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A Dark Comic pt 3

A Dark Comic pt 3

A Dark Comic pt 3 by TheGameArtCritic
A Dark Comic pt 3 by TheGameArtCritic


Ok. This comic wasn't so very dark, as it was just hilarious.

I love pannels 6-9 for obvious reasons. It was cute and funny (and i got to give Sonic a more anime face).

As you can see, Eclipse is still on his angry rampage. Once Eclipse is done with, he'll go after Rosette. Poor Rosette. She doesn't know he's evil yet. This may finally put a wedge between her and Eclipse. Who knows how deeply it may enter the young couple's hearts...

General Info

General Info

Category Comics » Sonic the Hedgehog » Fan Comics (Doujinshi)
Date Submitted
Views 1737
Favorites... 7
Vote Score 7
Comments 83
Media Graphite pencil
Time Taken 2 hours
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DaniTheCat on December 27, 2009, 11:25:24 AM

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DaniTheCatSonic:hey buddy!its me!dont you reconize me?
Eclispe:ofcorse i remember you sonic!
Eclispe:youre the fleebitten mongret who lied to me for seventeen years!!!

nikki2010 on December 26, 2009, 12:43:29 AM

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nikki2010god thats funny nice work thats alot of comments i scrolled down 4ever i swear thats funny luv there cute faces lol

ShadzGirl on August 30, 2008, 1:17:47 AM

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ShadzGirlOoooo!!!!!TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO funny!!!!!All you gotta do is put Sonic saing"Please don't hurt me 'cuz I'm special."LOL

Strike:Isn't that Mandez's line?

Me:*rolls eyes*Still it's funnier if Sonic says it right before he dies!^-^


TheGameArtCritic on August 30, 2008, 5:16:04 AM

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TheGameArtCriticSonic's not going to die......

I find this funny though ^^

ShadzGirl on August 31, 2008, 4:46:07 AM

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Strike:Cute,yeah right....

TheGameArtCritic on August 31, 2008, 7:00:23 AM

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TheGameArtCriticlol ooookaaaay.....

ShadzGirl on September 1, 2008, 3:31:44 AM

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ShadzGirlStrike:She is in love with chibis AND anti-heroes.

Me:*huggles Eclipse*But,their just SSSSSSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOO cute!Opps,sorry Eclipse;got carried away.


TheGameArtCritic on September 1, 2008, 4:25:13 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: grrr....

Me: lol he hates getting hugged ^^

ShadzGirl on September 1, 2008, 5:49:32 AM

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Strike:-.-;I'll say it again,imbecile.

Me:Can I help if he is just so cute?

Strike:-_-;You know I think I should leave before this gets too weird.good-bye!

Me:*hugs Eclipse again*Sorry,too tempting!!!!

TheGameArtCritic on September 1, 2008, 7:21:40 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: -_-; blah.

Rosette: :)

Me: is he still evil?

Eclipse: *dark grin* yes i aaaaaaammmm....

Everyone: eep!

ShadzGirl on September 1, 2008, 8:22:40 AM

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ShadzGirlMe:*still huggling*So cute...

Skater:OK,WTF?Has she been doin' this the whole time?

Me:*lost in Eclipse cuteness Land*

TheGameArtCritic on September 1, 2008, 8:43:34 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: >:( *zaps Shadzgirl off*

Me: >:O *points*

Eclipse: >:)

ShadzGirl on September 1, 2008, 11:08:31 PM

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ShadzGirlMe:*kinda dazed*I'm OK...

Dark:*giggles*You like giving hugs to people who don like 'em ^-^

Me:I can't help it!

Dark:*looks at Eclipse as if to say "You'll really have to get use to that"*

Me:*shrugs*'Sides,I'm use to gettin' blasted,burnt,scratched,etc.

Dark:Hee,reminds of Midnight,hee,he blast you.Eclipse blast you too!

Me:*shrugs again*hey,I'm one of life's greatest targets!I think Eclipse could also say amen to that...^-^


TheGameArtCritic on September 2, 2008, 8:42:38 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: nh. Whatever.

Me: so full of NO EMOTIONS WHAT??? XD

ShadzGirl on September 3, 2008, 2:54:34 AM

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Verio:*pops outta no where floating*Hi yous!Whacha doin'?

Me:Messin' around with Eclipse...

Verio:Huh?but Eclipse at home?

Me:Wrong Eclipse.

Verio:*looks up*Oh,the big Eclipse!Hi,you^-^

TheGameArtCritic on September 3, 2008, 8:40:21 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: wait - what?

Eclipse: grrrrrr....

ShadzGirl on September 4, 2008, 5:39:55 AM

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ShadzGirlMe:Um...I have AN a Eclipse...we call him Lil' Eclipse...and Verio got confused...just surprised the furball did think he was "Z"^-^

Verio:*floats up really close to Eclipses face*Hi,you!You Nona's friend?You know "Z"?

Me:^-^Please don't shoot 'im.He doesn't understand

TheGameArtCritic on September 5, 2008, 9:57:39 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *sighs* FINE. Sure, you could call me "Nona"'s friend.... i guess.....

Me: i love you.

Eclipse: ok shut up.

ShadzGirl on September 6, 2008, 5:11:00 AM

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ShadzGirlMe:Thanx^-^ You realize I'm "Nona"?That's what a lot of my friends and my little brothers call me.My real name is Oriana.(a lot easier than ShadzG,huh?)

Verio:yeppie,yep,yep!She my mommy!And Shadow ish my daddy!

TheGameArtCritic on September 6, 2008, 6:54:24 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: uh.... what?

Me: you have a little brother!!! XD *hugs him*

Eclipse: *pushes me off*

ShadzGirl on September 8, 2008, 2:59:46 AM

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ShadzGirlMe:Not really.He's a little Shadow,and with taken care of him since he was nay tall.*holds hand little lower than knee*He's one of our little adopted family.Then there's Dark,Derik,Clad Cloak,and Electric.


Me:Sorry,he likes to scare people like that!

TheGameArtCritic on September 8, 2008, 9:01:37 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: uh.... ok.

Eclipse: i feel guilty because i murdered another person.

Me: nice going, idiot.

ShadzGirl on September 9, 2008, 2:57:47 AM

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ShadzGirlMe:*shrugs*It happens to people like you who have a rollcoaster for a life.Don't punish yourself.

Verio:*sits in my lap and eats cookie*Ym frgit Milestm!


Verio:*sallows*You forgot Maelstrom.

Me:Oh!That's right!By the way,Verio,did you see him at home?


Me:Oh,joy.Hopefully he is not causing trouble again.

Crowd:AIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!*runs from building that is on fire with black flames*

Me:0_0'Course,I could be wrong...


TheGameArtCritic on September 9, 2008, 10:01:17 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: what's going on???

Me: i dunno.

Eclipse: yeah. REAL helpful. We need to help anyone near the building.

Me: oh i see. You're not evil anymore, correct?

Eclipse: i'll always be dark on the inside.

Me: don't give me that poetic emo crap.

Eclipse: if you don't like it, then don't talk to me. *goes into his Condemned form* lets go.

ShadzGirl on September 10, 2008, 5:14:49 AM

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ShadzGirlMe:No.Stay.I know exactly what's going on.

Verio:Ooo,ooo,ooo^-^Maelstrom in TROUBLEEEEEEE.

6 minutes later...

Maelstrom:Ow,what the heck?!

Me:*drags him by his ear*OK,WHO DID YOU KILL NOW!?

Maelstrom:No one,'right?I hurt him,but he's not dead!!!


Maelstrom:Donno;some kid who needed an "attitude adjustment"


Verio:She mad.VERY mad^-^

TheGameArtCritic on September 11, 2008, 1:10:17 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: YOU HURT A CHILD????? YOU IDIOT!!!! *growls*

Me: he's very attached to children.

ShadzGirl on September 12, 2008, 1:43:41 AM

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ShadzGirlMaelstrom:Relax,he's just bruised.


Maelstrom:Maybe...I broke his..legs,but...

Me:YOU WHAT!?!?!

Maelstrom:Ma,chill.His family can pay.It was just some rich snob who messed with my bro.


Maelstrom:you mess wid' my family,you mess wid' me.

TheGameArtCritic on September 12, 2008, 10:29:29 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: THAT'S NO EXCUSE TO HARM CHILDREN!!! *eyes go pure red*

Me: Eclipse... uh... chill, dude.

ShadzGirl on September 12, 2008, 11:04:39 AM

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ShadzGirlMaelstrom:Does he considers some who hurts a emo street kid a "child?"

Me:*sigh*This is not gonna go well.

Maelstrom:*sneers and crosses arms*

TheGameArtCritic on September 12, 2008, 11:59:49 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *shudders, regaining control of himself, and glares at Maelstrom* I don't like any kid getting hurt... EVER. Dn't make me use COndemned... I WILL if neccessary...

ShadzGirl on September 12, 2008, 1:52:06 PM

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ShadzGirlMaelstrom:I WAS protecting a kid at the same time,bud.Thanks for being so understanding.

Me:*pulls his ear*SHUT-THOU-MOUTH!!!!

Maelstrom:OWWWWW!!!!Al'ight!!!FINE!!!Let go!!!'K!!!I'll try to control my temper!Geez,ma!You have a worse temper than that loser,Shatoro,but you know I don't like people messin'wid'Shadik!He's my bro!My lil' man!

TheGameArtCritic on September 12, 2008, 2:28:26 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: i don't care if you were protecting your MOTHER, you should NEVER hurt someone in the process.

Me: dude. You're a hypocrite.


ShadzGirl on September 12, 2008, 3:10:39 PM

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ShadzGirlMaelstrom:Whatevuh,just know this.You lay a finger on Shadik,and you DIE.

Me:I'm pretty sure Shadik can take care of himself,Maelstrom.

Maelstrom:So?I'm not gonna let some rich snob snicker at my bro!'Specially since my bro only has power to throw at 'im!

TheGameArtCritic on September 13, 2008, 5:28:33 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: i'm not touching the kid. YOU just need to make sure that YOU don't touch OTHER kids! *growls*

Me: dude. Maelstrom. You're diging your own grave.

ShadzGirl on September 13, 2008, 5:36:10 AM

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ShadzGirlMaelstrom:Hmph,I'm not dumb,but don't worry.I've clawed my way out of deeper deaths.*smirks*It's how I operate.

Me:*sigh*Your "operation" is gonna get us killed...

Maelstrom:Hmph.I think there's no "us" in this sitution,ma.

Me:Feels like it.the trouble you cause...I'm surprised Shadow hasn't been done wid' you a long time ago...


TheGameArtCritic on September 13, 2008, 6:01:00 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: i am a timebomb waiting to explode.

Me: you said that in another comic. That i never posted. 'Cause it was lame.

ShadzGirl on September 15, 2008, 5:11:03 AM

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ShadzGirlMe:I like that^^I don't really care lame it might seem.

Maelstrom:I still don't care.I can take it,and I can take you out while I'm at it.


Maelstrom:I'm not bragging if that's what you're thinking.I'm simply stating the obvious.You should know that.


mechadragon13 on August 31, 2008, 11:03:29 AM

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mechadragon13........pffffft *is trying to hold it in* must not...... *cant hold it in any longer*

DAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!! SO CUUUUUUUUUUTE!!!!! SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!! LOL panel 6!!!!!! and 7 ^^ and 8 ^^ and 9 ^^ aww, forget it, the whole thing is AWESOME.

TheGameArtCritic on August 31, 2008, 3:20:51 PM

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TheGameArtCriticok, i get it. You obviously like pannel 6. PANNEL 6!!! yay.

mechadragon13 on September 2, 2008, 11:07:46 AM

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mechadragon13yay for panel 6 XDDD

heheheh, "go to your room" was hilarious too XD

TheGameArtCritic on September 2, 2008, 2:56:45 PM

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Ebil Eclipse: HAHAHAHAH!

mechadragon13 on September 3, 2008, 8:35:34 AM

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mechadragon13Me: *pwns eclipse with teh wrench of pwnage*

TheGameArtCritic on September 3, 2008, 8:39:00 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *is teh pwned*

Meh: *Nelson laugh* HA-HA!

mechadragon13 on September 4, 2008, 8:11:18 AM

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mechadragon13Me: HA!!! take thaaat!

TheGameArtCritic on September 4, 2008, 8:27:44 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *gets up, then falls down again*

mechadragon13 on September 4, 2008, 11:08:54 AM

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mechadragon13Me: ..... did i kill him again?

TheGameArtCritic on September 5, 2008, 9:56:04 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: no. It's ok.

Eclipse: agh. You hurt me. BUT YOU KNOW WHAT???? *irises go red (not all of his eyes)*

Me: what?

Eclipse: *takes out a jar of dirt from nowhere at all* i got a jar of dirt... i got a jar of dirt... i got a jar of dirt... i got a jar of dirt... i got a jar of dirt... i got a jar of dirt... i got a jar of dirt... i got a jar of dirt... i got a jar of dirt... AND GUESS WHAT'S INSIDE IT?

Me: uuuhhh -

Eclipse: NOTHING BUT DIRT!!!! AHAHAHAHAHA!!!! *falls to the ground laughing at a joke that didn't make sense*

Me: Mish.... did you break him, or something...?

mechadragon13 on September 5, 2008, 10:38:59 AM

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mechadragon13Me: i....don't....know....... O.O;;;;

TheGameArtCritic on September 5, 2008, 10:58:53 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: YES!!!!! I WON'T TAKE THIS CRAP ANYMORE!!! *throws the jar of dirt to the ground, then falls on it facefirst*

Me: dude. Wtf????

Eclipse: *gets up again* I DON'T KNOW, OK!!??? YOU MADE ME GET A F***ING CLONE!!!!

Me: oh. THAT'S what this is about.....

mechadragon13 on September 5, 2008, 11:10:30 AM

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mechadragon13me: ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh......wait, WHAT??? CRITIC YOU BAKA!!!! YOU GAVE INDERETTA THE FREAKING SRYNGE IN PURPOSE!! *has a spaz attack*

TheGameArtCritic on September 5, 2008, 11:26:41 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: no no. It's ok. Newman is the type of villain you WANT to have...

Eclipse: how so?

Me: he's funny.

Eclipse: IT'S GAY.



Me: he's opposite PERSONALITY AND COLOR, you idiot!

mechadragon13 on September 5, 2008, 11:33:12 AM

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mechadragon13me: *was looking back and forth between yo uand eclipse, and is now laughing* i'll have to meet him myself to be sure XD

TheGameArtCritic on September 5, 2008, 11:41:10 AM

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TheGameArtCriticNewman: HI!!! *obnoxious wave*

Me: HI!!! *waves back*

Eclipse: oh gawwwwwd...... *buries his face in his hand*

Newman: what's wrong special friend? You seem sad! DO YOU NEED A MAN HUG!!???

Eclipse: AH!!! STAY AWAY FROM ME!!!

Newman: i really think you need a man hug. *hugs Eclipse tightly*

Me: *tries to hold in a laugh* s-see? He's n-not gay.... he's just really.... REALLY..... puheeheheh... HAPPY! Heheheheheheh....


Newman: you're just overreacting! Besides, don't you have that demon to make you tough?


Newman: if i had a demon, i would use it to my advantage. *squeezes tighter*

mechadragon13 on September 5, 2008, 11:52:14 AM

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mechadragon13me: then, in a way, he IS gay. gay used to mean happy, ya know XDDDD can I have a hug, newman?

TheGameArtCritic on September 5, 2008, 12:01:55 PM

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TheGameArtCriticNewman: YAAAAAAAAA!! *group hug*

Me: *gigglesnort*

mechadragon13 on September 5, 2008, 12:24:40 PM

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mechadragon13Me: LOLZ XD he is SO much happier than eclipse XDDDD

TheGameArtCritic on September 5, 2008, 1:14:24 PM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: omg i KNOW! XD

Newman: although we cannot be friends, i wish you all a good future, and maybe we shall be the best of enemies!

Eclipse: *pretends to wretch* you make me sick.

Newman: i love you, too! ^^

Snowpaw1 on September 12, 2008, 9:27:09 AM

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Snowpaw1Me: ROLF!!!! Newman is so happy!

Lynn_The_Fox on September 5, 2008, 11:18:37 AM

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Lynn_The_Fox*dies laughing... again...* XD

Snowpaw1 on September 3, 2008, 10:15:52 AM

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Snowpaw1Me: OMG thats hilarious!!! Eclipse is all like "i luv u Sonic im so innocent!" and then is all like GRAH. Its funny when Sonics all like "GO TO UR ROOM!" Eclipse does look hawt in the first pannel

TheGameArtCritic on September 5, 2008, 9:59:33 AM

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TheGameArtCriticfirst pannel? You mean in 2?


Zukoinferno on August 31, 2008, 3:21:39 AM

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angie: *goes into panel 6 and GLOMP* ^^
zuko: -_-;

TheGameArtCritic on August 31, 2008, 4:26:29 AM

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TheGameArtCriticthank you ^^

Didja see my new chapter to the story Control?

The ending is actually cute this time! :D

Zukoinferno on September 1, 2008, 5:10:20 AM

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ZukoinfernoI DID!!! *favs piccy btw*

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on August 30, 2008, 1:53:03 AM

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ShadowsGirlfriend1_0THE EYES XD I squealed with delight while reading 6 and 7. That was unexpected! Sonic's face in nine was priceless. You have an excellent way with expressions n_n Though, the pose in panel 5 was a bit awkward >__> Even when considering that, this comic shines greatly 8D

"GO TO YOUR ROOM!!" = insta-lulz XD

TheGameArtCritic on August 30, 2008, 5:14:38 AM

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"hey buddy, don't you reconize me?"

"of COURSE I reconize you, Sonic <3"


"You're the flea-bitten mongrel who lied to me for 17 years!"


ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on August 30, 2008, 5:59:35 AM

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TheGameArtCritic on August 30, 2008, 6:13:30 AM

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TheGameArtCriticyes. But it's pathetic.

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on August 30, 2008, 6:33:01 AM

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ShadowsGirlfriend1_0Pathetic? As in it's going to be sad, or that neither battler will be trying very hard to put up a fight?

TheGameArtCritic on August 30, 2008, 6:39:12 AM

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TheGameArtCriticPathetic as in Sonic will go down in only a few hits.

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on August 30, 2008, 7:04:08 AM

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ShadowsGirlfriend1_0Oh lawd, someone hasn't been taking his steriods lately XD

TheGameArtCritic on August 30, 2008, 9:01:26 AM

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TheGameArtCriticlol! But no. Eclipse has been pumped up with so much boiling unchecked anger that i guess............. maybe he got stronger?

He has full control of Condemned now....

I also heard that being angry or scared gives you more strength.

arijo on August 30, 2008, 6:14:12 AM

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arijowoah...Sonic is still gonna get it XD lols Eclispe's cute face

TheGameArtCritic on August 30, 2008, 6:14:40 AM

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TheGameArtCriticyes me too XD

arijo on August 30, 2008, 6:31:27 AM

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arijoShadow:i can't wait...

TheGameArtCritic on August 30, 2008, 6:29:37 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMephiles had a cheap shot. I just think Sonic is much too lucky.