Eclipse Makes An Awesome Sexy Pissed Off Villain
Eclipse Makes An Awesome Sexy Pissed Off Villain
Eclipse Makes An Awesome Sexy Pissed Off Villain by TheGameArtCritic
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Oh noes! Eclipse is a villain now! HOW DID THIS HAPPEN???
I'll tell ya what happened. Inderretta happened (that should so totally be his catchphrase)
Mr. Inderretta captured Eclipse, and told him the truth about Rosette (how she used to work for him). Then he tells Eclipse that his friends aren't really his friends, and that Shadow abandoned Eclipse not to protect him, but because he can't handle a child.
Eclipse actually believed all that, and got all sad and stuff (boo-hoo). Mr. Inderretta told Eclipse that he can make all the pain go away. He got a computer chip thingy majigor that you put in your BRAIN, that turns all Eclipse's sadness into rage. Of course, Mr. Inderretta never told Eclipse that. He just told Eclipse that it will help hiim gain full control of Condemned.
And it did.
So, technically, that wasn't lying.
Of course, Mr. Inderretta never foresaw Eclipse becoming something worse then he is (if that's possible).
I did this at 1:30 AM after listening to I'm Alive by Disturbed, which is the song that you see on the left of Eclipse.
If you want to listen to the song (which i really recommend) here's a link:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tJTTKCHu9EQ
I'll tell ya what happened. Inderretta happened (that should so totally be his catchphrase)
Mr. Inderretta captured Eclipse, and told him the truth about Rosette (how she used to work for him). Then he tells Eclipse that his friends aren't really his friends, and that Shadow abandoned Eclipse not to protect him, but because he can't handle a child.
Eclipse actually believed all that, and got all sad and stuff (boo-hoo). Mr. Inderretta told Eclipse that he can make all the pain go away. He got a computer chip thingy majigor that you put in your BRAIN, that turns all Eclipse's sadness into rage. Of course, Mr. Inderretta never told Eclipse that. He just told Eclipse that it will help hiim gain full control of Condemned.
And it did.
So, technically, that wasn't lying.
Of course, Mr. Inderretta never foresaw Eclipse becoming something worse then he is (if that's possible).
I did this at 1:30 AM after listening to I'm Alive by Disturbed, which is the song that you see on the left of Eclipse.
If you want to listen to the song (which i really recommend) here's a link:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tJTTKCHu9EQ
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General Info
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Category Comics » Sonic the Hedgehog » Fan Characters (OC's) » Hybrids
Date Submitted
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Category Comics » Sonic the Hedgehog » Fan Characters (OC's) » Hybrids
Date Submitted
Views 2492
Favorites... 3
Vote Score 5
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Media Graphite pencil
Time Taken 1 hour
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Media Graphite pencil
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ShadzGirl on August 14, 2008, 6:13:45 AM
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TheGameArtCritic on August 14, 2008, 6:26:14 AM
Eclipse: Everyone SHUT UP! *hands glow with dark energy* FEEL THE WRATH OF CONDEMNED! *lunges at Skater first, eyes glowing red*Me: STOP BEING EVIL!!!
Eclipse: *takes Skater by the face, and smashes his head into the ground*
ShadzGirl on August 14, 2008, 6:52:22 AM
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Skater:Str-mmph!Strike:Let him go,you disgusting creature!Chaos Light!
Zandor:<I...>
Me:Go Strike,but don't kill him he's confused!He's be fooled
Strike:Nothing to hard for Strike the Fallen Angel!*Transforms into his true angel form!
TheGameArtCritic on August 14, 2008, 7:01:04 AM
Eclipse: *is hit* AAAUUUGH!!!! *lets go of Skater*Me: ooooohh.... an ANGEL.... that's pretty.
Eclipse: *bares his fangs* This will end in DEATH!
Me: oh shut up.
Eclipse: *tenticals grow out of his arm, and stab at Strike*
ShadzGirl on August 15, 2008, 2:15:39 AM
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Strike:*Blocks and hits him with a Light Spear*Nice try,my friend,but I'm better than I seem! Me:Critic!We need to distract Eclipse and Zandor;quickly!*Thinks really hard*Think,think,think...I got it!
TheGameArtCritic on August 15, 2008, 3:02:14 AM
Me: what is it???Eclipse: grrr... BURN... *causes dark fire to rain from the sky*
ShadzGirl on August 15, 2008, 5:15:53 AM
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Me:Skater!Skater:Yeah?
Me:It goes Ooo Eee Ooo Ah Ah Ting Tang Walla Bing Bang!
Skater:*Grabs mike outta no where*Alright!
Uh eeh uh ah ah ting tang walla walla bing bang!
I told the witch doctor I was in love with you.
And then the witch doctor he told me what to do
He told me.
Uh eeh uh ah ah ting tang walla walla bing bang!
Zandor:Qas sed?!<What the!?
TheGameArtCritic on August 15, 2008, 5:19:33 AM
Eclipse: *refuses to lose focus, and continues his rain of dark fire*Me: right... I do know who CAN distract him right now, but it's seriously dangerous for that particular person. *is hit with fire* owww.... *falls over*
ShadzGirl on August 15, 2008, 5:25:03 AM
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Me:Well,okay I'm outta ideas so if you got somethin' go for it!If not I think *gulps we'll have to go in!Strike:*Hits Eclipse with a Light Blast,but he is soon struck by the rain*HURRY UP!!!!
Skater:*Gets louder and annoying*Uh eeh uh ah ah ting tang walla walla bing bang!
Me:Do it quickly!
TheGameArtCritic on August 15, 2008, 5:40:19 AM
Me: IT'S A PERSON!!!! ROSETTE!!!! HE LOVED HER!!!...... well, he USED to love her, until Mr. Inderretta told him all about her backstory.... she's the main reason why he's evil now. ROSETTE!!!!!!!!!Rosette: huh? What is - ECLIPSE!!!!!!!!
Eclipse: *stares half shocked, half pissed off at Rosette. The rain stops. All is silent for about five minutes* Rosette...
ShadzGirl on August 15, 2008, 5:45:02 AM
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Me:...Skater:Ooo Eee Ooo-
All my peps:Shut up Skater!
Skater:*Looks hurt*
Strike:*surpresses a smirk*
Zandor:<... I... do not understand...>
TheGameArtCritic on August 15, 2008, 5:54:14 AM
Rosette: *walks up to Eclipse, unafraid* Eclipse... why... why did you leave us?... *tears run down her face* Why did you hurt Shadow and Sonic like that... and now you're hurting people you JUST met... WHY???Me: he DID love her...
Eclipse: *with a cold, heartless expression of pure rage, he suddenly grabs her by the throat with a tight grip* You lied to me... You hurt me... how could i NOT kill you now, when i can? Let me ask YOU a question... why did you walk all the way here to die early?
Me: oh shoot... i knew it could endanger her.... I shouldn't have called upon her...
ShadzGirl on August 15, 2008, 5:56:00 AM
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Me:That's it!I stood all I can stand and I can't take nomore!*whistles*Sick 'em Shane!TheGameArtCritic on August 15, 2008, 6:01:01 AM
me: Shane?Eclipse: *tightens his grip* i hope you suffer... I hope i never have to see you smile again...
Rosette: Eclipse... PLEASE..... *choking*
ShadzGirl on August 16, 2008, 2:16:28 AM
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Shane:*Jumps all over Eclipse*Rahhh!!!!Me:Having a hedgemutant in the house is useful.Lick 'em up Shane!
Shane:*Licks Eclipse*Bites his ear really hard*
Me:Awww!!!He loves Eclipse!
Zandor:Wersa!!!!<Help!>
Strike:One elvish 'hog;successfully tied up!
TheGameArtCritic on August 16, 2008, 3:15:43 AM
Eclipse: GET OFF ME, FREAK! *punches Shane off him*Me: OMG ROSETTE ARE YOU OK???????
Rosette: *rubs her neck, and coughs a little, then tears up* How could he...? How could he do that...?
ShadzGirl on August 16, 2008, 3:28:03 AM
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Me:Shane!Shane:Arwoo...T-T
Me:It's okay baby.It's okay.Umm...the last person I can think of (at this moment)is Nyght.But how the heck am I s'pose to get that boy over here?
Zandor:Ny-ght?...<I could find!Please!I know him!>
Strike:I didn't understand a word of that,but whatever he said can't be good!
Me:He...He wants to help!Critic do you think we can trust him?
Strike:*Starts to battle Eclipse again*Whatever you do Hurry!
TheGameArtCritic on August 16, 2008, 3:46:01 AM
Me: TRUST HIM!!!!!!!!Eclipse: *punches me down and stomps on my head*
ShadzGirl on August 16, 2008, 3:50:00 AM
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Me:Zandor!Go!Zandor:<Okay!>*Chaos Control
Me:(He has Chaos?Hmm...)
TheGameArtCritic on August 17, 2008, 6:25:30 AM
Me: wtf happened?ShadzGirl on August 18, 2008, 5:23:30 AM
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Nyght:You have got to be kiddin' me.This is your,supposely,"evil" villain?He's a naive kid that's extremely dressed up.*Walks up to Eclipse in that emo way of his*Zandor,I'm not impressed.Me:"Not impressed",my tail you emo lil'...
Zandor:<But,he->
Nyght:Shud up 'k?You Eclipse,right?
TheGameArtCritic on August 18, 2008, 6:34:04 AM
Eclipse: *glares* Yeah. What's it to you? Are you my enemy as well?Me: nnnngh.... this isn't going to end well....
ShadzGirl on August 18, 2008, 9:12:32 AM
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Nyght:That depends.You have a choice.Stop hurting my friends and get away clean or find out why Virus is a feared power.Me:*crosses fingers*Don't say anything stupid,Nyght....
TheGameArtCritic on August 18, 2008, 9:20:53 AM
Eclipse: *zaps dark energy at Nyght* stupid git.Me: OY!!!
ShadzGirl on August 19, 2008, 12:41:08 AM
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Nyght:Alright,I was ready to play nice,but I'm done!Virus Strike!Weird voice:Virus infected.
Me:CRITIC!!!GET ECLIPSE OUTTA THERE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!!
TheGameArtCritic on August 19, 2008, 4:43:23 AM
Me: WHY????Eclipse: I DON'T RUN!!!!!
ShadzGirl on August 19, 2008, 5:41:32 AM
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*Eclipse's body starts hurting and scars filled with blue energy start appearing*Me:That's why!
Nyght:I was all for nagotiating,but since you won't listen to logic;pain will have to do!
Vatian:LEAVE WELL ENOUGH ALONE BOY.
Nyght:What the!?!?
Me:Vatian?
Vatian:Heal him or so help me;I will kill you.
TheGameArtCritic on August 19, 2008, 8:31:48 AM
Eclipse: *down on his knees, struggling to keep conciousness* w-what...?Me: do you care about him, or something, Vatian?
ShadzGirl on August 20, 2008, 5:13:13 AM
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Vatian:I may have killed,but I really can't bear to see another creature die.Me:Vatian...Oh!Eclipse,hold still.I think I still have the cure.
Nyght:WHAT ARE YOU DOING!?!?!?He tried to kill you!!!!
Me:So?I have a hunch he didn't really mean anything.
Nyght:Wha-Miss Critic you,you don't believe that to do you?!
Me:*Pours the cure in Eclipse's mouth there ya go...Feel better?
TheGameArtCritic on August 20, 2008, 5:30:59 AM
Eclipse: *gets up, and almost falls down again, but catches himself* y-yeah...Me: OxO
Eclipse: *glares at Nyght*
ShadzGirl on August 20, 2008, 5:36:53 AM
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Nyght:*razzes*Vatian:*smacks him in the head with the Winter Waker*
Nyght:What the he** was that for!?
Vatian:Usually I'd reserve that for Mandez,but that was the biggest blunder I've ever seen!You almost killed him!!!!
Me:I'd have to agree with Vatian,"gummy bear".That was absolutely reckless!*turns back to Eclipse*You need any help?
TheGameArtCritic on August 20, 2008, 5:47:40 AM
Eclipse:....no. *regains balance* I'd like to kill Nyght now, plzthx. *shoots dark energy at him*Me: NOT AFTER WE STOPPED!!!!! DOON'T START ANY MORE FIGHTS!!!!!!
ShadzGirl on August 20, 2008, 5:57:54 AM
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Vatian:If you don't mind,I think ShadzG callin' him "gummy bear"was punishment enough.Nyght:Why oh why did I ever let her listen to that song?Why oh why oh why... T_T
Me:Ba ba be do be do be do do...^-^
Nyght:No!No more I'm outta here this is so whacked!Why didn't I just die?Uggh!
Me:*whispers to you and Eclipse*I love it when I make him angry!He can't do nothin' 'bout it!
Vatian:*shakes his head**sigh*,you are os much trouble.I see why Shadow is so respectful of that weird ability to annoy people.*Furls and unfurls wings*I'll need to get use to this...
TheGameArtCritic on August 20, 2008, 6:07:51 AM
Eclipse: I'm not speaking to any of you...Me: stop being a wussy emo villain of evil anger issues!
Eclipse: a wha - ?
Me: I CALL IT A W.E.V.O.E.A.I.!!!
Eclipse: no. No you don't.
ShadzGirl on August 20, 2008, 6:12:30 AM
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Me:STOP!!!!!!!!!!!Don't start this againVatian:*sighs*If you don't mind;I'm going to sit here,and let you three work this out
Me:Oh,really helplful,Vatian,thanks!
TheGameArtCritic on August 20, 2008, 9:59:04 AM
Eclipse: i won't stop. Not until i wade in the blood of my enemies!Me: no! bad W.E.V.O.E.A.I.!
Eclipse: *punches me square in the face*
Me: *falls down*
ShadzGirl on August 21, 2008, 5:21:49 AM
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Me:-_-;I've just got one thing to say...Vatian:What's that?
Me:HOW COULD THIS HAPPEN TO ME!?!?Oh yeah,and what the heck happened to Skater,Strike,and co.?
Shane:*pummels into Eclipse and starts licking him*Mew!*slurp,slurp*purr*
TheGameArtCritic on August 23, 2008, 3:31:16 AM
Eclipse: get off me! Get off, you mutated freak!Me: dawww... don't say THAAAAAAAT....
Eclipse: *kicks Shane off* COME ON, YOU STUPID STRIKE!!! I'M READY TO TAKE YOU DOWN!!!
ShadzGirl on August 23, 2008, 6:03:55 AM
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Strike:*smirks* Try me!Shane:*Jumps back on Eclipse and licks him again*Wree!
Me:Wow,he really does like Eclipse!
Strike:uh,hello?I'm still here!
TheGameArtCritic on August 23, 2008, 8:55:10 AM
Eclipse: *throws Shane at Strike*Me: that was funny.
Eclipse: BURN. *sets Strike on fire*
ShadzGirl on August 24, 2008, 5:45:46 AM
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Strike:Your gonna pay for that p-Dark:Strike no look happy.What matter?
Strike:You?!?!your suppose be taking a nap!
Dark:*giggles,slightly evilly*I not sleepy
Me:He's right.
Strike:*shakes head* Nevermind*hands start glowing let's dance,pig!
TheGameArtCritic on August 24, 2008, 6:10:04 AM
Eclipse: sorry. I don't dance with insane asylum escapees.Me: OMFG BUUUUUUUUUUUURRRRRN!!!!
Eclipse: however, I can give you this free backstage pass to Satan's next speech in Hell. How does THAT sound? *hand glows with dark energy once more*
Me: dear god. He's good at heckling.
ShadzGirl on August 25, 2008, 5:40:46 AM
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Dark:*giggles*Hee,like you.Funny.You no hurt anyone really,will you?Strike:WHAT THE HECK ARE YOU DOING,KID!?!?!?YOU'RE GOING TO GET YOURSELF KILLED!!!!!!
Me:Darky,go home.
Dark:*ignores me*You Eclipse?You Nona's friend?You Strike's rival?*clicks his little claws against the floor*Tell me,tell me,tell me!
Strike:This is so stupid.Chaos Strike!
TheGameArtCritic on August 27, 2008, 11:11:05 AM
Eclipse: NO!!! *blocks it* I am interested in this... thing.Me: i think it's a kid.
Eclipse: he seems to like me. All i can wonder is why...? Why would he bound forward towards me when birds scramble to get out of my way, and pre-evolved dogs whimper when i come near. Why?
Me: even when he's evil, Eclipse has a soft spot for cute, defenceless children... :3
ShadzGirl on August 27, 2008, 11:11:51 PM
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Dark:Nona like you,I like you.*grins*'sides you funny.I like funny!Me:Heh,to true enough...
Shane:????
Dark:*giggles*Shaney think you "Z".He think you smell adn look alike!You wanna play?
Strike:Grrr...Kid...
TheGameArtCritic on August 28, 2008, 10:18:42 AM
Eclpse: i don't play. I haven't played since i was a child...Me: ah right. The thugs in your gang would play hide and go seek with you. That was cute.
Eclipse: this... "Dark"... he's an unusual one...
ShadzGirl on August 29, 2008, 1:36:39 AM
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Me:Well,you can't exspect any less from a lil' Everheart?*pats Dark's head*Dark:Wanna cookie?*gives Eclipse a cookie*
Strike:-_-;He's been stealin' cookies again...And now he's offering them to a villain?This is so strange
Me:I think it's cute
Strike:*rolls his eyes*Whatever.Look if there's nothin' going on;I'm leaving.
Me:*shrugs*Whatevuh.
Skater:Hey!Wait for me Strike!!!*runs after Strike*
Dark:*giggles*Strike get bored easy,don't 'e,Eclipse?
TheGameArtCritic on August 29, 2008, 9:13:53 AM
Eclipse: *quietly* i don't know... *throws the cookie away when Dark isn't looking*Me: it's cute how Dark is bonding with Eclipse ^^
Eclipse: *paradox. He is suddenly shocked with a billion volts of dark energy, going through his blood system.* AAAAUUUUUUUGH!!!!! *drops to his knees, then falls facefirst onto the ground*
Me: IT'S FROM ANOTHER RP!!! HE'S HAVING A FORCED HEART FAILURE!!!
ShadzGirl on August 30, 2008, 1:06:00 AM
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Me:What!?!?Dark:Oh,no!
Vatian:Ah?!
Shane:0_0?????
Dark:Eclipsey!!!!
TheGameArtCritic on August 30, 2008, 6:32:28 AM
Eclipse: *not breathing*Me: it's a 50/50 chance. Depending on what happens in the other rp, Eclipse will either die, or awaken as his old self... kind of.
ShadzGirl on August 31, 2008, 4:16:45 AM
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Dark:*lays on Eclipse;crying*Hope...Zandor:<Hope?That means nothing!You'll need to do something about it!>
Dark:Erhh...
Me:Hey!Leave him alone!
Zandor:<You poor duluted fool...listening to someone like this Mr. Inderretta...>*smiles grimly*<So innocently naive>
Shane:*licks Eclipse*
Me:...
TheGameArtCritic on August 31, 2008, 7:04:57 AM
Eclipse: *does not stir*Me: Zandor may actually be right... He shouldn't have listen to the badger's cruel lies... it was what broke him in the end... *bites bottem lip* I really wish this didn't happen... he was such a good OC... when he was good, he was very sweet to, yes his family, but mostly Rosette... a shame she may lose him... they were so close...
ShadzGirl on September 1, 2008, 3:23:48 AM
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Dark:NO,NO,NO!!!NO TALKING LIKE THAT!!!*sobs incontrolably*Zandor:*shakes head*<Child,although your trust in hope is inspiring,it is futile.>
Me:Not helping.
Zandor:...
Vatian:There has to be something.I cannot believe that though Zandor's words are logic,that there is no way to help him.
Me:He's right,but what can we do?
Zandor:...
Vatian:if you know something,tell us.*furls wings*
TheGameArtCritic on September 1, 2008, 4:28:03 AM
Me: time is the answer. What happens in the Sonic Unleashed picture shall reveal the truth to the hedgebat's demise. I am sorry, Dark. I know that you and Eclipse would have been good friends if it wasn't for that blasted Inderretta...Rosette: *is sobbing*
ShadzGirl on September 1, 2008, 5:41:03 AM
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Dark:*howls*NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.It's not over...it's not too late...never too late...Me:Darky...
Vatian:....
Zandor:<little one...>
TheGameArtCritic on September 1, 2008, 7:24:22 AM
Me: Dark...... don't get your hopes up.... even if Mr. Inderretta came, i doubt he would help.... and even then, who knows? He could make it worse...Rosette: *on her knees, talking to Eclipse even though she knows he's not concious* please don't die... just please... wake up... oh god please wake up....
Eclipse: *not waking up*
ShadzGirl on September 1, 2008, 8:15:53 AM
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Dark:*howls louder*Everan:What happen?
Strike:WTF!?What are you doing here,Everan?
Everan:No thanks to fact that both me 'n Dark are EverHearts;we have a sort of mental connection,and I was a little sick of feelin' bad.I'll ask again,what happen.
Me:it's Eclipse.He had a heart attack,and we don't know if he's even alive!
Everan:*looks at Zandor*Zandor Clone.Do something about.
Zandor:WERTA!?<What!?>
Me:No way!Zandor CLONE?
Everan:*nods*I believe he has a key to your problem.
Dark:YESSSSSSSSSSSS???
Zandor:<D-don't k-kid yourself!>
Everan:Mr. Zandor,I hardly ever kid.It's not in my blood.
Dark:You hear?He can fix!Critic he fix!
TheGameArtCritic on September 1, 2008, 8:46:30 AM
Me: it is not magic... it is medical....Rosette: *buries herself into Eclipse, sobbing*
ShadzGirl on September 1, 2008, 11:17:51 PM
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Everan:*rolls eyes*Zandor is a product of something that was created by science.Me:Shadow Clone...
Everan:Exactly.I'm betting he inherited that strangeness of his father's;haven't,elven Clone?
Zandor:*looks away*<I don't know what your talking about...>
Everan:*picks Zandor up by his chest fur*Da** it,Zandor!Dont' lie to my face!I can see right thru you!
Zandor:<Put me down,da*** you!>
Everan:Tell us the truth!!!NOW!
Zandor:Effra!!!!!
Me:Everan!Your hurting him!
Everan:*ignores me*TELL US.
Me:Guys,we gotta do somethin'!
TheGameArtCritic on September 2, 2008, 8:49:34 AM
Me: *looks around crazily, then quickly takes out a temporary rabies shot and shoves it in Eclipse's arm*Eclipse: *shudders, but soon he starts to foam at the mouth, and twitch. His eyes snap open. They are pure white and bloodshot. He hisses, getting up*
Me: Rabies is a disease that speeds up how much blood the heart pumps. I figured it could give Eclipse a jolt of life.
Feral: NRAAAARRRGH!!!! *leaps at Everen*
ShadzGirl on September 3, 2008, 2:51:38 AM
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Everan:*knocks him away*Phh,like I'm that stupid.Zandor:*gasps for air*<You..saved me?>
Everan:*charges energy*Di-
Verio:Hi,yous!
Everan:What the he**?
Me:Verio!Yshh,everyones following us.What are ya doin' here?
Verio:*floats around*I was bored...Shadik no fun.*looks at you*Hey,ain't you Nona's friend Critic?I'm Verio!
TheGameArtCritic on September 3, 2008, 8:48:07 AM
Meh: hullo ^^Feral: rrrRRRAAAAAGH!!!!! *charges at Everan again*
Me: btw, Zandor. Sorry to burst your bubble, but Feral can't hear anyone when he's in that state. He's like a werewolf. He completelly forgets who he is, and who his friends and enemies are.
ShadzGirl on September 4, 2008, 5:36:05 AM
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Zandor:0_0Me:Heh,that's kinda of a good thang in a creepy way.
Zandor:<Eff,Whatever you say...>
Verio:What been goin' on?
Dark:Vatian and Eclipse start fight.Zandor show up.Then Strike and Skater.Strike and Eclipse fight.Skater get weird.I give Eclipse cookie,and he go down.Then,Everan come,get mad at Zandor;hurt him.Now,Feral and Everan fighting.
Me:Wow...that's the most said in his life...
Everan:*gets knocked over*Da** it!Get this ugly beast off!You!Critic!Get him off!
Me:*sticks out bottom lip*His not ugly.He's fluffy.
Everan:Da** it,I don't care;guess get it off!*Shoots a bolt of energy at Eclipse,but almost hit's Zandor*
Zandor:*indignantly*Effra!<I should->
Me:Shut up.I wanna see if he'll lick Everan.
Zandor:0_0<WTF?>
Me:Explain to him,please
TheGameArtCritic on September 6, 2008, 7:16:45 AM
Me: i don't know if i could.Feral: *slashes at Everan's face a few hundred times, then bites down hard on his arm, drawing blood*
Me: it's temporary rabies, so it's not contagious. Don't worry.
Feral: *snarls*
ShadzGirl on September 8, 2008, 2:32:53 AM
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Me:That's fine.Okay,Zandor,last Eclipse was in Feral form,he licked Strike^-^It was really cute.Zandor:0_0<...OK...>
Everan:Rahhh!!!!!!!*almost hits Feral with Dark and Light energy*
Day:*catches Everans hand and slings him away from everyone*Phh,Everyone alright?I never realized what a temper your friend Everan had.
Me:I think he's going thru a Dark phase.Oh,Critic,meet Day.
Day:Hello.
TheGameArtCritic on September 8, 2008, 9:12:49 AM
Me: you have a lot of characters.Feral: *Rabies wears off*
Eclipse: oog.... *sways a bit, then falls over*
Me: lol.
ShadzGirl on September 9, 2008, 2:48:42 AM
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Me:Yeah...I think it's some 378,or somethin' like that.Day:*snickers a little bit*That's not including forgotten ones.
Me:True,true.
Dark:BUT WHA 'BOUT ECLIPSE!?
Me:Shh!Don't yell!
Dark:*Bottom lip trembles*But...but...
Me:*hugs him*It's OK,baby.Don't cry.
Day:What have I missed so far?Something tells me this has been violate.
TheGameArtCritic on September 9, 2008, 9:58:00 AM
Eclipse: *groans a little, then gets back up* w.....what happened?Me: oh right, you probabally feel like you've got a hangover right now....
Eclipse: i dunno. I don't get drunk *holds his head with a hand*
ShadzGirl on September 10, 2008, 5:25:24 AM
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Me:*glomps Eclipse*OMG!!!!YOU'RE OK!!!!!Dark:*hugs Eclipse's legs*Yay,now we can play!
Day:Could some please explain what happen?
Shane:*jumps up and starts licking Eclipse*Rooo!!!*purr,purr*
Vatian:I think the story's too long to tell at this moment.
Me:OMG,IWASSOF'SCAREDANDANDAND-
TheGameArtCritic on September 10, 2008, 12:15:07 PM
Eclipse: dah?me: DAH!!! *glomps Eclipse also*
Eclipse: D:>
ShadzGirl on September 11, 2008, 2:38:18 AM
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Day:*still looks confused,but smiles*Vatian:*laughs*You are really loved Eclipse!
ME:VERY!!!
Dark:Yssssssssssshhhhhhh!!!!
Shane:*licks Eclipse and purrs*
TheGameArtCritic on September 11, 2008, 11:59:16 AM
Eclipse: *can't help but smile a little*Me: there, see? You're fine... no one is prejeduce against your monster....
ShadzGirl on September 12, 2008, 1:29:55 AM
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Day and Vatian:*shares a look that says "Strike has prejudice"*Dark:Can we play now?????
Verio:PLEASE???
Me:^^
Shane:*still licking Eclipse and purring*
Me:X3
TheGameArtCritic on September 12, 2008, 8:32:26 AM
Eclipse: *scratches Shane behind the ear*Me: lol bonding.
ShadzGirl on September 12, 2008, 10:23:06 AM
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Me:That's cool!Shane:*loves on Eclipse some more*
Me:My "family" may be made of some of the strangest people,but they're good
Shane:*curls up on Eclipse*
TheGameArtCritic on September 12, 2008, 10:25:59 AM
Eclipse: and now i can't move. *sighs, but in a nice, funny way*Me: he's afraid of moving because he might hurt Shane.
ShadzGirl on September 12, 2008, 10:29:35 AM
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Me:Trust me,Shane is not bothered by anything.Just snap and say 'Shane,off.'Shane:*starts purr/snoring*
Me:Or not...
Dark and Verio:*giggles*
TheGameArtCritic on September 12, 2008, 12:02:25 PM
Eclipse: *sarcastic* wonderful.Me: but it's cute...
Eclipse: no. No it's not.
ShadzGirl on September 12, 2008, 12:54:54 PM
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Me:Tshh,Shane,up.*snaps twice*Durn it...Shane!Falien!Shane:*jumps up*
Zandor:<Ah!You know....?>
Me:There.Better.
Shane:* looks wide eyed and confused*????
TheGameArtCritic on September 12, 2008, 1:06:18 PM
Eclipse: *shakes him off* sorry. I kinda need that leg *awkward grin*ShadzGirl on September 12, 2008, 2:04:23 PM
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Me:Sorry,'bout that...Shane:*arches back and hisses;does the pointer dog thing*
Me:What is it,Shane?What do you see?
Shane:*pounces mysterious 'hog*
Shadik:Oriana!!!Get your crazy...THING...offa me!
Me:*whistles*Shane,down.It's Shadik!
Shane:*Looks guilty*
Shadik:CONTROL THAT THING NEXT TIME...
Me:^-^;Sorry.Guys,this is Shadik.
Shadik:*stares*...
TheGameArtCritic on September 13, 2008, 6:04:51 AM
Eclipse: whadda YOU lookin' at?Me: be nice, Eclipse. This is Maelstrom's little bro.
Eclipse: whatever.
ShadzGirl on September 15, 2008, 5:21:55 AM
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Shadik:Sort of yes,I guess you could say...Although I don't really need Maelstrom friendship...Shane:*sniffs Shadik suspiciously*???
Shadik:Down,Snoopy...
Shane:*backs away looking hurt*Rrrooo...
Me:Um...Yeah.What are you up to?Usually Maelstrom would be crooning over you.
Shadik:*smirks*He may be very powerful,but he knows little of the word "stealth"...
Me:You snuck away?
Shadik:It's "sneaked"...Away,yes,I did...not exactly easy when he's watching your every move,but I managed...
TheGameArtCritic on September 15, 2008, 10:07:32 AM
Eclipse: brilliant. You'll give him a heart attack.Me: aren't you -
Eclipse: *COUGH WEEZE HACK*
Me: going.... to.... die.
ShadzGirl on September 16, 2008, 2:47:33 AM
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Me:*huggles Eclipse*NNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOO!!!I won't let you!!!!!Shadik:Ah,crap,here we go again...
Verio and Dark:*huggle Eclipse too*NNNNNNOO!!!!WE WERE GONNA PLAY!!!!
Day:Ah!
TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 9:25:50 AM
Eclipse: I'm going to *cough* DIE??? WHY?????Me: i shouldn't tell you...
ShadzGirl on September 17, 2008, 1:13:05 AM
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Me:*huggles more*NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!Shadik:You just had to open your big mouth...
Dark and Verio:*big teary baby eyes* Emmm...
TheGameArtCritic on September 17, 2008, 11:13:52 AM
Eclipse: *suddenly blacks out*me: 3rd day. Black outs.
ShadzGirl on September 18, 2008, 2:57:18 AM
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Shadik:DO YOU REALIZE YOU'RE "KILLING OFF ECLIPSE" IS GONNA RUIN MY F**KIN' LIFE!?!?MORE THAN ALREADY IS???!!!Zandor:<Why would it affect you?You don't live with her.>
Shadik:Don't give me that "Elvish logic" crap!So what?!It's hard to avoid her!She's got like,her own sorta Chaos Control!
TheGameArtCritic on September 18, 2008, 11:43:06 AM
Me: um... shut up. Eclipse is suffering, and you're being self-centered.Eclipse: *black out gets worse*
ShadzGirl on September 19, 2008, 2:47:12 AM
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Shadik:DOES IT LOOK LIKE I GIVE A DA**!?!?SERIOUSLY!??!WHO DO YOU THINK I AM????THE SOFT *****Y KID FROM SOME MOVIE???Me:*lays on Eclipse*Just shut up...Just shut it...
Shadik:Whatever...you really don't know who I am...no one does...never will...
TheGameArtCritic on September 19, 2008, 1:18:05 PM
me: you are someone with an inner turmoil. There. I win.Eclipse: *dies*
Me: oh. He's dead.
ShadzGirl on September 22, 2008, 1:12:08 AM
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Me:*crys*Good-good-bye Eclipse...I'll miss you...Day and Vatian:*silently look at each other*
Shadik:...
Zandor:*roars*<I DON'T UNDERSTAND!!!!HOW COULD YOU BE SO HEARTLESS AND LET HIM DIE!?!?!?>*curses you out in Elvish*
TheGameArtCritic on September 22, 2008, 10:50:59 AM
Me: I luv you too ^^ oh, and I'm not heartless. I was sad too... unfortunatally, i need to make bad things happen to my character... it's part of my genre...ShadzGirl on September 23, 2008, 2:41:47 AM
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Zandor:<THINGS?!RAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!YOU ENGLISH SPEAKERS ARE ALL ALIKE!!!!I->Vatian:*knocks Zandor out with the Winter Waker*
Me:Thank goodness.I could see that going poorly.
Vatian:I was just tired of his..."spirit".A little too violent for me.
Me:It's a good thing you don't what he said,'cuz you don' wanna know.Boy,I never realized that Zandor could feel injustice.After all,what happen to "I'm gonna kill you all?"
Shadik:Maybe he's retarded.
Me:*gives him "that so help I'm gonna kill you look*Have you looked in the mirror lately,weirdo?
TheGameArtCritic on September 23, 2008, 9:23:32 AM
Eclipse: *dead as dead can be*Me: omg what?
ShadzGirl on September 24, 2008, 5:33:53 AM
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Me:What 'what?'Huh?what?you lost me!Shadik:I said the Elf is a RETARD
Me:And I said look in the mirror.
Vatian:Ay,yah,yah.
Day:*is holding Zandor*It be wonderful if someone would help me.*acidentally drops Zandor*Opps
Zandor:*wakes up*<OW!WHAT THE HE**!?!?>*gets blank stare*<Why were you holding me?>*gets real red,cuz' he thinks Day's you-know-what*<What the?-Get away from me!!!>
Day:you were out cold.
Zandor:*calms down,but remands wary*
TheGameArtCritic on September 24, 2008, 12:00:39 PM
me: she was raping you.Eclipse's dead body: >:O
ShadzGirl on September 25, 2008, 2:46:52 AM
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Day:*folds arms*It's not my fault he went out.Zandor:<Trust you,I don't.>
Me:Since when do elves talk like Yoda?
Zandor:???
Vatian:He doesn't know what Star Wars is...-__-;
Zandor:<What the he** is Star Wars?>
Me:A movie.
Zandor:???
Me:*throws arms up in exasperation*Somebody smack the boy!
Vatian:I think a certain Methusalah would like to.
Day:Shut up.No I don't.It's impolite.
Zandor:<Why should you care?You're->
Day:I am not!This is rediculous!I'm going to go now!Can't take this!*disappears*
Me:Wow,Zandor.You're mouth sure causes troubles.
Zandor:*smirks*<Next I'll make that Newman fellow commit suicide.>
TheGameArtCritic on September 27, 2008, 10:09:47 AM
Newman: i can't! I'm already dying! :DMe: ohhh... he needs to be recharged every 24 hours, or he will shut down. Mr. Inderretta is dead, and he's the only one who knew the recharger codes.
Newman: i feel funny... o_o *eyes turn pure white, and he crumbles under his own weight, unconcious from lack of energy*
ShadzGirl on September 28, 2008, 11:16:46 PM
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Me:could always have Pure Shadow zap him a lot of times....Strike:What would that accomplish?
Me:Pure+Shadow+being made of energy=LOTS AND LOTS AND LOOOOOOOOTTTTTTTTTTTTSSSSSS of energy.
Strike:I don't get it.
Me: PURE SHADOW IS ENERGY,STUPID!!!!I help Gamestopper make him.*bobs head*
Pure Shadow:Some one say my name?Oh,hello!Whatcha doin'
Me:Can you do some zappyness on him?*points to Newman*
P.S:Do I have permi-pim-Can I?
TheGameArtCritic on September 30, 2008, 6:26:13 AM
me: it doesn't work like that. He needs a special N.L. energy. Nothing else is gonna cut it.ShadzGirl on September 30, 2008, 6:29:06 AM
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Me:Oh,that sucks.Strike:Then why did you make me get him?
P.S:Hi?
TheGameArtCritic on October 7, 2008, 1:04:46 PM
Luminos: hi!Everyone: nnn hi yeah sure...
ShadzGirl on October 8, 2008, 2:01:54 AM
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Me:EEE!!!LUMINOS!!*huggles*Hi you!Vatian:*furls wings*Hello.
Verio:*big baby grin*Hi you!
Zandor:Amairia.
Dark:Hiiii!*waves*
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TheGameArtCritic on August 14, 2008, 9:44:07 AM
:DJOIN THE CLUB! XD
Thanks for the comment! I greatly appreciate!
SpiralDemon on September 3, 2008, 2:03:10 AM
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TheGameArtCritic on September 4, 2008, 8:41:03 AM
we ALL are Disturbed-aholics inside....Zukoinferno on August 23, 2008, 10:33:09 AM
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me: *notices vamp* O__o i hate it when he does that...TheGameArtCritic on August 24, 2008, 2:57:57 AM
Eclipse: stop calling me that.Me: IT'S HIM!!!! *GLOOOOOOOOOOMPS*
Eclipse: *facepalm*
Zukoinferno on August 25, 2008, 10:35:49 AM
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vamp: ??? hello again.me: -_-;;;
TheGameArtCritic on August 27, 2008, 10:53:54 AM
me: i know what you look like now.... you have no more excuses.... *smothering him*Eclipse: you're creepy. *points* She's creepy. Does anyone else see how creepy my artist is?
Snowpaw1 on August 17, 2008, 3:32:45 AM
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Ocarina: Eclipse! What happened? (runs up to him)You've changed!!TheGameArtCritic on August 17, 2008, 6:24:59 AM
Eclipse: *slowly turns his head to Ocarina, and blasts her with a large does of dark energy*Me: HEY!!!!
Snowpaw1 on August 18, 2008, 12:43:43 PM
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Ocarina: AUGHHHHH!!! (hits rock) Oww my head..... (gets up but falls down) W-what happened?TheGameArtCritic on August 19, 2008, 6:45:06 AM
Me: Eclipse totally blasted you with this electric dark evil energy!Eclipse: *darkly* I'll finish the job, too...
Snowpaw1 on August 19, 2008, 9:09:23 AM
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Ocarina: Fine... finish me off if you like, but you'll soon regret it, just think of Rosette! Think of all the people you've hurt! you'll regret soon enough.TheGameArtCritic on August 19, 2008, 2:35:11 PM
Eclipse: I will NEVER regret hurting those who hurt me...Me: but Rosette didn't -
Eclipse: *quietly* she broke my heart...
Snowpaw1 on August 20, 2008, 1:08:06 AM
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Ocarina: Wow.... thats just sad (covers mouth as soon as says it) *Now he thinks I pity him! Great just great Ocarina*TheGameArtCritic on August 20, 2008, 2:06:08 AM
Eclipse: *just looks at the ground*Me: i don't think he noticed what you said.
Eclipse: *growls* all i can feel right now is RAGE. I don't know how to stop the anger... it just... doesn't.. go... AWAY!!! *slams his head into a wall*
Me: um.... ow..?
Eclipse: *wipes the blood off his forehead* I just want my revenge...
Snowpaw1 on August 20, 2008, 2:55:03 AM
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Ocarina: Phew... (staggers to get up) revenge on what Eclipse? (staggers over to him) Here you want something to wipe off the blood? (hands him a bandage)TheGameArtCritic on August 20, 2008, 5:32:47 AM
Eclipse: *ignores the bandage offer* I want revenge on those who hurt me. Rosette, Sonic, and my Father!Me: plase! You don't know what you're saying!
Eclipse: of course I do. I figure if i kill them, the anger will go away!
Snowpaw1 on August 20, 2008, 6:31:27 AM
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Ocarina: Mr. Inderetta is fooling you! Come on Eclipse, do you REALLY think that Shadow would of put you in the streets all because he hated you? pull urself together!Me: Noone hurts my Sonniku... (growls) W-
Ocarina: Snow you had nothing to do with this...
TheGameArtCritic on August 20, 2008, 9:43:07 AM
Eclipse: all of you just SHUT UP. I can no longer be tricked by scum like you!Me: stubborn...
Snowpaw1 on August 20, 2008, 11:09:19 AM
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Me: Eclipse look at the discreption.Ocarina: Snow get out. Eclipse Seriously! We would never trick you! Rosette would never do such a thing.
TheGameArtCritic on August 21, 2008, 7:10:41 AM
Me: she really did work for Inderretta.Eclipse: *growls at the sound of her name*
Snowpaw1 on August 21, 2008, 7:30:21 AM
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Me: Eclipse look at the stupid discreption!!!! (pushes him towards the discreption)Ocarina: Snow get out!!!!!!!!! (throws a huge fire ball at me) Come on Eclipse pull urself together. Shadow would never hurt you!
TheGameArtCritic on August 21, 2008, 8:31:08 AM
Me: you know he won't.Eclipse: HE WOULD, AND HE DID!!!! IT'S HIS FAULT FOR ABANDONING ME!!!
Snowpaw1 on August 21, 2008, 8:34:48 AM
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Ocarina: Maybe this will change ur mind? (bear hugs Eclipse) *Probably not...*TheGameArtCritic on August 23, 2008, 3:28:56 AM
Eclipse: *growls when he is hugged, but doesn't do anything to hurt Ocarina*Me: whee? He doesn't seem all that aggressive towards you.
Snowpaw1 on August 24, 2008, 6:55:06 AM
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Ocarina: (lets go) Sorry.Me: wow... I thought for sure Eclipse would smug her.
TheGameArtCritic on August 24, 2008, 2:04:31 PM
Me: nahhh... he may be more irritable now, but he won't hurt Ocarina because he doesn't hold a grudge against her.Eclipse: *brushes self off* I have a grudge against Critic. That's why i follow her around. I will wait until she rests, then kill her in her sleep.
Me: O_o
Snowpaw1 on August 25, 2008, 12:17:49 AM
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Me: umm.... ok.... ??? But Critic was the one tha- Oh I see why... You want to die and Critic I guess "created you" Revenge is bad Eclipse. Really really bad. Its like greed. It pulls you under like a sticky flood and then makes you feel angry. Want to know the reason you feel rage?Ocarina: I'll tell him. Its because Inderetta put a microchip on your brain that turns all ur sadness into rage.
Snowpaw1 on August 24, 2008, 9:15:32 AM
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oops I meant slug.Zukoinferno on August 14, 2008, 7:46:56 AM
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OMG, YOU LISTEN TO DISTURBED TOO!?!?!?!? WUT!!! *high five*i did not see this coming. way to put in the elment of suprise! ^^
TheGameArtCritic on August 14, 2008, 7:51:36 AM
*high fives back* WOOT!!!no one saw this coming. I didn't even see this coming.
but then again, I worked on this at 1:30 am after suddenly waking and going "OMG IDEA!!!"
Zukoinferno on August 14, 2008, 9:05:15 AM
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i get that too.AND I COMPLETED PERFECT ERUPTION! MUA-HAHAHA!!!
and, as a bonus, I GOT THEY'RE NEW ALBUM! O3O
TheGameArtCritic on August 14, 2008, 9:19:57 AM
HOLY FREAKING shoot, LUCKY!!! :OZukoinferno on August 14, 2008, 9:27:10 AM
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I KNOW, AND IT WAS THE LAST ONE IN STOCK FOR THAT DAY!! i got more... than lucky XDDDDDTheGameArtCritic on August 14, 2008, 9:43:15 AM
omg well WHUT EVR! I HAVE RHAPSODY!Eclipse: I can't trust anyone anymore... I can't even trust my own father...
Me: uh... yeeeaaah.... that's gr -
Eclipse: they must all die.
Me: WTF?????
Zukoinferno on August 14, 2008, 9:47:17 AM
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zuko: you're free to kill my dad.me: OxO
TheGameArtCritic on August 14, 2008, 9:51:31 AM
Eclipse: duely noted. But first i must kill you. *smashes Zuko's head against the wall a LOT really really HARD*Me: NO!!! STOP IT!!!!! BAD ECLIPSE!!!!! I LIKE THIS OC TOO!!!!!!
TheGameArtCritic on August 14, 2008, 9:54:58 AM
well... A wall... there's lots of walls.Zukoinferno on August 14, 2008, 9:58:07 AM
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zuko: *lies bleeding for a second then gets up* *looks over his sholder with Iblis eyes* grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr...everyone: *hides*
TheGameArtCritic on August 14, 2008, 9:59:19 AM
me: *hides*Eclipse: stop me if you can, FREAK...
Zukoinferno on August 14, 2008, 10:02:11 AM
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zuko: if you insist, murderer *erupts half way and punches in the stomach*TheGameArtCritic on August 14, 2008, 10:10:17 AM
Eclipse: Grah! *spits out blood, but then quickly grabs Zuko's wrist, and breaks it with a loud cracking noise. He then puts his hand on Zuko's face, and badly electrifies it with Dark Energy*Me: that "murderer" comment Zuko made was a pretty low blow...
Zukoinferno on August 14, 2008, 10:16:15 AM
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zuko: GRRAAAHHH! Y-YOUR GONNA HAVE TO DO BETTER THAN THAT, DUTCHBAG!!!! *regenerates, sets his coat on fire, and uppercut-stomach punch-sidewind kick combo*me: yeah, well, so is freak.
TheGameArtCritic on August 14, 2008, 10:21:01 AM
me: touche.Eclipse: AAAAAAGGGH!!!! *recovers, and takes his coat off. He is now shirtless*
All the girls in the audience: 8D
Eclipse: *grabs Zuko by the shoulders, and flings him across the... room... place... thingy...*
Zukoinferno on August 14, 2008, 10:26:03 AM
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zuko: *rebounds off the... wall... rock... whatever and knees in the muzzle-air spike combo*nazo: OMG, POSER!!!
me: WHOA, WTF?!?!
TheGameArtCritic on August 14, 2008, 10:28:44 AM
Eclipse: *simply sidesteps, and waits for Zuko to crash into the other wall behind him*Me: omfg
Zukoinferno on August 14, 2008, 10:34:49 AM
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zuko: *does* HAHAHAHAHAHA!!! CLASSIC! im beginning to like this new change! but now its time to get dirty. *full eruption* SCREEEEEEE!!!! *chaos controls and grabs by the neck pummling him repeatedly* MEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT!!!angie: meat? wtf?
me: i think he wants to eat him.
angie: !!!
TheGameArtCritic on August 14, 2008, 10:38:10 AM
Me: WHY WOULD ZUKO DO THAT???Eclipse: *is slightly dazed, but shakes it off, and grabs Zuko. He flips Zuko onto his back, and stomps on his head*
Zukoinferno on August 14, 2008, 10:41:40 AM
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ME: BECAUSE HE'S NOW POSSESED MY A MALEVOLENT BEING, DUH!!!zuko: *bites eclipses foot off and throws him by the leg*
TheGameArtCritic on August 14, 2008, 3:00:29 PM
Eclipse: *howls in pain*Me: whaddayah, a DOG?
Eclipse: *glares at me, then regenerates his foot*
Me: oh, right... you can do that...
Zukoinferno on August 15, 2008, 1:24:54 AM
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Perfect Zuko: *lunges* MEEEEEAAAT!!!!!me: i prefer steak than Hedgebat personally XD *gets shove out of way by Perfect* owch...
TheGameArtCritic on August 15, 2008, 1:49:47 AM
Eclipse: GRAAAARRR!!! *turns into his Condemned form, and bites down hard on Zuko's arm, then, using his teeth, Eclipse flings Zuko up into the air. He then jumps up and uses his claws to smash him back down into the ground*Me: o_o holy shoot, a combo.
Zukoinferno on August 15, 2008, 6:37:47 AM
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rubble zuko is in: *silence*me: and now we wait.
TheGameArtCritic on August 15, 2008, 7:17:34 AM
Everyone: ......Eclipse: heh... You are't going down THAT easily, are you?
Zukoinferno on August 15, 2008, 8:12:13 AM
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zuko: *wasnt really in the rubble* nope! ^^ *headspike*TheGameArtCritic on August 15, 2008, 8:46:19 AM
Eclipse: *catches Zuko, and tears at his face* I won't lose to someone like you again...Me:...... da?
Zukoinferno on August 15, 2008, 9:22:35 AM
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zuko: *suprised stare* (those eyes... he has the same eyes. has he... done it?)me: WTF?
TheGameArtCritic on August 15, 2008, 9:49:39 AM
Me: done what - huh?Eclipse: I lost all guilt... all remorse... now all I can THINK of is to kill those who have hurt me... mentally AND pysically....
Me: eyes?
Zukoinferno on August 15, 2008, 10:15:03 AM
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Zuko: ... its impossible, Eclipse. you cant kill them.me: did i even plot this yet?
TheGameArtCritic on August 15, 2008, 11:57:05 AM
Eclipse: WHY can't i kill them?Me: because they're all plot points ^^
Eclipse: you are the first to die...
Zukoinferno on August 19, 2008, 2:58:39 AM
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zuko: *serious tone* even though you maybe a bit more of an emo eclipse, or a bit more of a butterfly eclipse, you are ultimately eclipse. your anger is powerful, but if you let it fuel you any longer, you'll kill yourself. take it from me. you need to let it go before you end up a mindless creature.me: ...
TheGameArtCritic on August 19, 2008, 4:42:39 AM
Eclipse: *thinks for a minute* I can't calm down.Me: wha-why not?
Eclipse: something is stopping me from calming down. I'm still pissed off. I have been wronged by the only person THAT I WOULD EVER TRULY......... *goes silent for a bit*.... the only person that would ever truly..... love...
Zukoinferno on August 19, 2008, 11:25:45 AM
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zuko: *smiles* exactly. *quickly serious* deep inside you, theres just a little bit, if not none at all, of the eclipse you used to be. now tell me, how have these people you used to think were allies "betrayed" you?me: i'd like to know to...
zuko: *bbqs me* stay out of this.
TheGameArtCritic on August 19, 2008, 2:31:24 PM
Eclipse: I... I found out... Rosette used to work for... for Inderretta... I found out she SPIED on us... *growls a little, but at the same tme, tears fall from his cheeks* I discovered that Shadow... my FATHER did not leave me on the streets to save me, but to get RID of me... and Sonic... SONIC KNEW ABOUT IT AND KEPT IT ALL A SECRET!!! *he clenches his fists, tigtening them so hard that his nails dig into his hands, and from under the glove, cut and bleed*Me: that's pretty much betrayel to him.
Zukoinferno on August 22, 2008, 1:22:43 AM
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zuko: did inderretta have proof that all this happened? although i already knew Rosette was- *aherm* undercover.me: i guess it makes sense to me
TheGameArtCritic on August 22, 2008, 6:20:39 AM
Me: she wasn't undercover. She really did work for Inderretta, and ENJOYED it.Eclipse: once i saw Rosette's proof, he didn't need anything else to convince me...
Zukoinferno on August 22, 2008, 2:21:04 PM
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zuko: and what about your father? is he a traitor too?me: dr. phil, eat your heart out.
TheGameArtCritic on August 23, 2008, 3:25:01 AM
me: lol Dr. Phil.Eclipse: no... but he didn't even want me! He left me for dead on the streets! HE WILLINGLY ABANDONED ME!
me: a good point.
Zukoinferno on August 23, 2008, 10:31:55 AM
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zuko: out of guilt. not hatevamp: greetings, brother eclipse.
Zukoinferno on August 23, 2008, 10:32:32 AM
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lets take it back from the topmechadragon13 on August 17, 2008, 6:57:51 AM
hey!!! my comment went poof!!!TheGameArtCritic on August 17, 2008, 9:58:08 AM
WHUT WHY???mechadragon13 on August 17, 2008, 11:45:25 AM
i dunno, its just gone. XPmechadragon13 on August 13, 2008, 3:51:46 AM
whoa. just, whoa. he DOES make an awesome sexy pissed off villain, but i think he should keep his current alignment of "confused hero/antagonist" having him go completely villain whould be horrible........TheGameArtCritic on August 13, 2008, 3:53:51 AM
i know..... *evil grin*it would be horrible, but in a satisfyingly wonderful way.
It's how my sick and twisted mind works.
mechadragon13 on August 13, 2008, 4:01:47 AM
noticed..... but thats just.....TOO cruel......... ther are limits, you know.TheGameArtCritic on August 13, 2008, 4:14:20 AM
he'll be BAAACK.... after a bit.... of a while..I wanna put a wedge between Rosette and Eclipse because every good couple needs to fight now and then, and it's just not normal they they haven't gotten pissed off at least once at each other (or rather Eclipse towards Rosette while Rosette begs him to stop)
mechadragon13 on August 13, 2008, 4:24:06 AM
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TheGameArtCritic on August 13, 2008, 4:31:38 AM
i'm creepy like that.mechadragon13 on August 13, 2008, 5:11:55 AM
noticed. ^^TheGameArtCritic on August 13, 2008, 5:16:40 AM
roflmao!OMG LIZSAME, THE PERSON WHO MADE THAT FANFIC THING I REALLY REALLY LIKE WITH EVIL SONIC..... SPOKE TO ME!
woah!
This means she doesn't ignore her messages. Awesome!
mechadragon13 on August 13, 2008, 5:22:56 AM
cool. ^^TheGameArtCritic on August 13, 2008, 5:30:12 AM
that means i can ask her about the missing fanfic ^^mechadragon13 on August 13, 2008, 8:43:54 AM
you go ahead and do that ^^ and if you find it, send it to me ^^TheGameArtCritic on August 13, 2008, 9:12:05 AM
will do ^^mechadragon13 on August 14, 2008, 1:04:28 PM
O.O oh no you didnt.TheGameArtCritic on August 14, 2008, 2:37:57 PM
i so totally did.Remember: i have no limits.
mechadragon13 on August 16, 2008, 1:23:19 PM
too right. we have no limits. wait. no limits? *evil grin* mwahahahaha.....TheGameArtCritic on August 17, 2008, 3:11:38 AM
Me: *laughs also, then stops* what are we laughing about?K0 on August 14, 2008, 7:11:09 AM
K0 on
cool like your sonic artTheGameArtCritic on August 14, 2008, 7:17:00 AM
thanx, KO!lazertails on August 14, 2008, 6:10:43 AM
lazertails on
nice character ^^the story is cool 2 (i suck at that) well done :)
TheGameArtCritic on August 14, 2008, 6:27:49 AM
thanks! I make better stories too, if you like that. ^^They are in my stories section (no shoot, sherlock). I'm currently working on something called "Control"
ShadzGirl on August 14, 2008, 5:09:11 AM
ShadzGirl on
Vatian:Jacket tears exposing GIANT dragon-like wings*Heh,heh... heh,heh,heh,hehhhh...Me:Durn it.
Zandor:*Appears outta no where and says somethin' in elvish*
TheGameArtCritic on August 14, 2008, 5:15:45 AM
Eclipse: we have a guest...Me: *blubbering* ECLIPSEIREALLYMISSYOUANDIREALLYWANTYOUBACKAND -
Eclipse: *makes me explode*
ShadzGirl on August 14, 2008, 5:23:08 AM
ShadzGirl on
Vatian:How could you!??!And who is this new guy,and what did he say!?!?Me:Uhh...It's elvish for 'I'm gonna kill you both and enjoy it.'
Vatian:Oh,f**k.Just what I needed two against-
Zandor:Al al Awa!!!! <Whither and die!!!!>*shoots both with some great unknown blast of energy*
Vatian:AGGGGHHH!!!!
Me:Vatian!!!!Eclipse!!!!Critic!!!
TheGameArtCritic on August 14, 2008, 5:42:54 AM
Eclipse: NO ONE WILL STEAL MY REVENGE!! NO ONE!!! *eyes turn red, and he puts a sheild around everyone*Me: wwell, i guess you can't be ALL bad.... can you?
Eclipse: *still holding the sheild* I'm not saving you to help you... just to make sure no one else kills you but me...
Me: *sarcastically* oh well THAT'S pleasent...
ShadzGirl on August 14, 2008, 6:01:52 AM
ShadzGirl on
Zandor:*laughs wryly*Asi kasu laks wme na!Me:I'll translate to english.'Look who's talkin'!*Gets an evil idea*Hey maybe he wants to mock you,Eclipse.You never know!
Zandor:<Done yet?>*starts trying to break the shield when-
Skater:Eee,yatta,yatta,yoo!
Strike:Chaos Strike!
Zandor:Eff!<What the h***!?!??!>
TheGameArtCritic on August 14, 2008, 6:07:08 AM
Eclipse: grrr... WHAT'S GOING ON HERE???Me: now Eclipse... I don't think you should -
Eclipse: I'LL KILL YOU ALL!!!
Me: ...... you never listen...
ShadzGirl on August 14, 2008, 5:34:44 AM
ShadzGirl on
Zandor:*Looks at me coldly* <You are a friend of heroes.You will die also>Me:*crying holding poor broken Vatian*<How...how could you...you may be imperfect,but...>*Air starts sparking*<BUT YOU DIDN'T HAVE TO HURT,OR WORSE KILL THEM!!!>
TheGameArtCritic on August 14, 2008, 5:44:16 AM
Eclipse: do you have a grudge against them?
Strike:I don't think he cares!
Skater:Oh,darn!
Strike:*Smirks mischieveously*Don't-
Zandor:QWE RUTO SEWA NA!!!!<Hey! I'm still here!>
Skater:Huh?
Me:Skater!Strike! Be careful!Two pissed off anti-heroes in one room!Er,area,city whatever!
Skater:Man,and I wanted to go on a date with Miley!
Zandor:request denied!