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A Dark Comic pt 2

A Dark Comic pt 2

A Dark Comic pt 2 by TheGameArtCritic
A Dark Comic pt 2 by TheGameArtCritic


Sonic at his most clueless.

Poor Sonic.

I find almost all the pannels with Sonic in them adorable. I have given the blue blur a more innocent look this time.

As for Eclipse... well... pannel one is just plain sexy.

General Info

General Info

Category Comics » Sonic the Hedgehog » Fan Comics (Doujinshi)
Date Submitted
Views 1610
Favorites... 5
Vote Score 7
Comments 67
Media Graphite pencil
Time Taken 2 days
Reference none


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DaniTheCat on December 27, 2009, 11:27:15 AM

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_ren_tao_fan_ on July 13, 2009, 8:21:50 AM

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_ren_tao_fan_You're right. Panel 1 IS sexy. *stares*
Sonic looks funny and cute in the last panel ^^

ShadzGirl on August 29, 2008, 1:50:00 AM

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ShadzGirlLOL^-^Funny in a dark way.Say goodbye to Sonic for me,Eclipse.Oh,and don't forget to tell him I hate his guts!^-^

Strike:That's kinda cruel.

Me:Look whose talkin'!

TheGameArtCritic on August 29, 2008, 8:26:14 AM

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TheGameArtCriticme: don't worry. Sonic won't have a happy ending. ^^

Sonic: you might know what i'm going to do, but that won't help you since i know exactly what YOU'RE going to do - STRANGE ISN'T IT???

Eclipse: *kills Sonic*

ShadzGirl on August 30, 2008, 1:10:29 AM

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ShadzGirlMe:^-^dead favorite

Strike:0_0You really are anti-Sonic!Scary in a very uncomforting way...

Me:Whata you exspect?I'm one o' the anti-heroes!


TheGameArtCritic on August 30, 2008, 5:18:10 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: STRANGE, ISN'T IT????

Eclipse: -_-;

ShadzGirl on August 31, 2008, 4:27:45 AM

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ShadzGirlSkater:Can't touch her,Donow,now,now-

Strike:Don't start that crud!


TheGameArtCritic on September 1, 2008, 4:31:34 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: .......... yeah.

Eclipse: *ish fallen down and tis dying*

Me: oh.

ShadzGirl on September 1, 2008, 5:38:22 AM

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ShadzGirlMe:...Not again.



Me and Strike:This is not the time!!!!

TheGameArtCritic on September 1, 2008, 8:47:27 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: this sucks.

Rosette: <:(

ShadzGirl on September 1, 2008, 11:01:04 PM

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ShadzGirlMe:I have to agree.


Strike:*almost strangles Skater*Skater,so help me I'm going to kill you!

Skater:Glich,help getting my own friend...

Strike:Never said we were.

Me:-_-;You'd think that Strike would be worried more 'bout what's gonna happen...

TheGameArtCritic on September 4, 2008, 1:33:08 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: i live.

Everyone: :D

ShadzGirl on September 5, 2008, 6:28:11 AM

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ShadzGirlMe:0_0 Ok,WTF just happen?Oh well,better for us^-^

Strike:I was hoping you were dead.

Me:*smacks him*Don't be mean!

Skater:Wow,that was a quick recovery.A lot faster than-

Me:Sat it and you DIE!!!

Strike:And she was telling me to shut up.Tch,tch...

TheGameArtCritic on September 5, 2008, 10:03:37 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: something happened in Sonic Unleashed. That's why he's back. He's just having chip problems now.

Eclipse: *something in his head head zaps him* graah!! *wheezes a bit, massaging his head with his eyes closed. He stops. When his eyes open the irises (the colored part) of his eyes are a glowing crimson red* *in a scary voice* Inderretta will die for what he's done...

Me: uh oh. He realized Inderretta has been manipulating him. Because of the chip, the excess anger needs to go SOMEWHERE.... so now the new target is the badger...

ShadzGirl on September 6, 2008, 5:07:29 AM

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ShadzGirlMe:*blandly*I don't fell sorry for the creep.He deserves it.

Skater:D-don't f-feel s-sorry?B-but y-you d-did f-for-

Me:SHUT UP.I hardly ever fell sorry for the bad guy,and sometimes the good guy


Strike:*does his hiss/whistle thing and smirks*You should stick around.Maybe you'll learn something.

TheGameArtCritic on September 6, 2008, 6:57:12 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *still has a very scary voice* are you AFRAID, Skater...? Are you AFRAID of what i might do to that RAT?

Me: Eclipse.... ssshh.... control your anger, or it will control you...

ShadzGirl on September 8, 2008, 2:56:04 AM

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ShadzGirlSkater:M-me?S-scared?A-are y-you k-kidding me?I'M TERRIFIED!!!!AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!*skates away*

Strike:Wow...the only other time he did that when he and Sonic-excuse me,Elenzen-were fighting and Skater was losing.

Me:Eclipse...*sigh*...poor thing...

TheGameArtCritic on September 8, 2008, 9:03:38 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: he's already murdered Inderretta in another rp. It's too late. Also, Rosette ran away from him.

Eclipse: i'm... *sniff* VERY touchy... *sniffle* about.... about.... THAAAAT! *sob*

Me: dawww.... she'll come back... i think...

ShadzGirl on September 9, 2008, 2:52:11 AM

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ShadzGirlMe:*hugs him*Don't's okay.

Strike:*hiss/whistles*His life is the Night of Halloween at Universal.

Me:*glares at him*That's not funny.

Strike:I wasn't trying to be.*thumps Eclipse's back*Don't let it control,Eclipse.It'll drive you MAD.Believe you me.

TheGameArtCritic on September 9, 2008, 10:03:12 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: h-how would you know?...

Me: Strike? You're helping him now?

ShadzGirl on September 10, 2008, 5:09:09 AM

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ShadzGirlStrike:Am I banned from that?Besides I've already been thru this situation...even though,it's half forgotten...*closes eyes thoughtfully*When I really was Strike the Fallen Angel,and not a clone of Shadow...

Me:*hugs him tighter*Who's to say what he's been thru?It's what you're going thru right now that worries me.

TheGameArtCritic on September 11, 2008, 1:06:12 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: and what is he going through right now?

Me: do tell.

ShadzGirl on September 12, 2008, 1:34:33 AM

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ShadzGirlMe:To be honest,I don't know.Strike?

Strike:...*more n' more n' more silence*


Strike:...That's my business.

Me:...Not anymmmmmmmooooooooorrrrrrrrreeeeeeee.I just asked you.

Strike:*still silent*

TheGameArtCritic on September 12, 2008, 10:31:01 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: if he has information he'd rather not share, then leave him be.

Me: how old are you, Strike?

ShadzGirl on September 12, 2008, 10:53:21 AM

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ShadzGirlStrike:14.That I will devulge.

Me:Yes!Spelled right,but why such a big word?

Strike:I don't know.Somethign from a forgotten past.

Me:Just glad your sister doesn't,or we'd be in a dictionary all day!

Strike:Any other questions that I'll answer?

TheGameArtCritic on September 12, 2008, 12:01:00 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *shrugs* just asking. I don't mean to interrogate you.

Me: lol. Eclipse is WAY older than you, Strike....

ShadzGirl on September 12, 2008, 1:55:46 PM

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ShadzGirlStrike:Doesn't bother me.

Me:I just realized that you're a lot kinder at night.

Strike:I guess I'm more comfortable.People are really too tired to fight.Gives me less reason to fight.

TheGameArtCritic on September 12, 2008, 2:30:25 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: i feel more enegized at night. I'm... afraid to go to sleep.

Me: o_o

ShadzGirl on September 12, 2008, 3:07:17 PM

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ShadzGirlMe:*huggles*Aww,I'm sorry.

Strike:You almost went to sleep

Me:when it comes to my friends sleepovers;I'm the nocturnal one^^

Stirke:At home,she wouldn't be talking right now.She'd be trying to crash.

Me:'course I wouldn't be able to,'cuz of you all;my friends!But,it's not bad.

Strike:My question is,what'll happen when it's 9:00,and you've been up with us all night?

TheGameArtCritic on September 13, 2008, 5:30:56 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: i have no idea. Also, you don't have to be sorry. I've been afraid to rest ever since Condemned came along. I'm... used to it now.

Me: you'll never be used to it, Eclipse... those nightmares will never go away...

Eclipse: s-shut up!

ShadzGirl on September 13, 2008, 5:40:54 AM

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ShadzGirlMe:^^ LOL it's 3:40 aaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnddddddddd I'm still alive!!!

Strike:My gosh,you're an animal.

Me:Yayyyyyyy!!!I finally found the Sonic Furry Doll Maker,and now I have a hedgey me^^ *plays with glasses*My web-surfing skills have payed off.Maybe I could do one of the others^^

Strike:Oh,no you don't!!!I've had enough of your idea!!!Eclipse do something!

TheGameArtCritic on September 13, 2008, 12:29:00 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: ECLIPSE SMASH! *breaks the computer*

*everthing goes black*

Me: D:

ShadzGirl on September 15, 2008, 2:55:47 AM

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ShadzGirlMe:that's OK.My friends laptop was already screwed.

Strike:-__-; There's no winning with you,is there?

Me:Not easily^^

Snowpaw1 on September 12, 2008, 9:24:10 AM

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Snowpaw1Me: (stares at panel one) Smexy....

TheGameArtCritic on September 12, 2008, 10:30:01 AM

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TheGameArtCriticis it?

mechadragon13 on August 29, 2008, 11:45:14 AM

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mechadragon13HELL YEAH, ECLIPSE IS SEXY!!! ........what? umm.... me did not say thaaat!!!

sonic = dawwwwww!!! he's so cuuuuute!!!! *read teh other comments* ......"feel"? pfffft.... HAHAHAHAAAA!! that sounds so wroooooong!!!! *dies of laughter*

TheGameArtCritic on August 29, 2008, 2:49:13 PM

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TheGameArtCriticmeh: HAHAHAHAHAAA!! I KNUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!! *dies also*

Eclipse: *is really dead not really*

mechadragon13 on September 2, 2008, 10:05:30 AM

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mechadragon13Me: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! *freakz out*

TheGameArtCritic on September 3, 2008, 8:42:33 AM

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TheGameArtCritic((btw, didja see mah newest story chapter to Control?))

Eclipse: *r.i.p.*

me: holy shoot.

mechadragon13 on September 4, 2008, 8:09:59 AM

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mechadragon13Me: *stares wide-eyes at eclipse* .... *freaks out again* GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!

TheGameArtCritic on September 4, 2008, 8:32:05 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *gets up* I live.

Me: yay!

mechadragon13 on September 4, 2008, 11:03:27 AM

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mechadragon13Me: *phew...* ok, for a second there, methought you were gone XD

TheGameArtCritic on September 4, 2008, 1:32:11 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: no. No i was not.


crowd: wooooooooooooooooooo!!!

Me: Coming to a theater near you.

Eclipse: *huge sigh*

mechadragon13 on September 5, 2008, 10:24:24 AM

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mechadragon13Me: *dies of laughter*

TheGameArtCritic on September 5, 2008, 11:53:11 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: lol you dead. Also, it seems that Eclipse defies death a LOT.

mechadragon13 on September 5, 2008, 12:31:12 PM

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mechadragon13Me: *lives* yup ^^ and so do we XD

TheGameArtCritic on September 5, 2008, 1:19:22 PM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: that's because we CAN'T die.

Eclipse: I m r learning how 2 read.

Me: ..... yeah. Yeah you are. Nice grammer.

mechadragon13 on September 6, 2008, 2:52:42 AM

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mechadragon13Me: *eyetwitch* must.... resist.... correcting..... GRAMMAR!!!

TheGameArtCritic on September 6, 2008, 3:27:54 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: O_O

Me: she want to r correct you lol.

Eclipse: ok stop.

mechadragon13 on September 6, 2008, 4:51:49 AM

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mechadragon13Me: *eyetwitch* must....not......correct....people....gaah.....

Kirbyt on September 3, 2008, 9:58:41 AM

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KirbytThat is very awesome as it is!

TheGameArtCritic on September 4, 2008, 1:32:24 PM

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TheGameArtCriticthank you!

TheGameArtCritic on August 29, 2008, 9:08:05 AM

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TheGameArtCriticSpiralDemmon. You accidentally blocked me.

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on August 28, 2008, 10:28:36 AM

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ShadowsGirlfriend1_0Okay, hands down, that was the funniest Sonic I have seen EVAR. SRSLY. THE BEST XD And yes you made him cute 83 He's almost too cute >__> His character is also spot on!

...Why am I sitting here rambling about him? -__- Eclispe made me lol too :) Random 'homicide' comment and the 'I FEEL YOU' expression lol And panel seven ish mah fave 8D

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on August 28, 2008, 10:29:27 AM

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ShadowsGirlfriend1_0HOLY shootE. I meant KEEL...not feel....XD

TheGameArtCritic on August 28, 2008, 1:05:13 PM

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thanks anywayyyyy......

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on August 29, 2008, 1:16:39 AM

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ShadowsGirlfriend1_0You are welcome :) I am still very sorry that typo happened, the K button is three spaces from the F, I really don't know how I ended up pressing it >__> So, anymore news on Unleashed, or is wikipedia done with informing us?

TheGameArtCritic on August 29, 2008, 9:06:43 AM

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TheGameArtCriticlet me check......... *does*

Archie Comics recently stated that they had plans for an adaption of Sonic Unleashed

Initially, it was stated that Unleashed was to be intended solely as a single-player experience, and would not offer any multiplayer or online modes.[4] This was then cast into doubt when references to online modes were alluded to around E3 2008[13], but a later interview re-iterated that Unleashed would have no online modes at all.[16] A demo will be available on the PlayStation Store and on Xbox Live near to the game's release.[15]

While these characters have been confirmed to appear in the game, Sonic is the only playable character during the main action stages.[4][8] However, optional mini-games are available, during which time another character will be used in order to complete them.[8][15] Tails will also be able to control the Tornado plane.[16]

alucadawn16 on August 28, 2008, 1:31:37 PM

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alucadawn16wow critic this the best yet especialy sonic he is dead on^^ good job^^ cant wait for the rest

TheGameArtCritic on August 29, 2008, 8:24:52 AM

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I might work in the rest...