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Really Really Cute

Really Really Cute

Really Really Cute by TheGameArtCritic
Really Really Cute by TheGameArtCritic

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TheGameArtCritic
le-gasp! This is adorable!

Oh. By the way, I hate beds now. I REALLY hate beds now. Is that a bed over there? I have a machine gun in my hands, you say? How about i put that to use, hmmm?

I did this on the plane ride back home from DISNEYWOOOOOORRRLLLD XO

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Category Comics » Sonic the Hedgehog » Fan Characters (OC's) » Hybrids
Date Submitted
Views 14488
Favorites... 2
Vote Score 5
Comments 4558
Media Graphite pencil
Time Taken 2 hours (i hate beds)
Reference none (i hate beds)

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mechadragon13 on October 23, 2008, 9:25:22 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: whoa, what the f***?!

Skye: *gets there* are we too late??

Lightning: *sees teh hole* where's eclipse??

TheGameArtCritic on October 23, 2008, 12:41:39 PM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: captured. Angel. Brain washing. Yeah.

Rosette: *lets out a scream of frustration*

mechadragon13 on October 24, 2008, 6:48:42 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: grrr..... that angel is seriously begging us to rip his wings off!!!!
SKye: whoa, violent much?
Twilight: *PISSED OFF GLARE* you wouldnt know, you just got here.
Skye: *flinch*

TheGameArtCritic on October 24, 2008, 8:38:58 AM

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TheGameArtCriticme: *quickly* she was kidding, Twilight. No need to snarl at the tween. Angel's just... confused... much like Eclipse when he became evil... he doesn't know what he's doing anymore. He's just acting on the command of the demakarr.

mechadragon13 on October 24, 2008, 12:13:02 PM

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mechadragon13Twilight: these demekarrs are starting to piss me off. does this one have i name so i can curse it??
Skye: *facepalm* *thinking* looks like she hasnt changed XP

Me: chill, twilly.

Lightning: you seriously need to cool it.....
Twilight: ..... *deep breath*

Me: it takes lightning to get her to chill.... XD

TheGameArtCritic on October 24, 2008, 12:32:39 PM

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TheGameArtCriticme: yay Lightning! You're like an anxiety drug! ^^ Also, i don't know if this demakarr has a name... some demakarrs are completelly mindless and act on instinct only, therefore, they do not have advanced brainwaves. I think Angel's demakarr is only half intellegent, and has convinced iteslef, and Angel, that it is god.

mechadragon13 on October 24, 2008, 12:56:50 PM

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mechadragon13Me: ah.

Twilight: dammit.
Lightning: twilly.....
Twilight: *sighs*
Skye: whoa, its like MAGIC.
Lightning ^^;
Twilight: -_-

TheGameArtCritic on October 24, 2008, 1:00:22 PM

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TheGameArtCriticRosette: everything is SUCKING again!!! WHY????

Me: because I jump at the chance of mass destruction.

Rosette: *slaps me*

mechadragon13 on October 24, 2008, 1:03:24 PM

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mechadragon13Twilight: *two eye color glare* >:(
Lightning: twilly.....
Twilight: ....... *normal eye color glare* >:(
Lightning: close enough..... -_-;
SKye: you mean YOU did all this???

TheGameArtCritic on October 24, 2008, 1:06:43 PM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: technically yes, but that's because I'm a malevolent horror/drama writer. I NEED this stuff to happen to my characters. Rping is a way of practice ^^

Rosette: *slaps me harder* i don't like you, Critic.

Me: oh they never do ^^

mechadragon13 on October 24, 2008, 1:26:43 PM

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mechadragon13SKye: ...................
Twilight: ...............i hate drama.
Lightning: *sigh*

TheGameArtCritic on October 24, 2008, 1:35:01 PM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: don't hate me, Skye...

Rosette: ... oh gawwwwd.....

mechadragon13 on October 24, 2008, 1:47:56 PM

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mechadragon13Skye: i dont hate. i seem to be incapable of hate.... *sigh* never been able to hold a grudge against anyone for more that an hour or so....

TheGameArtCritic on October 24, 2008, 1:54:14 PM

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TheGameArtCriticme: well that's good... because... you know... it's my fault that Luminos has to go through so much pain and suffering... and stuff... I thought you'd hate me for that...

mechadragon13 on October 24, 2008, 1:58:20 PM

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mechadragon13SKye: i dont hate you. i may dislike you for it, but never hate you.

TheGameArtCritic on October 24, 2008, 2:07:15 PM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: SKYE DO YOU LIKE LUMINOS?

mechadragon13 on October 24, 2008, 2:12:58 PM

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mechadragon13SKye: huh? where did THAT come from?!

Me: answer the question.

SKye: i..... *silence*
Lightning: that means yes.
SKye: no it doesnt!!!
Lightning: yes it does!!!
SKye: no it doesnt!!
Twilight: ooh, busted.... XD
SKye: -//////-

TheGameArtCritic on October 25, 2008, 6:22:49 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: haHA! That's AWESOME. Also, Lightning, you have the maturity of a 3rd grader.

Rosette: omg Skye, you liek Luminos WHUT?

mechadragon13 on October 26, 2008, 6:38:48 AM

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mechadragon13Lightning: shut up. -_-;
Twilight: *pokes him* he gets that a lot XD
Lightning: *GLARE* stfu.
Twilight: ^^
SKye: ..... *turs RED* ehh... umm... uhh.... yes.

TheGameArtCritic on October 26, 2008, 6:48:40 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEveryone: SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

mechadragon13 on October 26, 2008, 7:00:16 AM

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mechadragon13Skye: *turns even more red* sure, scream it to the world while you're at it!!

Lightning+Twilight: *take a huge breath, then scream* SKYE LIKES LUMINOS!!!!!!

Skye: NOT LITERALLY!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!! if he heard that..... *blush*

TheGameArtCritic on October 26, 2008, 7:05:41 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: don't worry 'bout it, Skye ^^ methinks Luminos likes you too.............

Rosette: omgrly???

mechadragon13 on October 26, 2008, 7:21:10 AM

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mechadragon13Skye: r-really??
Twilight: someone's enthusiastic. XD
Skye: shut uuup!!! *red* i hope mom and dad dont find out....


me: actually they kinda----

Skye: STFU!!!

Me: O.O SHE SWORE!!!!!! XDDDD

TheGameArtCritic on October 26, 2008, 7:25:04 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: omfg. E rating. XDDDDDDDDDDDD also, Lumie isn't here right now. I managed to knock him out and teleport him to his room because I thought Eclipse would come out... and i was afraid it would scare Lumie... and... well... you're safe for now, Skye XD

mechadragon13 on October 26, 2008, 7:37:32 AM

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mechadragon13Skye: phew.....
Lightning: ....we're gonna teeeeeeeeeeell.
Skye: O.O you wouldnt!!!
Twilight: we would..... >:)
SKye: no, no please, dont!!! >//////<

me: cut it out you two.....

TheGameArtCritic on October 26, 2008, 7:43:57 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: yeah. Honestly. Let them fall together (giggle) themselves.

Rosette: WHEE!!! HE'S ONLY 10 AND HE'S ATTRACTING GIRLS!

mechadragon13 on October 26, 2008, 8:04:11 AM

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mechadragon13Skye: -/////////////-

Me: awwww... she blushezzz....

Skye: ugh, leave me alone..... this is exactly why i didnt wanna tell anyone!! GAWD.

Me: reminds me of the Mobius: 25 Years Later comic when lara su (knux's kid) and riki-lee (i have no idea who's kid totally spilled that salma (espio's kid) had been going out with rutan (lien-da's kid) XDDDDD it was FUNNY..... and in the one before that, lien-da had gone ballistic when she found out. apparently neither of them told their parents XDDDDD

TheGameArtCritic on October 26, 2008, 10:41:25 AM

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TheGameArtCriticme: omg that's funny! What # is that?...... also, i realized that the name "lien-da" is a play-off of "Linda". Hah.

Luminos: *IS SUDDENLY RIGHT BEHIND ME* i DON'T...LIKE...BEING...HIT WITH BASEBALL BATS!

Me: hiiiii Lumieeee.... heheh...

Luminos: Critic! You are guilty for child abuse!

Me: aww... dang...

Policemen: RAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH *foam* *takes me away*

Me: DON'T WORRY GAIS!!!! I'LL BUST OUT EASILY FROM TELEPORTATIOOOOOOON!!!

mechadragon13 on October 27, 2008, 2:23:27 AM

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mechadragon13Everyone: *sweatdrop*

Me: oh jeez, not again XDDDDD

SKye: *manages not to look at luminos, tilting her head so her bangs hide her face*

TheGameArtCritic on October 27, 2008, 9:00:19 AM

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TheGameArtCriticLuminos: Skye? What's up?

Rosette: *snicker*

meanwhile

Policeman: you are guilty of CHILD ABUSE!

Me: but i didn't MURDER hiiimmmm....

Policeman: BUT YOU COMMITED CHILD ABUSE.

Me: well i -

Policeman: CHILD ABUSE!!!

Me: YOU BOTHER ME!!! AND THIS PLACE BOTHERS ME!!! RAAAAAAAAHHH!!! *turns everyone into pre-evolved rabbits, then teleports back*

mechadragon13 on October 28, 2008, 7:51:22 AM

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mechadragon13Skye: *blushes red under her bangs, but still hiding it* oh nothing. nothing at all.
Twilight+Lightning: *start humming that song that goes "skye and lumi, sitting in a tree..."*
Skye: shut up, you guys!!!!

Me: you're gonna end up giving yourself away XDDDDDDD

TheGameArtCritic on October 28, 2008, 8:49:34 AM

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TheGameArtCriticLuminos: are you sure? You seem nervous...

Me: Cute.

mechadragon13 on October 28, 2008, 9:04:28 AM

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mechadragon13Me: heck yes. XD

Skye: umm.... *runs off at 500+ mph*

Twilight: *singsongy* follow her~

TheGameArtCritic on October 28, 2008, 9:40:46 AM

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TheGameArtCriticLuminos: um... ok... sure. *starts running*

Me: faster.

Luminos: i can't go any faster than this.

Me: sure you can. You just never channeled it. ^^

Luminos: wha -

Me: WHIPPING BOY! WHIPPING BOY!!! *smacks him with a towel*

Luminos: YEEP!!! *goes 800mph*

mechadragon13 on October 28, 2008, 10:05:39 AM

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mechadragon13SKye: EEP! *hides somewhere*

TheGameArtCritic on October 28, 2008, 10:12:06 AM

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TheGameArtCriticLuminos: *screeches to a halt* Skye? Where are you?

meanwhile

Me: oh yeah. getting the two of them alone is AWESOME.

mechadragon13 on October 28, 2008, 10:18:51 AM

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mechadragon13Me: omfg irony. ((lol twilly told him to follow her XDDDD oh, if only she knew..... XDDD))

Skye: O.O *is hiding behind a bush, and is about to move when she cracks a twig* shoot.

TheGameArtCritic on October 28, 2008, 10:25:09 AM

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TheGameArtCriticLuminos: *he turns to the source of the sound, and finds Skye* whatcha doing there? And why did you run away from me?

meanwhile

Me: omg you're right.

mechadragon13 on October 29, 2008, 3:09:47 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: hhm what?

MEANWHILEZ

Skye: umm...... heheheh. funny story actually...

TheGameArtCritic on October 29, 2008, 9:09:09 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: nothing special. Just... y'know... about the irony to all of this XD

meanwhile

Luminos: I've got time.

mechadragon13 on October 29, 2008, 10:20:55 AM

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mechadragon13Skye: ummm..... *starts blushing again and runs off again*

TheGameArtCritic on October 29, 2008, 10:30:43 AM

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TheGameArtCriticLuminos: agh no! Not again! *follows her*

Pre-Evolved wolf: *FOLLOWS/HUNTS THEM*

meanwhile

me: ruh-roh. They gots trouble...

mechadragon13 on October 29, 2008, 10:42:40 AM

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mechadragon13Me: i'm sure they can take care of themselves....

MEANWHILE

Skye: *suddendly stops, ears twitching for sounds*

TheGameArtCritic on October 29, 2008, 10:47:05 AM

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TheGameArtCriticP.E Wolf: *freezes in it's tracks*

Luminos: *catches up the Skye* agah... god! Stop running away like that!

meanwhile

Me: lol PE wolf...

mechadragon13 on October 29, 2008, 11:13:04 AM

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mechadragon13Skye: *being evolved from an animal that could be hunted, she freezes, alert for any noises* shh..... we're not alone, lumi.....

TheGameArtCritic on October 29, 2008, 11:41:49 AM

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TheGameArtCriticLuminos: what do you mean? Hm? *ears perk up, picking up the wolf's low breathing* oh...

PE Wolf: *takes a light step closer*

meanwhile

Me: *hums the Jaws music*

mechadragon13 on October 29, 2008, 11:58:21 AM

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mechadragon13Skye: *is completely frozen, not knowing whether to run or stand and fight*

MEANWHILE

Me: ooh, "fight or flight" in action ^^ yay biology ^^

TheGameArtCritic on October 29, 2008, 12:10:46 PM

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TheGameArtCriticme: of course, Luminos would fight the wolf, despite Skye's fear. Not only is he 1/3 predetor, he's got demakarr in his blood. It's gonna kick in.

meanwhile

PE Wolf: *leaps out of the brush with a snarl, baring it's gleaming yellow fangs, ready to sink them into the warm flesh of a mobian*

Luminos: SKYE! *irises NOT EYES turn red, and in the same time it takes someone to blink, he carries skye out of the way*

PE Wolf: *smashes his head into a tree, then turns around and snarls*

Luminos: *growls scary-low back at the wolf, his fur bristling. His hands turn into Vorace claws*

mechadragon13 on October 29, 2008, 12:23:42 PM

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mechadragon13SKye: O.O *watches as luminos prepares to defend her, amazed at his bravery and strength* lumi....

Meanwhilezez.

Me: well, so is skye, she's got a bit of wolf in her, but looks like she didnt get the instinct.....

TheGameArtCritic on October 29, 2008, 12:39:06 PM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: well THAT sucks XD looks like Luminos beat her to it.

meanwhile

PE Wolf: *charges at Luminos*

Luminos: *catches the wolf easily, and throws it to the side. He snarls at it with a scary double-voice, but still seems to have just enough control over himself to know that he should be protecting Skye, and not hurting her*

mechadragon13 on October 29, 2008, 12:45:14 PM

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mechadragon13Skye: *starts getting a little scared* *thinking* get it together, skye, it's just luminos., he won't hurtcha.... oh comeon, what am i doing just sitting here?? i should do something!! but if i get in the way i might get hurt..... grr... stop being such a baby skye!!!

MEANWHILE!

Me: lol she's just like twilly.... skye and her mental arguments...... rawr

TheGameArtCritic on October 29, 2008, 1:46:26 PM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: we all get those... hers are just more extreme... XDDD

meanwhile

Luminos: rrrAAARRRGH!! *tackles the wolf*

PE Wolf: *jumps to the side, then leaps upon Luminos, pinning him down*

Luminos: *snarls in anger and frustration*

PE Wolf: *opens it's jaws, ready to sink it's teeth into Luminos' neck*

mechadragon13 on October 29, 2008, 2:19:02 PM

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mechadragon13SKye: LUMI!!!! *rams head-first into the wolf, knocking him against a tree* you stay away from him......

Me: OOH, we go a bit of wolf showiiiin'

TheGameArtCritic on October 29, 2008, 2:22:43 PM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: bam. Spicy.

meanwhile

Luminos: *gets up, and rubs the back of his head, grimacing* *he looks at Skye gratefully* <:)

mechadragon13 on October 10, 2008, 12:33:16 PM

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mechadragon13Skye: *is worried about luminos* okay then..... *walks over to critic*

Lightning: wonder how that kid'll take it?
Twilight: who knows? we only just met her.....

TheGameArtCritic on October 11, 2008, 3:34:42 PM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: Skye... Luminos isn't... really... LIKE other children... he's inherited something... a demon... from his father - his REAL father... you've met him... that black and white hedgebat from the sim room... the ghost, Eclipse... Well, this demon is a part of Luminos - a part of his BLOOD... and when he becomes angry, or scared, or as you've missed, summoned by Eclipse's demon, he... he becomes something... terrible...

G. Eclipse: *GUILT from the "inherited" part*

mechadragon13 on October 12, 2008, 11:10:22 AM

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mechadragon13Skye: ...........you arent kidding are you? wow....... that must be really hard on lumi....... wait, you said his "real" father. he has a "not real" father?

Twilight: *senses eclipse's guilt* dont feel bad eclipse, it's condemned's fault. will you ever get that?

TheGameArtCritic on October 12, 2008, 11:39:21 AM

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TheGameArtCriticG. Eclipse: *ears droop* <no...>

Me: Yes. Mikenno. Also, it's not too bad for Luminos because he doesn't remember anything that happened during his transformation. It would be just like being normal one second, then waking up somewhere else with aching arms, legs, and a really bad headache.

Luminos: *stirs a little* nnnnngh...

mechadragon13 on October 12, 2008, 11:51:33 AM

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mechadragon13Skye: oh....... it must be confusing, though... *ear twitches when she hears luminos move* hey, he's waking up!!

Twilight: eclipse........
Lightning: *goes to put a hand on eclipse's shoulder but hesitates because he's not sure if it will go through him or not. then he does it anyway* eclipse.... you need to understand that not everything is your fault.

TheGameArtCritic on October 12, 2008, 12:16:03 PM

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TheGameArtCriticLuminos: *his words are slurred* whaz goin' onnnn? Wha happened...?

G. Eclipse: <Luminos...>

Me: aye...

mechadragon13 on October 12, 2008, 12:19:53 PM

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mechadragon13Skye: *runs over to help him up* apparently it's a really long story..... are you ok?

TheGameArtCritic on October 12, 2008, 12:40:23 PM

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TheGameArtCriticLuminos: i... i don't know... *winces from his headache, and stands up, with Skye's help* thanks... *sways a bit, and almost falls back down, but catches himself*

Me: *whispers to Skye* he must never know what he is...

mechadragon13 on October 12, 2008, 12:50:35 PM

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mechadragon13Skye: *nods and supports luminos* lets see... *looks him over* you look ok on the outside.... does anything hurt on the inside?

TheGameArtCritic on October 13, 2008, 8:45:19 AM

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TheGameArtCriticLuminos: do you mean physically or mentally?

Me: well physically speaking, he has a headache.

Luminos: how do YOU know thaaaat??

Me: Artist.

Luminos: oh... -_-;;;

mechadragon13 on October 14, 2008, 2:32:04 AM

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mechadragon13Skye: both i guess.. heheh.

TheGameArtCritic on October 14, 2008, 8:30:20 AM

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TheGameArtCriticLuminos: um... I'm not CRAZY... but as Critic said before, I have a headache... and my arms and legs hurt... owwww...

mechadragon13 on October 15, 2008, 2:26:29 AM

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mechadragon13Skye: ok, then it seems like you'll be fine in a bit.... can you stand on your own?

TheGameArtCritic on October 15, 2008, 9:56:51 AM

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TheGameArtCriticLuminos: y-yeah...

Me: poor kid... has to go through this hell...

mechadragon13 on October 15, 2008, 10:23:26 AM

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mechadragon13Skye: *lets go of luminos, but stays nearby in case he stumbles again*

Twilight: *to lighting* she's a nice kid.
Lightning: yeah. reminds me of you.
Twilight: *blush*

Me: i think we should be heading back.

TheGameArtCritic on October 15, 2008, 10:33:44 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: i agree. It is getting darker. Let's go.

Luminos: *shivers, though not from the cold, and follows me out of the creepy ally that we were all in the whole time*

mechadragon13 on October 15, 2008, 11:06:11 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: .....its a little far..... *grins* anyone up for a ride?
Lightning: totally.

Me: ooh, fuuuun!!

Skye: ...what?

TheGameArtCritic on October 15, 2008, 11:16:59 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: *comes o an abrupt halt, causing Luminos to smash himself into me* O_O I LIKE RIDING ANIMALS.

Luminos: owww!... what?

mechadragon13 on October 16, 2008, 10:56:45 AM

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mechadragon13Me: XDDDDDD

Twilight: oh right, luminos and skye dont know....... ok, kids, dont get scared or nothin'. *slowly turns to her full daemon form*

Skye: w-whoah..... O.O

TheGameArtCritic on October 16, 2008, 12:45:20 PM

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TheGameArtCriticLuminos: YEEP! *hides behind me, then sticks his head out a little* T-twilight? y-y-you c-changed...

Me: yeah. Please do not fear her, or else we have two things to fear.

mechadragon13 on October 17, 2008, 3:19:01 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: *sits all doggy like and wags her tails back and forth, her tongue lolling out of her mouth* dont worry lumi, i wont hurtcha ^^

TheGameArtCritic on October 17, 2008, 8:46:27 AM

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TheGameArtCriticLuminos: *slowly comes out of his "hiding place" and walks to Twilight* s-sorry for getting all scared like that... It's just so shocking...

Me: aye.

mechadragon13 on October 19, 2008, 9:26:01 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: hey, imagine how I felt!! waking up from a nightmare one night, and looking like this.

Me: ohh, it was BAD. she freaked so badly she practically destroyed her room. and knuckles!

TheGameArtCritic on October 19, 2008, 12:13:16 PM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: Knuckles? 'Tis a little random...

Luminos: oh geez... I'm sorry...

mechadragon13 on October 20, 2008, 7:17:02 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: im used to it now. those goshdarn daemons wouldnt leave me alone.... *grins wolfishly* oh, but i showed them! they wont be bothering me anymore. not for a loooooong time.

Me: yeah, knux. he was unfortunately in the vicinity when he heard mostrous roars from her house. he went over there to check it out and nearly got his head bitten off. him and sonic both!! you'll see when i get to the fanfic...

TheGameArtCritic on October 20, 2008, 8:48:30 AM

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TheGameArtCriticme: niiiiiiice. I liek teh fanfics XD

Luminos: so you can control them now?

mechadragon13 on October 20, 2008, 8:50:57 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: completely. they're gonna stop bugging me in exchange for getting to stay in me.

TheGameArtCritic on October 20, 2008, 9:11:00 AM

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TheGameArtCriticLuminos: coolio ^^

Me: very XD

mechadragon13 on October 20, 2008, 9:41:26 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: *looks around: why are we still sitting here??? *lies flat on her belly so the others can climb on* it's time we get back!!
Lightning: YEAH! *jumps on* giddyup!! XD
Twilight: *rolls her eyes*
Lightning: just messin' with ya ^^

Me: LOLZ. *hops on*

TheGameArtCritic on October 20, 2008, 10:07:01 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEveryone: *gets on*

G. Eclipse: I guess I'll just... uh... walk.

mechadragon13 on October 20, 2008, 10:17:38 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: you could try getting on. theres room for one more.

TheGameArtCritic on October 20, 2008, 10:24:59 AM

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TheGameArtCriticG. Eclipse: <I couldn't anyway.> *holds up his transluscent hand*

Me: he'd fall right through Twilly, which would lead to extreme awkwardness.

mechadragon13 on October 20, 2008, 10:31:43 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: ....good point. see ya at base, then..... please keep your arms and legs inside the vehicle at all times while it is in motion. thank ya very much. *starts running*

Lightning: XDDDD

Me: classic twilly XD

TheGameArtCritic on October 20, 2008, 10:40:11 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!

Luminos: *ears bleed due to my high pitched scream* D8

meanwhile

G. Eclipse: *sigh* *starts walking*

mechadragon13 on October 20, 2008, 10:53:15 AM

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mechadragon13Lightning: ........... be right back. *jumps offa twilly*

Twilight: *keeps running* OKAYY!!

Lighting: *starts walking back to eclipse*

TheGameArtCritic on October 20, 2008, 11:01:33 AM

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TheGameArtCriticG. Eclipse: *sees Lightning* <oy Light'? whatcha doin' here?>

MEANWHILE

Me: *still* WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

Luminos: *hits me* O_O *looks shaken*

Me: awww... why did you -

Luminos: *in a scary double voice* SSSSSSTOP IIIIIIT.....

Me: oy! OK OK!!

mechadragon13 on October 20, 2008, 11:18:03 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: *slows down to a trot, but keeps moving* you ok there, lumi?

MEANWHILEZ

Lightning: i wasnt about to leave ya back here! pffft.

TheGameArtCritic on October 20, 2008, 11:22:13 AM

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TheGameArtCriticG. Eclipse: <thanks Lightning!> :)

meanwhile

Luminos: huh? I'm fine! ^^

Me: *shivering in fear, and hugging self* O_O

mechadragon13 on October 20, 2008, 11:28:28 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: ..... *speeds up again*

Lightning: hey, no problemo, 'clipse. c'mon, lets get back there. *heads back to the base*

TheGameArtCritic on October 20, 2008, 11:54:38 AM

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TheGameArtCriticG. Eclipse: :) *follows Lightning*

meanwhile

Me: *nervous about Lumie*

Luminos: *looks at the sky*

Me: *whispers to Mish* it seems that Vorace can still channel himself thorugh Luminos... we'll have to be careful of that...

mechadragon13 on October 20, 2008, 11:18:23 PM

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mechadragon13Me: *nods* i'll keep my eyes open.

Twilight: *hears what you said and nods also*

MEANWHILEZ

Skye: *suddendly pops up next to lightning* HI!
Lightning: WHOAH! *almost falls over* sheez!! where did YOU come from??
Skye: i got left behind ^^ so i get to walk back with you two ^^

TheGameArtCritic on October 21, 2008, 10:05:37 AM

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TheGameArtCriticG. Eclipse: <how can you see me...?>

meanwhile

Me: I fear Luminos may become more like his father, and grandfather if he lets himself get eaten away by guilt for any murders he may commit in the future.

Alt. Dimension Eclipse (we'll see more of him later): but murder is FUN!

Me: *pushes him off Twilly*

mechadragon13 on October 21, 2008, 11:13:22 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: what was that??

Me: oh nothing ^^

MEANWHIELZ

Skye: hmm? oh..... *stares hard at eclipse* that is rather odd...... arent you like, a ghost or something....? *is getting info from the other rp*

Lightnig: *confuzzled* you can see him? how....?

TheGameArtCritic on October 21, 2008, 11:16:35 AM

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TheGameArtCriticG. Eclipse: <i already asked that... or maybe she just didn't understand me...>

meanwhile

A.D. Eclipse: *glares at us as we run off, in his fancy red coat and pants from the Evil Eclipse sequence, which makes him HOT* i WILL return...

mechadragon13 on October 21, 2008, 11:33:39 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: *yells back at him* SCREW YOUUUUU!!

MEANWHILEZ

Skye: what did he just say? all i heard was unghghghg....
Lightning: i'd take thats as a no, eclipse... but how does she see you?

TheGameArtCritic on October 21, 2008, 11:36:16 AM

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TheGameArtCriticG. Eclipse: <i don't kn - AUUUUGH!!!!> *dissappears*

meanwhile

me: it's affecting all the other pics at different times.

Luminos: what is?

mechadragon13 on October 22, 2008, 2:58:20 AM

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mechadragon13Me: O.O oh jeez. TWILLY!!! WE GOTTA GET TO BASE, LIKE, RIGHT NOW!!!

Twilight: yes ma'am!!! HANG ON!!!!! *vroom 600mph*

MEANWHILE!!

Lightning: whoa, what the hell?!
Skye: we gotta move. *grabs lightning's wrist and runs towards base at like 500 mph*
Lightning: AAAAAAAAAH!!!! you're faaaast!!!!

TheGameArtCritic on October 22, 2008, 9:01:15 AM

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TheGameArtCriticmeanwhile at the base:

Eclipse: *claws his way out of the ground*

mechadragon13 on October 22, 2008, 9:30:24 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: *at the base* where to, mish?

Me: clipsy's grave!

Twilight: *?* okay.... *goes there* why here--- *notices the ground moving* how in the name of---- *starts digging, careful not to claw eclipse*

MEANWHILE

Lightning: could you slow down????
Skye: no chance, light. *speeds up*

TheGameArtCritic on October 23, 2008, 8:36:05 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: gah! *huff, huff*... phew... thanks, Twilight... *gets out* wow... this feels like deja vu... O_O... aaaand i feel Condemned... because of Lupe... aaaaand I'm also supposed to not be here... *poofgone*

PARADOX!

mechadragon13 on October 5, 2008, 10:05:01 AM

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mechadragon13Me: that was highly unexpected.

Twilight: can't believe, i'm sayin' this, but thanks!!
Blizagga: you pesky little demekarrrrr!!! *freezes her fur, spiking it out*

Me: ouch.

Fira: *pounces right towards twilight*
Twilight: *slides under her and kicks at her stomach*
Fira: *is kickes* OOF!

Me: PWN.

TheGameArtCritic on October 5, 2008, 11:36:06 AM

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TheGameArtCriticCondemned: *is impaled for the billionth time* RAARRRGH!!! God... I need Vorace...

Me: DON'T YOU DARE BRING HIM HERE CONDEMNED.

Condemned: maybe I will... *razzes me*

mechadragon13 on October 6, 2008, 7:25:23 AM

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mechadragon13Me: DONT EVEN THINK ABOUT IT CONDEMNED!!! do it and you'll have all three of them after you!!!

Twilight: *spindashes into fira, knocking her into blizagga, which in turn, knocks her out from under condemned* you're welcome!!!

Fira+Blizagga: *are now in a pile*
Fira: grrrr... *is trying to get blizagga to stop stabbing her* STOP THE FUR SPIKING!!
Blizagga: so-ree. *unspikes*

twilight: seriously, these two are REALLY uncoordinated. even heard of teamwork?

TheGameArtCritic on October 6, 2008, 8:38:31 AM

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TheGameArtCriticCondemned: apparently not... *dark chuckle*

Me: Vorace is not welcome here...

Condemned: he's MY offspring too!

Me: well... yeeeaaahhh...

Condemned: then I have every right to be with him... <3

Me: -o-;;;

mechadragon13 on October 6, 2008, 8:41:43 AM

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mechadragon13Me: *sweatdrop+facepalm* werg......

twilight: who's vorace? *eyes narrow* you're hiding something, condemned.......

Fira: HA!! it took you that long to realize?? *finally rolls blizagga off her*
Blizagga: oof. *stands up* heh. silly litle hybrid....

TheGameArtCritic on October 6, 2008, 9:03:30 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: TRICKS ARE FOR KIDS 8DDDDDDDDDDDDD

Condemned: no...

Me: :C

Condemned: He WILL come... I have summoned him...

mechadragon13 on October 7, 2008, 3:26:45 AM

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mechadragon13Fira+Blizagga: *snap their heads towards condemned*
Fira: you did NOT.
Blizagga: you have asked for your destruction, condemned!!!
Fira: we will not let you escape with your nonexistent life.

Twilight: what?? summoned who?? who's vorace?? whats going on???

Me: ...umm.... you know luminos?

twilight: yeaaaah...... what about him?

Me: umm.... *voice cracks* critic?

TheGameArtCritic on October 7, 2008, 9:56:04 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: i could never tell her... not without getting my face sliced off...

Condemned: he's hear... *nasty laugh*

Luminos: *walks in like a zombie, eyes full of fear* i... i don't know why I'm here... why did i...?

Condemned: kekekeke... *eyes flash brighty*

Luminos: *yelps and holds his head in pain. His eyes suddenly glow red and bleed. His mouth dribbles blood as well. The blood is darker than any other's, and, when coming into contact with his body, turn into blue tenticals that crawl, and squirm up him*

mechadragon13 on October 7, 2008, 10:22:19 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: oh my god, LUMINOS!!!!! *faces condemned, eyes full of rage* what. did. you. DO?

Fira: oh it wasnt him, little one.
Blizagga: it was eclipse. it's his fault.
Fira: he passed the gene.
Blizagga: he is to blame.

Twilight: but it's still condemned's fault!! ITS STILL HIS FAULT!!!! *is tearing up, but doesnt notice in her rage* YOU'RE LYING!!!!

Fira: and if we are?
Blizagga: if you attack condemned, you will lose your only ally.
Fira: you will have to face four opponents with no help, rather than two opponents with two others aiding.
Blizagga: *singsong* confliiiiiict!

Me: ...damn them.

TheGameArtCritic on October 7, 2008, 10:29:41 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: my god... they're good at manipulation. I hope this doesn't lead to any unessisary (spelled wrong) injuries...

Luminos: AUUUUGH!!!! *becomes completelly engulfed in the tenticals. He makes a gurgling sound but then stops struggling and slumps over. The tenticals shapen into the form of Condemned's part-son, Vorace. His malicious eyes open. He snarls, a snarl only a wild animal could make. He is ready to kill*

Me: oh dang... O_O

mechadragon13 on October 7, 2008, 10:39:10 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: NO! NO! CONDEMNED, YOU SON OF A B****!!!

Fira+Blizagga: *are laughing uncontrollably*

Me: .........she wont bring herself to ally with condemned after seeing this atrocity....... twilight is screwed. unless she can get the demons on her side, this'll end up being a three-way fight with twilight at a disadvantage...

TheGameArtCritic on October 7, 2008, 10:51:51 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: i doubt she can sway them...

Condemned: gahahahahaha!!

Me: I as well doubt that Condemned can keep such a wild animal at bay for long...

Condemned: geheh...heh... what?...

Vorace: *disappears and reappears attacking Condemned like crazy*

Condemned: GRAAA!!! WHAT??? NO! YOU WILL FOLLOW MY ORDERS!!!

Me: the beast cannot be tamed.

Vorace: *disappears and reappears on Condemned's left, then again, to his right, then infront, then behind, then finally the front again and slashes upwards, leaving a bloody mark on the demon*

Condemned: NRRAAARRRGH!!! *clutches at his chest*

Me: Vorace is a demon of speed. He can move so fast that it would SEEM like he's using chaos control, when really, he's become so fast that the naked eye cannot catch him.

mechadragon13 on October 7, 2008, 11:12:10 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: *while condemned was busy with vorace, she had spinballed into fira, then blizagga, knocking them into a heap near condemned and vorace*

Fira: *is trying to get untangled from blizagga* RRRAGH!!
Blizagga: why do we always end up in this position?

TheGameArtCritic on October 7, 2008, 11:16:28 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: lawl.

Vorace: *gets bored with Condemned and attacks Fira and Blizzaga*

Me: oh.... oh god...

mechadragon13 on October 7, 2008, 11:31:39 AM

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mechadragon13Fira: AAH! *untangles herself from blizagga, leaving her exposed to vorace*
Blizagga: FIRAAAAA!!!!

Twilight: *IS RIGHT BEHIND CONDEMNED!* so, how're YOU doing?? *spinball!!!*

TheGameArtCritic on October 7, 2008, 12:13:01 PM

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TheGameArtCriticVorace: *impales Fira, and twists his claw to get it out. But he doesn't stop there. He then tries to EAT Fira!!!!!*

Condemned: *gets knocked to the ground, and is too weak to get up* nnnnngh... *weak hiss* sssstoooop......

Me: ouch.

mechadragon13 on October 8, 2008, 3:02:08 AM

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mechadragon13Fira: RAAAGH!!! GET THIS THING OFF ME!!!
Blizagga: *is rolling on the floor laughing* and stop enjoing this?? HA!!!

Twilight: ......*gets into the spinball again, but instead of attacking condemned, she rams right into vorace*

Me: WHOAAAH!! unexpecteeed!!!

TheGameArtCritic on October 8, 2008, 8:49:07 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: SHE'S HELPING FIRAAAAAA????????? WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT??????

Vorace: RAAAAAGH!! *disappears in the middle of the spinball attack, and is suddenly to Twilly's left, where he strikes at her with his CHEST FUR 8D tenticals*

Me: TWILLAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!

mechadragon13 on October 8, 2008, 10:45:15 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: *grabs the tentacles in mid-strike, then throws him a decent distance away. her eyes glow with a newfound power* this is MY mind. i do whatever i want. and right now, i want you all OUT!!! *goes into a form similar to the daemon form, but it is white and gray, with feathered wings and sapphire eyes* OUT!! NOWW!!! *swipes at blizagga, then bites down on fira's shouler*

Me: oh my god..... she remembered the incident in eclipse's mind!!!!

TheGameArtCritic on October 8, 2008, 2:39:44 PM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: SHE FOUND HER INNER ULTIMATE POWAH!!!! XDDDDDDDDDD

Vorace and Condemned: *get sent out*

Vorace: *looks tired now that he's outside Twilight's mind. He falls over on the ground and becomes an unconcious Luminos. Blood stains the under-side of his eyes*

Condemned: *gets sent shooting out, and crashes into a wall*

mechadragon13 on October 9, 2008, 8:08:09 AM

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mechadragon13OUTSIDE!!!

Twilight: *reverts to the regular aquablue daemon form*

Me: she's regaining control!!! :D

INSIDE!!!

Twilight: *knocks the daemons to the floor, and pins them down like mufasa with the hyenas* grrrrrrrrrrr...
Fira: well, well, well. someone's all grown up!
Blizagga: pfft. please.
Twilight: *snarls at them, and they fall silent* you two have caused me nothing but misery for the last seven years of my LIFE!! you two deserve to get kicked out. to become shapeless spirits!! weak, powerless!!!

TheGameArtCritic on October 9, 2008, 8:36:10 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: WAIT TWILLAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYY!!!!! Isn't it that if you kick them out, they become stronger?

G. Eclipse: <a good point.>

Condemned: hissssss! *flies back into Lupe*

mechadragon13 on October 9, 2008, 9:19:39 AM

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mechadragon13Me: not if they get kicked. they have to break out to be powerful.

Twilight: well?! do you have anything to say for yourselves??
Fira: .....
Blizagga: .... *sticks her tongue out at twilight*
Twilight: *snarls* do that again and you wont have a tongue.
Blizagga: *hastily pulls her tongue back in*
Fira: i say, we ARE feeling violent today.
Twilight: no, you think? so... what do you say? do you wanna get kicked?? or will you agree to stay quiet?!

Me: ooh, nice choices.

TheGameArtCritic on October 9, 2008, 10:14:25 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: verily. XD

G. Eclipse: <I'd love to see how this turns out...>

mechadragon13 on October 9, 2008, 10:30:38 AM

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mechadragon13Fira+Blizagga: .......
Fira: what do you mean by stay quiet?
Twilight: what i mean is that you will not try to take me over again, you will not talk out loud in my head unless i ask for advice, and you will NOT look into my memories.
Blizagga: and what do we get in return eh?
Twilight: ...... you get to stay.

Me: oh no she didnt!!!

TheGameArtCritic on October 9, 2008, 10:39:26 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: WOOT! WOOT! SHE SO DID!!! XDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

G. Eclipse: <You get what you get, Daemons...>

mechadragon13 on October 9, 2008, 10:51:30 AM

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mechadragon13Fira+Blizagga: *look at each other, then back at twilight*
Fira: fine. we'll stay quiet.
Blizagga: but remember this- you need us as much as we need you.
Twilight: *regretfully* ... i know. *lets them up*

TheGameArtCritic on October 9, 2008, 11:00:15 AM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticMe: you did awesomely, Twilly! ^^

G. Eclipse: <i agree.>

mechadragon13 on October 9, 2008, 11:30:32 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: you better keep your promise.

Fira+Blizagga: *dip their heads in response, then they fade away*

Twilight: *small smile, then she closes her eyes and collapses to the ground*

OUTSIDE!!!

Twilight: ugh..... *return to normal*

Me: she's baaaaack!!! *runs over*

TheGameArtCritic on October 9, 2008, 2:12:49 PM

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TheGameArtCriticLupe: *has awaken from unconciousness* Twilight?

G. Eclipse: ...

Me: whee-hee! She did it! :D

mechadragon13 on October 9, 2008, 2:15:28 PM

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mechadragon13Twilight: oww.... *tries to sit up* my head..... *grins painfully* heheh. i showed those daemons, didnt i?

Me: HELL YES YOU DID!! 8D

Lightning: *has been silent the whole time* .......welcome back, twilly. *relieved smile*
Twilight: *smiles back*

TheGameArtCritic on October 9, 2008, 2:26:03 PM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: AND THEN THEY MAKE OUT..... right?

G. Eclipse: <it depends on them.>

Lupe: *wants to see 'some action'*

mechadragon13 on October 9, 2008, 2:35:07 PM

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mechadragon13Lightning: *extends a hand towards twilight to help her up, a wide grin on his face*
Twilight: *mimics his grin and accepts the hand*
Lightning: *yanks her up and pulls her into a tight hug*
Twilight: *returns the hug*
Lightning: youscared me there for a while you know?
Twilight: i know.... im sorry, light....

Me: lupe's gonna be disappointed. these two are the type f couple that if you see them walking down the street, you'd think they were just friends. they dont do couplesy things in public ^^

TheGameArtCritic on October 10, 2008, 8:50:32 AM

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TheGameArtCriticLupe: DAMNIT!

Me: too bad, ya little perv...

G. Eclipse: :) *is glad that all is well*

mechadragon13 on October 10, 2008, 11:01:48 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: *lets go of lightning* whoo. that was some CRAZY stuff in there....
Lightning: i imagine....

Me: umm... guys? what about lumiiiiiii?

TheGameArtCritic on October 10, 2008, 11:06:56 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: Luminos will be fine... he's just tired.

Luminos: *still unconcious*

G. Eclipse: <thank god...>

mechadragon13 on October 10, 2008, 11:26:05 AM

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mechadragon13Me: *phew* thats good to hear.......

Twilight: yeah after seeing him in that state.....
Lightning: ....how bad was it?
twilight: bad.

TheGameArtCritic on October 10, 2008, 11:44:09 AM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticMe: he's much more animalistic in that form. He's also fast. Liek, REALLY fast. Liek, 900mph fast.

G. Eclipse: <:(

mechadragon13 on October 10, 2008, 11:58:41 AM

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mechadragon13Lightning: wow, thats REAL fast. not even sonic can beat him like that!
twilight: yeah, it's freaky.

Skye: *POOF ZOOMS IN!!* hey, neo sent me to check on you guys! *sees twilight and lightning and has a whoa, this is awkward look on her face for a split second, then hides it* is everyone---- *gets cut off when she sees luminos* omigosh!! what happened to him?!

TheGameArtCritic on October 10, 2008, 12:06:06 PM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: eeeerrrrrrrr...... uuuuhhhhhh....... should we tell herrrrr??? it may scare herrrrrrrr.......

G. Eclipse: <i don't know...>

mechadragon13 on October 10, 2008, 12:22:32 PM

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mechadragon13Me: she wasnt scared when we explained the thing with eclipse, we could try.....

Twilight+Lightning: *look at each other in concern*

TheGameArtCritic on October 10, 2008, 12:24:18 PM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticMe: *sigh* alrighty... Skye? Will you come here a moment?

G. Eclipse: *sad*

mechadragon13 on September 29, 2008, 9:29:40 AM

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mechadragon13OUTSIDE!!!

Twilight: *eart twitches, as if she had heard critic*

MIND!!!

Twilight: *ear twitches* huh....?

Fira: weakling. *heals the hole in her body, then starts to circle around condemned*

Blizagga: RAGH! *is stabbed* heheheheheh..... *freezes the tentacle in place, making it impossible to unattatch from her* looks like the little demon is stuck. poor him. *laughs maniacally, then grabs the tentacle and tugs it hard, pulling eclipse-condemned towards her outstretched talons*

TheGameArtCritic on September 29, 2008, 9:42:16 AM

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TheGameArtCriticCondemned: *glares darkly at Fira. His hands begin to glow and pulse with dark energy*

Condemned-Eclipse: *grabs the claws and uses them to cut the tentical off. Sure, it hurts, but he needs to feel pain in order to live*

mechadragon13 on September 29, 2008, 10:27:21 AM

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mechadragon13Blizagga: masochist. *throws the severed tentacle at him and heals* emo kid.

Fira: *still pacing around him, her paws start to glow with red flames*

Twilight: *thinking* i have to do something..... i HAVE to... but i cant fight both condemned and the daemons without killing myself!! what do i do? what do i do???

TheGameArtCritic on September 29, 2008, 1:10:47 PM

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TheGameArtCriticme: yes i can read your thoughts. Literally. Twilly... you need to fight YOUR true enemy. Don't bother with Condemned. Go for the two MONSTERS that have been making your life miserable from day one. Condemned won't interfere. I promise.

Condemned: *shoots a huge energy blast at Fira like a hyperbeam on steroids*

Condemned-Eclipse: I'm not emo... it's just... dead people can't feel pain, can they?

mechadragon13 on September 30, 2008, 2:35:10 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: critic? but...... if i fight them i'm sure to lose... i mean, look at what they're doing to condemned!!!

Fira: RAAGH!! *looses a huge blast of fire like a blast burn on crack*

Blizagga: who knows? do you feel pain?

TheGameArtCritic on September 30, 2008, 5:21:08 AM

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TheGameArtCriticCondemned-Eclipse: *softly* no...

Condemned: *dodges the crazy fire attack with SORA'S DODGE ROLL* is that the best you can do?

Me: i think it's a fair fight between them...

mechadragon13 on September 30, 2008, 7:50:39 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: I DON'T WANNA GET CAUGHT IN THAT!!

Fira: *grins* hardly. *disappears in a puff of smoke*

Blizagga: ooh, she's doing THAT trick. fuuuun. *suddendly swipes at condemned-condemned*

TheGameArtCritic on September 30, 2008, 8:03:31 AM

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TheGameArtCritic(lol condemned-condemned)

Condemned: damnit! *gets hit*

Condemned-Eclipse: oh for the love of Satan... *runs to check on his other half*

mechadragon13 on September 30, 2008, 8:50:08 AM

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mechadragon13Fira: *in another puff of smoke, she appears behind eclipse-condemned, and stabs him thwough the back with her huge claws* gotcha.

Blizagga: heheheheh. nice one fira. *again, swipes at condemned-condemned*

TheGameArtCritic on September 30, 2008, 8:56:18 AM

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TheGameArtCriticConndemned: *grabs Blizzaga's claw in mid-swipe, and throws her to the ground*

Condemned-Eclipse: why am i always getting impaled...? *quickly rips himself out of Fira's impalement, turns around, and leaps at Fira, sending her to the ground and choking her* Speed is awesome. Don't you agree, Fira?

mechadragon13 on September 30, 2008, 9:01:29 AM

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mechadragon13Blizagga: ACK! *somehow bounces back up and kicks condemned in the FACE*

Fira: ack.... *grins* but strength is better. *totally punches eclipse-condemned in the gut. HARD. as in BONE BREAKING hard*

TheGameArtCritic on September 30, 2008, 9:28:08 AM

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TheGameArtCriticCondemned: oof! *falls down, mostly from shock*

Condemned-Eclipse: AUUUGH!!! *bends forward, clutching his gut and grimacing. He falls to his knees, then promptly lands on his face. Blood leaks out of his mouth and he's unconcious*

Me: oh look what you did! You just created ANOTHER god-damned bad image for Twilly! Thanks a LOT, you daemon TRASH!

Condemned: *still on the ground, he looks at his counterpart-form* ahhh... i knew you were alwas the weaker half...

mechadragon13 on October 2, 2008, 3:16:53 AM

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mechadragon13Blizagga: huff.. huff..... heheheheheheh.....
Fira: looks like you're all alone, condemned.....

Twilight: they're tired....

TheGameArtCritic on October 2, 2008, 11:41:42 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: ...that could be what turns the tide of battle...

Condemned: *gets up, slowly, but surly* indeed i am... but... i was alone my whole exsistance... *smashes his fist into Blizzaga's nose super hard*

Me: ra ra! Go Condemned!

mechadragon13 on October 2, 2008, 12:14:30 PM

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mechadragon13Me: *glares at critic*

Blizagga: *yelps when she gets hit and puts a paw over her nose* nice shot...

Fira: RAAAAH! *fireball at condemned*

Twilight: ...... *thinking* now could be my only chance..... *nods to herself* it IS my only chance. *cracks her knuckles*

TheGameArtCritic on October 2, 2008, 1:12:36 PM

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TheGameArtCriticCondemned: *dodges the fireball and snarls at Fira, almost mockingly*

Me: do it Twilly, do it Twilly, do it Twilly!

mechadragon13 on October 3, 2008, 8:11:18 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: *starts swaying side to side, she starts humming the intro to no more sorrow by linkin park*

Fira: *snarls right back*
Blizagga: *snarls as well*

Twilight: *taps the drum part on her leg, still humming the other guitar part*

MEANWHILE!!!

Twilight: *hands clench into fists*

Me: she's zoning..... *gets excited*

TheGameArtCritic on October 3, 2008, 8:14:53 AM

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TheGameArtCriticme: is that good? I dunno what that means...

Condemned: *rasps out a dark laugh* ooo... I'm shaking in my tenticals... kekekeke...

mechadragon13 on October 3, 2008, 8:40:56 AM

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mechadragon13Me: O.O yes. *is excited*

Fira: oh, you will be.... *starts to circle around condemned*
Blizagga: *circles also, laughing* heheheheheheh....

Twilight: *starts walking towards the others, still humming the song*

TheGameArtCritic on October 3, 2008, 8:48:01 AM

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TheGameArtCriticCondemned: *goes on all fours and growls darkly at the daemons, watching them as they circle - but stops, sniffs the air, and turns his head. His eyes show suprise as he watches Twilight* That... hybrid...

Me: yay!

mechadragon13 on October 4, 2008, 2:57:52 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: *hears condemned's comment* hell yeah. *suddendly speed right towards fira, and headbutts her at 500 mph*
Fira: what the---- AGH!! *gets cut off as she flies i nice distance away*
Blizagga: *turns towards twilight, and growls* you... you DARE challenge us??
Twilight: nope. i dare to kick BOTH your asses!! >:D

Me: HECK YES!!!!! *is bouncing up and down in excitement*

TheGameArtCritic on October 4, 2008, 3:10:55 AM

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TheGameArtCriticme: my GOD... settle, kid. XD

Condemned: Hmph. I could've taken care of that...

Me: Condemned. That's bullshoot. You need all the help you can get.

mechadragon13 on October 4, 2008, 3:55:40 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: yeah, what critic said. let's call this a temporary truce, shall we?
Fira: grrrrr..... *stands back up* you little brat.
twilight: is that the best you can come up with? ppft. three words for ya. PA. THE. TIC.
Blizagga: *dont push too hard, kid, or you'll get yourself in BIG trouble.
twilight; meh. i've been in worse ^^

Me: oh yeah, twilight ROCKS.

TheGameArtCritic on October 4, 2008, 4:00:06 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: reminds me of a female Sonic XD

Condemned: *growls* fine. *spits something blue at Fira, which burns her*

Me: HE CAN SPIT ACID??????

Condemned: if i combine my toxic gas with my inner liquids, I'm able to create a deadly acid.

Me: ew.

mechadragon13 on October 4, 2008, 4:15:57 AM

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mechadragon13Fira: AGH! *shakes it off, but a spot of her fur has been seared off* grrrrrr...... *turns to face condemned* you're gonna regret that.

Blizagga: *faces twilight* looks like it's you and me, twilly. heheheh. this'll be fun....

twilight: but you wont enjoy it as much as i will!!! *jumps into the air, right above blizagga*

TheGameArtCritic on October 4, 2008, 4:18:17 AM

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TheGameArtCriticCondemned: try me. *dashes at Fira, claws extended, read to slash Fira to pieces*

Me: woo-hoo. That's the oddest team i ever laid my eyes on.

mechadragon13 on October 4, 2008, 4:40:45 AM

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mechadragon13Me: i agree. although you can't expect it to last very long.....

Fira: *ducks under condemned, and slashes at his belly*

Twilight: *pulls a spinball right into blizagga's head*
Blizagga: RRRRRRRRRARGH!! *manages to knock her off*
Twilight: *pulls out of the spinball and lands on her feet* heheh. i see why sonic likes that one.

TheGameArtCritic on October 4, 2008, 4:43:59 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: indeed.

Condemned: NRAARRRGH!!! *falls down on his stomach, and struggles to get back up, for he is tired from the previous battle, but manages to do so anyway*

Me: if Condemned keeps getting hit like that, Twilly's gonna be alone...

mechadragon13 on October 4, 2008, 5:57:02 AM

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mechadragon13Me: *smiles, as if she knows something no one else knows*

Fira; heheheh. getting tired, condemned?

Twilight: dontcha think thats a little hypocritical, fira? look at you! you're huffing and puffing more than the big bad wolf!! XD
Blizagga: nice one, twilly. *ice shards start stabbing out from the ground*

TheGameArtCritic on October 4, 2008, 8:30:43 AM

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TheGameArtCriticCondemned: *growls at Blizzaga* oh no you don't! *rams into her at top speed, and pins her down*

Me: lol he saved Twilly.

mechadragon13 on September 19, 2008, 9:33:02 AM

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mechadragon13me: you're right. manny, can you go tell neo and talon we're leaving?

Manny: *wipes his tears and salutes military-style* yes ma'am! *runs off*

me: lightning, twilly, lets go. critic, you gotta tell me where to go, okay? *runs out of the room straight to the jet hangar*

TheGameArtCritic on September 19, 2008, 9:39:40 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: wait! We don't need to go in the jet, that's a waste of fuel! The new host's location is actually not far from here! Greenhill City! Emerald Street! Joe's Top Gun Shop! He'll be leaning on the building next to a "no loitering" sign!

Rosette: We need to find him, or her!

mechadragon13 on September 20, 2008, 9:11:52 AM

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mechadragon13Me: okay then. TWILLY! run ahead!!!

Twilight: got it. *speeds out of the base at near-sonic speeds*

Lightning: i hope she finds him........her. whoever.

Me: come on. we have no time to lose. *runs out of the base*

TheGameArtCritic on September 20, 2008, 9:18:39 AM

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TheGameArtCriticme: right! *follows*

Rosette: *follows me*

meanwhile

Lupe: *is right where i said he was*

Gun Shop Owner: HEY! Can't you read?! *points at the NO LOITERING sign*

Lupe: yeh. I can. I'm not loitering. I'm resting. Resting is still DOIN' something.

Gun Shop: grrr... I'm calling the cops... *walks back inside*

Lupe: just try it, boy... heheh... *pats his schimitars*

Condemned: *zips up right in front of Lupe* YOU!!!! YOU ARE WHO I NEED!!!!

Lupe: AH!!! WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU?????

Condemned: that's not important... right now, what's important is who YOU are.... MY NEW HOST...

Lupe: what are yeh babbling about? *pulls out one of his schimitars*

Condemned: you! My new host! Now be quiet! I must possess you!!

Lupe: POSSESS ME???? I DON'T THINK SO!!! *swipes at Condemned with his schimitar, only to feel it go right through the demon*

Condemned: ahahahaha!!!

mechadragon13 on September 20, 2008, 9:43:13 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: *sees teh store* FOUND IT! *sees condemned* f---. LUPE GIT OUTTA THERE!!! *rams right into lupe, knocking him away from condemned, then faces him with an unusually fierce anger in her voice* get outta here condemned!! havent you caused enough trouble already????

TheGameArtCritic on September 20, 2008, 2:38:32 PM

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TheGameArtCriticCondemned: not enough... *scary grin* never enough...

Lupe: What is that... thing?

Me: um... a demon.

Lupe: yer bluffin'...

Condemned: she's not... *suddenly possesses Lupe*

mechadragon13 on September 21, 2008, 7:27:43 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: NO!!!

Me: *arrives with the other* f***!! we're too late!!!!

TheGameArtCritic on September 21, 2008, 8:20:45 AM

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TheGameArtCriticLupe: AGH!!! WHAT THE - AH!!!! *starts shivering and shaking*

Me: his first transformation...

Lupe: *falls down onto his hands and knees, and cries out in pain. His eyes are squeezed shut. His hands grow longer, and turn into Condemned's claws. Lupe's eyes then open. They are pure, glowing red* AAAARRRGH!!!! *his fur turns blue, and his snout is glued shut with skin, only to be ripped open again by long, sharp, ugly teeth. Finally, wings rip out of his back* agh... agh.... agh... huff... *closes his eyes again, this time more relaxed, and gets up like a zombie*

Me: L-lupe...?

Lupe: *in a creepy double voice, he laughs darkly* kahahaheh... *opens his eyes, which now bare dark blue irises* Lupe's not here...

Me: ohhhhhh crap...

mechadragon13 on September 22, 2008, 2:52:09 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: hell no. *goes into the full daemon mode* no. no. no. no. no.

Me: unfortunately, yes.

Twilight: damn. gr... how do we turn him back without hurting lupe?!

TheGameArtCritic on September 22, 2008, 8:33:16 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: i don't know. Eclipse got lucky before... Sonic tried to stop him, and in result, changed him back due to his good aura... he was just... so pure...

Condemned: well Sonic's not here. Tough luck, kiddies... kekekeke....

mechadragon13 on September 22, 2008, 8:37:10 AM

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mechadragon13Me: any way to get sonic over here?

Twilight: unlikely. critic? *still in a defensive position*

TheGameArtCritic on September 22, 2008, 8:56:46 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: i don't know where he is. Does anyone know whether or not he has a cell phone, or something?

Condemned: enough of this... I'll kill you all before he knows you better... RAARRGH!! *pounces on Mish*

mechadragon13 on September 23, 2008, 11:54:27 AM

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mechadragon13Me: GAAH!!! *manages to roll out of the way, barely dodging him* jesus freakin' christ!! *takes out the wrench*

Twilight: grrrr..... *leaps in front of mish*

TheGameArtCritic on September 23, 2008, 11:58:08 AM

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TheGameArtCriticCondemned: no one will be spared... i will devour everyone...

Me: nothing can contain him... no one can save us...

Condemned: *bats at Twilight*

mechadragon13 on September 24, 2008, 2:34:34 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: *ducks to avoid condemned's blow, and swipes at him* STOP BEING SO FREAKING PESSIMISTIC CRITIC!!!!

Lightning: ok thats it. *takes out a metal rod* i hoped i wouldnt have to use this.... *suddendly runs a current of electricity through one end of the rod so it comes out the other end, looking somewhat like a whip* get ready for this, condemned!! *starts to advance towards the fight*

Me: oh boy. last time he used the whip was when he fought terra... and that did NOT end well....

TheGameArtCritic on September 24, 2008, 8:27:32 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: a-are you sure he'd be able to handle such a largely electricity-based weapon? That's one of Condemned's weaknesses...

Condemned: *tenticals come out of his arm and strike at Lightning*

mechadragon13 on September 24, 2008, 8:52:33 AM

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mechadragon13Lightning: *easily dodges the move but doesnt counter, remembering condemned's weakness* shoot!! will it hurt kupe a lot??

Twilight: i recommend putting that thing away, light. we dont need another unnecessary death.... RAAAAAWR! *pounces at condemned*

TheGameArtCritic on September 24, 2008, 10:07:22 AM

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TheGameArtCriticCondemned: *is knocked down* OOF! Grrr... i HATE meddlers... I'll stab you all like i did Sonic! HAHAHAHA!!

G. Eclipse: *still feeling guilty about Sonic's hospitalization, his expression becomes sad*

Me: Shut up, Haine -

Condmened: *stabs me from afar* YOU DO NOT UTTER MY NAME!!!!!

mechadragon13 on September 24, 2008, 10:11:00 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: what's wrong haine? cant take it when people know you real name? HA!! *jumps off him to avoid getting stabbed*

Lightning: *cracks his whip loudly and threateningly* i WILL use this.

TheGameArtCritic on September 24, 2008, 10:27:44 AM

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TheGameArtCriticCondemned: NO!!! *covers his ears* I don't want to remember anything about my past! I don't want to remember the mistake i made! RAWR!!! *whips Lightning*

Me: um... COndemned..? Are you feeling GUILTY??

mechadragon13 on September 24, 2008, 10:41:50 AM

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mechadragon13Lightning: GAH! *files back a bit, and while flying he whipped back at condemned's tentacle*

Twilight: *her normal voice fades into the daemon double voice* awww.... poor demekarr is guilty. what's wrong, haine? too hurt by your memories?? hahaha!!!

me: O.O thats not her talking.

TheGameArtCritic on September 24, 2008, 10:53:36 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: those daemons are gonna get her killed...

Condemned: SHUT UP!!! *the dark aura around him gets brighter, with a mix of red* YOU SHUT UP IF YOU WANT TO KEEP LIVING!!!

Me: ohhh boy...

mechadragon13 on September 24, 2008, 11:14:01 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: *her eyes glow strangely, and she grins* *double voice* daemons cannot die. daemons cannot be killed. your attempt will be futile. we will simply heal. become whole again. we cannot die!!!! WE CANNOT DIE!!!! *roars loudly, and she seems to grow in size somwehat. her claws grow, her fangs stick out of her jaws, and wings sprout from her shoulders. her fur turns pure black, and her eyes become pupil-less* do you still wish to kill us, haine? are you willing to risk injury to your new host? are you a coward, haine???

Me: O.O f***.

TheGameArtCritic on September 24, 2008, 11:33:22 AM

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TheGameArtCriticCondemned: STOP IT!!! STOP SAYING MY NAME!!!! I'LL KILL YOUR WOLFIDNA!! IT'S THE LEAST I CAN DO!!! I'LL KILL HER, AND MAKE YOU GO AWAY!!!! *eyes turn pure red* NRRAAARRRGH!!!! *comes at the daemon with full, brutal force*

Me: omg. Those idiots, they set Condemned off! HE'S GONNA KILL TWILLY!!!

mechadragon13 on September 25, 2008, 2:42:07 AM

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mechadragon13Me: O.O considering the state the daemons are in right now, i'd say that's higly unlikely....... think "sonic's dark form" in that one sonic x episode. completely unstoppable.

Daemon: heheheheh. *lazily dodges out of the way, smaking his head with the back of her paw* we are not like you, haine. this girl is our prison. if you killher, we will be more powerful than anything you have ever imagined. we were gods, haine, doomed to spend eternity trapped in a child. if you release us now, there will be no stopping us. we shall command this planet, we will command all!!

Me: umm...i think the daemons are officially a problem.

TheGameArtCritic on September 25, 2008, 11:05:11 AM

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TheGameArtCriticCondemned: *spits at the daemons/Twilight* And you think i care...? I'm DEAD! NO ONE COMMANDS ME. It matters not what happens to Mobius, so long as there are people to possess... who knows? You may stir up even MORE hate! AHAHAHAHAHA!!!

Me: you damn leech.

Condemned:... and stop calling me "Haine"... Haine is no longer a part of me...

mechadragon13 on September 25, 2008, 12:01:33 PM

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mechadragon13Daemon: *spit burns up before it hits the deamons* oh really? then why does the name anger you so much? and what if we desire to destroy this planet? what will you do then, hmm?

me: not. cool. liiiight?

Lightning: hey dont look at me, i'm not an expert on the supernatural.

TheGameArtCritic on September 25, 2008, 2:31:28 PM

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TheGameArtCriticCondemned: if you destroy the planet, i will simply find a new one. As for the name... it's... it's personal...

Me: hmm... you really shouldn't push it too much, yeh daemons.

mechadragon13 on September 26, 2008, 2:44:06 AM

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mechadragon13Daemon: we will push it as far as we wish to, mobian. you have no power over us.

Me: *grins* *thinking* oh, i wouldnt be too sure of that..... *to critic* i think i'll let them fight for a biiiit.....

TheGameArtCritic on September 26, 2008, 9:51:59 AM

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TheGameArtCriticme: oh ok.

Condemned: push so far, and i will make sure to make you suffer... in my own special way...

Me: I don't like the sound of that...

mechadragon13 on September 26, 2008, 10:01:57 AM

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mechadragon13Me: meee neither O.O

Daemon: i'd LOVE to see you try, demekarr!!!! *the last r's in demekarr turn into a loud snarl, and with that, they jump right at condemned, paws engulfed in flames*

TheGameArtCritic on September 26, 2008, 10:15:33 AM

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TheGameArtCriticCondemned: GAHAHAHAHAHA!!! *suddenly tears himself away from Lupe, and becomes seperate again*

Me: OH MY FREAKING GOD!!!!!!

Lupe: w...wha...? Oh god... i feel sick...

Me: LUPE!!!!! RUN!!!!!!!!!

Lupe: *gets caught in the pounce* AGH!!!!

Condemned: *possesses Twilly*

Me: D8

Condemned: *in Twilly's mind* I WILL RIP YOU FROM YOUR CONTROL...

mechadragon13 on September 26, 2008, 10:29:03 AM

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mechadragon13Daemons: *extinguish the flames before they hit lupe, then get off him as fast as they can* what in the name of---- AGGGH!!!

Twilight: *mentally yelling in the daemon's mind* AGGHHH!!! WHAT'S HE DOING IN THERE???? GET HIM OUT!!! GET!! HIM!! OUT!!!!!

Me: oh, this is bad, she wont be able to take three demons in there!!! CRITIC WHAT DO WE DO????

TheGameArtCritic on September 26, 2008, 10:46:03 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: i don't know... i don't KNOW!! If... maybe... maybe because they'll be fighting, Condemned will cancel out the two daemons and leave... just to annoy them... he wouldn't DARE stay in Twilly... there's not enough hate... right?

Condemned: SUFFER!!! *claws at the daemons*

mechadragon13 on September 26, 2008, 11:01:38 AM

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mechadragon13Daemons: RRRRARGH!!! *both daemons, who are separate in twilight's mind, claw at condemnbed in unison* LEAVE THIS GIRL!!! YOU DO NOT DESERVE SUCH A POWERFUL HOST!!!
Twilight: GET THE F*** OUT!!!!

Me: not cool.

TheGameArtCritic on September 26, 2008, 11:07:27 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: not cool indeed.

Condemned: i do not WANT the weakling... i want YOU both to FEEL MY WRATH!!! *dodges the attacks, and devides himself into two seperate forms. One, his normal self, while the other, a much more deppressing and cruel form - Eclipse with Condemned's eyes and voice, representing his greatest host*

Me: oh he did something cruel to Twilly in there...

mechadragon13 on September 26, 2008, 11:17:06 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: NO!!!
Fira: heheheheh. at least we aren't REJECTS.
Blizagga: too right.
Fira: *shoots a huge fireball at condemned*
Blizagga: *stomps the "ground" with her front paws and huge ice shards shoot out of the ground under condemned-eclipse*

Daemons: *outside, the daemon is laying motionless, unchanged from it's black furred form, but breathing heavily*
Me: this is not cool.

TheGameArtCritic on September 26, 2008, 11:21:39 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: you already said that.

Condemned: *dodges the attack* They had every right to fear me... *Runs up on all fours and bites Fira*

Eclipse-Condemned: *backflips a few times until the ice spikes are done* heheheh...

mechadragon13 on September 26, 2008, 11:32:46 AM

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mechadragon13Blizagga: *unfortunately, the ice spikes arent done. the continue spiking out in his direction, and blizagga laughs*
Fira: RAAAGH! *bites his shoulder and rips him off her, then she throws him a few feet away* grr... insolent pest...
Twilight: ohhhhh god. ohhh god...

Me: WELL I'LL SAY IT AGAIN CUZ IT'S THE TRUTH!!

TheGameArtCritic on September 26, 2008, 11:41:52 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: ok, ok!

Condemned: *howls in pain*

Eclipse-Condemned: *is impaled* oof! *blood seeps down the icicle* *simply to make Twilight snap, he uses Eclipse's normal voice, but makes it weak* Twilly... help...

Me: ok, that was just LOW...

mechadragon13 on September 26, 2008, 11:54:54 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: *screams in horror, and covers her eyes* it's not, eclipse, it's not eclipse, its just condemned being a dirty little bastard.....

Fira: *grins toothily, then jumps on condemned, biting at his throat*
Blizagga: *laughs maniacally, then jumps onto the tip of the ice shard, balancing carefully* *mockingly* aww... poor little condemned got stuck on an icicle......

TheGameArtCritic on September 26, 2008, 12:10:28 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse-Condemned: *still with Eclipse's voice* doesn't matter... I'll still live... I will ALWAYS live... *gets out of the icicle, and throws Blizzaga off, but now has a gaping hole in his stomach* well THAT'S annoying...

Condemned: *snarls at Fira, but melts through her and into the ground*

Me: calm down Twilly... calm down...

mechadragon13 on September 27, 2008, 11:27:37 AM

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mechadragon13Me: she's trying.....

Fira: *snarls angrily, and searches frantically for condemned*

Blizagga: *lands on another ice shard* heheh. condemned has a hole in his belly. HA. HA. HA.

TheGameArtCritic on September 27, 2008, 1:32:28 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse-Condemned: oh shut up, godly RUNT. *the hole in his stomach regenerates* *he breaths in through his nose, and breaths out with his mouth* much better...

Condemned: *comes back up from right under Fira, and impales her with his extremelly sharp claws*

Me: i wonder how Twilly's doin'...

mechadragon13 on September 29, 2008, 3:22:39 AM

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mechadragon13Fira: GACK! *is impaled* heheheh. *bites down on condemned's arm and snaps the bones*

Blizagga: what seems to be wrong, condemned? can you not fight with a hole in your belly? heheheheheh.

Twilight: ohhhhh......god..........

Me: i have no clue. there's only one way to know. wait. if she returns to her normal form, we've got twilly back. if she remains in the big black daemon thing. we lost her. maybe for good.

TheGameArtCritic on September 29, 2008, 8:59:22 AM

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TheGameArtCriticme: TWILLY NEEDS TO HELP TOO, THEN!!! AAAAHHH!!!!

Condemned-Eclipse: no... it's not that... it's just... it's so annoying... *sighs, and stabs Blizzaga with a tentical*

Condemned: grACK! Nice shot... *limps backwards a bit like a hurt pup, then waits for the bone to regenerate, and it does*

mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 1:22:21 PM

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mechadragon13Twilight: *cant take it anymore and screeches to a halt, then drops down on the ground, sobbing*

Lightning: twilly? *remembers something* ohh.... *jumps off and goes around to her head* twilly... its ok......

Me: oh boy. umm.... *louder* our ride seems to be having emotional difficulties......

TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 1:25:38 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: Are you ok? What's wrong??

Me: zomg!

mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 1:29:58 PM

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mechadragon13Me: she seems to be experiencing an emotional breakdown. too mcuh stress, i think... so much has happened lately, she just cant take it anymore....

Twilight: *silently sobbing*
Lightning: *rubbing her head* there there, twilly, everything's gonna be alright...

TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 1:35:24 PM

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TheGameArtCriticme: *coldly* don't kid yourself.

Rosette: CRITIC!!

Me: she can't deny what is the truth...

Eclipse: i still don't know *cough* what's up.

mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 1:47:22 PM

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mechadragon13Lightning: *glares at critic* you are NOT helping.

Twilight: no....... its true... we shouldnt kid ourselves....

Me: .............................

TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 1:49:59 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: I'm getting a little annoyed... *growls* I want to know what's going on. Whenever I'm around people, they act like I'm going to drop dead, or something!

Me: *due to my insanly sick sense of humor, i can't help but giggle*

mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 1:54:17 PM

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mechadragon13Lightning+Twilight: *look at each other nervously*

Me: ummmm.......

TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 1:57:55 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: ... what?...

Me: aw shoot.... Eclipse... can you just.. can we just drop the subject?

Eclipse: NO.

Me: pff. You're stubborn.

mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 2:02:39 PM

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mechadragon13Everyone: *try hard not to make eye contact with eclipse*

MeL stayin' out of this one.

TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 2:05:50 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: I'm... going to die, aren't i?

Me: WOAH!!! LOOK AT THE TIME!!! IT'S HAMMER TIME!!! LET'S JUST DROP THIS RIGHT NOW, THAAAAANK YOU!!!

Eclipse: Critic -

Me: NO.

Eclipse: Criiitii -

Me: NOOO!!

Eclipse: please -

Me: *covers ears* lalalalalalalalalalala!!!

mechadragon13 on September 17, 2008, 2:37:24 AM

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mechadragon13Me: he figured it out, critic, you might as well.......'

Lightning+Twilight: *totally silent*

TheGameArtCritic on September 17, 2008, 8:24:56 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: fine... Eclipse... it's true. You're going to d........ Eclipse?

Eclipse: *has blacked out again, but this time his beathing is even worse than before. He's also sweating from the extreme body heat he's giving off*

Me: uh oh.

mechadragon13 on September 17, 2008, 8:34:04 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: *stands up so fast she almost knocks lightning over* we have to go. *lays back down so they can get on*
Lightning: *climbs on* hand eclipse over.

TheGameArtCritic on September 17, 2008, 10:06:32 AM

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TheGameArtCriticme: *pushes Eclipse to Lightning* why?

Eclipse: *black out*

mechadragon13 on September 17, 2008, 10:22:59 AM

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mechadragon13Lightning: *hauls him onto twilly and extends a hand to help critic and rosette up* we gotta try to make him last as long as possible......

Twilight: *nods in agreement*

TheGameArtCritic on September 17, 2008, 10:27:18 AM

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TheGameArtCriticme: isn't that extending his suffering? Look at him! He's in pain! *gets on*

Eclipse: *weezing*

mechadragon13 on September 17, 2008, 10:28:48 AM

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mechadragon13Lightning: it doesnt mean we shouldnt try. im not gonna kill him just so he doesnt suffer. we're not like that. come on rosette!!

TheGameArtCritic on September 17, 2008, 10:43:52 AM

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TheGameArtCriticRosette: ok! *follows*

Me: so you WILL let him live TO make him suffer? *sad sigh* *sings*

What has come over me?
What madness taken hold of my heart?
To run away, the only answer
Pulling me away
To fall upon (the night)
The source of my recovery
Sweet shadow taking hold of the light
Another day has been devoured
Calling me away, bringing a question
Why

For saving me from all they've taken
Let my armor fall again
Giving me the strength to face them
Feeling it taking over
Now, on a path to take it all away
There can be no better way of knowing

In a world beyond controlling
Are you going to deny the savior
In front of your eyes?
Stare into the night
Power beyond containing
Are you going to remain a slave for
The rest of your life?
Give into the night

This self discovery
Redemption taking hold of my mind
A serenade of haunting voices
Calling me away
To feast upon (the night)
The source of my felicity
Dark maiden taking hold of my hand
Lead me away from hibernation
Strong and unafraid
Never a question why

For saving me from all they've taken
Let my armor fall again
Giving me the strength to face them
Feeling it taking over
Now, on a path to take it all away
There can be no better way of knowing

In a world beyond controlling
Are you going to deny the savior
In front of your eyes?
Stare into the night
Power beyond containing
Are you going to remain a slave for
The rest of your life?
Give into the night

Give into the night

In a world beyond controlling
Are you going to deny the savior
In front of your eyes
Stare into the night
Power beyond containing
Are you going to remain a slave for
The rest of your life
Give into the night

...

mechadragon13 on September 17, 2008, 10:47:15 AM

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mechadragon13Lightning: no thats not what i---- *groans* never mind.....

TheGameArtCritic on September 17, 2008, 10:50:04 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: i thought so, little hedgewolf. You lose.

Rosette: Critic, now's not the time...

mechadragon13 on September 18, 2008, 2:54:05 AM

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mechadragon13Lightning: *glares at critic and growls* smile when you say that hon, or this hedgewolf's liable to forget his manners!!

Me: both of you just calm down!!!!! *whacks both lightning and critic over the head* sheez. what he was trying to say was that they're gonna try to make his last days more comfortable........ as painless as possible......

TheGameArtCritic on September 18, 2008, 8:43:17 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: alright. I completelly support that decision.

Rosette: he's going to die tomorrow... he's going to die tomorrow... *sniffle*

mechadragon13 on September 18, 2008, 11:24:16 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: *starts slowing down* we're here. *pounds the large door once, and it opens. she runs in, straight to medical room D-13*

TheGameArtCritic on September 18, 2008, 11:38:26 AM

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TheGameArtCriticme: he woke up in 'Unleashed. That's good.

Rosette: that's good, i guess... *sniff*

*We both follow Mish*

mechadragon13 on September 19, 2008, 2:31:23 AM

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mechadragon13Me: come on. *leads them to teh room, and goes in. eclipse is in the hospital bed, fang and manny standing next to it*

Manny: talon says he's not gonna make it......did he get hurt?

TheGameArtCritic on September 19, 2008, 6:08:51 AM

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TheGameArtCriticme: no. It was Condemned. Eclipse just couldn't take it anymore. His body gave out.

Eclipse: *isn't breathing*

mechadragon13 on September 19, 2008, 6:14:53 AM

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mechadragon13Manny: *ear perks up* guys.... its all quiet..... *turns towards the heart monitor, which is a straight and continuous beep. a straight line* oh no. straight line is bad, right? RIGHT?!

Fang: *is silent*

Lightning: .....he's gone.

Manny: oh NO!!! whyyy???? why does he have to go like that??? *starts crying* why did he just leave?? was it that mean-o condemned??? if i ever meet him again, im gonna.....gonna...... ohhhh......

Twilight: there there *gives manny a comforting hug, though she has started tearing up herself* .... its ok...... he's at peace now.....

Me: *thinking* i hope.....

TheGameArtCritic on September 19, 2008, 9:05:40 AM

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TheGameArtCriticPREPARE FOR THE WEIRDEST RP SEQUENCE IN THE WORLD

Eclipse's Spirit: *is in a shimmering, white place. Huge gates are in front of him* w... where am i...?

Angel: you're in heaven. Woo-hoo. You didn't commit any sins.

Eclipse's S: but... but the murder...

Angel: - was not your fault. Corruption doesn't count. Are you ready to join us in Heaven?

Eclipse's S: i... don't know... I guess...

Angel: then, Eclipse, you need to forget everyone and everthing from your life on earth... you need to forget...

Eclipse's S: w-what? No!

Angel: please... just calm down, and forget, and you will be free and happy.

Eclipse: I can't forget them... they helped me so much...

Angel: forget... *disappears*

*a light shines brightly everywhere, blinding Eclipse. The voice echoes, but this time, more powerful and commanding*

FORGET.....

Eclipse: NO!

FORGET!!!....

Eclipse: I WON'T!!!!!

DO IT!!!

*the light shines brighter, turning everything pure white*

Eclipse: NOOOOOO!!!!!

*and then everthing turns black. Cold. Dark.*

Eclipse: *gets up from the black floor. He looks around* I still remember them... still... phew... but... where am i...?

The Room: *fades away to reveal that he is back in Greenhill City*

Eclipse: wait... I'm home... does that mean... I'm not dead? *suddenly he realizes he can't feel his own weight at all. Moving around is hard though, like walking underwater* oh no...

Everyone walking by: *seems to not know he's there*

Eclipse: no... no no no no... *looks at his hands. They are transparent, the light of the sun gleams through them* oh god.

mechadragon13 on September 19, 2008, 9:17:17 AM

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mechadragon13Me: *ears perk up*

Twilight: *ears perk up* .......mish?

me: ohhhhhh.... not coool.........

Lightning: what?? what happened????

Me: ....eclipse is still here.

Twilight+Lightning: !!!!!!
manny: you mean he's not ..... you know.....dead??????

me: no...... he's dead allright. he's just not.... gone...................

TheGameArtCritic on September 19, 2008, 9:23:13 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: we need to find Lupe. It's time.

Condemned: *shoots out of Eclipse's body like a bullet, and heads out deep within Greenhill City*

Me: not good.

meanwhile

Eclipse's ghost: I... never really believed in an afterlife... this all so weird... is... is this what i get for defying a messenger of God? is this my punishment?

*there wind swirls through him, almost mockingly, telling him that he no longer exsists*

mechadragon13 on September 14, 2008, 7:16:14 AM

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mechadragon13Me: then what's it doing?
Daemontwilight: *is listening eagerly*

meanwhile!!!!

Lightning: *sits down next to rosette* hey..... listen, rosette. i know you saw what eclipse did. i know. i was there, and i saw it too. but you know what? as soon as he realized you were watching, that you had left, he broke down.

TheGameArtCritic on September 14, 2008, 7:19:55 AM

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TheGameArtCriticRosette: so... he's still there? He's not an animal? *wipes a tear from her eye*

mernwhriarlal

Eclipse: i... i don't know.

Newman: *is running after them* I DOOOO!!!! I DOOOO!!!!!

Me: and here comes Newman...

Newman: *is holding something black*

mechadragon13 on September 14, 2008, 7:44:29 AM

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mechadragon13daemontwilight: s---. *runs waaaay faster*

meanwhile!!!

Lightning: no. he's not. he was practically beating himself against the floor when he saw you. he hates that he scared you like that.

TheGameArtCritic on September 14, 2008, 7:47:14 AM

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TheGameArtCriticRosette: oh... i should... i should come back... I should apoligize to him...

mernwriaralalrah

Newman: HEY WAIT!!!! *runs faster* WAIT UP!!!!!

Eclipse: holy shoot he's fast!

Newman: STOP THE ANTHRO!!! STOP THE ANTHRO!!!! I NEED TO TALK TO YOU GUYS!!!!

Me: the clone wants to talk. That's weird.

mechadragon13 on September 14, 2008, 8:03:56 AM

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mechadragon13Daemontwilight: he's talking to us already!!! let him keep talking!!!

Me: critic? what should we do?

Meanwhile!!!

Lightning: that would be a good idea...... *stands up* come on. they were headed to HNHQ.

TheGameArtCritic on September 14, 2008, 8:09:45 AM

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TheGameArtCriticRosette: alright. *follows*

mernwhriarararalalalalaaalllllll... yeah.

Newman: PLEASE!!!!

me: welll... since he said please.... come on Twilly, you can stop for a second, can't you?

Newman: OH MY GOD!!! THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!

mechadragon13 on September 14, 2008, 8:23:08 AM

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mechadragon13Daemontwilight: *hesitantly* okay then...... *slows to a stop*

Me: whaddaya want, newman?

Meanwhile!!!!!

Lightning: *walks in silence towards the base, which is still a ways away*

TheGameArtCritic on September 14, 2008, 8:40:49 AM

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TheGameArtCriticRosette: ... Lightnig? You ok?

menwhial (woah it's back to normal)

Newman: *has a smile etched across his face* huff... i... huff... know... huff... what it... huff... DOES... i... huff... have... huff... this! *holds up something that looks like a black wii remote with red buttons, Instead of a nunchuck, it has a microphone* hang... on... *turns it on* woo...

Eclipse: *has a seziure, and falls off Twilly*

Newman: IT WORKS! Yessss!

Me: WHAT DID YOU DO???????????

mechadragon13 on September 14, 2008, 8:46:38 AM

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mechadragon13Daemontwilight: *snarls and smashes newman to the ground, careful not to hit the device* what the hell did you just do?????

Me: *jumps offa twilly and grabs the device, putting it down near critic and then running towards where eclipse fell*

mechadragon13 on September 14, 2008, 8:47:28 AM

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mechadragon13MEANWHILE!! (lol forgot this part XD)

Lightning: hmm? *looks over to rosette* oh, sorry, i was just thinking.........

TheGameArtCritic on September 14, 2008, 8:53:53 AM

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TheGameArtCriticRosette: thinking about what?

holy god meanwhile!

Eclipse: *is on the ground. His irises are red, but dull*

Newman: aww...

Me: dude!!! WTF???

Newman: I'm just carrying out orders... it's not like i WANT to do this... i was just PROGRAMMED that way... *sighs*

mechadragon13 on September 14, 2008, 9:31:36 AM

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mechadragon13Daemontwilight: *presses him into the ground, snarling angrily* what. did. you. DO?

Me: *checks eclipse over* ehh... he doesnt look too good........

MEANWHILE!!!

Lightning: i dunno... my mind's just wanderin', i guess.... hey i hope ya dont ming my asking, but how did you and eclipse meet? *pauses* you dont have to answer if ya dont want to.......

TheGameArtCritic on September 14, 2008, 12:12:05 PM

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TheGameArtCriticRosette: no... it's ok, I'll spill. I was on a rooftop. I was trying to escape these thugs that i owed money to. They were "The Greenhill Mafia"... i think they're still around, but a bit shooken... Anyway, I was sitting on the rooftop, and suddenly, this big hand grabs me, and forces me up. It was this big gorilla guy. He threatened me to give him the money that i totally did NOT have, or pay with my blood. Then, these tenticals rip through his chest, and next thing i see, the thug is dead, and being help up in the air by the tenticals of Eclipse in his Condemned form. All of a sudden, more thugs come, and he's slicing them, and smashing them until they're all dead... all twenty. I wanted to thank him, but he was about to leave, so i stopped him, and asked for his name. He told me that it was Condemned (i still wonder why he did that). So I'm going to thank him, right? But the jerk flies off mid-sentence! I tracked him down, and afer a few protests from him, we've been together ever since...

meanwhile

Newman: AAH!! OMIGOD!!! ECLIPSE!!!

Eclipse: *slowly gets up and looks at Newman, eyes vaccant of free will*

Newman: HELP!!!!!!!!!

Eclipse: *suddenly growls at Twilight, and rams into her, pushing her off Newman*

Newman: oy... thanks, man! *retrieves the black device*

mechadragon13 on September 15, 2008, 7:27:42 AM

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mechadragon13Daemontwilight: *growls* F--- YOU NEWMAN!!! *claws at the ground, eager to rip newman to pieces*

Me: awww, fudge, not again.......

TheGameArtCritic on September 15, 2008, 9:14:45 AM

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TheGameArtCriticNewman: no no no no! It's different this time! He knows what he's doing now, he just can't control himself :D

Me: AND THAT'S BETTER?????????????

Newman: um.... maybe?

Me: RRRRRGH!!!!!!!!!!!

Newman: AH! ECLIPSE! ATTACK THEM!

Eclipse: *complies, turning on me, and pouncing*

mechadragon13 on September 15, 2008, 11:26:48 AM

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mechadragon13Daemontwilight: i dont think so! *jumps in front of critic and lightly swats eclipse away with one paw* sorry, we dont need any more unnecessary violence.

Me: ya got THAT right........

MEANWHILE!!!!

Lightning: i see....... *laughs* The way twilly and i met was actually pretty funny. Talon, Mikki, Dio and I were on patrol one night, and apparently she say us sneaking around and thought we were up to no good. so she followed us. but we were real sneaky and got her caught in a trap. *smiles widely* she ended up hanging from a tree by her foot XD Mikenno took pity o nher, though. He went back and let her down. It was funny how she practically exploded on us.

TheGameArtCritic on September 15, 2008, 12:53:30 PM

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TheGameArtCriticRosette: *laughs* I can imagine...

meanwhile

Eclipse: *growls at Twilly, but then suddenly has a coughing fit*

Newman: wait, what? Do you... have the flu or something.

Eclipse: *in a droning voice* no... *coughs again*

mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 3:15:07 AM

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mechadragon13DaemonTwilight: eclipse? *tries to get closer, but hesitates* dont attack me ok?

Me: this is getting bad.... *presses a hybrid-symbol-shaped button on her watch* hurry, lightning.....

MEANWHILE!!!

Lightning: yeah, it was funny stuff! i remember when---- *something beeps on his wrist* huh? *rolls up the cuff of his glove and reveals a small black band with a hybrid-symbol-shaped button on it. it's flashing red* oh boy. come on we gotta hurry! *quickens pace*

TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 8:38:11 AM

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TheGameArtCriticRosette: Wait up! *follows him*

meanwhile...

Me: I can't promise that he won't attack you.

Eclipse: *coughs some more, then suddenly sways forwards and backwards a bit, like he's going to fall down*

Newman: what's up with him?

Me: he's... slowly shutting down...

Newman: i don't get it.

Eclipse: *falls down, facefirst onto the ground. He has blacked out*

mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 8:55:46 AM

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mechadragon13DaemonTwilight: ECLIPSE!!!! *returns to normal, and runs over to the blacked-out eclipse* omigosh, critic, what's wrong with him!?!?

Me: *eyes widen* oh god, its happening....

MEANWHILE!!!

Lightning: something isnt right. we have to hurry!! *grabs rosette by the wrist and accelerates to 100mph*

TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 9:19:39 AM

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TheGameArtCriticRosette: OOOOOOOHHHHHHHH MYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY GAWWWWWWWWD THIIIIIIIIS ISSSSSSS REEEAAAAAAALLLLLY FAAAAAAAAAAAST!!!!!

meanwhile

Eclipse: *still blacked out*

Me: Twilly... Eclipse is going to die in two days... the toxin that Condemned has within him is finally getting to Eclipse, and rotting his body...

mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 9:53:38 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: rotting his body????? thats really bad!! and gross!!!! is there anything we can do about this?????

Me: ................ *silent*

Lightning: *approaches the others* sorry rosette!!! whoo. that was a nice run. hey mish, whats------- *gets cut off as he sees eclipse on the ground* ...what happened?
Twilight: *looks up at lightning with sorrow in her eyes* ...eclipse is dying, light.

TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 10:00:51 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: I've given him another day. He will die on the day AFTER his anniversary/b-day. For now, it's made him extremelly tired and dizzy. He's also been having coughing fits. It'll get worse tomorrow. *grabs Newman's black device and crushes it*

Newman: HEY!

Me: uh, yeah, see, no. You have no right to be annoyed right now, you @$$.

Newman: I WAS PROGRAMMED THAT WAY.

Me: *picks up Eclipse's limp body* oof! Heavy guy! Um... lets see... *studies him* yowch... his body heat is pushing 200. That's pretty bad. If you feel his chest area carefully, or listen to his breath, he's weezing oh-so-softly. That'll get worse within the next two days.

mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 10:32:41 AM

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mechadragon13Lightning: *eyes water* ...no way................
Twilight: *shakes her head* there's nothing we or HN can do, is there?

Me: *silent* ...................

TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 11:53:21 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: yeah way. *heads for HNHQ*

Rosette: *slowly shakes her head. She is silent, and tears start to fall from her eyes*

Me: you're very emotional about him...

mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 12:03:35 PM

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mechadragon13Twilight: !!!! *immediately goes daemon and lays down so lightning and the others can get on*
Lightning: *hops into twilly's back and goes to help rosette up* come on! we've got no time to lose!!

Me: lets go critic! *leaps onto twillys back*

TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 12:08:08 PM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: ummmm... ok! ^^ *hops on Twilight* YEE-HAW!

Rosette: *rolls her eyes at me, and sniffles. She clings onto Eclipse so that he doesn't fall off (you can't hold on if you're unconcious)*

mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 12:22:14 PM

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mechadragon13Twilight: hang on. *pulls out all the stops, and runs like there's no tomorrow. (i.e., 650mph, just 50mph short of sonic's almost max speed)

Lightning: *hangs on tightly so he doesnt fall off*

Me: hey, critic, what can HN do to save eclipse??

TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 12:40:00 PM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: i.......... actually have no clue, but it will give him a comfortable place to stay before he..... you know....

Rosette: *snifflesob. Clings to Eclipse tighter*

Eclipse: nnngh...

Rosette: O.O

mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 12:44:31 PM

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mechadragon13Lightning: ....we'll do whatever we can to make his last days as good as we can.

Twilight: *silently tears up*

Me: ................

TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 12:55:37 PM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: Twilly... *pats her*

Eclipse: *opens his eyes a little*

mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 1:06:34 PM

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mechadragon13Lightning: welcome back, eclipse.

Twilight: ....... *acknowledges critic, then keeps running in silence*

Me: ................ *deep in thought*

TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 1:16:17 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *drowsily - his words a a mumbled jibberish* whaz... whaz goin' on...?

Me: stuff.

Eclipse: are... are we on Twilly...?

Me: yeah.

Rosette: *hugs him tightly*

Eclipse: R....

Rosette: I'm so sorry... *continues to hug*

mechadragon13 on September 6, 2008, 3:42:37 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: hang on!!! *starts running like there's no tomorrow*

Me: HURRY!!!

TheGameArtCritic on September 6, 2008, 7:02:15 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: we need to, or else Eclipse will - WHEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!

menwhial

Eclipse: *walks down the winding staircase to the basement. He opens up the door to the boiler room. It is hot and uncomortable in there*

Mr. Inderretta: Eclipse! You... uh... why did you come here?

Eclipse: to make sure that every breath of life you have is stolen from your throat...

Mr. Inderretta: *applauds* very descriptive. You should be a writer.

Eclipse: *scowls*

mechadragon13 on September 6, 2008, 7:55:30 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: *tries her best to speed up*
Lightning: ....almost there.........

Me: *is feeling a mix of determination and fear....*

TheGameArtCritic on September 6, 2008, 8:05:24 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: it's ok, Mish! I'm sure that - WHEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!

menwhial

Eclipse: *has Mr. Inderretta by the throat* SUFFER.

Mr. Inderretta: you will NOT turn on me after i helped you!!

Eclipse: you turned me agianst my friends! I was your puppet! You did NOT help me!! *goes Condemned*

Inderretta: *also goes Demakarr*

mechadragon13 on September 6, 2008, 8:10:30 AM

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mechadragon13Lightning: I SEE IT!!
Twilight: *has her ears flat against her head and is running full tilt (which is about 600 mph)* LIGHTNING!!! BLAST THE DOOR!!
Lightning: GOT IT!! *stands up on her back and charges up a LOT of electricity, then, when close to the big door, he blasts it with electricity, making a hole just big enought for them to fit through*
Twilight: *runs right into the buildidng, avoiding trampling any workers, then screeches to a halt* where are you....? *lifts her nose up and sniffs the air, then turns towards another hallway and starts running again*

TheGameArtCritic on September 6, 2008, 9:32:34 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: *follows*

menwhial

Condemned: *smashes Mr. Inderretta's head to the ground*

Mr. Inderrettakar: *stays on the ground, bleeding and beaten from Eclipse beating him to a bloody pulp in only ten minutes* how.... *he pants*.... did you get this STRONG....?

Condemned: rage. *continues beating Inderretta to death*

mechadragon13 on September 6, 2008, 10:01:04 AM

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mechadragon13Daemontwilight: *bursts into the room and barrels head-first into eclipse, knocking him off inderetta and into a wall* STOP IT!!!!

TheGameArtCritic on September 6, 2008, 10:22:05 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: agh! *shakes his head, and looks* Twilight? What are you DOING here?

Mr. Inderretta: oh god! Oh thank god!

Eclipse: shut it, badger, I'm not done with you...

Mr. Inderretta: D:

mechadragon13 on September 7, 2008, 6:20:04 AM

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mechadragon13DaemonTwilight: eclipse, this isn't you. a few weeks ago, you shuddered at the thought of killing someone. now look!!! you almost ripped the badger-demon to shreds!!!!

Lightning: eclipse..... killing someone is never the right way. chiiiiiiiill.......

TheGameArtCritic on September 7, 2008, 9:09:31 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: do you know how much he's made me and my family suffer? DO YOU??? He killed my mother! He turned my father into a CRIMINAL! He turned me against all of you... *is silent for a bit*

Mr. Inderretta: *is still on the ground, whimpering*

Eclipse: the least i can do is end his life... *steps on Mr. Inderretta's neck, and presses down hard, snapping it*

Mr. Inderretta: *is literally drenched in blood, and now can't breathe*

Eclipse: I'VE HAD ENOUGH OF YOU!!! *Continues to punch him, knee him, step on him, and break Inderretta's bones until....*

Mr. Inderretta: *lays still. He has been beaten to DEATH*

Me: Eclipse... I don't know whether it's you, or that chip... but... but it seems that you are now gone... the old you...

mechadragon13 on September 7, 2008, 10:17:12 AM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13Daemontwilight: *hangs her head in disappointment*
Lightning: *shakes his head*

Me: critic's right.......

TheGameArtCritic on September 7, 2008, 1:32:51 PM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticMe: Mr. Inderretta doesn't even look like a badger anymore.... just a disgusting bloody body-shaped mound.... in a suit.

Eclipse: *laughs maniacally at the murder he's commited*

Me: And how do you think the more faint-hearted of us will deal with the fact that your a crazed, bloodthirsty murder?

Rosette: *is in the doorway. She's slowly shaking her head in disbelief, eyes wide, and tears streaming down her face. She backs up a step* I.... followed you all here.... but.... i didn't expect....... how could you stoop this low, Eclipse? I.... I thought you weren't like this..... I thought it was all the demon...... I guess... I guess i was wrong.... *turns around, and dashes out of the building, wiping tears from her eyes*

Eclipse: Rosette, wait! ROSETTE! *is about the chase after her, but stops* *in a weak voice* she's right.... I failed to prevent myself from becoming a monster... I've become something to fear... somthing to hate.... I'm the new Inderretta...

mechadragon13 on September 8, 2008, 11:07:38 AM

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mechadragon13DaemonTwilight: thats not true! you may be different, but no one, i mean NO ONE, will ever be as evil as that damned badger.....
Lightning: twilight's right.

Me: *under he breath* i hope ryu punishes him BAD......

TheGameArtCritic on September 8, 2008, 11:20:27 AM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *shakes his head and sighs* I wish someone would get this goddamned chip out... *twitches from the zapping in his head, then smashes his fist onto the ground with breathing through bared teeth* DAMN IT!!!

Me: i think... i think you finally scared Rosette off.... did you SEE how she looked at you?

Eclipse: *irises glow red* SHUT UP!!!! *bares his teeth at me*

mechadragon13 on September 9, 2008, 6:32:28 AM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13Me: dont provoke him critic....... we dont wanna end up like..... *chokes up*

Lightning: grrr..... isnt there anyone who can get that goshdarned thing out????
daemonTwilight: ...critic?

TheGameArtCritic on September 9, 2008, 9:39:37 AM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticMe: uh... Inderretta could of.... but now he's dead.... errr....

Eclipse: so it's hopeless?

Me: no. Not if you get surgery from a hospital, but that's EXPENSIVE!

Eclipse: ...

mechadragon13 on September 10, 2008, 10:58:47 AM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13Lightning: ....HN would happily cover the bill.

TheGameArtCritic on September 10, 2008, 11:36:13 AM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticMe: uh.... we don't want to impose.....

Eclipse: ...

mechadragon13 on September 10, 2008, 11:44:08 AM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13Twilight: *retuns to normal* it's nothing! we'll gladly pay for that. anything for a friend.
Lightning: it's no problem, critic. if it helps our frined, we'll do anything.

TheGameArtCritic on September 10, 2008, 11:52:54 AM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticMe: well ok. We'll get him fixed (NOT WHAT YOU THINK, YOU SICKO!)

Eclipse: thank you...

mechadragon13 on September 11, 2008, 8:55:21 AM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13((me no think that way!!!!))

Lightning: ...come on. lets go home.
Twilight: *turns daemon and sits down so the others can climb on her back* you've had a rough day, eclipse. hop on.

TheGameArtCritic on September 11, 2008, 12:01:22 PM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *weakly laughs* yeah.... i guess i have... *gets on*

Me: i wonder where Rosette r -

Eclipse: *breaks down sobbing*

Me: oh.... er.... my bad.

mechadragon13 on September 13, 2008, 8:27:53 AM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13Me+Lightning: *glare at critic*

Daemontwilight: *still running, sighs*

Lightning: we have to find her.....

TheGameArtCritic on September 13, 2008, 8:33:31 AM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticMe: even if we do, she'll be afraid of Eclipse.

Eclipse: *sniffle*

Me: dude. You made a mistake. It was out of your c - ok, wait it WAS in your control - but that's not the point! The point is -

Eclipse: no Critic... just shut up...

mechadragon13 on September 13, 2008, 8:41:35 AM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13Me: yeah, seriously, critic, you're not helping.....

Lightning: .....twilight, stop.
Daemontwilight: *screeches to a halt* whats wrong, light?
Lightning: *jumps off twilight's back* im gonna go find rosette. you guys keep going, i'll be there in a bit.

Daemontwilight: *nods and starts running again*

TheGameArtCritic on September 13, 2008, 8:48:37 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: kay! WHEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!

Eclipse: *dark glare shooting of pwnage*

Me: eee.... e... *pwned*

mernwhiarl

Rosette: *is on a bench in a park, trying to comfort herself*

mechadragon13 on September 13, 2008, 8:53:23 AM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13Daemontwilight: *thinking* this is gonna be a looooooooong trip....

MEANWHILE!!!

Lightning: *is running around searching for rosette* jeez, where could that girl have to run off to? *sees her sitting down* oh. *heads towards her*

TheGameArtCritic on September 13, 2008, 12:02:41 PM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticRosette: *nearly jumps a foot out of her skin, but calms down when she sees that it's Lightning* w-what are y-you doing here? *she has oviously been deeply disturbed and traumatized by what she saw Eclipse do*

mernwhriarl

Eclipse: *he seems deep in thought*

Me: what's up?

Eclipse: you know that chip inside my head that stimulated the anger and stuff?

Me: ...yeeaaaahh?

Eclipse: i just realized something.

Me: what's that?

Eclipse: there's no such thing as manipulation of anger. Making me angry isn't the chip's only purpose...

Me: O_O

mechadragon13 on August 24, 2008, 10:10:21 AM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13Me: *shudders* i feel it too.... *ear twitch* huh? *looks down the hallway behind her* something's coming.....

*for a few seconds, silence, but then.....*

Condemned Lightning: *bursts out of a door not too far away from mish and critic, and faces them. he snarls loudly*

Me: O.O ohhhhhhh crap.

TheGameArtCritic on August 24, 2008, 1:44:01 PM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticMe: uh... Lightning? LIGHTNING? It's... it's us... Come on... omfg TWILLY!!! DEAR GOD WERE'S TWILLY!!!!????

Eclipse: *half hidden in the shadows, he lays a dark order upon Lightning* kill them.

Me: ...... crap...

mechadragon13 on August 25, 2008, 10:53:00 AM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13Me: *discretely presses a button on her watch and starts stepping back* lightning isnt a runner....... if we run, it can buy us some time.

CondemnedLightning: *blinks once, acknowledging the order, and growls slightly. then suddednly, he POUNCES!!!*

Me: RUN!!!! *starts running like hell*

TheGameArtCritic on August 25, 2008, 11:08:22 AM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticme: YAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!! *follows Mish*

Eclipse: *laughs all creepy like* meheheh...HAHAHAHAHA!!!

Me: *shouting at Lightning* FOR THE LOVE OF GOD!!! AAAAAAHHHH!!! YOU'RE NOT A SLAVE, LIGHTNING!!! AAAAHHHH!!! FIGHT IT!!!!

mechadragon13 on August 25, 2008, 11:21:19 AM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13CondmenedLightning: *hesitates, but then snarls loudly and chases after them* RAAAGHUR!!!

Me: *still running like hell* he's fighting it... that hesitation proves it!!! all we need is twilly..... and to keep runnin'!!!! *turns a corner into another hallway*

TheGameArtCritic on August 25, 2008, 11:36:36 AM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticMe: *still following Mish, and shouting out at Lightning* THIS IS WHAT ECLIPSE WANTS!!!! DON'T DO SOMETHING YOU'RE GOING TO REGRET!!!!

Eclipse: *follows us in the shadows, and uses dark energy to create an electric wall right infront of us*

Me: damn it!!! Eclipse has created a dead end!

mechadragon13 on August 26, 2008, 2:44:08 AM

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mechadragon13Me: CRUUUUUUD.

CondemnedLightning: *seems to grin, and snarls*

Me: where are you twilly?

DaemonTwilight: RIGHT HERE!!! *bashed into lightning, smashing him into a wall*
CondemnedLightning: SCREE! *is smashed*
daemontwilight: *returns to normal* come on lightning this isnt you!! dont let eclipse control you.

TheGameArtCritic on August 26, 2008, 8:53:18 AM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *appears out of the shadows*

Me: HEY!!! YOU WERE FOLLOWING US!!!!

Eclipse: heheheh... i was... Lightnig? New command. Don't try and kill the artists. Kill TWILIGHT...

Me: YOU MONSTER!!! YOU'RE GOING TO SERIOUSLY TURN TWO LOVERS AGAINST EACH OTHER???? THAT'S CRUEL!!!

Eclipse: hmph. If i have the opportunity to destroy love, I'll do it.

mechadragon13 on August 26, 2008, 9:05:01 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: heh. looks like eclipse is gone........ *defensive pose*

CondmnedLightning: *looks at eclipse as if he was confused and didnt understand the order*

TheGameArtCritic on August 26, 2008, 9:44:44 AM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticEclipse: don't look at me like that! DO IT!! KILL HER!!

Me: you JERK!!!! Stop that!!!!

Eclipse: no. I don't think i will.

Me: ASSHOLE!!!!!

mechadragon13 on August 27, 2008, 7:08:32 AM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13CondemnedLightning: *whimpers almost inaudibly, but turns to twilight and snarls*
Twilight: *ear twitched at the whimper, and she gasps* *to herself* he's still in there....... *gets back in her fighting pose* i just gotta bring him out!
CondemnedLightning: *pounces at twilight, snarling ferally*
Twilight: *easily side-steps his move* come on, lightning, remember me? it's twilly!!! i know you're in there! fight it!
CondemnedLightning: RARRRGH! *tries to claw at twilight. but she moves to fast and he misses*

Me: she's way faster than he is. as long as she's on her feet, he'll never hit her.

TheGameArtCritic on August 27, 2008, 8:48:30 AM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticEclipse: heh. As long as she's on her feet.... *suddenly zaps Twilight's knees with dark energy, making them loose all feeling* This'll stop her from moving so much...

Me: WHY?????? WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS???????

Eclipse: because i want the most out of this death...

Me: WHAT?????????

Ecliipse: i want them BOTH to suffer...

mechadragon13 on August 28, 2008, 6:52:54 AM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13Twilight: agh!! *falls to her knees* agh... ow... that smarts..........
Condemned lightning: *grins toothily and pounces on twilight*
Twilight: eek! *ducks, so he narrowly misses her*
Condemned Lightning: *lands on all fours and immediately turns and jumps at twilly again*
Twilight: *tries to move but cant move fast enough*
CondemnedLightning: *has pounced on twilly and is attempting to claw at her*

Me: oh noes!!! TWILLY!

TheGameArtCritic on August 28, 2008, 8:18:05 AM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticEclipse: HAHAHAHA!!!!

Me: YOU SHUT UP!!! TWILLAAAAY!!!!!!

Eclipse: O_O *is zapped. A lot. Falls down*

mechadragon13 on August 28, 2008, 8:26:59 AM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13Me: ...what? oh that.

Twilight: *is trying to push lightning offa her* lightning ya big lump, git off!!!
CondemnedLightning: *holds her shoulders down with one hand and raises his clawed hand up, preparing to stabbeth her*

Me: LIGHTNING!!!!! NO!

CondemnedLightning: *goes to SLASH!!!!! but hesitates and stops halfway*
twilight: *takes the opportunity and kicks him off*

TheGameArtCritic on August 28, 2008, 8:41:51 AM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticMe: he's still in there, like ya said before. He won't kill Twilight.

mechadragon13 on August 28, 2008, 8:48:43 AM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13Twilight: *manages to get back on her feet and slams lightning against a wall*
CondemnedLightning: *thunk* URK! *fall*

TheGameArtCritic on August 28, 2008, 9:33:41 AM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticme: yay!!!

Eclipse: *iz pretteh dead, man. Except no not really*

mechadragon13 on August 29, 2008, 12:05:21 PM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13CondemnedLightning: urrk..... *iz tryin to git up*

Twilight: *still watching lightning* what the hell happened to eclipse??

Me: umm... well......

TheGameArtCritic on August 29, 2008, 2:54:39 PM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticMe: um... bad things. What about Lightning?

mechadragon13 on September 2, 2008, 9:57:46 AM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13Twilight: you tell me!!! *dodges a slash from lightning*

CondemnedLightning: *growls angrily and slashes again*

Twilight: *barely dodges it and gets her arm slashed, ripping part of her long glove* OWW!! WTF?? that smarts....

Me: critic???

TheGameArtCritic on September 3, 2008, 8:48:58 AM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticMe: TWILLY!!!!!! TALK TO HIM!!!!!!! THAT ALWAYS WORKS WITH ECLIPSE AND ROSETTE!!!!!!!!!

mechadragon13 on September 3, 2008, 9:46:15 AM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13Twilight: *gets up* ow. okay then...... *dodges a slash from lightning* Light!! come on, man, this isnt you!! you wouldnt let yourself get taken over that easily!! you have to fight it, lightning!!

CondemnedLightning: *pauses for a split second, then tries to slash at twilly again*

Me: that definitelky did something.... should we do it too?

TheGameArtCritic on September 3, 2008, 9:55:34 AM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticMe: nah... it's all up to Twilly right now... if any more voices joined in, Lightning would get terribly confused....

Eclipse: *groans a little*

Me: hm. Well. It looks like Eclipse will be joining us.

mechadragon13 on September 4, 2008, 8:05:36 AM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13Me: O.O this'll be fun O.O

Twilight: come on, light! its me...twilight.... please stop!!!
CondemnedLightning: *goes to slash at her again, then stops. then he growls again and tries to get her*
Twilight: *barely dodges*

TheGameArtCritic on September 5, 2008, 11:31:47 AM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *gets up slowly and rubs his head* oog.... what...? *looks around, and catches the fight scene* oh no. *holds up his hands, and they glow with the blue light once more* LIGHTNING!!!! STOP!!!!

Me: well... that's actually helping us...

mechadragon13 on September 5, 2008, 11:38:08 AM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13CondemnedLightning: *is about to slash twilight's head off, then stops*
Twilight: eeek!!! *cringes, the sees he stopped*
CondemnedLightning: *backs away from twilight and looks at eclipse*

Me: *phew*

TheGameArtCritic on September 5, 2008, 11:57:36 AM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticEclipse: just.... no.... *closes his eyes tightly, looks away, ashamed, and bites his bottem lip* return.

Lightning's Condemned stuff: *slithers out of his body like a dozen goopy blue snakes, and returns to Eclipse, who shudders when they enter his body. He opens his eyes again* I'm sorry, Lightning...

mechadragon13 on September 5, 2008, 12:29:44 PM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13Lightning: *practically falls to the ground from exaustion*
Twilight: *catchez him and staedies him*
Lightning: *weakly* naww... it's ok, eclipse, i know it wasnt you in there....................

Me: ......glad thats over.........

TheGameArtCritic on September 5, 2008, 1:26:49 PM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticMe: not quite. Eclipse still has that chip in his head.

Eclipse: yeah. That's how i was able to get the Condemned stuff outta you.

Me: you're not angry.

Eclipse: *his eyes widen. The chip in his head thoroughly zaps him, and the electricity coming from Eclipse's head is now visisble. Eclipse moans in pain, falling to his knees. When the shocking is done, he is shaking. His eyes are closed, and he is panting heavily. When his eyes open, the irises are a pulsing, and glowing crimson red. He stands up and growls darkly*

Me: i wonder who his target is now... he's not angry at any of you guys now...

Eclipse: *is a very extremelly scary whisper* Inderretta will die...

Me: AH!! NO!!! NO!! MURDER BAD!!! MURDER BAD!!!!!

mechadragon13 on September 6, 2008, 2:49:23 AM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13Lightning: whoa, hey eclipse, hold up for a sec! slow down man. you just recovered from a near death experience! ya gotta slow down for a bit....
Twilight: Light's right. ya gotta cool it, eclipse.

Me: point...... but will he listen?

TheGameArtCritic on September 6, 2008, 2:58:48 AM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticMe: highly unlikely. Too hotheaded and steamed.

Eclipse: I will NOT stop until i see that damn badger dead!

Shadow: *somewhere far away* where's that DAMN fourth chaos emerald?

Me: is death what you rally want? Do you really want to be responsible for another death? Do you want to see more blood dripping through your fingers because YOU couldn't contain your anger???

Eclipse: *in a Condemned voice, and hissing* yesssss......

Me: uh, no.

Eclipse: *wings rip out of his back*

Me: er...

Eclipse: *runs outside, and flies off to Inderretta's hideout*

Me: *watching Eclipse fly away* well THAT went well...

mechadragon13 on September 6, 2008, 3:07:36 AM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13Lightning: crap. we gotta get moving.
Twilight: you're in no state to run. *goes into daemon form* get on.

Me: *helps lightning onto twilli's back and then hops on herself* get on critic!!

TheGameArtCritic on September 6, 2008, 3:14:49 AM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticMe: WHEEEE!! I LOVE RIDING ANTHROS!!! *hops on*

menwhial (lol)

Eclipse: *simply kicks down the two large doors that block the entrance to Zephcorp, and walks in*

Worker Dude: Hey! This area is for authorized personal only! You can't just -

Eclipse: *glares at him, then shocks him thoroughly, stopping his heart and killing him*

All the other workers: *stops what they're doing, and stares at Eclipse and the now smoldering body*

Eclipse: heheheh....

Other Workers: *panic*

Eclipse: *ignores them all, and heads for the boiler room, walking at a slow, but steady stride*

mechadragon13 on August 18, 2008, 5:30:26 AM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13Me: no........ NO!! NOT AGAIN!!!! *flies up high in the sky* come on..... *is frantically pressing buttons, a little screen pops up* radar... on! *blip* this should find them faster.... can you watch the radar, critic? i need to fly this thing.....

TheGameArtCritic on August 18, 2008, 5:45:37 AM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticMe: sure thing! Hey, what's that red dot mean? *points*

menwhial

Eclipse: *drags Lightning to the medical room, and straps him down on a bed* *coldly* wake up. *slaps him across the face a few times*

mechadragon13 on August 18, 2008, 6:25:37 AM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13Me: O.O lightning. *immediately starts flying the plane towards the red dot*

meanwhile.........

Lightning: ack. *wakes up* urgh..... *tries to get up, but is strapped down* hey.. what the...... *sees eclipse* ECLIPSE!! what the hell, man!!!??

TheGameArtCritic on August 18, 2008, 9:34:06 AM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticEclipse: oh shut up. *turns his hand into Condemned claws, and looks at it a bit, flexing his fingers, but then turns them back* I have you right where I want you, so I suggest you just up, or get you'll turn out worse then I plan. *dark smile*

mewhial.

Me: he's in the medical room by the looks of it.

mechadragon13 on August 19, 2008, 4:25:23 AM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13Me: oh lord. if a villain takes a victim to a medical room, its never good....... *guns the plane forward*

meanwhile.....

Lightning: *eyes narrow* what are you trying to do, eclipse? kill me?

TheGameArtCritic on August 19, 2008, 4:32:06 AM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticEclipse: no. Just torture you a bit. Maybe I'll shove your bloody body in front of Twilight, just to see what happens... I could spare you if you tell me all base emergency passwords, though...

menwhial

Me: HE'S GONNA TORTURE LIGHTNING INTO GIVING HIM INFO!!!!!!!!!

mechadragon13 on August 19, 2008, 4:40:53 AM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13Me: oh no..... lightning never gives in to torture..... it hast worked, like, EVER!!! eggman tried it and nearly killed him, acid tried, and that almost got him into serious trouble too........ and terra...... yeesh. *tries to force the plane into going even faster*

meanwhile:

Lightning: .......do you really expect me to give you those codes? HA! as if! *laughs* torture me as much as you like, i wont put the othes in danger.

TheGameArtCritic on August 19, 2008, 4:51:59 AM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticEclipse: hmph. I guess you really want to see Twilight weep over you then. Oh. Right. You won't see. You'll be too busy being unconcious. *grows Condemned claws and rakes them across Lightning's body*

menwhial

Me: OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

mechadragon13 on August 19, 2008, 4:55:34 AM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13Me: *is freaking out, tears streaming out of her eyes* THIS F***ING THING WONT GO ANY FASTER!!!

Meanwhile...

Lightning: *cries out in pain* AAAGH!!!! urgh........ *hisses in pain, one eye closed* heheh. this'll be the second time you kill me, eclipse.

TheGameArtCritic on August 19, 2008, 5:07:20 AM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticEclipse: maybe, maybe not. It all depends on you giving me those codes. Hmm... *fishes around the inside of his pockets, and gets out a clear serum bottle* we'll go a few rounds of torture, and thats when i move on to the truth serum. Understand?

menwhial

HE'S THREATENING HIM WITH A TRUTH SERUM!!!!!!!!!!!

mechadragon13 on August 19, 2008, 5:14:32 AM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13Me: AAAAAGH!!!!! THAT IS IT!!! *pulls a lever on the control panel, teh secondary engine pops out* HOLD ON, CRITIC!!!! *guns the engine*

meanwhile......

Lightning: try all you want--- *winces in pain* that stuf dont work on me......... heh. its been used so much im just immune to it......

TheGameArtCritic on August 19, 2008, 5:26:26 AM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *eyes narrow* this one is special. Made by Inderretta. *scratches the same spot he scratched before, making the wound deeper*

menwhial

me: *holds on for dear life* YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!

mechadragon13 on August 19, 2008, 5:36:16 AM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13Me: *is almost sobbing uncontrollably* we're not gonna make it..........

Meanwhile....

Lightning: *howls in pain* AAAAURGH!!!!!! agh..... urrrk....... *tries to grin* so thats it, then? heh. inderetta turned you into an a******.

TheGameArtCritic on August 19, 2008, 5:40:36 AM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticEclipse: Shut up! You don't bind me with pity and lies anymore! *forces Lightning to drink the serum* I WILL GET THOSE CODES!!!

menwial

Me: calm down Mish... come on... calm down...

mechadragon13 on August 19, 2008, 6:19:58 AM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13Me: HOW CAN I CALM DOWN???? I DONT WANT LIGHTNING TO DIE AGAIN!!!!

Meanwhile..........

Lightning: urrk.... bleagh.....

TheGameArtCritic on August 19, 2008, 7:46:50 AM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticEclipse: do you feel it spreading throughout your body? If not, then maybe we should test it... so... Lightning... *thinks a bit* what's the main color of your fur?

menwhial

Me: MISH! HEY! SNAP OUT OF IT! Look, he wouldn't kill Lightning... not yet, at least... Eclipse is stubborn. He knows that killing Lightning is the easy way out. Eclipse wants something from him...

mechadragon13 on August 20, 2008, 3:07:14 AM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13Me: ....like what?

Meanwhile...

Lightning: grrr..... brown.

TheGameArtCritic on August 20, 2008, 5:41:56 AM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticMe: like access to the whole base.... O_O

menwhial

Eclipse: see? It definetly works! Now then... about those codes... *gets out a piece of paper and a pen* go ahead. What are those codes?

mechadragon13 on August 20, 2008, 6:08:15 AM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13Me: O.O oh no!!

meanwhile....

Lightning: ....i dont know the codes.

Snowpaw1 on August 20, 2008, 8:38:00 AM

Snowpaw1 on
Snowpaw1Ocarina: Hi Mish! (looks at radar) OMG!!! Lightning is being tortured!!!! We should go stop Eclipse!

TheGameArtCritic on August 20, 2008, 9:46:22 AM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticEclipse: excuse me? Are you saying you are of no use to me then? ARE YOU SAYING THAT THE LEADER OF HYBRID NATION DOESN'T KNOW HIS OWN CODES???!!! *backsmacks Lightning, then turns his hand into a full Condemned claw* well... i actually may have some use for you... *takes a styringe, and uses it to extract some of Condemned* *he has a dark grin on his face*

Menwhial

Me: I KNOW WHAT HE'S GOING TO DO!!!!! HOLY shoot HE'S NOT GOING TO KILL HIM!!! HE'S.... he's..... O_O oh no...

mechadragon13 on August 21, 2008, 6:17:27 AM

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mechadragon13Me: O.O he wouldn't.

meanwhile.....

Lightning: Hybrid Nation is smarter than you think. we anticipated something like this, and our technical people changes the codes. only a handful of people in Hybrid Nation know the codes, and it isnt anyone you've met. *laughs* heheh. that truth serum's still working.

TheGameArtCritic on August 21, 2008, 7:15:52 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: since i captured you anyway, i may as well put you to good use. Since i can fully control Condemned now, i will have full control over anyone who is inhabited by a PIECE of him. That's why I'll do this. *jabs Lightning with the styringe, and injects Condemned into him* The transformation will take place in a minute or so. Let me tell you... *smiles again* it's a painful experience...

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Me: HE DID!!!!!!!!!!!!! HE INJECTED LIGHTNING WITH A PIECE OF CONDEMNED!!!! HE'LL BE JUST LIKE SHADOW EXCEPT ECLIPSE WILL BE ABLE TO CONTROL HIM!!!!!!!!!! *breaks down sobbing*

mechadragon13 on August 22, 2008, 5:04:35 AM

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mechadragon13Me: WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT???? *freaks out for a second and forgets that she's flying the plane, and it starts sinking......* HE DID WHAT?????? oh @#$%!!! *realizes the plane is falling out of the sky and pulls it back up* no!!!!!

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Lightning: *at first, nothing. than suddendly, he cries out in pain as he starts to change* AAAGH!!!

TheGameArtCritic on August 22, 2008, 6:24:35 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *coldly* do you feel your muscles twisting? Do you feel your bones aching? Do you feel your head burn with the very fires of HELL itself?

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Me: omfg don't do that again!!! *heart beats normally again* ok... ok.. just stay calm... just... yeah... It's all good... it's... it's all good if we just stay calm and play our cards right... *freaked out*

mechadragon13 on August 22, 2008, 7:16:16 AM

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mechadragon13Me: okay... okay...... you're the condemned expert... what do we do?

meanwhle...

Lightning: YOU GOT THAT JUST ABOUT RIGHT!!! AUGHGHH!!!!

TheGameArtCritic on August 22, 2008, 7:22:45 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *laughs at Lightning's pain*

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Me: ok... ok.... uh... er.... we be needin' light aura... but there IS none right now... uh... hey i think we're here...

mechadragon13 on August 22, 2008, 7:55:09 AM

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mechadragon13Me: whoa seriously? *lands the plane, and hesitantly opens the cockpit*

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Lightning: *is writhing in pain, as the change is almost complete....*

((hey critic? do you mind describing teh condemned lightning?))

TheGameArtCritic on August 22, 2008, 8:00:00 AM

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TheGameArtCritic(( he would be just like Shadow. He has a distorted Condemned face, pure red eyes, and such, but he would not be complete))

Eclipse: you're almost done... I hope you will enjoy being a slave to bloodlust... or my word... *releases the binds*

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Me: *jumps out* we need to hurry.

mechadragon13 on August 23, 2008, 4:52:40 AM

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mechadragon13Me: *blasts the doors of the building open with the plane's cannons, then runs in and wait for critic* lead the way.

meanwhile.....

Condemned Lightning: grrrr................ *gets off the bed and stares at eclipse, as if awaiting an order*

TheGameArtCritic on August 23, 2008, 5:00:23 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: heheheh.... that's cute... Now then Lightning... *raises a hand. It glows with a mysterius blue aura* i want you to hunt downanyone else in the building, and KILL them...

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me: I LEADZ TEH WAY! :D *leads*

mechadragon13 on August 23, 2008, 5:16:26 AM

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mechadragon13Me: *follows* i have a BAD feeling about this......

meanwhile........

Condemned Lightning: *starestare, then a growl, and he dashes out the door*

TheGameArtCritic on August 23, 2008, 6:05:27 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: heheheheh.... *walks out of the Med room as well, but heads for the dorms*

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Me: omigosh something is NOT right....