURSELF A DEMON??? *pupils dialate in rage*

Me: Eclipse... please...

Eclipse: NO!!! I'M NOT BOUND BY YOU ANYMORE!!! *goes full Condemned* you will PAY for what you've done, Acid... YOU WILL PAY.

Rosette: no... NO! NOT AGAIN!!!

Eclipse: *charges at Acid, eyes intent on slaughtering him*

Me: NO MORE DEATH!!!!! STOP IT!!!!!!!

mechadragon13 on August 22, 2008, 6:41:33 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *somewhat weakly* dont do it eclipse. *stares him right in the eyes, and speaks in his normal voice* what i'm about to say and do right now cant be seen by anyone else. i'm not dying. but acid doesnt know that. neither do the others. only mish and you know. but you cannot, and i do mean CANNOT say anything. i have a plan. you must do your best to follow it. *returns to being weak*

Acid: *is having a mega guilt trip* i didnt mean it..... i swear i didnt....... *eyes widen* oh no...... *realizes it's the second time he's caused a death* grr.... again... not again........ AGH!!! *starts bashing his head against the wall*

TheGameArtCritic on August 22, 2008, 7:06:48 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *nods in Mikkeno's direction*

Me: MIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIKKIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*falls down sobbing*

mechadragon13 on August 19, 2008, 5:52:05 AM

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mechadragon13Acid: *his voice is dripping with menace* listen to the girl, eclipse, or someone might get hurt...... heheheheheh....

Me: *small yelp*
Mikenno: *turns to mish* you ok?
Me: *nods* yeah........it's just....... i'm scared.... *shakes head, then starts singing again*
I dreamed I was missing
You were so scared
But no one would listen
Cause no one else cared
After my dreaming
I woke with this fear
What am I leaving
When I'm done here

Mikenno: *to critic* she sings to calm herself down..... she must really be scared....

mechadragon13 on August 14, 2008, 1:03:16 PM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *running, running, running, then suddendly, he stops* oh no. ohhhhh no no no......
Daemontwilight: *stops next to him* what happened, mikenno. TELL ME!
Lightning: *stops next to them, still on all fours* *in a sort of growly voice* are we too late???
Mikenno: *his eyes are wide, and he is silent for a moment. then, he nods*
Daemontwilight: oh god. what did he do???
Mikenno: everyone at the base is in danger. WE GOTTA GET BACK!!! *immediately turns around and starts a dash to the base*
daemontwilight: oh no!! *starts running after him*
Lightning: *follows, and thinks* why is the base in danger??? is inderetta attacking?? or worse. is condemned out of control? oh god, i hope we get there in time.....

MEANWHILE!!! at the base.....

Me: *is talking into teh watch/communicator thing* yeah i need that preserver, like, right now.
Neo: what are you doing?
Me: we need to make sure that nothing happens to vera while we're away. so i'm getting talon to fix it for us.
Neo: oh. doe she need help?
Me: nah, dio's workin' on it too.
Manny: who're we talking 'bout?
Neo: some good friends that helped start the Nation.

Acid: *shudders* i have a feeling something's... not right.
*a white and black shadow appears in front of them*
Me: Mikenno? oh god, what happened??
MikennoIllusion: the base is in danger. if you see eclipse, do NOT, i repeat, do NOT let him get into the base. we'll explain when we get to the base. *disappears*
*Acid, manny, neo and i look at each other with horrified looks*
Me: CRITIIIIIIIIIIC!!!!!!

TheGameArtCritic on August 14, 2008, 2:37:12 PM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: *wide-eyed* oh GOD.... the end is near...

MENWHIAL AT TEH BASE :D

the doors: *blast open with a loud explosion*

Eclipse: *strides right in. He wears a red trench coat, and pants. He also wears an extremelly angry expression*

Rosette: E-Eclipse...?

Eclipse: *shoots her a glare of pure rage, so intense, it could have made Sephiroth shudder*

Rosette: *backs away a bit*

mechadragon13 on August 15, 2008, 12:05:22 PM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *bursts into the building, and stands if front of eclipse, shieding rosette* *shoots him a glare thats almost as unsettling* dont. move.
DaemonTwilight: *stands by rosette* eclipse isnt himself. inderetta implanted a chip into him.
Lightning: *stands on the other side of rosette* he found our about your...... *glances at her* job.

MEANWHILE!!!! somewhere else in the base.......

Me: ACID!! get vera to room D13. then, meet back by the north entrance. eclipse is in.
Acid: ...got it. *rus to where vera is, picks her up and runs down a hallway*
Me: neo, come with me.
Manny: what about me???
Neo: it's too dangerous for you. stay here.
Manny: but---
Me: thats an order, manny. you're part of the Nation now. your priority is to save as many lives as possible, not go out and risk your own.
Manny: *opens his mouth to argue, but then nods* yes sir, ma'am.
Me: *smiles and nods* lets go. *runs to where the confrontation is at*

TheGameArtCritic on August 15, 2008, 1:04:50 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: Mish. There you are. Now you can all die together.

Rosette: *blubbering* Oh god... oh my god, he came in and.. and he THREATENED me... he said he was going to make me suffer... This isn't like him.... *starts sobbing*

Me: he made her CRY....

mechadragon13 on August 16, 2008, 2:57:25 AM

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mechadragon13Me: *comforts rosette* you're ok rosette. *glares up at eclipse* it isnt like him at all.
Neo: this whole thing has INDERETTA written all over it.
Mikenno: it's true. inderetta implanted a chip into eclipse's head. it turns eclipse's sorrow into rage, nd gives him full control over condemned.
Lightning: *surprised* full control???
Mikenno: sad to say, but yes.
Acid: *runs in and sees eclipse* whoa. what happened to HIM?
Me: he's been turned against us.
Acid: what?? i swear it wasnt me.
Me: we know it wasnt you, acid. but we gotta make sure eclipse doesnt hurt any innocents.
Manny: *runs towards them* EI!! 'perame!!
Me: *between gritted teeth* i thought i told you to GIT OUT.
Manny: hey, you cant kick me out without lettig me see some action first!
Me: *exasperated sigh*
DaemonTwilight: *ear twitch* someone's coming through the south entrance.... *eyes widen* i know who it is!! neo, go get her.
Neo: *nods and runs off*

TheGameArtCritic on August 16, 2008, 3:24:46 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse:... Mikenno... get out of the way....

Me: I can't believe this...

Rosette: *stll sobbing*

Eclipse: I swear, Mikenno... If you don't move right now, I won't hesitate to kill you... *hands glow with a strange purple light*

Me: uh oh.

mechadragon13 on August 16, 2008, 3:31:06 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: heh.....haha... hahahahaa!!! have you forgotten? i'm PURE DEMON. i cant die!! *holds his position*

Neo: *runs back with an enormous grin on his face* hey, guys, look who came to visit!!
Shidako: *walks in, her enormous sword in hand* hey guys. miss me?
DaemonTwilight: knew you'd come ^^
Lightning: sweetness.
Zenith: *lands near them* OY! dont leave ME out of the fight!!
Scorch: *runs in with fria* hey, you ain't leaving US out either.
Fria: *nods in agreement*
Fang: *swoops in and lands next to lightning*
Lightning: how ya doin' little buddy?
Fang: not bad, not bad. *competitive grin*

Me: alright eclipse. bring it on.

TheGameArtCritic on August 16, 2008, 3:37:47 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: ... you can't die? Then maybe I can temporarally disable you... *slowly raises his hand to Mikenno, and uses dark energy to stop his heart with a loud shocking noise*

Me: OH MY GOD!!!!!

Eclipse: *then raises his hand all the way up, and does the same thing to the base, cutting the power, and making the whole building go black with darkness. The only light there is now is Eclipse's glowing hands. Of, course, those soon went out too*

Rosette: oh god... oh god... *is shaking*

Me: I can't even see my hand in front of my face...

mechadragon13 on August 16, 2008, 3:43:59 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: URK! *thud on the ground indicates he is unconscious*

Me: mikki? oh god...

Lightning: i got this. *glows ridiculously bright, lighting up a 100 feet radius around him*
DaemonTwilight: where the hell is he??

TheGameArtCritic on August 16, 2008, 3:48:09 AM

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TheGameArtCriticRosette: *is being attacked by a now Condemned Transformed Eclipse* AAAAHHH!!!!

Eclipse/Condemned: *bites Rosette's arm*

Me: aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!

mechadragon13 on August 16, 2008, 3:55:10 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: suddendly gets up, turns around and grabs condemned's jaws, opening them far enough for rosette to fall out, then throws condemned against an unseen wall* GRRRAGH!!! ya didnt think i was really unconscious didja???

Me: oh phew...... *wipes brow*

Lightning: ok, we need power, NOW. *looks up at the ceiling* twilly, i needja to give me a boost. get me to the roof. *turns to her* room's gonna go dark for a bit, so watch the others.
DaemonTwilight: *nods, then grabs lightning and throws him to the roof, the light goes out* stay close you guys, i can hear him....... *snaps her head to wherever condemned is and growls*

TheGameArtCritic on August 16, 2008, 3:58:12 AM

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TheGameArtCriticCondemned/Eclipse: *is now behind Twilly. His red eyes glow behind her, and his heavy breathing is hot on her neck*

Me: IT'S JUST LIKE IN ALIEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Rosette: *grimaces as she holds her arm*

mechadragon13 on August 16, 2008, 4:00:32 AM

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mechadragon13Daemontwilight: *stands still for a few seconds, then swiftly flips over and slashes at condemned's face* RAAAWR!!!!

Me: everyone get away!!
*everyone gives them at least like, 20 feet of room on all sides*

TheGameArtCritic on August 16, 2008, 4:07:41 AM

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TheGameArtCriticCondemned/Eclipse: NRRAAAGGGH!!! *holds his face, then turns back into Eclipse and zaps Twilight with a large dose of Dark Energy. This causes the room to glow brightly for about five seconds*

Me: TWILLY!!!!!!!!!!

Rosette: ECLIPSE STOP!!!!!!

mechadragon13 on August 16, 2008, 4:44:51 AM

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mechadragon13DaemonTwilight: *screams bloody murder* GREEEEEEEEEEAK!!! *falls down to the ground unconscious, and reverts no normal Twilight*
*suddendly, the lights come back on, and what seems like a bolt of electricity falls from the ceiling onto eclipse. It was actually a charged-up lightning dropping fist-first from the ceiling*
Lightning: *bounces off eclipse and lands on his feet* whoo!!! that was intense! *looks around and see twilight* TWILLY!!! *runs to her* twilight? *he puts his ear to her chest to listen for a heartbeat* still alive...... *stands up and glares angrily at eclipse* what. did. you. DO?

TheGameArtCritic on August 16, 2008, 5:45:16 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *gets up and growls* gave her a large dose of Dark Energy. It probablly paralyzed her for some time... now it's YOUR turn... *hands suddenly hold dark fire*

Me: he knows his elements... he can't use dark energy on Lightning, or else Lightning will just absorb it, so he's using something else...

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 16, 2008, 10:43:43 AM

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FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd((Hate this stupid thing sometimes… no updates, and then I check today, five gajillion posts… geez louise.))

Aria: This is worse than when I was bagged… can't see a blooming thing.

Me: *Sarcastically* No, I can't believe it.

Aria: *Rolls eyes and is very happy when the lights come back on* Be careful Lightning!! Clipsy's pulling a Benedict Arnold! Cept he's not doing this for more money or because of lack of recognition…

Me: We get the point. *A contemplative looks emerges on her face, she speaks to Eclipse* Thou art a traitor, and a miscreant; Too good to be so, and too bad to live. *Takes a step forward* Et tu, Brute?

mechadragon13 on August 16, 2008, 12:24:50 PM

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mechadragon13Lightning: he's not a traitor, it's inderetta. he messed eclipse up REAL bad. and now he thinks of us as his enemies. *gets ready for an attack*

Twilight: *unconscious*
Mikenno: *has reverted to his hedgehog form, and is checking over twilight* she's uncoscious, but she'll wake up soon.

Me: ....this may not end well......

Acid: *clenches his fists and growls very quietly* grrrr.....
Everyone Else: *watches in freaked out silence*

TheGameArtCritic on August 17, 2008, 2:58:42 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *shoots out large doses of dark fire at Lightning, and everyone around him, then he shoots some of it above all their heads, and allows firey rain to fall in the HQ*

Me: *is hit* ow. You suck Eclipse! YOU'VE BEEN FREAKING BLINDED BY INDERRETTA!!!!

Eclipse: he has not blinded me, but simply opened my eyes. I thank him, and shun you all as enemies.

Me: YOU ASSHOLE!!!!

Rosette: Eclipse... what on earth has that badger told you to make you act this way?

mechadragon13 on August 17, 2008, 7:05:00 AM

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mechadragon13everyone: *is attempting to dodge all the firey rain*

Lightning: *while dodging* ECLIPSE!!! WE'RE NOT YOUR ENEMIES!!! INDERETTA LIED TO YOU!!!

Mikenno: grr..... he wont listen.......
Acid: *clenches his fist tighter, and growls audibly*
Manny: umm... acid?
Acid: *snaps his head towards manny, and glarez*
manny: O.O .........
Acid: *looks back at eclipse and lightning near the middle. still trying to contain his anger, but is beginning to fail*

Scorch: heh. fire? no problem. *jumps out between Lightning and Eclipse* rrrrrrrAGH!!! *spins once and draws all the fire towards him and concentrates it all into a ball. then, he shoots the ball at eclipse*

TheGameArtCritic on August 17, 2008, 10:04:03 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *barely dodges, but now has a burnt tail*

Me: pfffff hahahahahahahah....

Eclipse: *shoots a nasty glare at me*

Me: hey, when you turn on us, we show.... um... Acid?

Eclipse: *looks at Acid, and notices him growling* angry? Is it because I killed Vera? Maybe I should end your misery... *charges up some dark energy*

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 17, 2008, 10:39:25 AM

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FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEndMe: You're face is misery. Your mind has been twisted, broken, shattered, and then forged anew by Inderretta, by lies woven with strands of truth, for those are the best of lies… if you can call a lie best… A traitor you are, for allowing yourself to be mutilated so.

Aria: I'm burning your Shakespeare when we go home… honestly. *Looks at Eclipse* Least he has a sense of fashion now…

mechadragon13 on August 17, 2008, 11:41:48 AM

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mechadragon13Acid: *completely loses it. his pupils narrow to snake-like slits, and he hisses loudly, baring his three-inch fangs*

Me: whoa, whoa, WHOA!!! guys! outta the way!!!! *gets out of acid's way*
Everyone else: *gets the heck outta his way*

Acid: *snarls loudly, then slowly but surely starts making his way towards eclipse*

Lightning: oh hell no. *runs to twilly* twilight.... git up.... ya gotta get outta here....*
Daemontwilight: urrrg........ *comes to* whahappened?
Lightning: nothing yet, but somethings gonna happen soon. *tilts his head towards acid*
Daemontwilight: *eyes widen as she sees his rage* eclipse didn't... remind him about.......?
Lightning: unfortunately he did. comeon... move! we dont wanna be in his way.
Daemontwilight: *clambers to her feet and moves out of the way*

Acid: *is still advancing towards eclipse*

TheGameArtCritic on August 18, 2008, 4:45:03 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: Hmph! Your rage doesn't scare me!

Rosette: *queitly* but i think it should...

Me: YOU IDIOT!!!!!!!!!!! GET OUTTA THERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

mechadragon13 on August 18, 2008, 4:49:58 AM

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mechadragon13Acid: *his voice is almost a hiss* you should listen to them, eclipse....... kill the lights.

Me: ...what??

Acid: DO IT!

Me: what are you gonna---

Acid: *hisses loudly* JUST DO IT!

Me: ehh...... *hesitantly goes to the main power switch and heaves it to the off position*

*all the lights go out, acid's laugh echoes off the walls......*

TheGameArtCritic on August 18, 2008, 5:13:06 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: grr... you think you can scare me? DO YOU THINK OF ME AS SOME CHILD WHO FEARS THE DARKNESS??? I EMBRACE IT!!!!

Me: it's not the darkness you should fear, Eclipse... it's the creatures that lurk INSIDE it...

Eclipse: eh?

mechadragon13 on August 18, 2008, 5:23:13 AM

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mechadragon13*a hiss is heard RIGHT BEHIND eclipse*

Mikenno: ECLIPSE LOOK OUT!!!!

TheGameArtCritic on August 18, 2008, 5:31:20 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *turns around really fast and throws a punch in the direction of the hiss*

Me: are you really sure that'll do it?

mechadragon13 on August 18, 2008, 5:35:31 AM

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mechadragon13*eclipse's punch hits air.......*

Daemontwilight: *is seemingly looking around frantically*

*a scary laugh echose off the walls*

TheGameArtCritic on August 18, 2008, 5:43:16 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: stop hiding, you coward!

Me: NO!!!! KEEP HIDING!!!!!!!!

mechadragon13 on August 9, 2008, 6:25:57 AM

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mechadragon13Daemontwilight: *still sobbing uncontrollably, she howls mournfully ocasionally*
Lightning: *is still trying to comfort her...... but seems to be failing*

Mikenno: *punches the wall with both hands this time, but then falls to his knees as his hands slide down the wall* goddammit...... *a tear rolls down his face*

Me: oh god... i've never seen mikenno like that...... *slowly starts going towards him*

Neo: ......this really isnt a good day....................
Manny: O.O *is trying to grasp the fact that someone has died* did.... did that snake girl.......is she really......?

TheGameArtCritic on August 9, 2008, 6:29:01 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: yes Manny. *puts a hand on his shoulder* That monster you saw earlier did it...

Rosette: oh god... *sobs* I just can't take anymore death! I CAN'T!!!

mechadragon13 on August 9, 2008, 6:43:22 AM

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mechadragon13Manny: oh my god....... *looks at critic* does... does this happen a lot?

Me: *over by mikenno* critic!! i need some help here......

Mikenno: *is grumbling angrily and incoherently at himself*

Daemontwilight: *still sobbing*
Lightning: come on, twilight, he's still alive!!
Daemontwilight: *shakes her head, says nothing*
Lightning: *sighs* rosette? i need some help.

TheGameArtCritic on August 9, 2008, 6:48:49 AM

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TheGameArtCriticBoth me and Rosette: Coming! *runs off*

Me: *to Manny* yes is does. *runs off again to Mikenno* Hey Mikenno... this isn't your fault... I don't think Vera could have been saved anyway... you know how Condemned is, he's unpredictable... no one could have seen this coming...

Rosette: Hey Twilly... I'm sorry for what has happened... but i know you didn't do this... you just weren't in control... that's all...

mechadragon13 on August 10, 2008, 8:02:33 AM

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mechadragon13DaemonTwilight: NO!!! *is still im denial*
Lightning: *sighs* .....rosette? we need to show her that eclipse is still alive. so you think you could...... you know...... make him regain consciousness?

Mikenno: no....i could have done something........ i should have SEEN this coming.......... am i weakening.....?
Me: NO! mikkeno, you're not getting weaker. that was an on-the-spot decision, there's no way we could have known.

Manny: *finally realizes the severity of the situation* people.... DIED..........
Neo: *puts a hand on his shoulder* it's ok, manny. here, lets go find you a room....
Manny: NO! ....no. i wanna help.

Acid: ..........................................

TheGameArtCritic on August 10, 2008, 8:11:03 AM

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TheGameArtCriticRosette: *sighs* *walks over to Eclipse and leans over him* hey there, Eclipse... come on... *kisses him gently*

Eclipse: *wakes up, but immedietelly winces in pain. There is a puddle of blood growing slowly beneath him* Ugh... Rosette... thank god...

Rosette: *notices something and gasps* Eclipse! Your eyes are a darker shade of blue!

Eclipse: they are? Nnnngh... *rubs them a bit*

Rosette: it's probabally from Condemned, but never mind that, you need to see Twilly...

Eclipse: *gets up real fast, and nearly falls down again, but regains balance* what's wrong?

Rosette: uh... just... come on... *supports him*

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 10, 2008, 11:25:31 AM

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FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEndMe: *Bites lip* I feel so useless… I can't even cry… *Slumps over to Mikenno* S'all right. I could've seen it coming too.

Aria: *Moves to stand by Manny* You're pretty brave kid. Any special abilities or sh… stuff?? *Is trying to distract herself*

mechadragon13 on August 11, 2008, 9:42:09 AM

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mechadragon13DaemonTwilight: *whimpers, them puts her paws over her eyes*
Lightning: come on twilly........
Daemontwilight: *skakes her head and whimpers some more*
Lightning: gahh...... *stands up and walks around to her head, then kneels down in front of her* twilly........ *grabs one of her paws and lifts it off her head* twilly.......... look at me.......
Daemontwilight: *opens her eye slightly, but closes it immediately at the sight of lightning* hrrr.... *gently takes her paw out of lightning's grip, then puts it back over her head*
Lightning: ....this is impossible....... *sees eclipse* eclipse? eclipse!! *stands up*

Mikenno: *is attempting NOT to tear up, he looks at Fugue with one eye* ...................you're right. *is now
attempting to compose himself*

Me: there. thats more like it.

Acid: *is still kneeling by vera's body, crying quietly* ...........................................

Manny: *confused* abilities? OH! im a ninth-degree black belt ^^

TheGameArtCritic on August 11, 2008, 10:00:57 AM

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TheGameArtCriticme: what the hell? You know karate???

Eclipse: *shakes his head a bit* i-it's fine, Lightning... *limps over to Twilight* *gets on his knees* Twilly... come on...

Me: MARIAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!....... I mean... uh... VERAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!

mechadragon13 on August 11, 2008, 10:08:21 AM

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mechadragon13Daemontwilight: *her ears raises at the sound of his voice, and she raises one paw slightly to look up with one eye* eclipse....? is it really?
Lightning: yeah, it's him.

Manny: *to critic* ajá!! ill show you later, if you like.

Acid: ............
Mikenno: *stands and brushes the dirt off his knees, then walks over to acid and stands next to him, putting a hand on his shoulder*
Acid: *glances up at mikenno for a split second, then looks back to vera* ..................................................is there any way to save her?

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 11, 2008, 10:50:31 AM

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FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEndMe: Unless… you can reanimate dead flesh… or create a time paradox or something… I don't think so… I'm sorry… *Glances over at Mikenno, then asks quietly* You gonna be all right.

Aria: *To Manny* You know Kar-a-tay((Spelled as pronounced)??? How good are your kicks??

TheGameArtCritic on August 11, 2008, 1:52:17 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: Come on, Twilly... as much as i'd love to see you doing an impression of me, I think yo should calm down...

Me: CONDEMNED REANIMATION!! CONDEMNED REANIMATION!!! LET'S USE CONDEMNED THIS TIME :D

Eclipse: NO!!!

Me: dawww...

mechadragon13 on August 13, 2008, 1:47:47 AM

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mechadragon13Manny: *eyes narrow, and he grins widely* very.

Daemontwilight: eclipse!! it IS you!! I DIDNT KILL YOU!!! YAAAY!!! *pounces on him, then immediately gets off* whoops. sorry, a little overexcited...... *grins a big wolfy grin, then lies down sphinx style with eclipse between her front paws* i am SO glad you're still alive. *wolfy nuzzle*
Lightning: ^^ shes back to normal ^^

Mikenno: *nods to fugue* yeah.

Acid: *sighs deeply* then i guess thats it, then. *starts to stand up, then stumbles backwards*

Me: whoa there. *catches acid beore he falls and helps him up* be careful.

Acid: .......thanks.

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 13, 2008, 2:20:58 AM

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FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEndAria: *Returns the grin* Maaarvelous… this calls for a… *Is cut off by a rock thrown by Fugue hitting the back of her head. Aria clutches the back of her head in pain.* What was that for?!

Me: Not now. Just… not now. Later, perhaps. *Sighes, before turning to face Mikenno* Well… what now??

TheGameArtCritic on August 13, 2008, 2:28:41 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: Vera. We think about Vera plzthx she is too awesome to be ignored.

Eclipse: *the mention of Vera's name makes Eclipse hang his head in Twilly Guilt*

mechadragon13 on August 13, 2008, 3:41:37 AM

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mechadragon13Daemontwilight: *narrows eyes* hey, we dont need ANOTHER emo demon. *nuzzle* come on, eclipse......... it wasnt your fault.
Lightning: she's right. we can only blame condemned and inderetta for that.

Acid: ..............so can we bring her back?
Mikenno: *closes his eyes and is deep in thought*

Manny: we can... bring her back?
Neo: they did it with lightning.
Manny: O.O lightning died???
Lightning: yeah. *moves his chest fur around to reveal a long scar* condemned stabbed me with his claws. *smooths his fur out again*

TheGameArtCritic on August 13, 2008, 4:11:31 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *darkly* I also impaled Sonic, and almost killed Shadow.

Me: CONDEMNED impaled Sonic and almost killed Shadow...

Eclipse: *shakes his head and sighs*

mechadragon13 on August 13, 2008, 4:22:46 AM

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mechadragon13Daemontwilight: *stands up and gives eclipse a stern look* the others are right. it was condemned who did those horrible things. you had nothing to do with it.
Lightning: *nods in agreement*

Mikenno: *still deep in thought*
Manny: *waves hand in front of mikenno's face* hello? whassup wit 'im?
Neo: he's looking into the future, manny. dont touch him.
Manny: oh. coooool..........
Mikenno: *eyes suddendly open* i....... i couldnt see anything.

Everyone: WHAT???!!

TheGameArtCritic on August 13, 2008, 4:29:45 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEveryone else: HUH?????????????

Me: BUT LOSING YOUR POWERS IS IMPOSSIBLE... right? I mean... was it just all... black? What was "nothing" to you?

Eclipse: that's not a good sign...

mechadragon13 on August 13, 2008, 5:11:10 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: i think it's more like what fugue said. it all depends on our next decision. i cant see anything unless a decision is made.

Me: *under her breath* just like alice.......

Acid: so....... what's our decision?
Daemontwilight: hmmm..... *returns to normal*

TheGameArtCritic on August 13, 2008, 5:28:36 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: i dunno.

Eclipse: *is purified* cool.

Me: :D

Mr. Inderretta: *runs up, like super duper fast, grabs Eclipse, and drags him away*

Eclipse: WTF???? *mouth gets covered* MMMFF! MFF!!!

Me: *dark tone* it BEGINS...

mechadragon13 on August 13, 2008, 8:41:39 AM

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mechadragon13Me: O.O you did NOT.

Mikenno: *eyes widen* she did. *goes demon and is immediately in pursuit of inderetta* GET BACK HERE!!!!
Twilight: mikenno only gives chase if he knows we have a chance. *goes daemon also* come on!!! *runs after them*
Lightning: oh well. time for instinct. *takes his gloves off, and his here glow* here GOES!! *gets down on all fours and is immediately running faster than his normal speed*

Me: everyone who cant run as fast follow me!! *runs back into base*

Manny: wait up!!

Me: *stops* manny, you stay here. we need you to watch the base, okay?

Manny: okay.....

Acid: *picks up vera's body and carries it inside, then lays her down near a wall* i'm coming. *dark glint in his eye* i'm gonna get a piece of that inderetta if it's the last thing i do.

TheGameArtCritic on August 13, 2008, 9:17:12 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMr. Inderretta: *still carrying Eclipse, He grows wings out of his back, and takes off in a cloud of dust. Soon he is but a small dot on the horizon, and then after, gone*

Me: IT BEGIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!

What happens, I put in a story! XD

mechadragon13 on August 14, 2008, 12:48:16 PM

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mechadragon13you did not. *bolts to the story gallery*

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 13, 2008, 4:30:18 AM

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FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEndAria: Perhaps we're approaching a cross-roads in time.

Me: Maybe. It's possible. Would explain why Mikenno couldn't see what's going to happen…

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 6, 2008, 11:47:26 AM

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FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEndTogether: *Singing* A paradox, a paradox a most ingenious paradox!!

Aria: *Stops* What's the paradox???

Me: Who cares!!??!!! KEEP SINGING!!!!!

Aria: *Shrugs, then joins back in*

Together: A paradox,
A most ingenious paradox!
We’ve quips and quibbles heard in flocks,
But none to beat this paradox!

A paradox, a paradox,
A most ingenious paradox.
Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha,
This paradox.

Me: *Looks at the staring of nameless other hybrids* Maybe we should stop…

Aria: Yeah…

TheGameArtCritic on August 7, 2008, 6:39:23 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *smacks them both* YOU IDIOTS!! ROSETTE IS DYING!!!

me: it's true... one of the pics has effected them all...

mechadragon13 on August 7, 2008, 7:48:31 AM

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mechadragon13Manny: bendito sea el señor, this is bad......
Twilight: too right, manny.
Neo: who do you think is responsible??
Lightning: *through gritted teeth* inderetta.
Mikenno: i believe that is the case....

Me: O.O oh no. *panics and her voice cracks* WE GOTTA GET ECLIPSE OUTTA HERE!! NOW!!!
Acid: O.O oh no, he wouldnt.
Vera: O.O he would. *binds eclipse with her tail and starts dragging him out*

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 7, 2008, 9:42:12 AM

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FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEndAria: DYING?!?!?!?!?!?! OF WHAT

Me: I don't know!! Gah!!

TheGameArtCritic on August 7, 2008, 9:56:49 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: POISON!!! OH shoot!!!!

Eclipse: *eyes turn red, and irises disappear* AAAAAAAGH!!!!!

Me: aaaaand... Condemned is back...

Eclipse: *teeth get longer and sharper, his chest fur turns into tenticals*

Me: *covers Manny's eyes* don't look...

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 7, 2008, 10:00:59 AM

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FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEndAria: *Deadpan look on her face* Oh you gotta be s&*(ing me.

Me: *Eyebrow tick. The anger from earlier resurfaces. The next words are bellowed* GET ROSETTE TO THE DOCTOR RIGHT NOW SO WE CAN FIND OUT WHAT D^&* POISON SHE WAS POSIONED WITH. AND CONDEMNED LEAVE NOW BEFORE I'M FORCED TO DO SOMETHING I WOULD RATHER NOT!!!

mechadragon13 on August 7, 2008, 12:42:56 PM

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mechadragon13Vera: *cringes* grrr... he's getting REAL hard to hold.... *is struggling to drag him out*
Acid: i'll help ya. *grapples with eclipse to help drag him out*
Twilight: i dont think a doctor will help..... knowing inderetta, there's no helping her now.......
Mikenno: ....damn it!! *gets really angry*
Lightning: he hates feeling useless.......
Manny: GIT OFF!!! *takes critic's hands off his eyes, then sees condemned* O.O oh lord. *puts her hands back*

Me: WAIT!! *thinks* critic, dont we need condemned????

TheGameArtCritic on August 7, 2008, 1:28:58 PM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: OMG YES WE DO!!! But... but... it's going to be REALLY hard...

Condemned: *scary roar of scary scaryness* GGRRAAAAAARRRRRR!!! *shocks Vera and Acid with dark energy*

mechadragon13 on August 7, 2008, 1:33:29 PM

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mechadragon13Vera: *shrieks in pain, but doesnt loosen her grip* SKREEE!!
Acid: *winces in pain, but continues to grapple with him* grrr.... what do you need us to do with him????

Manny: *is shaking in fear from the sounds around him* ohhhhhhh..... god..........................

*other nameless hybrids are noticing the commotion and are backing up*

TheGameArtCritic on August 7, 2008, 1:52:20 PM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: I HAVE NO IDEA!!! HE'S A THREAT UNTIL WE GET ROSETTE BACK!!! AAAAHHH!!!

Condemned: *tenticals rips out of his back, and start stabbing Vera and Acid. He also bites down hard on Acid's shoulder*

Me: hey!!!

mechadragon13 on August 7, 2008, 2:02:20 PM

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mechadragon13Acid: AAAAGH!! *almost lets go, but doesnt* *hisses in pain* damn, this kid bite HARD! *grins* but i am NOT gonna let my nephew run wild, now am i?
Vera: *hisses in pain also, but smiles at acid's remark* heheh. *becomes serious again and tightens her grip on condemned*

Twilight: crap. well, here i come. *goes full daemon and starts pushing at condemned with her head* comeon, you big lump, MOVE!!

TheGameArtCritic on August 7, 2008, 2:07:40 PM

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TheGameArtCriticCondemned: RRAAAAARRGH!!! *gets pushed out the door, but manages to slice Twilly*

Me: ah!! Are you ok??

mechadragon13 on August 7, 2008, 2:11:55 PM

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mechadragon13Daemontwilight: *whimpers and rubs her snout* oww.... it stings, but im fine..... i gotta go help them keep condemned under control. *runs out the door*
Lightning: i gotta go too! *starts to leave*

Me: NO! *grabs his arm before he can leave*

Lightning: *surprised* what are you doing?? *anger starts building, his stripes start glowing* let. me. go.

Me: no. twilight wont bear it if she loses you again.

Lightning: 8realizes, the his stripes fade back to normal*
Manny: *whimpering in fear i-is it gone?

TheGameArtCritic on August 7, 2008, 2:15:27 PM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: yeah.. he's gone... I'm sorry, Manny... i didn't want you to see that...

outside

Condemned: *pounces on Vera*

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 7, 2008, 2:28:49 PM

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FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEndAria: Fugue, stay here. You're still too angry from earlier to deal with this…

Me: *Grumps, but gives a nod of acquiescence. Watches silently as Aria runs outside, before turning to look at Manny. Running a hand through my hair, I sigh* We should get Rosette to a Doc. Quick, before it really is too late. *Glances down at Manny* And we should get him settled too… *Another sigh* I'm going to have gray hairs before I hit twenty…

TheGameArtCritic on August 8, 2008, 1:25:17 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: listen, we know what the antidote is, but there's a problem with it... Rosette doesn't need a doctor... she needs Condemned's BLOOD!

mechadragon13 on August 8, 2008, 4:45:42 AM

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mechadragon13Vera: *screams bloody murder when he hits her, then tries to bite him*
Acid: NO! *gets pissed* dont touch her!!! *tries to bite him*
DaemonTwilight: acid, DONT!! you'll kill eclipse!!
Acid: O.O oh god, you're right.

Me: it's true. we do need his blood. but how do we get it????

TheGameArtCritic on August 8, 2008, 7:09:44 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: the other pic is handling it! Try to fight him off!

Condemned: *roars from being bitten by Vera* I'LL KILL YOU!!! *smashes her head to the ground*

Me: NO!!!!

Condemned: I hate mobians... i hate mobians so much... they're all too happy... who really gives a damn if i kill one...

Me: ACID WILL CARE!!! THE WHOLE HYBRID NATION WILL CARE!!! I WILL CARE!!! DON'T YOU DARE KILL VERA, OR I SWEAR TO GOD, CONDEMNED -

Condemned: you'll do what? You can't kill me...

Me: grrrrrr.....

mechadragon13 on August 8, 2008, 7:22:34 AM

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mechadragon13Vera: *completely loosens her grip on condemned, and slides to the ground. a small trickle of blood flows from her head*
Acid: *looks at vera, eyes wide and mouth agape* vera.... no..... *he runs to her* vera? vera!! NO!!!! you cant be dead... no..... you cant...... *closes his eyes and sobs over her*

TwilightDaemon: *is fighting, but glances over at acid, and stops, her eyes going wide* no..........*howling* NOOO!!!!

*inside*

Lightning: *head snaps towards the door* twilight? whats goin' on??
Mikenno: *is completely snapped out of his grumblings at himself and looks towards the door, his eyes going wide* oh no.
Neo: ....from the look on mikki's face, something bad just happened.

TheGameArtCritic on August 8, 2008, 7:27:09 AM

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TheGameArtCriticCondemned: heheh... oh that lovely feeling... that wonderful feeling i always get when i take a life...

Me: SHUT UP!!! YOU JUST SHUT UP!!!!

mechadragon13 on August 8, 2008, 7:37:12 AM

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mechadragon13Lightning: *gets outside* ok what the hell is going on?? *sees acid and vera* oh no....... *small tear* no....... *angrily at condemned, still tearing up* you monster.

Daemontwilight: *a tear in her eye* you......... *suddendly enraged, in her triple voice* YOU'LL PAY!!! *pounces on condemned, ripping at him with her claws*

Lightning: *goes over to acid and kneels down, putting a hand on his shoulder* im so sorry acid......
Acid: she was... the only one who understood me..... the only one who wasnt afraid......... and now.... *trails off and keeps sobbing*

*inside*

Mikenno: DAMMIT!! god... oh god... *punches a wall. denting it* IM SO USELESS!!!
Manny: .....someone just died... didnt they.......?
Neo: O.O oh no.... but who.....?
Mikenno: *in clear view of all the other hybrids in the base, he goes into his full demon form* NOOOOO!!!! *he crashes through the door* CONDEMNED!!!!

TheGameArtCritic on August 8, 2008, 8:53:13 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: oh god... not the time to be super angry at Condemned... and Twilly... she's tearing him up... OH GOD!! STOP!!! HE'S GONNA -

Condemned: n...nnnghrrghaaarrrrAAAAAAAAGH!!! *turns back into Eclipse, who is now seriously wounded* *immedietly falls over and blacks out*

Me: last time this happened, Eclipse didn't wake up until three days later...

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 8, 2008, 11:14:00 AM

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FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEndMe: Mikenno, stop!! Gawd d^&*it!! *Looks over at Manny* Pardon my French…

Aria: *Has been unable to help* What's going to happen now…?

mechadragon13 on August 9, 2008, 5:39:20 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *immediately halts* O.O
DaemonTwilight: *realizes what she has done and immediately gits off* oh god, what the hell did i DO???? *tear*
Lightning: *runs over to her and leans against her side comfortingly* you just got angry twilight, its ok...
Daemontwilight: *crying now* NO!! IT'S NOT OK!! I COULD HAVE KILLED HIM!! HE COULD HAVE DIED!!! BECAUSE OF ME!!! *collapses on the ground from sheer guilt, she begins to sob, still in her daemon form* god... oh god....
Lightning: *drops to his knees next to her, and leans against her side, rubbing her shoulder* it's all right, twilly... it's all right.....

Acid: *manages to control his sobbing* ...........i miss her already.
Mikenno: *returns to normal, still wide-eyed* i..... *looks down, ashamed* i was too late to save them....... *punches the wall, leaving a large dent and drawing blood from his knuckles* DAMMIT!!

TheGameArtCritic on August 9, 2008, 6:13:43 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: Poor Vera... Poor Twilly... one is dead, and the other is suffering from the same guilt that Eclipse suffered from after killing Lightning...

Eclipse: *barely breathing*

Me: well, at least one of them is alive...

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 25, 2008, 10:50:07 AM

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FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEndMe: Makes sense… Condemned is a demon of darkness… by providing light to the possessed, Condemned is pushed back as darkness and light seek equilibrium… perhaps I should step back…

Aria: *Ignoring Me for the moment* Go Sonic!!! Go Shadow!!! Put that demon in his place!! *Looks back at Critic* Where do you think that coward Inderretta went??

TheGameArtCritic on July 25, 2008, 11:02:07 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: probabally far far away. Anywhere, really, so long as we can't find him...

Sonic: *is now super omg thisclose to Shadow*

Shadow: *his face is twisted with pain, and fear. The demon is making him FEAR Sonic's aura... it's not Shadow* S-ssstop.... p-please.... t-this pain... it's l-like my muscles are trying to rip out of my skin... please... no more... no more!!

Sonic: *sadly shakes his head, and touches Shadow on the Demon Claw arm*

Shadow: *his arm burns, making a loud hissing sound* OH GOD!!! OH GOD!!!!! AAAAAUUGH!!! STOP IT!!!! GET AWAY!!!

Sonic: 'fraid I can't do that, buddy.

Shadow: AAAAUUUUGH!!!!!!!! *a blue liquid slithers out of Shadow's shadow (lol), and hisses at everyone*

Sonic: *picks up the liquid. It has the consistancy of silly puddy*

The Liquid (or rather, the puddy-like goop): *catches fire, and burns away, releasing a foul smelling gas, and turning into black dust*

Sonic: aww... gross! It's like Mephiles cut the cheese or something! *blows the dust away*

Shadow: *is now shivering and wide-eyed. He stares at the ground, and is twitching a little in the eye* t-t-t-the pain... it's g-g-g-gone.... *falls over, unconcious*

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 25, 2008, 11:05:50 AM

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FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEndAria: Will he be all right? *Gestures to Shadow*

Me: No. But he'll recover… *Is silent for a moment* What now, ladies and gents??

TheGameArtCritic on July 25, 2008, 11:08:39 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: um... we take Shadow, and we GIT OUTTA HERE!!! This place gives me the creeps...

This Place: *bloody drip*

Me: brr...

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 25, 2008, 11:40:48 AM

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FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEndAria: Yeah, it is kinda creepy… thought it was the Coward's aura, but guess it's not…

Me: *Rolls eyes* Let us leave… *Takes a few steps, before looking at Critic* Why don't you lead the way… my sense of direction is…

Aria: Horrid?

Me: *Scowl*

Aria: It's true…

mechadragon13 on July 25, 2008, 12:35:52 PM

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mechadragon13*everyone powers down*
Lightning: owww...... *is holding his face, which has lng cuts on it* man that really smarts............
Twilight: at least you're not dead...... *hugs*
Mikenno: *closes his eyes in deep thought*
Vera: *shivers* this place does give me chills.....
can we leave?
Neo: i agree. we should leave this dreadful place.
Acid: *is standing over by shadow* hey man... you're ok. ya remember me shad?

Me: somehow... i have a feeling this isnt over.......

TheGameArtCritic on July 30, 2008, 6:31:10 AM

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TheGameArtCriticShadow: *groans from the exhaustion that came from the exsorcism* uuugh... i... think... you were... you were born in the ARC too?

Eclipse: *lets his Father lean on him* come on Dad...

Me: *leads them all out*

mechadragon13 on July 30, 2008, 10:43:47 AM

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mechadragon13Acid: yeah. we're technically brothers, shad.

Me: OHMAHGAWSH it's good to be ooooout!! *stretches*

Vera: too right, too right.
Twilight: *sighs loudly* i never thought i'd miss being outside this much........
Lightning: same here. oww...... inderetta hits hard... *still has claw marks*
Neo: yeowch. that looks like it kills.
Mikenno: *points to where the plane is supposed to be.* look.

TheGameArtCritic on July 31, 2008, 6:20:39 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: plane! PLANE!!!

Eclipse: what's going on?

Me:PLAAAAAAAANE!!!!

Eclpse: ok. Shut up.

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 31, 2008, 8:19:34 AM

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FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEndMe: *Scowls* The plane's gone… All right, I want to know if I'm the only one thinking this: Did Inderretta kidnap our plane??

Aria: Borrow it without permission perhaps?? *Looks at Fugue* I can fly Fugue!!

Me: *Gives Aria an Are-you-insane??? look* No… you almost dropped me last time…

mechadragon13 on August 1, 2008, 12:05:52 AM

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mechadragon13Me: *grins widely and somwhat evilly* well if he DID take it, he's in for a little surprise.... *opens a little cap on her watch, revealing a red button* BYE BYE BIRDIE!!! *presses the button, and wherever the plane is, it blows up catastrophically*

Lightning: ..... never thought you'd have to use that button......
Twilly: yeah me neither.
Neo: *starts humming that one song they play when someone dies*
Acid: does that meana you have to re-build it?

Me: naw.... i have another one......

Vera: thats still sucks though.
Mikenno: we still have to get back.
Neo: i got it. get ready for a warp! *holds hand out*
*everyone puts their hand on his*

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 1, 2008, 8:49:45 AM

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FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd((It's called Taps.))

Me: Wish I could've seen the explosion… *Puts hand in*

Aria: You don't need to see any more explosions… *Puts hand in as well*

TheGameArtCritic on August 1, 2008, 11:28:25 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEveryone: *puts hand in*

Eclipse: but what if -

Me: SHUSH!

mechadragon13 on August 4, 2008, 5:06:38 AM

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mechadragon13Neo: ok, here goes! *they all warp to the outskirts of the other side of the city, near the hybrid nation base* whoo.... this is as far as i can go today....... *to critic, eclipse, rosette, aria and fugue* sorry i cant get you home today...
Lightning: you guys are welcome to stay here tonight if you like--- whoa, hey!
*a black and white hybrid runs into Lightning*
???: *desperately* por favor!! ayudame mano, a los policias no les gustan los satos.. escondeme, mano, escondeme!!
Twilight: i dont understand what he's saying!!!
Me: wait, its spanish!!! *to the scared hybrid* que te pasa??
???: los policias me'stan persiguiendo mana! no quiero ir a la carcel, soy much chico!!!
Me: racist cops are after him, he wants us to hide him!
Mikenno: i have this under control. *changes his outline so he looks almost exactly like the scared hybrid, except his clothes are black-and-white and his eyes are red-brown* *in the other hybrid's voice* you take him to base, i'll be right back. *runs off to distract the cops* estoy aqui!! *runs*
Acid: come on lets go! *all run off to base*

TheGameArtCritic on August 4, 2008, 6:28:37 AM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticEveryone else: *follows*

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 4, 2008, 10:11:05 AM

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd((I have decided… Fugue *Aka Me* owns a Fireworks shop called Fugue's Fireworks. I'm so inventive!! XD))

Aria: *Nods, and starts running, scooping Fugue up. Fugue squawks in protest* I know you… you won't run you lazy bum…

Me: * Sighs and glances over at Neo* It's all right… the shop'll be fine without us for a bit…

mechadragon13 on August 5, 2008, 1:47:55 AM

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mechadragon13*in teh base*
Acid: phew. well, we missed them.
Mikenno: *walks in* im back. fooling those cops was much too easy.

Me: lol. *to the unknown hybrid* hmmm.... quien eres? 'perate. primero..... hablas ingles?

???: ingles? english? si!! uhh.. i mean.. yes. yeah! sorry.... i go to spanish when i get scared ^^;
Lightning: no problem, kid ^^
Twilight: so... whoa and what are you?
???: oh! my name's manuel. but you can call me manny, manny the badgewolf!
everyone else: *silence*
Manny: .... what?

TheGameArtCritic on August 5, 2008, 6:18:00 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: we have a problem with a full badger right now... uh... he gave you a bad rep to us...

Me: well... not ALL badgers are evil...

mechadragon13 on August 5, 2008, 8:55:03 AM

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mechadragon13Manny: *!!!* i'm not evil! lo juro!! umm.. i mean.. i swear!!! *thoughtfully* whats the badger's name?

*silence*

Lightning: ..... critic?

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 5, 2008, 9:16:47 AM

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FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEndAria: *Pats hims on shoulder* It's all right… need to practice my Spanish anyways… *Looks him over* Looks all right, don't he Fugue??

Me: Your deplorable grammar strikes once more. It's doesn't he… for future reference. And once should not judge a flock by a single bird… *Walks over to stand before Manny. She places a hand under his chin and forces him to look her dead in the eyes* The eyes are the windows to the soul, they say… *Pause* Hmmm…

Aria: Is that Fugue-ese for saying you approve??

Me: *Slightly disgruntled* It is Fugue-ese for saying I am going to watch and wait…

Aria: She approves!!

Me: *Steps away from Manny* Oh Shut up.

Me: *Sigh*

mechadragon13 on August 6, 2008, 10:56:09 AM

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mechadragon13Manny: O.O ummmmmm.... o-kah........... wha' whazzat?

Me: fugue being herself, manny...... you're ok ^^

Lightning: yeah. just coz inderetta's the spawn of the devil doesnt mean all badgers are......
Manny: 'sperate. inderetta? hmm.....
Twilight: you know him??
Manny: hold up, ya gotta let me think.....

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 6, 2008, 11:09:29 AM

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FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEndAria: He's coward, that's who he is… a sniveling cowering mouse who twists others into carrying out his plans…

Me: He is not well liked here. *A Strange glint appears in her eyes, but it quickly fades* Inderretta is not fond of hybrids…

TheGameArtCritic on August 6, 2008, 11:17:24 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: nah... he's a racist jerk... he's turned me evil, framed my father, MURDERED MY MOTHER *glares a bit*, turned my father into a MONSTER, murdered me, and god knows what else...

Me: quite a rap, our little Mr. Mustard has...

Eclipse: I TOLD YOU NOT TO CALL HIM THAT!

Me: but it's SOOOO cute!

Eclipse: no.

mechadragon13 on August 6, 2008, 11:24:34 AM

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mechadragon13Manny: O.O he killed you? but how??? *shakes head* he knew my parents........ *hangs his head*

Me: *wide eyes* oh no.... im so sorry..... *puts a hand on his shoulder*

Manny: it's ok........
Lightning: ....... would you like to join hybrid nation, manny?
Manny: *surprised, his voice goes up an octave* que?!

(note: i dunno if i said this before, so if i didnt, manny is 9))

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 6, 2008, 11:34:42 AM

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FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEndAria: Mr. Mustard in the laboratory with the Condemned.

Me: *Looks at Manny and smiles gently* Would you like to become a part of Hybrid Nation? You're quite welcome to join if you want.

TheGameArtCritic on August 6, 2008, 11:37:02 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *nods* You are welcome to join if Mish is fine with it...

Rosette: PARADOX! *falls over*

Everyone: WTF NOOOOOOOO!!!!

mechadragon13 on August 6, 2008, 11:43:19 AM

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mechadragon13Everyone but manny: *!!!!!!!!!*
Manny: what?? que rayos paso???

mechadragon13 on July 23, 2008, 2:24:39 AM

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mechadragon13Daemon twilight: *starts slowing down* we're here! but first....... *zooms above the plane, going higher and higher...... then suddendly, she comes to a dead stop. she folds her wings in and begins to fall*

Lightning: *looking out the window* TWILIGHT!!!! *freaks out* OHMYGAWSH!!!! we gotta catch her!!
Shidako: no need. she's freefalling.
Neo: freefalling?
Mikenno: it's actually very exhilarating. but also dangerous.
Acid: *looking ou tthe window* it looks fun ^^
Vera: dont go jumping out of planes, acid ^^

Me: ooh i LIKE dangerous!! i'm gonna do it too!!! *goes up, the dives at this weird angle that gives eyerybody a minute or two of ZERO GRAVITY!!!!!*

TheGameArtCritic on July 23, 2008, 2:26:58 AM

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TheGameArtCriticme: right we already did this, but the rp must of gotten messed up.

Eclipse: *clings on for dear life*

Rosette: *tries to calm Eclipse down*

Me: WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

mechadragon13 on July 23, 2008, 2:36:46 AM

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mechadragon13Daemontwilight: *roars from exhilaration* WRRRRAAAAAWRRR!!!! *only 50 feet from the ground, he winds snap open and she lands safely, but she falls over from sheer excitement XDDD* whoo.... *turns back to normal*

Me: ok!! landing time!! *pulls up the nose in time not to crash and land correctly* here we are!! *opens the cockpit*

Lightning: *jumps out* TWILLY!!!!!!! *runs to her* are you ok???
Twilight: yeah im fine ^^ WHOOHOO!!!!! XDD
Shidako: *leaps out of the plane final-fantasy style and turns into a silver-and-aqua blue dragon in midair. she lands gracefully* finally.
Mikenno: *jumps out* we have to get in there.
Neo: *nods* lets go. *all begin to approach the door*

TheGameArtCritic on July 23, 2008, 2:42:55 AM

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TheGameArtCritic*there is a dark aura around the building. Blood trickles out from underneath*

Eclipse: *pushes the doors open without flinching*

Me: *looks around* oh... my... god...

*inside, bodies litter the floor, and against the walls. All are terribly bloody, and only a few are still alive, and in terrible pain. Puddles of blue liquid also stain the floor, mixing a bit with the red of the blood*

Eclipse: this... this is horrific!

Me: yeah... sheesh... I guess Shadow has had NO practice before with these creatures... he's never had to face a battle within himself...

Eclipse: *is trembling* Inderretta's going to pay...

Me: hey man, those dark thoughts of yours is what got you wound up with Condemned in the first place!

Eclipse: but now that Condemned is gone, i don't have to hold my anger back...

Me: shoot. That's a good point.

mechadragon13 on July 23, 2008, 2:48:36 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: *is terrified* O.O never seen so much blood in one place......................
Lightning: *equally terrified* O.O ditto......
Neo: well, we cant just stand here. mikenno?
Mikenno: *already had his eyes closed, he opens them again* *points down a hallway* shadow ran that way. *points down some other hallway* inderetta hid that way. who goes where?
Shidako: critic?
Me: any plans?

TheGameArtCritic on July 23, 2008, 3:00:25 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: the fact that they'll eventually turn out to be in one room is pleasing enough ^^. It always happens, and considering Shadow's senses have been hieghtened ten-fold, we need to be careful where we tread. We're in hunting grounds now, and WE'RE the deer. I figure they'll be in the largest, most mechanical-looking, and red-lighted room, considering this is always what happens in those cheap horror movies i would base this off of.

Eclipse: the invention room!

Me: *sweetly* what the f@#k are you talking about?

Eclipse: all mechanic-based companies have one! Also, it's pretty large!

Me: large?

Eclipse: the largest.

Me: WE HEAD THERE!

*as the group heads for the room, a monster's howls and roars echoe all over the building in a creepy manner.

mechadragon13 on July 23, 2008, 3:15:39 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: *shudders in fear* ehhh.....
Lightning: *smiles at her* you're ok twilly.... you're ok.

Shidako: *has become a relatively smaller oriental dragon that can fit through thte hallways* *sniffsniff* i'm smellin' something....
Mikenno: i sense somthing as well.........

Neo: sheesh. this place gives me the creeps.
Acid: no kiddin'? this place is freaky!
Vera: ....... O.O

Me: ....... critic? are we any closer?

TheGameArtCritic on July 23, 2008, 3:20:04 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: oh yeah. We're closer. *points at two rather large doors in front of us* You guys ready?

Eclipse: *looks down at the floor*

Rosette: yeah. *is detirmined*

*there is a large screechy roar from beyond the door, followed by what sounded like Mr. Inderretta grunting, and falling to the floor*

mechadragon13 on July 23, 2008, 3:25:59 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: okay then!!! *goes daemon*
Lightning: git that door open! *charges up*
Neo: *mentally rips off a piece of the metal wall and forms it into a large solid rod* ready.
Mikenno: *nods*
Acid: *takes out his emerald* bring it!!
Vera: *shakes her rattle violently and hisses* open that door*
Shidako: *becomes a big bad crimson dragon with black-looking eyes* rrrrrrgh...............

Me: *takes out a wrench* wherever you're ready, critic!!

TheGameArtCritic on July 23, 2008, 3:32:34 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: *opens dat door!*

Inside: *A rather grotesque form of Shadow is leering over Mr. Inderretta, who is bloodied and bruised. One of his arms is is the demakarr (the type of demon) form. He is on the ground*

Demon Shadow: NNNRRRRAAAARRRGH!!!!!! *his claws are drenched in blood, and, shockingly, so are his teeth*

Eclipse: *wide-eyed* DAD!!!

Demon Shadow: *turns his head toward the group, and snarls, spraying spit and foam everywhere*

Mr. Inderretta: oh thank GOD you're all here! Now he can kill YOU instead of me! *runs off to a safe spot*

Me: COWARD!

mechadragon13 on July 23, 2008, 7:36:25 AM

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mechadragon13DaemonTwilight: shadow.... it's us, remember? your friends.
Lightning: *to twilight* that might not work......
Neo: but then again, it was only a small piece of condemned that got put in.
Mikenno: *takes some steps back* i... suggest you put your guard back up......
Shidako: *growls* mikenno's right. this will not be an easy fight.......
Acid: *gets out of his fighting stance* brother... plaese, listen to us!! this isnt you. not at all. you should have more control over yourself!!
Vera: *thinking* please please work.......

Me: eeeek..... he doesnt look very happy......

TheGameArtCritic on July 23, 2008, 7:46:14 AM

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TheGameArtCriticDemon Shadow: *holds his head, wincing, and whining like a dog* *double voiced* g-g-g...ggggaaaaaagh.....

Eclipse: no... it's no use... Condemned is powerful stuff, even if it WAS a little bit... I just hope he can hear us...

Mr. Inderretta: what are you doing?! KILL THEM!!!

Demon Shadow: *snaps out of it, and slashes at the group*

Me: *is hit* HOW MANY TIMES MUST I SAY I CAN'T DIE?????

Eclipse: *is also hit* agh! IT'S OK! ow... I KNOW YOU DIDN'T WANT TO DO THAT! god...

mechadragon13 on July 23, 2008, 7:58:38 AM

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mechadragon13DaemonTwilight: RAAGH!!! *dodges slash and jumps on shadow, pinning him to the floor* shadow!!! snap out of it!!!
Lightning: *dodges slash* come on shad, fight it!!!!
Neo: *ducks* how do we got condemned out of him!?
Vera: *slides under the blow* ha!
Shidako: *gets hit, but blow doesnt inflict that much damage* RAWR!! *goes for inderetta*
Acid: *gets hit and flies a small distance* rrrgh..... *stands* come on shadow!!!! listen to us!! you may be possessed by a demon, but i know you're still in there somewhere!!! come on shad, fight it!!

Me: i think what acid's doing is working.....

TheGameArtCritic on July 23, 2008, 8:09:51 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMr. Inderretta: *turns his fist into a claw and punches Shidako square in the face*

Demon Shadow: *doubles over again, clawing at his head to try to think clearly*

Mr. Inderretta: no! NO!!!

Eclipse: You can't let him win, Dad! You can't! Everyone looks up to you! I look up to you! Your giving a damn horrible impression to everyone now! I THOUGHT YOU WERE SUPPOSED TO BE THE ULTIMATE LIFEFORM!!!

Demon Shadow: *shrinks a bit, and turns into reg. Shadow, who is actually trembling, and has tears in his eyes* I- This - this has n-never happened b-before... how d-do i control it??? HOW??? *is curled up into a tight ball, and whimpering*

Eclipse: he's in shock. Since Condemned isn't FULLY inside him, he can remember what he did... he must be in shock from he lack of control...

Me: oy Shads! Make sure yeh don't turn into a foamy monster again - you're much hawter as you are now!

Eclipse: *shoots a dark glare at me*

mechadragon13 on July 23, 2008, 8:20:22 AM

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mechadragon13Me: *smacks you* shut UP!

Shidako: F YOU!! *fireball at indy*
Neo: *launches the metal rod at indy* rrrrraaaagh!!!!

Acid: *runs over to shad* shadow!! *kneels down next to him and puts a hand on his shoulder* it's ok shad......
Vera: *goes and kneels next to acid*
DaemonTwilight: *sits all wolfy-like by shadow and the others*
Lightning: *stands next to Daemontwilight with one hand on her side*

Mikenno: *a very small smile*

TheGameArtCritic on July 23, 2008, 8:28:49 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMr. Inderretta: *smacks the rod away, but is singed by the fireball* AAAAGH!!!!

Eclipse: *sits next to his father* sshh... It's fine... just... just calm down, and think happy thoughts... that's how i got through it - now it's your turn...

Shadow: *tries* *can't* aaagh.... my head is KILLING me...

Eclipse: YOU NEED TO TRY AND STOP THE HEADACHE OR SOMETHING BAD IS GOING TO HAPPEN.

Shadow: don't pressure me! *moans* agh... *manages to smirk* what the hell, Devon..?

Mr. Inderretta: I DIDN'T KNOW YOU'D TRY AND KILL ME!!

Shadow: I hate you. I think Condemned hates you. What makes you think we wouldn't try and kill you...? AAAAGH!!! *his face is in a pain-filled expression* *he twitches as tenticals start crawling up his body once more* GOD!! OH GOD MAKE IT STOP!!!! *clutches his head as if it was going to explode*

Me: shoot! HE'S TRANSFORMING AGAIN!

Eclipse: everyone back away! Once Condemned starts, he won't stop!

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 23, 2008, 10:04:04 AM

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FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd((O.o…… so much… without me… Aria and I have been there the whole time… just… haven't… said… anything… T_T))

Aria: *Backs up a foot, at the ready. She is holding back the nauseous feeling caused by the excess blood, but barely. There is a look of tightly contained rage on her face. Her words come out cold, precise, unlike Aria's usual attitude at all. They are as cold as a blizzard as sharp as the sharpest sword* What do you have to say for yourself Inderretta??

Me: *A look of disgust is spread across my face, combined with a haughty look. It may not look like it, but I'm tense, almost at my breaking point. The murders offend me, and Inderretta even more. The glare I'm giving Inderretta is one that is similar to one who is gazing upon the worst scum of the earth.* Are you afraid now, Mr. Devon Inderretta?? Is fear nipping at you, as a wolf nips at a deer?? You should be afraid, Mr. Devon Inderretta. If Condemned doesn't kill you… we just might. *Creepy smile* I hate presumptuous men… men who proceed to think just because they can, that they should… those that play God are burned… burned in righteous fire. Do you understand? *Spreads arms apart* Is your soul clean, Mr. Devon Inderretta. *Pauses, and turns her attention to Shadow, and thus Condemned* Fear… Fear is something, we all have… no matter how we deny it… What is your fear? *Tilts head, ears flattening against the top of my skull* Or is fear your fear? Is hate your shield??? *Laughs* It matters not… leave us Condemned. You have no place here…

((Can we guess who had a bad day?? My post seems to come off as a little psychotic… and out of character. They aren't out of character… They're really mad…))

mechadragon13 on July 23, 2008, 11:02:25 AM

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*everyone backs up*
Me: WELL?? what do you have to say for yourself, Inderetta??

Neo: *looking down* all you seem to enjoy doing is to ruin the lives of others. of other people who could have lived a normal, happy life. *looks up angriy and clenches fists* you just go and ruin it!!
Shidako: *solemnly* I have never seen such evil come from a person who could still have their heart. Not even the Nobodies and the Heartless have done something so cruel. *angry expression returns and she goes from the red dragon form into an extremely fierce-looking metallic black dragon with furious crimson eyes and demon-like wings. she grins, showing rows upon rows of huge, razor-sharp teeth* prepare to face your worst nightmare, badger.
Lightning: *his eyes are so full of anger you aren't sure it's him anymore* you will pay for all you have done, inderetta. expect no mercy from us.
Vera: *angrily* i have nothing to say to that monster.
Acid: i finally find my brother...... *shakes his head* and you............. *angry glare, but his voice breaks* you just had to ruin it didn't you??? *sorrowful* i always imagined this to be a happy moment. but NO. *gets into a fighting stance and takes out his acid green chaos emerald* you will be punished, inderetta. get ready!!
Mikenno: *closes his eyes* i'm ashamed to call you my bretheren. *he opens his eyes, but instead of being their usual dark brown, they are glowing blood red* you will pay for all the grief you have caused that family and their friends. prepare to meet your death, Inderetta. RRRRRAAAAAAAAAWRGH!!!! *turns from his hedgehog-like form into his true form: it still basically looks like him, but his quills are now enormous curved horns with the black design still on it, his hands and feet have huge claws, his tail is long and spiked at the end, and his mouth is much like condemned's, only it has a whole lot more, but smaller teeth. he also has big, feathered white and black wings.* *in a creepy growly voice* good bye.... Inderetta.

TheGameArtCritic on July 24, 2008, 4:27:54 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMr. Inderretta: *looks at all who have ganged up on him, then turns his attention to the struggling Shadow. He snorts, and lets out fiendish laugh* you all say i am a monster... someone who cares not of others... but i look at you - ALL of you... and i know you are all no different than i. You cal yourselves peacemakers, but you are all WRONG... there is no good or evil in this world - only you, me, and our goals and intentions... of course, a bit of POWER helps out as well... I know that, at least once in all of your lives, you did something terrible, and downright unforgivable... I have too. Unlike you, i deny the truth. No. I EMBRACE it.

Eclipse: YOU'RE WRONG! YOU DEVIL! YOU SPAWN OF SATAN! YOU'RE WRONG!

Mr. Inderretta: am i, now? *cocks an eyebrow* *turns himself to Shadow, and jumps down to him*

Shadow: *gritting his teeth* lllleaaave mmmee allllonnnee....

Mr. Inderretta: *petting Shadow like a dog* oh my... you still have some emotions to release... may i help you, Shadow?..

Shadow: get out of here... please...

Mr. Inderretta: HAHAHAHA!! *bends down, and whispers in Shadow's ear* do you remember Maria...?

Shadow: *gasps*

Mr. Inderretta: I found her body, you know... the poor thing... she was only a skeleton with a blue dress... but i heard of her... I know what happened on the ARK...

Shadow: don't say any more... please... *more tears run down his face*

Mr. Inderretta: you really seemed to care about her, Shadow... hmm... a shame i BURNED THE BODY AND THREW OUT THE ASHES! *cackles in an insane manner, and leaps out of the way*

Shadow: *his eyes widen, then, with rage, turn glowing pure red once more. He shouts out in anger and pain as the tenticals on his body cover it's new host, and once more turns him into a monster. He goe insane, smashing up everything in sight*

Me: *voice gets low and dangerous* Inderretta... you just went too far...

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 24, 2008, 4:53:22 AM

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Aria: We ain't angels, we know that!! We learn from our mistakes!! But you never seem to learn from your wrong-doings… you just keep repeating it!!! You heartless ba&*^%d is there anything you care about besides power or money?? You twist and twist and twist and when the twisted breaks, you run… you're no more than a coward!! Always running from what you do!! You don't embrace anything!! You run… like a mouse!! You're a mouse Inderretta, you're no badger!! A simpering coward!! You disgrace all with your actions!! Go back to your mother, for she's the only one who loves you, if that love still exists, which I doubt. I hope the Devil has mercy for you, for we shall NOT!!!

Me: I never called myself a peacemaker. Those words never crossed my lips. You have a problem of the masses Mr. Devon Inderretta… you hear, but do not listen, you look, but you do not see… and you've made a mistake. Tell me Mr. Devon Inderretta… Have you ever heard of a creature known as a kitsune? *Starts stalking towards him, a dark glint in her eye*

TheGameArtCritic on July 24, 2008, 10:40:50 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMr. Inderretta: By the way you say that, i know that you ARE one... as for you calling me a COWARD, you know nothing about me. I don't normally run, you see... i was simply -

Me: intimidated? Is that it??

Mr. Inderretta: *growls at me*

Demon Shadow: NNNNNRRRAAAAARRRRGH!!!!! *foam goes flying everywhere*

Eclipse: *scowling at Inderretta* you b@$&;%@#... you f$%#&*% b@$&;%@#!!!

Mr. Inderretta: *amused* do you want to kill me?

Eclipse: YOU HAVE RUINED MY LIFE, STARTING WHEN I COULDN'T EVEN TALK! YOU NOW DARE RUIN MY FATHER AS WELL??? HOW DARE YOU MENTION ONE OF HIS MANY GRIEFS! HOW DARE YOU!!! *growls at him loudly, his eyes are full of hate. If he still had Condemned, he would be rampaging by now*

Mr. Inderretta: *shrugs it off* oh well. *turns to Shadow* Hey there, old friend...

Shadow: *turns to Inderretta and snarls madly at him*

Mr. Inderretta: hmm... maybe i shouldn't remind him that it was i who killed Rouge... ah. But he probally already knows... hmmm to make him stop targeting me, though... *darts up to Shadow faster than the naked eye could ever follow, and rips Project Nocturnal out of his pocket. He then places it on Demon Shadow's chest. It's robotic tenticals dig into Shadow's skin, making him howl, but soon, he stopped, and lowered his head like a puppet waiting for it's strings to be pulled*

Mr. Inderretta: *in a cold, heartless tone* kill them.

Demon Shadow: *growls low at the group*

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 24, 2008, 1:30:11 PM

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FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd((MMMkay… two curses… and I apologize for the slap right now… you can have him dodge if you want to Critic… or have Shadow attack her or whatever…))

Aria: *Sniffs in disdain* Denial seems to be the only thing you do well… that and running like a mouse. *Looks absently at Demon Shadow, then back to Inderretta* It will have blood, they say; Blood will have blood…

Fugue: *Calmly starts to take steps forward, towards Inderretta* To earn a kitsune's wrath is to earn a life of torment neverending… a kitsune is both kind and cruel, giving with one hand and taking with the other… Do you wish to be hounded forever more?? For I can promise one thing if you continue to traverse this path…*Walks forward, in spite of the Condemned Possessed Shadow* I will not rest, until your bones are bleach white in the summer sun, your flesh consumed by the Carrion, and your soul long devoured by Satan. I abhor you Mr. Devon Inderretta… for you are more of a demon than I am, you who murdered Rouge, you who damned Eclipsed, you who damned Shadow… My hands are not pristine, but yours drip with blood, as a faucet turned on fully. *Slaps Inderretta across the face* Try to make us doubt ourselves Mr. Devon Inderretta, I care not. Your words are futile here. I fear neither death, nor dying. *Glances at Shadow* Would you make us another stain?? Another memory of death? *Stands silently, back straight, hands shoved in the pockets of her vest*

mechadragon13 on July 25, 2008, 7:06:56 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: rrrrrgh.... they're all right, devon. we may not be angels, but we have NEVER done as much wrong as you.
DaemonTwilight: *in the demon's double voice* We have never taken lives, devon. we may be demons, but we are not monsters.
Shidako: i have faced death, and come back to tell the tale. but those YOU kill aren't that fortunate. you find the cruelest ways to torture people, ruin their lives, until they can't take it anymore. and you say we are alike. pah! *dragon-spit*
Neo: I come from the future. i have seen the horrors of wars and death tme and time again. but you... you are many times worse than all the wars from now to fifty years from now combined! at least they fight for a reason! but you. you kill only to please yourself.
Acid: *shakes his head* i..... *glares angrily* i have never killed anyone directly, Inderetta. but when i did, i had the most horrible feeling of guilt. did you even feel guilt, devon? well?? oh and, guess what? that death i caused, lightning's death, was because of YOU!
Vera: i agree with acid completely. we may be criminals, but we are NOT senseless killers.

Me: indy, indy, indy......... F*** YOU!

Lightning: inderetta........ *walks right up to him, ignoring shadow completely* will this ever end? i'm sick and tired of all this fighting. will you ever stop? *angrily* will you ever stop killing?? *slaps him across the face* well??? will you???? you have a choice, inderetta. you cna either take it, or face the consequences. *crosses his arms and stands his ground. *the others glare threateningly*

TheGameArtCritic on July 25, 2008, 7:26:12 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMr. Inderretta: *looks at everyone* All of you say that with such passion... *looks down at his feet, breaking eye contact* it's just... heh... *a twisted smile spreads across his face* all that passion makes me SICK. I admit it. I went crazy. I HAVE LOST MY MARBLES. You all tell me how horrible i am... heheh... "oohhh... how can you do this, Devon..? How can you kill someone and enjoy it?" It's simple, mates. You just forget how to feel love. I let my demakarr destroy that feeling long ago. It's fun now! I just walk up to a person, and kill them! Ah... a GLORIOUS feeling... *hand turns into a claw, and he slashes Lightning hard across the face*

Eclipse: Lightning!

Demon Shadow: *pounces at Eclipse*

Eclipse: *quickly gets away*

Demon Shadow: *uses a tentical to trap Eclipse. He slowly walks over and hisses loudly at him*

Eclipse: *his eys goes wide with fear, and a dose of sadness*

Demon Shadow: *raises his clawed hand like he's going to strike at Eclipse*

Eclipse: *tightly closes his eyes, waiting for the blow*

*and then the blow never comes*

Me: look!

Eclipse: *opens one of his eyes*

Demon Shadow: *his clawed hand is being held back by his slightly more Shadow-like hand. Demon Shadow growls in frustrasion as he struggles to try and slash at Eclipse. Unfortunatly for him, Shadow just won't strike at his own son deep inside himself*

Mr. Inderretta: ah... Shadow still suffers from being held back by love. COME ON! KILL HIM ALREADY! ONCE ECLIPSE IS GONE, YOU WON'T HAVE TO LOOK AFTER HIM! YOU'LL BE FREE!!

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 25, 2008, 8:36:48 AM

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FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEndAria: *Leaps into the air, snapping her wings open and hovering. Her feet flex in preparation. She glances at me.* Fugue…

Me: *I withdraw my hands from my pockets. Held in one of my hands is a homemade bomb.* Mr. Devon Inderretta. I have two words for you… SHUT UP!!!!! *The last phrase is bellowed, as I tackle Inderretta, trying to drag the Badger away from rest. During the movement, the bomb is lit* Are you ready to depart, Mr. Devon Inderretta?? For I am… 

Aria: *Rolls eyes, then mutters to herself* So dramatic… *Soars above the possessed Shadow* Fight it!! Fight it with all your heart, with all your love!! Don't let it take control!! Shadow!!

TheGameArtCritic on July 25, 2008, 9:01:26 AM

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TheGameArtCriticDemon Shadow: *still fighting* *in a hoarse double-voice* I CANNNN'T....!!!

Eclipse: *uses the opportunity to punch Shadow right in the face, and hard (wow. Workouts help)*

Demon Shadow: *falls on the ground, unconcious*

Eclipse: *runs to Fugue* STOP!!!

Mr. Inderretta: WHY STOP??!!

Eclipse: shut it, scumbag! STOP, FUGUE!!! DON'T KILL HIM!! DON'T LOSE YOUR INNOCENCE!!

Me: woah woah woah WOAH. WTF? Let's kill the Plot Point!!!

Eclipse: No! I know you hate this guy! I hate him more then i need air! But no... YOU CAN'T LET YOUR ANGER CONTROL YOU!!!

Demon Shadow: *half conscious* Eclipse's.... promise... to Sonic... *turns slightly more normal, but his eys are still pure red, and he still has fangs instead of teeth*

Mr. Inderretta: blow me up.

Eclipse: DEFUSE THE BOMB!!!!

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 25, 2008, 9:25:52 AM

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FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEndMe: *Still looks intent on doing*

Aria: Dumb %^&. *Swoops down and nabs the bomb with her talons, throwing it away, just in time for it to explode against a wall. There is now a gigantic hole in the wall where the bomb hit, and debris falls…* Don't make me scream at you, ya stupid fox demon…

Me: Why??*Is hissed out, from between clenched teeth. I'm starting to try to prevent Inderretta from escaping*

Aria: Make 'em rot in jail… torture him while he's alive, till he dies of old age. Make the rest of his days living nightmares. Take your anger out on him for the rest of your life… deprive him of all… if anything… he cherishes… I'll take my revenge too… someday… *Slight smirk* Some time… 

Me: *Short terse laugh* I'm 'sposed to be smarter than you.

Aria: Ya are… your anger clouds ya brains sometimes. *Flys back and neatly touches down. She slowly walks up to Inderretta* Hey Clipsy?? Can we break his hands at least?? *Eyes Inderretta in a predatory manner, so unlike a mockingbird. Fugue's had some bad effects on the bird…*

TheGameArtCritic on July 25, 2008, 9:48:02 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: I doubt you will be able to try before he gets to you first.

Mr. Inderretta: gaahhh... my plans.... they are ruined.... RUINED!!!! *turns full demakarr* *looks at Fugue* huh. You, girl... you have a LOT of anger to take out on something don't you...? *Evil grin* we may have something in common... *Flies out of the hole in the wall and escapes*

Shadow: *gets up, but winces as the pounding headache that has developed because of Condemned* *he drops down to his knees once more*

Me: awww... I wonder how we'll get Condemned out?

Eclipse: well.... it's not a lot... maybe Sonic can come in? His aura is pure, and he's fast... *goes on a cell phone, and tells Sonic to get his @$$ over here*

Sonic: *immedietly runs in* hiya! What's up? Why was the hallway all.... bloody... *looks at Shadow, and just stares*

Shadow: *his arm is a claw, and his eyes are pure red. He has fangs* nnn.... stop staring, you stupid faker...

Me: ok... uh... Sonic? You may want to step closer to him...

Sonic: why?

Me: JUST DO IT!!

Sonic: ok! Geez! *steps closer to Shadow*

Shadow: *an animalistic scream leaps out of Shadow's mouth as he once again clutches his head, and shivers all over*

Sonic: *a white aura is around him, and is now visible. He takes another step*

Shadow: *double-voiced, and hissing like a snake* AAAAAAGH!! SSSSSTOP!! SSSSTOP!!!

Sonic: *another step*

Shadow: *goes down fully on his hands and knees now, pain screams at every muscle he dares to move* GHRAAAAAAAUUUUGH!!!!! *his eyes turn back to normal. They are terrified*

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 25, 2008, 9:55:59 AM

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FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEndAria: *In a perfect copy of Inderretta's voice and tone* Something in common… *Voice returns to normal* Bah… Kiss my @$$ Inderretta…

Me: He's right though… I do have a lot of anger… *Looks Pensively at the hole Inderretta disappeared through…*

Aria: That's what the psychologist is for… *Scowls when she sees her words don't penetrate her friend's thoughts* Heeeeeelloooooo…

Me: *Waves her off, turning her attention to the arrival of Sonic and mutely watches the events*

Aria: *Respectively* It's like an exorcism…  How's Sonic doing that??

TheGameArtCritic on July 25, 2008, 10:38:24 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: This happened in like, the very first Condemned comic i did - back when it was crap. Condemned possessed Eclipse for the first time, and, considering Eclipse was new to this, immedietly went out of control. Sonic saw the chaos that was ensuing, and ran over just in time to save a little bunny girl. Condemned had said "wait! I can't stay near you! If i do, the host will - g-g-gack!!" He was meaning to say that the host will feed off the light aura, and Condemned will be weaker, and bladdy bladdy blah blah blah.

Sonic: *steps closer*

Shadow: AAAUGH!!! AAAAAGGH!!!! *writhes in pain on the ground, still clutching his head. His teeth return to normal, but he still has tenticals on his body, and arms*

TheGameArtCritic on July 25, 2008, 7:00:20 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMr. Inderretta: oh. I do believe you won't shut up. A pity, i was hoping you'd quiet down by now... I've killed your kind before, kitsune. You bloody demon fox... go, Shadow! Attack the nearest enemy target!

Demon Shadow: *he advances on Eclipse, his claw ready to lunge at Eclipse's throat. His free hand was balled into a fist. He snarls, and hits Eclipse across the face*

Eclipse: aaagh! *touches where he has been hit, and looks at his father in shock, and fear*

Demon Shadow: GRRRAAAAAARRGH!!!

Eclipse: *closes his eyes, and tries to calm himself. He then opens them once more to roll under Shadow, and punch him from underneath. He then rolls out, and gets into a fighting stace*

Demon Shadow: RRRAAAWWWGH! *is barely affected*

mechadragon13 on July 18, 2008, 7:36:36 AM

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mechadragon13DaemonTwilight: RAAAWR!!! *almost falls off teh roof* gaah!! *digs her claws into the roof and hauls herself back up* rrrrrgh......... *turns back to normal* time's up.... crap. well, here goes nothing! *takes a fighting stance*
Lightning: *thinking* i need a flippin' THUNDERSTORM!!! *stripes start dimming...* *thinking* running.. out of... power.....
Neo: crap. *looks around* wait! where's acid and vera???
Mikenno: *ear twitch* mm....... *both ears twitch, then, a flash of light*
Acid: *grins widely* are we too late?
Neo: no. what took you so long??
Vera: dumb cops tried to detain us XP *sees condemned* not dead yet, huh?

Me: *ratatatatatatatatatatat!!!* NOPE!!!

Acid: *lightbulb* idea!! Vera, distract condemned.
Vera: got it. *leaps into condemned's way* hey there condemned! here i am! come and get me. *dodges around condemned's attacks*
Acid: RAAAAAAAAAGH!!! *jumps on condemned's back and sinks his fangs into condemned's neck*

TheGameArtCritic on July 18, 2008, 9:00:38 AM

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TheGameArtCriticCondemned: NNNRRRAAARRGH!!!! *very hard and spiky tenticals shoot out of his back, and into Acid*

Me: oh that's not nice... holy shoot! ACID! I MEAN... uh... dude?

Eclipse: *fully gets up* huff... huff...

Condemned: oh. I see my host has awakened...

Eclipse: *very very very angry and intense* shut up... *hobbles over to Condemned*

Condemned: what are you going to do? BLEED on me? You're a cripple right now! AHAHAHAHA!

Eclipse: I won't let you hurt my friends...

Me: WOOOOOOO!!!!

Eclipse: This isn't where you belong, and yet you can change everything. You can even go beyond your own transformation limits... so i fgured... why not me?

Condemned: *ears droop* no...

Eclipse: *small smile* yes...

Me: he figured it out! HA!

Eclipse: *makes a thunderstorm appear out of no where to charge up Lightning* *A light aura glows off of Eclipse. Suddenly, his wounds are gone, and his arm has been repaired*

Condemned: NO!!!

Eclipse: *turns into a glowing white version of Condemned. Instead of Condemned's wings, however, there are angel wings* *his voice echoes when he speaks* FOR THE SAKE OF ALL THAT IS GOOD, TO FINALLY FREE MYSELF OF YOUR CHAINS FOREVER, CONDEMNED, I SHALL FIGHT YOU!!!

Condemned: *eyes narrow* bring it... *pushes Acid off him* *turns into his out-of-control form*

*the scene changes. It is day. A transparant Shadow, and a transparant Rouge cuddle a transparant baby Eclipse together. The sun shines on them all*

Condemned: how symbolic... heh...

Eclipse: *turns to his friends* guys... you stalled long enough for me to regain power... don't help me fight anymore... this is MY battle...

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 18, 2008, 1:33:53 PM

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FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEndAria: *Wide grin, she hobbles backwards* We leave it to you!! *Salutes wearily*

Me: You go Clipsy!! We're cheering for ya!!

TheGameArtCritic on July 19, 2008, 3:38:26 AM

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TheGameArtCriticCondemned and er... "Super" Eclipse?: *fight*

Condemned: *lunges at Eclipse*

Eclipse: *flies up, and dodges it, then swoops down, and rips up Condemned's back from above*

Codemned: NNNRRRAAAAARRRGH!!!! *Uses a tentical to grab Eclipse's leg, and pull him down. Then Condemned pounces on Eclipse and slashes at his face*

Eclipse: agh! *mirrors Condemned's move*

*there is a big "latched on to each other rolling around and punching each other" fight*

Me: wooaaoooaaoohhh.... look at them GO!

Rosette: w-will Eclipse win..?

Me: i can't promise you that, but he now has a better chance, considering he can control his mindscape again...

mechadragon13 on July 19, 2008, 4:05:41 AM

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mechadragon13Vera: ACID!!!!! 8runs over to him* acid!!! can you hear me??? please.. say somthing!!!!
Acid: *has numerous puncture wounds, but none of them go all the way through* urgh.......... agh.... hey vera.....
Vera: acid..... *hugs him*
Acid: *hugs her back* i'll be ok..... oww..... *looks and sees eclipse* wow. looks like he got his strength back.
Neo: *nods* too right. *walks over to acid and vera* hey acid, you ok there?
Acid: yeah i'm fine......oww.
Neo: *small laugh* hey, acid. i was wrong about you. and.. i'm sorry.
*both acid and vera smile*

Lightning: *is fully charged, his stripes glow brightly* oh yeah!! *turns +Lightning* i'm ready now!!
Twilight: whoa, hold it right there, light.
+Lightning: ??
twilight: *points to eclipse* it's his fight now. *sits down*
+Lightning: *looks over* oh. i see. *powers down and sits next to Twilight* so now we wait?
Twilight: *nods* so now we wait.

Mikenno: *puts his hands down and opens his eyes*
Me: mikenno? what are you doing??
Mikenno: eclipse is in control now. i no longer have to fight to keep us in place.
Shidako: *still a dragon, lands next to them* the hedgehog is right. *shrinks down into a mobian-sized blue dragon*
Mikenno: i am NOT a hedgehog!
Shidako: *confused* then what are you??
Mikenno: i'm.......

TheGameArtCritic on July 19, 2008, 4:25:17 AM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticme: DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUNNNNN!

Eclipse and Condemned: *still fighting*

Eclipse: NOT AGAIN!! I'M NOT GETTING KICKED OUT AGAIN!! *zaps Condemned with a powerful energy*

Condemned: *is hit* GGGRRRAAAAAARRRRRRR!!!!! *crashes down to the ground*

Eclipse: heh...

*in all the smoke emitting from the ground, Condemned zooms back up with full force and smashes into Eclipse*

Eclipse: AAAAGH!! *spits out some blood*

Me: oh geez...

Rosette: ECLIPSE!!! *fumbles aaround for her gun*

Me: *blocks her* NO!! WE MUST NOT INTERFERE!

Rosette: but...

Me: no.

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 19, 2008, 4:30:21 AM

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FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEndAria: If we interfere now, Eclipse may never be able to heal his mental scars.

Me: I don't like the idea either, but…  we can only watch now. We're catalysts, not the products.

Aria: We just helped the reaction start.

Together: Damn Chemistry class.

TheGameArtCritic on July 19, 2008, 6:14:33 AM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCritic*teh battle is huge, it goes on for a while, but finally,in a fight for victory, Eclipse manages to pin Condemned down*

Condemned: but... how? I'm stronger then you... I could easily beat you BEFORE...

Eclipse: that was before. This is now...

Condemned: I won't give up!! I CAN'T!! I need your body! I need it or I'll die!!!

Eclipse: that's really too bad...

Condemned: no... no no no....

Eclipse: your time is up. It's over. Go. Now.

Condemned: i... i... *closes eyes* maybe... maybe i really do need to leave...

Me: he won?

Condemned: *turns into his spirit form* I'm too weak to keep fighting... I must go... *fades away*

teh room: *turns white again*

Eclipse: *sends everyone, and himself, back into the real world*

*there is a SHHHHHIIIINNGGGGG noise. It's done. It's over*

In teh real world: *Eclipse gets up. The tenticals in his back sink into his fur. His straight jacket seemed to have ripped off him during his mental battle. Condemned is no where to be seen*

mechadragon13 on July 19, 2008, 8:53:07 AM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13*everyone stands*
Twilight: .......... is it over?
Lightning: *looks around* i... i think it is.....
Neo: eclipse? are you ok?
Vera: he seems ok....... are you?
Acid: *sigh of relief* thank GOD, it's finally over!!!!!!!!!!!!
*everyone breathes a sigh of relief*

Me: yay!!! *glomps eclipse* oh whoops. *pulls away, keeping my hands on his shoulder* you are ok, right, eclipse?

Mikenno: *smiles* *thinking* it seems like our troubles are over.
Shidako: *goes back into the human form* looks like my work here is done...

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 19, 2008, 9:00:13 AM

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on
FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEndMe: It's done!! Hallelujah, Hallelujah!!! *Jumping for joy* Isn't this great?!?!

Aria: *Staring blankly out into the distance* Is it over?? Didn't that seem… a bit too easy, in retrospect?? I mean… no offense Eclipse… but I don't think a demon that's… possessed you for countless years would disappear just like that…

*Her face still blank, with a creepy, eerie look on her face, she turns to face Mish* I mean, that's a great strategy for a predator. Allowing their prey to think that they were gone, while they were simply… hiding, waiting to strike once more… when the defenses are down, and the guards aren't in the castle…

Condemned would do that… that seems just like something he would do…

TheGameArtCritic on July 19, 2008, 9:46:08 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: too right...

Condemned: *is silently watching, away from everyone. He disappears, vowing revenge*

Eclipse: *his breathing is heavy, his eyes are tired. HE is tired from his inner battle. Eclipse falls down from exhaustion*

Me: i knew that would happen... come on guys... *lugs Eclipse over my shoulders, and in one step, dissapears to the field where Eclipse left, taking everyone with me* *places Eclipse down, head on a rock* *I dump water on him*

Eclipse: *sputters a bit then comes to* C-critic...

Rosette: Eclipse?

Eclipse: *weak smile* Rosette... i... feel... GOOD... I don't.. i don't feel like killing you anymore... i-it's great... is he... i mean... is Condemned gone?

Me: we think so...

Eclipse: *leaps up and hugs Rosette tightly* thank you... *he lets go, leaving Rosette standing there and blushing* Thank ALL of you... you saved me from... from myself... I owe you all greatly.

Sonic: *runs in with Shadow*

Shadow: we heard the news!

Sonic: are we too late??

Me: how can you guys be the fastest things on earth, and STILL be LATE??

Sonic: well... it was the same for Super Smash Brothers Brawl...

Shadow: nah-ah-ah! Don't include me on that! That was all YOU!

mechadragon13 on July 19, 2008, 9:50:10 AM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13Mikenno: so the battle isnt over yet.....
Shidako: too right.......... *remembers* oh! mikenno...... back when we were in Eclipse's consciousness, you said you weren't a hedgehog. Then you said you couldn't say what you were in there. so i ask you again. *turns into a silver-gray-and-blue oriental dragon* what are you?
*everyone turns to mikenno expectantly*
Mikenno: i............. i am......... *sighs loudly*

TheGameArtCritic on July 19, 2008, 10:49:33 AM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticeveryone: *leans over and listens*

Me: *thinking* a demon a demo a demon a demon!

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 20, 2008, 12:20:40 AM

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FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEndAria: I think I know… not sure though… *Glances over at me*

Me: *Nods slowly…* I know what he is…

mechadragon13 on July 20, 2008, 4:44:52 AM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13Mikenno: *closes his eyes and laughs* if you thought that any louder, critic, the others would hear you! but yes. i am, in fact...... a demon.

Twilight: O.O thats why you didnt wanna say it.
Lightning: and you never told us??
Neo: *thinking* oh boy... this may not end well.....
Shidako: *roaring* I KNEW IT!!!!!! *growls slightly*

Me: oh gawd. not even i knew!!!

TheGameArtCritic on July 20, 2008, 9:21:31 AM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticMe: *pats Shidako's shoulder* now now... settle, girly. SETTLE. He may be a demon, but he's a demon who HELPED us. If you try to slay him just because he's there, you'd be no better then the Hybrid Haters.

Eclipse: woah... she's RIGHT!

Me: are you that suprised?

Eclipse: well... uh...

Me: see, the thing is, I'm so insane, emotions don't blind me (that much). For a few seconds, i can think straight and KNOW things. Well, not before doing something completelly random...

Eclipse: ah. That sounds like you.

*there is a presence behind me. It leaks the stench of evil all over the place*

Me: *i turn around, gasp, and back way up*

Mr. Inderretta: *breathes in deeply, and sighs* is it not a lovely day?

Eclipse: what do you want, crazy?

Mr. Inderretta:*sarcastically* oh... that really hurt... it really hurt here... *points at his heart* Eclipse... i heard the news... I heard you were....... seperated?

Eclipse: that's none of your business.

Mr. Inderretta: that's ok. I already know. *holds up a glowing blue vial* He may be "gone", but he's not fully gone. (omg story arc) where is your father, Eclipse?

Eclipse: why would i tell YOU?

Mr. Inderretta: *looks offended* excuse me? I just have a "PRESENT" for him... that's all... but that's ok... I'll just find him myself... *walks off*

mechadragon13 on July 20, 2008, 9:51:22 AM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13Shidako: *growls at chu, then sighs and returns to human form* you're right........
Mikenno: *opens eyes* that inderetta man....... he's trying to get shadow posessed.

Me: !!!!! HOW DO YOU KNOW THAAAT?????

Mikenno: *points to his head* mental powers, remember?
Twilight: so what do we do about this????
Lightning: we only just fixed THIS problem! we dont need another one!!
Neo: Lightning's right. we should go after inderetta.

Me: ok critic, what do you think?

Mikenno: *was thinking throughout the rest of the conversation* odd.... i had expected a completely different reaction from eclipse..... shidako, i understand, but i..... i could have sworn eclipse was going to get angry................. i was... wrong? *shakes head and smiles* well, there's a first time for everything.

TheGameArtCritic on July 20, 2008, 11:39:33 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: Now that Condemned has left Eclipse's body, his mind is not so unstable. He is calmer then he's been in YEARS...

Eclipse: I told you all before: I feel GOOD. I just... i feel like a weight on my my chest is GONE... *shakes his head* as for Mr. Inderretta and Dad, I think i know where to find them... in an hour.

Me: uh... and hour?

Eclipse: by then, he would have captured Dad and taken him into the secret hideout he keeps under his ex-company. We need to hustle after that.

Me: uhhhh.... oooookaaayy......

Rosette: stupid Inderretta.... why can't he leave us ALONE?

Me: 'cause he's a crazy old fart.

Rosette: ah.

mechadragon13 on July 20, 2008, 11:47:00 AM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13Me: critic is right. he still has a grudge against eclipse and shadow......

Mikenno: *ear twitches and he closes his eyes* hmm...
Twilight: mik? you ok there?
Mikenno: *eyes snap open* i know where shadow is. at least, sort of.
Neo: where is he???
Mikenno: he's wherever he's living right now. he's lying in his bed. looks like he's trying to fall asleep.
Lightning: then we gotta go!!!
Shidako: i dont want to have to deal with ANOTHER bad demon!

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 20, 2008, 12:53:14 PM

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FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEndMe:*Mumbled to self* Knew it… 

Aria: I think we should go to Inderretta's base now… just in case. Better safe than sorry right??

TheGameArtCritic on July 21, 2008, 10:16:05 AM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticok, so at Mr. Inderretta's base thingy...

Mr. Inderretta: *laughs at Shadow, who is strapped to a hard, metalic table*

Shadow: what are YOU so cheery about, Devon?

Mr. Inderretta: oh, it's a happy day for me... Eclipse lost Condemned! I found out when i met him! I couldn't sense any bit of him! *he laughs maniacally, once more, then suddenly goes serious, and leans over Shadow* but I still have that remaining bit of Condemned... *holds up the blue vial, and swirls the contents* just enough so that you don't have Condemned's personality, but plenty of his HATE... *dumps the contents into a styringe* *gets in Shadow's face* lets see how you deal with UNcontrollable power... ahahahahaha!

Shadow: *spits in Mr. Inderretta's face*

Mr. Inderretta: *sputters a bit, then glares at Shadow* I'll get back to you in fifteen minutes... *walks off*

MEANWHILE

Eclipse: arighty... Mr. Inderretta's base... uh... I don't know where that is.

Me: neh. But WE do. We went there before. YO TWILLY!

mechadragon13 on July 22, 2008, 5:56:02 AM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13Twilight: GOT IT! *turns daemon* everyone in mish's plane! i'll lead.

Me: kay!! *calls the plane and everyone gets in*

Mikenno: *closes his eyes again...*
Lightning: mikkenno? you ok there?
Mikenno: *opens eyes* we dont have much time. we must hurry!

Me: is everyone in???

TheGameArtCritic on July 22, 2008, 6:14:54 AM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticEveryone: YEAAAHHHH!!!!

Men whial:

Mr. Inderretta: *comes back with the styringe* alright... now then Shadow... lets play in God's domain...

Shadow: hmph. You still haven't told me what you'll be doing exactly, Devon...

Mr. Inderretta: why spoil the suprise... *clears a patch of fur on Shadow's arm, and aims the needle* Oh. If you really want me to tell you... then... well... *leans over and whispers in Shadow's ear, making Shadow's eyes widen. Then he quickly injects Shadow with Condemned's contents*

Shadow: *gasps* NO! It's Condem - *he becomes dazed, and unfocused. His eyes glaze over as tiny blue tenticals the size of veins start to engulf him*

*Mr. Inderretta's insane laughter fills the room and echoes in the darkness*

mechadragon13 on July 22, 2008, 6:57:44 AM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13Mikenno: *le-gasp!! then..... teh face of despair* we're too late.....

Me: NO! it's never too late. TWILIGHT! LETS GET A MOVE-ON!!! *takes off*

DaemonTwilight: GAWT IT!!! *runs like hell!!!!!!* *thinking* oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god, oh god!!! *wills herself to go faster* come on, twilly, RUN!!!!

TheGameArtCritic on July 22, 2008, 7:30:17 AM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *shakes Mikenno like HELL* WHADDAYA MEAN WE'RE TOO LATE!! WE CAN'T BE TOO LATE!!!! *sits down again, and is twitchy and jumpy*

Me: oh geez... he's scared of what his Dad may have become...

Eclipse: SHUT UP!!! *is about to hit me, then doesn't*

Me: oooohh...

mechadragon13 on July 22, 2008, 7:43:54 AM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13Mikenno: *shakes head* we may have some time....... inderetta has injected a leftover piece of condemned he found into your father, eclipse.
Neo: YOU HAVE TO FLY FASTER MISH!!!

Me: i can only fly as fast as twilight can run!!! she's the only one that knows where the base is!! *on the speaker* Twilight!!! can you speed up a bit more????

DaemonTwilight: 8roars back* IM TRYING!!!! RAAAAWRGGGGH!!!! *wings sprout out* O.O whoa. thats a new one. okay... here goes!!!!! *leaps into the air and flies up to where the plane is* ALLRIGHT!!!! *RAAAWRG!!!! she flaps her wings powerfullly and she accelerates greatly*

Me: WHOA!! now we're talking!!! hold ooon.......... *accelerates the plane to keep up with twilight*

Everyone else: *fall back against their seats from the acceleration*

TheGameArtCritic on July 22, 2008, 7:49:04 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *whimpers, and holds on for dear life*

Rosette: *yelling over the roar of the engine* YOU FLY ALL THE TIME WITH YOUR EX-WINGS!! WHY ARE YOU SCARED OF A JET??

Eclipse: I DON'T KNOW! LEAVE ME ALONE!

Me: EEEEEEELLLLLLL OOOOOOOHHHHHHHH EEEEEEEEELLLLLLLL!!!!!

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on July 22, 2008, 10:16:40 AM

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FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEndAria: This is FUUUUUUN!!!!!

Me: Our Father who art in Heaven, hallowed be thy name *Continues with prayer*

Aria: Let's go FASTER!!!

TheGameArtCritic on July 23, 2008, 1:11:20 AM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *panicked* NO!!!!

mechadragon13 on July 19, 2008, 4:41:41 AM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13Me: *to rosette* critic's right. we cant do anything.

Shidako: well??
Mikenno: i am a..... *turns away* i cannot say it. not now. not here.
SHidako: *narrows eyes* hmph. *thinking* what could he be that could be so bad to say? unless....... *eyes widen* is it possible...?

Acid: *gets up painfully* agh....... well, looks like all we can do is take a break....... i'm goin' over to Lightning and Twilight.
Vera: ok. *helps aacid walk over there*

Neo: *stays with mish* ....... i never thought i'd get involved in somthing like this.
Me: me neither. i mean, sure we fight egghead every once in a while, but fighting to save our friend's consciousness?
Neo: yeah, i know. this is big.
Me: wanna go over to everyone else?
Neo: *nods and walks to where the others are*

Lightning: ........ i hope eclipse gets through ok.
Twilight: *clings to his arm* he will. we have to believe that.
Acid+Vera: *sit down next to them*
Neo+Mish: *sit down also*

TheGameArtCritic on July 19, 2008, 6:15:17 AM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCritici replied wrong XD

*teh battle is huge, it goes on for a while, but finally,in a fight for victory, Eclipse manages to pin Condemned down*

Condemned: but... how? I'm stronger then you... I could easily beat you BEFORE...

Eclipse: that was before. This is now...

Condemned: I won't give up!! I CAN'T!! I need your body! I need it or I'll die!!!

Eclipse: that's really too bad...

Condemned: no... no no no....

Eclipse: your time is up. It's over. Go. Now.

Condemned: i... i... *closes eyes* maybe... maybe i really do need to leave...

Me: he won?

Condemned: *turns into his spirit form* I'm too weak to keep fighting... I must go... *fades away*

teh room: *turns white again*

Eclipse: *sends everyone, and himself, back into the real world*

*there is a SHHHHHIIIINNGGGGG noise. It's done. It's over*

In teh real world: *Eclipse gets up. The tenticals in his back sink into his fur. His straight jacket seemed to have ripped off him during his mental battle. Condemned is no where to be seen*