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Vorace After Gaining Intelligance

Vorace After Gaining Intelligance

Vorace After Gaining Intelligance by TheGameArtCritic
Vorace After Gaining Intelligance by TheGameArtCritic

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TheGameArtCritic
Well... he's not really that different... BUT WAIT! He has... armband... thingies...

AND HE'S NOT DROOLING! YAAAAIIIII!

AND HE ACTUALLY LOOKS LIKE HE CAN THINK! YAAAAIIIII!

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Category Comics » Sonic the Hedgehog » Fan Characters (OC's) » Hybrids
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Media Graphite pencil
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mechadragon13 on May 23, 2009, 1:35:14 PM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *thinking* craaaaaap.... *backs up* .........

Me: SPEAK.

TheGameArtCritic on May 23, 2009, 1:56:05 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *twisted, utterly insane smile* what's wrong, Mikenno? Is the Eclipse you knew now gone forever? Are your plans foiled?

Me: do you know the song Mr. Blue Sky by ELO?

mechadragon13 on May 23, 2009, 2:45:05 PM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: no..... my plans ARE dead.... but i know eclipse isn't gone. i've tried every outcome, and eventually you come back...... *thinking* but i'm not the one who brings you back...... because almost every single outcome sees me dead....

Me: link me 2 lyrics, plz.

TheGameArtCritic on May 23, 2009, 3:41:36 PM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: i be doin' that tommorow... tapping :P

Eclipse: *grimaces* why don't you kill me? If i am truly mad, then why don't you end my suffering?

mechadragon13 on May 23, 2009, 11:51:04 PM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *through his teeth* because. it's not. YOU. *stamps a paw on the last word for emphasis* it's that goddamned machine in you f*cking head!! *growling* besides, you look likebyou're having fun with you new abilities. why rain on your parade? *suddendly leaps up and flies like all of hell is after him*

TheGameArtCritic on May 24, 2009, 1:05:23 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *flies after him, an evil glare on his face* I'm also having fun no longer feeling remorse over you PIGS! I can kill you, and not weep, not mourn, not grieve...

mechadragon13 on May 24, 2009, 2:10:07 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: if only the others could hear you..... *turns around and hovers, waiting for him to catch up*

TheGameArtCritic on May 24, 2009, 2:41:10 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *catches up* what now, slimeball? *the robotic part of his face glistens in the sun*

mechadragon13 on May 24, 2009, 7:57:05 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: .....i'm not gonna run anymore. you better be ready... *bares his teeth in a snarl* ...otherwise you're REALLY in for it...

Me: lyrics linky?

mechadragon13 on May 24, 2009, 10:25:45 AM

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mechadragon13Me: *reads lyrics* oooooo......

TheGameArtCritic on May 24, 2009, 3:05:20 PM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: yup. At the transformation part of Dead Inside, I'm going to pull up those lyrics in an attempt to be completelly ironic.

Eclipse: I'm always ready... *comes at Mikenno*

mechadragon13 on May 24, 2009, 3:08:51 PM

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mechadragon13Me: whoo.

Mokenno: *waits* >:)

TheGameArtCritic on May 24, 2009, 3:19:05 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *OMG ABOUT TO STRIKE AT HIM*

Me: yup.

mechadragon13 on May 24, 2009, 3:22:19 PM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *suddendly tilts his wings, so he drops and flips around, and lightly slashes at eclipse's stomach* >:) you're too slow! *swerves away before eclipse can get at him*

TheGameArtCritic on May 24, 2009, 3:34:10 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *doesn't even wince, but smiles* you've only hit the steel, Mikenno... how do you expect to defeat me? *charges after him*

mechadragon13 on May 24, 2009, 3:41:34 PM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: with a thousand years of experience. *grins, then flies off again, headed for the river*

Me: he's gonna try to crash eclipse in the river, jus so you know, so he'll sink. when he's practically drowned, he'll get him out.

TheGameArtCritic on May 24, 2009, 3:45:50 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: WHAT'CHA GONNA DO? SPLASH ME TO DEATH? *lets out another insane cackle*

Me: ooooo :) ... "die, you glorified fan character!! EHEHEHEHEH!!"

mechadragon13 on May 24, 2009, 3:49:02 PM

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mechadragon13Me: XDDDDDDDDD

Mikenno: maybe. ^^ *keeps flying really low, skimming the surface of the river*

TheGameArtCritic on May 24, 2009, 3:57:54 PM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: DO YOU NOT SEE WHY I LOVE FLEETWAY SUPER SONIC??

Eclipse: *follows closely behind Mikenno, but when he gets close to the river, Eclipse can't pull up in time, do to laggy turning from the weight of his own metal under-skin, and he gets trapped under the river-water. He panics*

mechadragon13 on May 24, 2009, 4:00:35 PM

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mechadragon13Me: yersssss.....

Mikenno: *does a u-turn, then suddendly seems to stop in mid-air, and drops into the river. he swims towards eclipse, and stares at him underwater* <your steel skeleton is your greatest strength, but also your greatest weakness. you are beaten, nocturnal. you cannot survive underwater for long.>

TheGameArtCritic on May 24, 2009, 4:11:36 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *he's quickly runnning out of air - but he still manages to look up at Mikenno and glare*

Me: *singing the Sonic drowning theme* doo doo doo doo... doo doo doo doo... doodoodoodoodoodoo - !!

mechadragon13 on May 24, 2009, 4:14:46 PM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: <will you let me save you, eclipse? will you let me rescue you from death?>

Me: note how he sayd "eclipse" and not "norturnal" or anything else. he's referring to the situation as a whole, not just the drowning thing.

TheGameArtCritic on May 24, 2009, 4:25:52 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *his thoughts are hazy, and uncollected* <...n...nev...r...> *with too much water in his lungs, he blacks out*

Me: I want to see more F. Super animations...

mechadragon13 on May 24, 2009, 4:29:09 PM

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mechadragon13Me: XD

Mikenno: ........... *reaches down, and pulls eclipse out of the water, and puts him on the banks of the river* .......... *climbs out, and shakes the water off* i am sorry, my friend. *bows his head* i have failed you. *opens his wings, and flies away, leaving eclipse there* ................i am sorry..........

Me: last night i had a dream that mikki had to KILL eclipse.... for some reason.....

TheGameArtCritic on May 24, 2009, 4:39:18 PM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: DDDD:> ?????? XDDDDDD I'm sorry, WHAT?

Eclipse: *lays there, still blacked out, dripping wet, in the forest*

MIND

Nocturnal: *has gotten spazzy, and buzzy* what hassszzzs... happened... to ussszzzss...?

Eclipse: I... don't know... we must of blacked out in the river...

Nocturnal: then how... are we... alive?

Eclipse: ... Mikenno...

Nocturnal: he saved you?...

Eclips: ... apparently... *thoughtful*

mechadragon13 on May 24, 2009, 4:44:11 PM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *keeps flying* ............

Me: i dunno, it was something like, well, you know how nocturnal dies when eclipse dies? well he thought something like well, i kill him in a certain way that i can bring him back afterwards, but something goes wrong and he cant bringg him back, or something...... my god, you should have SEEN IT! it was such a vivid dream, too..... my gosh, it was like watching a pixar film....... but seriously....

TheGameArtCritic on May 24, 2009, 4:54:50 PM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: XDDD Sometimes I imagine my characters in 3D...

*eventually, Eclipse wakes up, coughing up some water*

Eclipse: ... *still lays there* ... what if... what if it was I who had actually betrayed them...?

Dillusion!Rosette: ...

Eclipse: *gasps at the sight of her* R... R...

Dillusion!Rosette: shhh... it's ok... *bends down and holds his hand*

Eclipse: <:)

Dillusion!Rosette: ... You need to seek out the truth using your HEART... not your mind... they're your friends, Eclipse...

Eclipse: but ... you're dead... you're probabally just... just... how do you know...?

Dillusion!Rosette: If you love me, Eclipse, then you'd trust me... even if I'm not real...

Eclipse: ... I love you... I do trust you... before I lose my mind again... I need to get help... *slowly stands up*

Dillusion!Rosette: <:) *disappears*

mechadragon13 on May 24, 2009, 4:58:38 PM

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mechadragon13Me: i KNOWWWW... once i had a dreak all in sonic riders style. it pissed me off cuz the shadows were weird. kickass dream though XD

Mikenno: *lands back at the cliff-cave, and walks in* .........

My Sis: *sleeptalk* mmahhh....! mmhm. *flip over*
Me: XDDDDD

TheGameArtCritic on May 24, 2009, 5:13:36 PM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: XDDDDDDDDDDDD oh. BED TIEM NAO.

Eclipse: *starts his slow walk back to HNHQ*

*hours later*

Eclipse: *arrives at HN, and knocks on the door*

mechadragon13 on May 24, 2009, 5:17:46 PM

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mechadragon13Me: NOES!!!!! D8> well, it IS like, 11:00 over there. g'night ^^ talk to ya tuesday, unless you call me in the car XD DON'T O_O

Mikenno: *had fallen asleep in the cave, and just wakes up again* ...........

meanwhile

Twilight: *was in charge of watching that door at that time, and looks to see who it is* !!!!!! *thinking* oh my gosh, do i let him in?!?!?! D:>

TheGameArtCritic on May 25, 2009, 2:07:26 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: Something IS wrong with me... as you can see from the robotic half of my face... I'm sorry, Twilight... I'm so sorry... I need your help... I need EVERYONE'S help... get Nocturnal out before he does anymore damage... PLEASE... I can't take

Nocturnal SSSSSTOOOP...

Eclipse: this anymore... Nocturnal may trick me

Nocturnal: NO NO NO NO SSSSSTOOOPPP IIIITTT...

Eclipse: again... he's influential... he's EVIL... just... please...

Nocturnal KILLLLLL HERRRRR...

Eclipse: help...

mechadragon13 on May 25, 2009, 9:12:05 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: *nods* we'll do all we can. *lets him in* come on, let's get you to a med room........

Mikenno: .......... *walks out of the cave* ....... *looks at the floor, and notices his paws are more see-through than the day before* gotta hurry...... *takes off*

TheGameArtCritic on May 25, 2009, 9:31:27 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *follows Twilight to the med room*

Nocturnal: NO NO NO NO KILLLLLLL...

Eclipse: *ears pin down flat against his head*

mechadragon13 on May 25, 2009, 9:33:10 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: ........he's yelling at you isn't he? nocturnal? *opens teh door to teh med room*

Mikenno: *is halfway theeeeeeeeere*

TheGameArtCritic on May 25, 2009, 10:00:31 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: no... it seems more like he's drilling a certain command into my head... *walks in*

Nocturnal: KILLLLLL KILL KILL KILLLLLLL HERRRRR...

Eclipse: *winces* the funny thing is... Rosette was the one who convinced me to trust you again... after fightin mikki and

Nocturnal: NO NO NO NO...

Eclipse: nearly drowning...

mechadragon13 on May 25, 2009, 10:10:39 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: so rosette's memory made you change your mind? huh....... here, sit here. *points to a med-table* i'll go get the others. who do you want here?

Mikenno: *there* ........

TheGameArtCritic on May 25, 2009, 10:32:10 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *sits on the table* ... *rubs the metallic side of his face*

Nocturnal: SHE'LLLLLLL HUUUUUURT UUSSSS...!! NO NO NOOOOO...!!

Eclipse: everyone. I want everyone here, knowing that I'm back.

TheGameArtCritic on May 24, 2009, 2:45:54 AM

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mechadragon13 on May 22, 2009, 1:57:01 PM

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mechadragon13Me: *waits* *kiara imitation* alright. IMPRESS ME. >:3

Mikenno: *backs up farther, until his back's against a wall*

TheGameArtCritic on May 22, 2009, 2:10:18 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *blades literally RIP right out of his wrists. Steel. Unbreakable. He pours the lightness on them, and rubs it in, making the blades glow. As he rubs the stuff, it burns his fingers*

Me: BAM.

mechadragon13 on May 22, 2009, 2:14:11 PM

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mechadragon13Me: .......okay, im impressed.

Mikenno: *hadn't seen that one coming* .......sh*t. *plan=go!! he leaps over eclipse in one bound, then leaps out of the hole in the ceiling. his goal: RUN LIKE HELL*

TheGameArtCritic on May 22, 2009, 2:29:07 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *jumps out of the hole as well, and chases Mikenno down* GET BACK HERE!!

Me: *bows*

mechadragon13 on May 22, 2009, 10:36:18 PM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *leaps into the air and starts gaining altitude* not again, not again, not again!! D:>

Me: note, this is how he ran before they killed him, only there were a dozen bigger dragons chasing him ^^

TheGameArtCritic on May 23, 2009, 1:18:36 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *grows wings and flies after him* COWARD!! FIGHT ME!!

me: lawl, now he's being chased by his best friend.

mechadragon13 on May 23, 2009, 6:52:20 AM

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mechadragon13Me: yep.

Mikenno: crap. okay, okay, lets see if i can still do this.... here goes everything! *suddenly does a u-turn, and opens his jaws wide, a rumble emanates from his throat, and suddenly--- FWOOOSH!! a stream of crimson flames erupts from his jaws*

Me: teehee. oh, btw, he's not shooting to hit eclipse, just as a deterrent. ^^

TheGameArtCritic on May 23, 2009, 7:06:01 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: !!! *gets the hell outta the way*

Me: W00T.

mechadragon13 on May 23, 2009, 8:24:49 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *turns tail and flies for his life, pumping his wings furiously* D:>

TheGameArtCritic on May 23, 2009, 8:29:15 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *growls, and continues to chases him* FIGHT ME, MIKENNO, OR ARE YOU AFRAID TO?? *lets out an insane cackle*

mechadragon13 on May 23, 2009, 8:41:28 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *still flying like, aaaaaah!* the odds against me are too great. besides, i'm a scout. scouts don't fight. but they CAN do thiiiiiiiis..... *suddenly folds his wings in and drops like a rock towards the forest* >:)

TheGameArtCritic on May 23, 2009, 12:08:35 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: ... *dives after Mikenno*

IN HIS HEAD

Nocturnal: *screeching KILLLLL HIIMMMMMMM!!

mechadragon13 on May 23, 2009, 12:15:34 PM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *as soon as he gets past the treeline, he opens his wings halfway, pulling out of the dive. he easily weaves in between the trees* ......

Me: would it hurt nocturnal if mikki did something like a mindroar?

TheGameArtCritic on May 23, 2009, 12:28:13 PM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: no, because Nocturnal is a machine that was designed to stand the most powerful of mind defences.

Eclipse: *halfway down, he smacks into a tree, and falls the rest of the way down onto the forest floor* AAGH!! RRrrr...

mechadragon13 on May 23, 2009, 12:33:31 PM

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mechadragon13Me: *head+DS*

Mikenno: *does a running landing, and stops* ...... *turns his head back towards eclipse* .......

TheGameArtCritic on May 23, 2009, 1:08:57 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: his face had scraped hard on a tree during the fall. Half his face is now extremelly blood... and yet... SHINY...

Me: destroying Nocturnal would mean shoving your hand into his brain, and ripping it out.

mechadragon13 on May 23, 2009, 1:23:40 PM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *hadn't suspected the change, and was taken aback* w-what did he do to you.....?

TheGameArtCritic on May 23, 2009, 1:30:15 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *gets up and wipes the blood off, to reveal that he now looked like the luminos robot clone* he said it was phase three... making me indestructable so that I won't die... He's put a layer of duro steel under my skin... I feel immortal now... *stalks towards him*

Me: FANTASTIC IDEA FOR DEAD INSIDE IS FANTASTIC!!!!

mechadragon13 on May 19, 2009, 2:08:36 PM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *had completely pulled himself out of eclipse's mind, so he can't tell* ..... *stands up* make yourself comfortable. *walks out of the small cave*

TheGameArtCritic on May 19, 2009, 2:15:03 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *puts his back against the wall he pounded on, and slowly slides down it, onto his butt*

mechadragon13 on May 20, 2009, 4:21:39 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *goes out to the main cave and sits under the opening, staring out at the sky* ..............i miss you..................... *tear*

Me: <:(

TheGameArtCritic on May 20, 2009, 8:42:26 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: :C

Eclipse: *staring blankly at the ground* maybe he'll help us... maybe he's not one of them... *stare* how are you sure that he is? *stare* that's... that's true...

INSIDE HIS HEAD

Nocturnal: are you going to let him trick you? Are you going to let him do this to you?

Eclipse: *darkly* no sir... no I won't... *pupils shift to predetory slits*

mechadragon13 on May 20, 2009, 9:23:25 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno; *unaware of the goings-on in the cave, and just stares wistfully out the opening* ...........

Me: DOOM.

TheGameArtCritic on May 20, 2009, 11:32:12 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *comes up behind him, and puts a hand on his shoulder* y'know, Mikenno... I think I was wrong... I actually think that... I was just being paranoid... I'm sorry...

mechadragon13 on May 20, 2009, 11:37:00 AM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13Mikenno: *still distraught, not really paying attention, he keeps staring out the hole* it's okay.........

TheGameArtCritic on May 20, 2009, 11:44:11 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: you need to get your mind around that, Mikenno... come on... you can't dwell on the past - especially since that past was more than a thousand years ago...

mechadragon13 on May 20, 2009, 11:45:52 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: when you're shackled to a wall in hell, there's not much else to think about...... *shakes his head* but you're right. i can't dwell on the past..... *stands, and stretches like a cat* rff....

TheGameArtCritic on May 20, 2009, 11:56:27 AM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticEclipse: so... no possible way to kill a demon, huh? What about lightness? Pure lightness?

mechadragon13 on May 21, 2009, 4:13:08 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: they've tried that already. all it did was send me back to hell. which i can escape from easily. b'sides. i'm technically in a half-dead state right now. not a ghost, but a ghost at the same time. hard to kill.

TheGameArtCritic on May 21, 2009, 8:34:56 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: would an excorcism tear you in half?

mechadragon13 on May 22, 2009, 5:57:21 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: well, i wouldn't know, i don't---- *suspicious* .....why do you want to know? *eyebrow raise*

TheGameArtCritic on May 22, 2009, 9:00:27 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: I want to know what can make you go away for good so I can prevent people from hurting you... *fingers twitch*

mechadragon13 on May 22, 2009, 11:58:23 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *FINALLY figures it out. he backs away from eclipse, growling and baring his teeth* i'd rather suffer for the rest of eternity than to be tricked by the likes of YOU, Nocturnal!! *snarls ferociously, opening his wings wide* i WILL fight you, eclipse, as i'll rip nocturnal right out of your head if i have to!

TheGameArtCritic on May 22, 2009, 12:55:23 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: I guess I'll have to settle with sending you back to hell... *slips a vial of pure lightness from the back of his shoe* stole this... thought it might come in handy... don't come any closer, Mikenno, or I'll have to splash it all over your face and rub it in like lotion... *to what seems to be himself* ...I won't let him hurt you...

mechadragon13 on May 22, 2009, 1:03:53 PM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *hesitates, and takes a step back* eclipse.... you know that'll hurt you too....

TheGameArtCritic on May 22, 2009, 1:13:38 PM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *grows an insane grin* I know... but anything will work if it means keeping my partner safe... *uncorks the bottle and takes a step closer*

Me: y'know, I've done something special to Eclipse... a thing that required thinking outside the box. I assure you - you will be suprised.

mechadragon13 on May 22, 2009, 1:31:14 PM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *has an idea. he continues moving back at the same pace as eclipse* ecliiiiiipse........ these walls dont need to be stained with blood again.......

Me: orly? im not eaisly surprised. try me. >:)

TheGameArtCritic on May 22, 2009, 1:42:04 PM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticEclipse: yes... yes we do... YOURS... *steps closer more*

Me: I WILL >:O

mechadragon13 on May 19, 2009, 6:55:28 AM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13Mikenno: .........almost there.

TheGameArtCritic on May 19, 2009, 8:41:39 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: doesn't respond to Mikenno* ...

*finally, they arrive at their destination*

mechadragon13 on May 19, 2009, 11:07:31 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *lands on a rocky cliff on the side of a mountain. there is a cave carved out of the mountainside* ............ *sits down to let eclipse off*

Me: btw, this is where mikki lived when he was alive, but no one lives there anymore.

TheGameArtCritic on May 19, 2009, 11:16:05 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *goes into the cave, and touches a wall* there was a lot of history here... ... ... and rats. So many rats.

*there are no rats*

mechadragon13 on May 19, 2009, 11:25:19 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *takes a deep breath and follows him in* this was my home once. back when there were no RATS.

TheGameArtCritic on May 19, 2009, 11:27:48 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: that place that you spoke of before? This was it? Why are the walls... orange?

*the walls aren't orange*

mechadragon13 on May 19, 2009, 11:38:34 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: either your eyes haven't adjusted to the light yet..... or nocturnal's screwing around again.

TheGameArtCritic on May 19, 2009, 11:45:41 AM

TheGameArtCritic on
TheGameArtCriticEclipse: Nocturnal can't help it... the schizophrenia was in his design...

mechadragon13 on May 19, 2009, 11:51:19 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: i'll have to point stuff out, then..... *goes deeper into teh cave*

TheGameArtCritic on May 19, 2009, 11:57:49 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: follows Mikenno*

mechadragon13 on May 19, 2009, 12:01:49 PM

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mechadragon13*they reach a bigger chamber, with a sort of opening at the top to let light in and to allow dragons to fly out. smaller caves branch out fro' this main one*

Mikenno: ........

TheGameArtCritic on May 19, 2009, 12:40:43 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: where was your part of the cave? Did you even have one?

mechadragon13 on May 19, 2009, 12:47:05 PM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *jerks his head towards a cave, third to the left* i stayed there with my mother, otherwise they would have slaughtered me.

TheGameArtCritic on May 19, 2009, 12:54:09 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *enters that part of the cave, and looks around*

mechadragon13 on May 19, 2009, 12:59:21 PM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *sticks his head in, refusing to go in farther*

*there are two shallow dips in the floor*

TheGameArtCritic on May 19, 2009, 1:05:15 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: ... *feels the dents within the floor* what are these?

mechadragon13 on May 19, 2009, 1:16:15 PM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *huffs, and forces himself to go in the cave. he steps into one of the dips, then lays down and curls up* we would sleep in these. it's better than flat ground. not so bad once you get used to it. *points at the other dip with his tail* my mother would sleep there. she was my only comfort.

TheGameArtCritic on May 19, 2009, 1:20:54 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: ... *lightly feels the dent where Mikenno's mother once rested*

mechadragon13 on May 19, 2009, 1:27:05 PM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: ........ *sighs and curls up into a tighter ball* why did i come back here.....?

TheGameArtCritic on May 19, 2009, 1:31:18 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: I needed a place away from all those scheming mobians...

mechadragon13 on May 19, 2009, 1:40:05 PM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: mmh..... *becomes lost in thought, and goes completely silent* ........

Me: i find it ironic that i'm listening to "sanctuary" right now XD it's the japanese version tho. *hums*

TheGameArtCritic on May 19, 2009, 1:45:09 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *slams his fist against the wall*

The noise: *is an echoey BOOM sound, that floods the cave

Me: love that song :D

mechadragon13 on May 19, 2009, 1:47:34 PM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *jumps, and looks over at eclipse* what?

TheGameArtCritic on May 19, 2009, 2:04:28 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: .....thought I saw a bug...

*he's lying through his teeth. He actually just wanted Mikenno to stop thinking like that*

mechadragon13 on May 18, 2009, 9:55:09 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *total suspicion* ................... *tries to "hear" the conversation*

TheGameArtCritic on May 18, 2009, 10:05:07 AM

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TheGameArtCriticNocturnal: *senses what Mikenno is trying to do, and suddenly does a super loud mindscream*

Eclipse: AUUUUUUUUUUUUUUGGGGGHHHH!!! *holds his ears, desperatally, even though it won't won't*

mechadragon13 on May 18, 2009, 10:09:11 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: AAAAAGH!!! *it hurts him too, and he suddendly swerves to the side, as if trying to get away from the noise. he roars in pain* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGH!!!!

TheGameArtCritic on May 18, 2009, 10:14:33 AM

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TheGameArtCriticNocturnal: GEEEETTTT OOOOOOOUUUUUUUUUTTTTTT!!!

Eclipse: JUST DO IT!!!!!! *yelling in pain again*

mechadragon13 on May 18, 2009, 10:17:33 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *gets out* STOP IIIIIIIT!!!! *in serious pain*

TheGameArtCritic on May 18, 2009, 10:30:13 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *suddenly, he stops screaming. The ringing in his ears, and the pounding in his head refuses to go away. His conciousness fades, and he blacks out on Mikenno's back*

mechadragon13 on May 18, 2009, 11:16:04 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *straightens out his flight path again, and looks back at eclipse* ...............

TheGameArtCritic on May 18, 2009, 11:26:55 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *though unconcious, his expression shows that he is disturbed by Nocturnal's sudden attack, and still in pain*

mechadragon13 on May 18, 2009, 11:34:40 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *wants to help, but fears triggering another mindscream*

TheGameArtCritic on May 18, 2009, 11:55:22 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *still unconcious, though he's less unsettled then before*

mechadragon13 on May 18, 2009, 12:25:40 PM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *calms down a bit, and continues on his flight path*

TheGameArtCritic on May 18, 2009, 1:16:09 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *halfway through the flight, he regains conciousness. He doesn't speak to Mikenno, fearing Nocturnal's wrath*

mechadragon13 on May 17, 2009, 12:54:51 PM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: better? they never let you out of that, huh?

TheGameArtCritic on May 17, 2009, 12:58:52 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *stretching* no. They don't. *blank staring* he let me go. *stare* not now. He let me go. He let US go... *stare* are you sure...? I... I don't know if - *stare* ... ... *glares at Mikenno* I hope I can trust you - TRULY...

mechadragon13 on May 17, 2009, 1:23:45 PM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *narrows his eyes* the real you knows you can trust me.

TheGameArtCritic on May 17, 2009, 1:28:46 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: Nocturnal says that you still work for THEM... I must listen to Nocturnal if I want to keep breathing... if I die, he dies... so it's not like he's leading me to my doom...

mechadragon13 on May 17, 2009, 1:37:24 PM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: just think eclipse. where have you been since inderetta put nocturnal in you head? a psycho ward. who came to rescue you? I DID.

TheGameArtCritic on May 17, 2009, 1:52:27 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *shouting* WHO PUT ME IN THERE IN THE FIRST PLACE, HMM??

mechadragon13 on May 17, 2009, 1:59:44 PM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: a doctor did. i objetced.

TheGameArtCritic on May 17, 2009, 2:15:09 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *shaking* y-you took me there yourself... you helped put me in the room...

mechadragon13 on May 18, 2009, 5:09:58 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: only because i knew that if i didn't take you, someone else would have, and they wouldn't have been as careful as i was. if had had any other choice, i wouldn't have put you in there.

TheGameArtCritic on May 18, 2009, 5:52:59 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: ... ... *thinks*

mechadragon13 on May 18, 2009, 7:26:19 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: ..................

TheGameArtCritic on May 18, 2009, 7:49:36 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: ... I'll... trust you... for now... *blank staring, then he winces, as if Nocturnal gave him a short, shrill mindscream*

mechadragon13 on May 18, 2009, 8:00:08 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: you'll learn to trust me too, nocturnal......... heh. i'm guessing you don't want to go back to HN?

TheGameArtCritic on May 18, 2009, 8:11:51 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: I FOUND A SONG FOR ALL DEMEKARRS IN GENERALLLLL!!!!! *excited* It fits them PERFECTLY! It's like, a chant for them! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wV9TRR4Ielo

Eclipse: NO!! How could you suggest that???

mechadragon13 on May 18, 2009, 8:18:22 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *grins* just wondering.......

Me: ♫OH HOLY CRAAAAAAAAAAAP... I THINK YOU BLEW MY BRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAINS OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOUT~!♪

TheGameArtCritic on May 18, 2009, 8:29:57 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *grabs Mikenno by the shoulder threateningly* you don't JOKE about that!! *growls* not in a world where everyone wants you DEAD!

Me: I DID???? D:

mechadragon13 on May 18, 2009, 8:36:40 AM

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mechadragon13Me: it's perfect!!! 8D

Mikenno: okay, okay, calm down...... the only one i know wants you dead is condemned. maybe ryu. but that's TWO. out of six BILLION.

TheGameArtCritic on May 18, 2009, 8:52:03 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: I KNOW RIIIIIIIIGHT???????????????? 8DDDDD

Eclipse: I don't believe that... *blank staring* Nocturnal doesn't believe you either.

mechadragon13 on May 18, 2009, 8:55:12 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *shrugs* nocturnal's just making you paranoid. where would you go then?

TheGameArtCritic on May 18, 2009, 9:08:43 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: I don't know... somewhere safe... away from PEOPLE...

Me: I be tryin' tah call you.

mechadragon13 on May 18, 2009, 9:20:59 AM

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mechadragon13Me: aah! my phone's on vibrate!

Mikenno: ..... *lightbulb* you don't mind mountains, do you?

TheGameArtCritic on May 18, 2009, 9:27:08 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: I'm fine with anyhing...

mechadragon13 on May 18, 2009, 9:32:07 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: .....okay. *turns into his dragon form and sits down* get on. we're flying.

TheGameArtCritic on May 18, 2009, 9:33:51 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *hesitates, then gets on* throw me off, and I'm flying back, and ripping you apart... kill you before you kill me...

mechadragon13 on May 18, 2009, 9:37:29 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: you don't have to worry about that. *takes off* i'll be careful. i haven't let anyone fall yet. and i'm 1000 years old.

TheGameArtCritic on May 18, 2009, 9:52:17 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: ... ...

Me: I got an idea that I'm going to keep a secret from you...

Eclipse: *twitches suddenly, and squeezes between his eyes, shutting them tightly* *blankly stares* I'm on... phase three...? *twitches* sorry... I didn't mean to say that out loud... *what exactly are you doing...? *blank staring* making me... indestructable?... I don't understand... It feels like something's crawling under my skin... and I mean besides Condemned... *stare* improving me...?

mechadragon13 on May 17, 2009, 3:48:58 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: oh really? and after you rip all the padding out, how're you going to get through the two feet of cement and steel, hmm? *sorta knows the answer*

TheGameArtCritic on May 17, 2009, 5:20:09 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: I'm gonna bust my way through... once I get out of this straight jacket, I'm gonna bust through... you'll see... *tears at the padding*

mechadragon13 on May 17, 2009, 6:43:27 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: ...........i could get you out if you want me to.

TheGameArtCritic on May 17, 2009, 6:51:45 AM

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TheGameArtCriticElipse: ... ... why should I trust you?

mechadragon13 on May 17, 2009, 6:56:59 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: because i'm your friend, eclipse. i hate seeing you in here. if there's any way to get you out of here before these "doctors" break you, then i will. even if i have to force you out.

TheGameArtCritic on May 17, 2009, 7:08:31 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: btw, this really is how insane asylum therapy works... XD Mikenno's treating the doctors like they're evil XDD

Eclipse: show me. Get me out. Show me I can trust you again...

mechadragon13 on May 17, 2009, 7:11:33 AM

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mechadragon13Me: he hates doctors. remind him to much of the thinkers..... b'sides, havent you heard of people who died in asylums from too many drug messing with their heads?

Mikenno: .....first, you have to show me i can trust YOU. you must swear that you'll let US help you. you have to swear that you will not try to run when we get out.

TheGameArtCritic on May 17, 2009, 7:27:03 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: ... ... ... alright...

Me: no, I haven't.

mechadragon13 on May 17, 2009, 7:31:07 AM

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mechadragon13Me: wells, its true.

Mikenno: ...... follow me. *walks out the door*

Me: note- mikki can make it no people don't notice them. they might see them, but they won't think anything of it.

TheGameArtCritic on May 17, 2009, 7:47:02 AM

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TheGameArtCriticme: tapping

Eclipse: ...... *follows Mikenno, unsure with his decision*

mechadragon13 on May 17, 2009, 7:49:32 AM

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mechadragon13Me: aww, that sucks.....

Mikenno: you can trust me, eclipse..... *just walks down the hallway as if it were nothing*

TheGameArtCritic on May 17, 2009, 8:04:52 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: back to the laptop! :D

Eclipse: *panics when they get near a therapist*

Therapist: *doesn't notice them*

Eclipse: ... ?

mechadragon13 on May 17, 2009, 8:05:54 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *grins* forget about that? heheh. *just walks out of the building* i'm thinking you want out of that straightjacket.......

TheGameArtCritic on May 17, 2009, 8:29:44 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: back on the computer! :D

Eclipse: you can't touch it... it's been bathed in liquid lightness...

mechadragon13 on May 17, 2009, 9:15:43 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: huh. that's a new one..... *looks around* oh look, a pointy rock. *picks it up and stares at it* ............

TheGameArtCritic on May 17, 2009, 9:26:36 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *immedietally jumps back, paranoia kicking in* YOU'RE GOING TO SHRED ME TO PIECES LIKE PAPER WITH THAT! I KNOW IT!!

mechadragon13 on May 17, 2009, 9:34:50 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *still staring at the rock* there's that paranoia again.... *looks at eclipse* do you think your best friend would kill you?

TheGameArtCritic on May 17, 2009, 9:37:55 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *growls* no, but an agent would... *the crosses in Eclipse's pupils are noticeable again*

mechadragon13 on May 17, 2009, 9:54:06 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: well, good. because i'm not an agent. but if you'd rather stay in that there straightjacket, be my guest.

TheGameArtCritic on May 17, 2009, 10:11:17 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: ... ... *walks back to Mikenno*

mechadragon13 on May 17, 2009, 10:17:05 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: ...... *carefully cuts at eclipse's restraints*

TheGameArtCritic on May 17, 2009, 10:33:39 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *he has no gloves and shoes on - meaning he's naked. I had to point this out. He lightly flexes, enjoying his freedom*

mechadragon13 on May 15, 2009, 11:44:55 AM

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mechadragon13Me: YES!!! THAT'S EXACTLY WHAT I WANTED!! XDDDDD

Mikenno: ....yes, eclipse.........

TheGameArtCritic on May 15, 2009, 11:53:52 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: kl... yu...

Me: (kill you)

mechadragon13 on May 15, 2009, 11:58:40 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *shakes his head* you can't kill a demon, eclipse. much less a ghost. i'm already dead. you know you don't really want to, eclipse. you know it's nocturnal feeding you lies.

TheGameArtCritic on May 15, 2009, 12:08:39 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *starts trembling madly* kll... yu... KLLL YUUUU...!! KILL YOU!!! *his shaking gets worse, and he manages to stand up, though he looks like he could collapse at any minute*

*an alarm can be heard lightly through the door - Eclipse's oh-no-he-needs-a-temporarly-bigger-drug-dose-pronto alarm*

mechadragon13 on May 15, 2009, 12:10:42 PM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *looks up at hearing the alarm, and stands up* you brought this upon yourself, eclipse..... *fades out of view, but is still in the room. you can only see a faint distortion where he stands, and only if you know where he is*

TheGameArtCritic on May 15, 2009, 12:24:12 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *his wheezing breath is fast, as his heart beat speeds up in anger. He still has his eyes focused on Mikenno, even when he's hard to see*

Doctor: *come in* calm down, Eclipse... calm down...

Eclipse: *shouts out an angry, wordless scream at them*

Doctor: *not fazed, he has a pill covered in a cloth in his fist. He takes a step foreward*

Eclipse: *growls at him threateningly*

Doctor: *tackles Eclipse down to the ground, shoves the pill in his mouth, and pinches his nose so that he HAS to swallow it*

Eclipse: *when he swallows the pill, he sputters a few times, then just goes limp, falls on his back, and stares at the ceiling, unmoving. Wide-eyed*

Doctor: see? Isn't this nice? It's a depressant... you aren't even regestering what I'm saying as I'm saying it... you hear it three seconds later... don't you just feel all happy, Eclipse?

Eclipse: ... ... ... ... ... *five seconds later, he lightly grunts, still staring at the ceiling*

Doctor: exactly.

mechadragon13 on May 15, 2009, 12:29:47 PM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *is appalled at how the doctors treat eclipse. he emanates a sort of wave of disapproval, that can be easily felt by others in the room, including the doctor* rrrr.....

Me: mikki's NOT happy..... expect mikki to go haunt him later.

TheGameArtCritic on May 15, 2009, 12:37:04 PM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: I totally expected this.

Eclipse: *still unnmoving, and staring at the ceiling*

Doctor: *shivers a bit* brrr... *rubs his arms, then leaves the room*

mechadragon13 on May 15, 2009, 12:41:30 PM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *looks back at eclipse, then follows the doctor out, continuing to send out the wave. he follows the doctor to wherever it is he's going* >:(

TheGameArtCritic on May 15, 2009, 1:09:44 PM

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TheGameArtCriticDoctor: *goes to the computer room (shoots vector), and moniters Eclipse's computer*

Computer screen: *shows the ceiling - though it's completelly distorted and fuzzy... the ceiling is almost unreconizable... plus there's a rainbow veil over the whole thing, adding to the fact that Eclipse is on so many drugs that he can't think straight. Emotions: Happy, confused, angry (turqoise), exhausted, scared, angry (red)*

mechadragon13 on May 15, 2009, 2:40:18 PM

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mechadragon13Me: losta anger, huh? XD

Mikenno: *looks at the computer screen, and frowns. he makes himself slightly more visible, and returns his eyes to their normal brightness, seriously making himself looklike a ghost. the fact that he has big leathery wings, claws, and fangs helps too. his voice is quiet....* do you enjoy torturing others?

TheGameArtCritic on May 16, 2009, 12:44:41 PM

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TheGameArtCriticDoctor: hmm? *turns around* AAH! Wh-what are you??

Computer Screen: *same*

mechadragon13 on May 16, 2009, 12:51:01 PM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: you could call me a vengeful spirit......... they call me unknown....... now answer the question, doctor...... *fixes him in his burning gaze, as if he were staring at his soul, which he's probably doing*

Me: if you dont know, mikenno=unknown in japanese, so he's not lying, lol. btw, like my icon? you better, cuz I MADE IT O_O

TheGameArtCritic on May 16, 2009, 1:07:52 PM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: I know. I commented on the pic. XD

Doctor: N-no! A-and we're n-not TORTURING him!

mechadragon13 on May 16, 2009, 1:14:10 PM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *raises an eyebrow, and slowly raises his arm and points at the monitor he tilts his head slightly to the side, looking really eerie* how long has that screen shown the same emotions.......?

Me: mikki's having fun. and THANK YOU. but im tapping, so i cant look at your comment cuz it hates dA.

TheGameArtCritic on May 16, 2009, 1:22:40 PM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: :( ALSOOO.... posted Jacob's piccy.

Doctor: W-well... happy w-was just added in r-recently... we're not HURTING him... we're c-c-CURING him!

mechadragon13 on May 16, 2009, 1:33:32 PM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *lowers his arm* anyone would feel "happy" if they were that stuffed with depressants and other sh*t. i knew it was a mistake to leave him here..... *looks like he wants to kill something*

Me: omg yai!!

TheGameArtCritic on May 16, 2009, 1:42:50 PM

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TheGameArtCriticDoctor: *stands upright* well I know THAT! What do you think we're trying to do? KILL him??

Screen: *still same*

Me: :D

mechadragon13 on May 16, 2009, 1:54:52 PM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *voice becomes quieter, his crimson eyes burning* you may not be killing his body, but you are killing his MIND........

Me: XD

TheGameArtCritic on May 16, 2009, 2:12:12 PM

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TheGameArtCriticDoctor: WELL IT'S A HELL OF A LOT BETTER THAN HOW HE WAS BEFORE!!

mechadragon13 on May 16, 2009, 2:23:34 PM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: death makes all mortals become quiet. death makes all immortals all the more talkative...... how have you seen him "improve," doctor?

TheGameArtCritic on May 16, 2009, 2:27:29 PM

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TheGameArtCriticDoctor: the pills have been stopping him from attacking people. It's teaching him to TRUST again... to stop believing those LIES that he hears in his head... to actually REALIZE that those people and creatures he see's are nothing more than a hallucination...

Screen: *loses anger (turqoise)*

Doctor: see?

Screen: *gains enraged (turqoise)*

Doctor: OH NO!!

mechadragon13 on May 16, 2009, 2:44:01 PM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *frowns* so much for drugs. *starts heading for the door. he puts a hand on the doorknob, and pauses* i wouldn't go in that room for a while if i were you, doctor....

TheGameArtCritic on May 16, 2009, 2:50:39 PM

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TheGameArtCriticDoctor: it's my JOB D:

Screen: *shakes*

mechadragon13 on May 16, 2009, 3:01:30 PM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *shrugs* get torn to peices, then. *grins at the doctor, the walks out, headed back to eclipse's room*

TheGameArtCritic on May 16, 2009, 3:16:23 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *is chewing at the padded walls - stuffing spills out of where he ripped through, and it's now in his mouth, and between his teeth*

mechadragon13 on May 16, 2009, 3:18:34 PM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *quickly enters the room, locking the door behind him. he speaks firmly* ECLIPSE.

mechadragon13 on May 16, 2009, 3:22:02 PM

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mechadragon13Me: SET IT TO COLUMN MODE, ITS FASTER O_O

TheGameArtCritic on May 16, 2009, 3:47:19 PM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: IT IS IN COLOMN MODE

Eclipse: *turns around and growls like a wolf at Mikenno*

*Eclipse had forced himself to regurgitate the pills, as implied by the wet puddle of goop in the corner of the room with white shapes in it*

mechadragon13 on May 17, 2009, 12:35:51 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *his lips curl back in a snarl* eclipse, you IDIOT....... do you WANT to be trapped in hhere for the rest of your LIFE?

TheGameArtCritic on May 17, 2009, 3:07:04 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: NO, YOU FOOL! I WANT TO BUST OUT!! *turns and continues ripping at the padding*

mechadragon13 on May 14, 2009, 10:48:00 AM

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mechadragon13Lightning: *growling gets a smidge louder* rrrrrrr......

SKye: .......... *looks at the floor*

Mikenno: and what are you, a fairy princess?

Skye: *snorts at mikenno's comment, and claps her hands over her mouth* XD
Lightning: *chuckles* :D

Me: XDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

TheGameArtCritic on May 14, 2009, 1:29:43 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *snorts* NO... I am a dangerous being whom YOU have been given the mission of watching until I get out of hand... in which case, you will terminate me...

Vorace: that is not true!

Eclipse: SHUT UP!

mechadragon13 on May 14, 2009, 1:58:30 PM

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mechadragon13Mikki: if that was our mission, you would have been terminated a few hours ago.

TheGameArtCritic on May 14, 2009, 2:04:06 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: you TRIED... well, you tried ONE hour ago... but I wouldn't let you... and Nocturnal wouldn't let you... and then YOU escaped! YOU made Nocturnal upset! It's all YOUR fault!

Vorace: Nocturnal should not even be in there in the first place! You are acting as if he is your child!

Eclipse: *quietly* we're a TEAM...

Jacob: a team of what? A team of idiots? He's TRICKING you, Eclipse! He's making you more paranoid than you really are! He's putting gases into your brain - DRUGS!

Eclipse: you can't trick me...!

Vorace: Lightning and Mikenno have been your friends for YEARS, Eclipse... why would they hurt you now...?

Eclipse: BECAUSE I FOUND THEM OUT, YOU GODDAMN AGENT!!

Vorace: does this even seem like a plausable scenerio?

Eclipse: *starts getting hysterical* ...yes...!!

mechadragon13 on May 14, 2009, 2:17:52 PM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: in any case, it was you who tried to be rid of ME. and look at me now. i'm a practically a GHOST. you say you're a team. you're as much a team as a puppetmaster and his toys!!

TheGameArtCritic on May 14, 2009, 2:34:30 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: ...JUST GO AWAY...!!

Vorace: ...

Jacob: ...

mechadragon13 on May 15, 2009, 2:41:10 AM

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mechadragon13Me: and now, aria has a word ^^

Aria: *stands up, looking frustrated* NO, eclipse. We're your friends, and we're trying to take care of you, so you BETTER F*CKING DEAL WITH IT.

Me: *golf clap*

Skye: ......
Lightning: ......
Mikki: ......

TheGameArtCritic on May 15, 2009, 6:03:42 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *fights to stand up again, but still can't* You all shall burn in hell for your cruelity...

Jacob: What cruelity?

Vorace: we try to help, and you shun us!

mechadragon13 on May 15, 2009, 7:03:22 AM

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mechadragon13Lightning: eclipse, we haven't done anything to hurt you, not now, not ever!!
Twilight: everything we do is to protect you, eclipse. whether it seems like it or not. <:(
Skye: please, eclipse.... you have to believe us...... don't listen to inderetta's dumb machine!

Mikenno: .............

TheGameArtCritic on May 15, 2009, 8:32:43 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *growls at them*

Therapist: *comes in* ok, that's it. Visiting time is OVER. We don't want him to get TOO tense do we? Run along, the lot of you!

Jacob: :( *walks out*

Vorace: *walks out*

mechadragon13 on May 15, 2009, 9:12:56 AM

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mechadragon13Twilight: *reluctantly walks out* .....
Skye: *looks back at eclipse before leaving* .......
Aria: hmph. doctors....
Fugue: shut up before they lock you up in here too :P *they both go out*
Acid: ......... *is worried for his nephew, much more than he lets on*
Vera: *puts a hand on his shoulder and smiles reassuredly* we'll sort him out, acid. let's go.... *both leave*
Lightning: *glares at the therapist, which is somewhat like a lightning bolt shot at you (mentally, o' course), then walks out*

Me: myehhhh.....

TheGameArtCritic on May 15, 2009, 9:26:12 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: time juuuuuuuump

*it had been weeks. Eclipse undergoed test after test, pill after pill, to destroy Nocturnal, and free his mind. Plenty of times from the EST machine, he almost died, but the close calls wouldn't stop the doctors from trying again the next day. The poor hedgebat was a suffering fellow. Because of the pills, he couldn't do much of anything anymore. If you tried talking to him, all you got as an answer was silence (no), or a weak grunt that meant "yes"*

Eclipse: *in the corner of his padded room, silently resting his head against the wall. He doesn't try to pull at his straight jacket anymore - even if he did, it would be useless. The straightjacket had been created just for him - indestructable, and washed in liquified lightness (to make it demon-proof)* ...

mechadragon13 on May 15, 2009, 9:28:22 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *watches him from behind the window, as he had done every day since that first dreadful day. he is still a ghost, so no one really notices him there much. he's still stuck in his half-dragon form* .............

Me: oh, sorry if i didn't make this clear, but they took mikki's body with them when they left. ^^;

TheGameArtCritic on May 15, 2009, 9:36:05 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: iz coo.

Eclipse: *shifts a bit. It's the first movement he's made all day*

Doctor: *comes in* time for your daily shot, Eclipse.

Eclipse: *doesn't say anything*

Doctor: *stabs him in the arm with a vaccine* How are you feeling?

Eclipse: ...

Doctor: alright, then. You feel QUIET... as usual... *walks out of the room*

mechadragon13 on May 15, 2009, 9:38:09 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *slips into the room as the doctor is leaving. he stands by the door, waiting to see if eclipse will notice him*

TheGameArtCritic on May 15, 2009, 9:51:19 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *shifts a little bit more, and weakly gazes at Mikenno. His irises have dulled horribly from all the drugs he was taking. His pupils have dialated also (which only happens when you're high off of something), which wouldn't suprise anyone considering how many drugs the doctors were force-feeding him down his throat* ... ... *lets out a weak grunt. His way of saying "hi" in the state he was in. Upon close inspection, you would also notice that his quills no longer have a shine to them. They, too, have dulled dramatically*

mechadragon13 on May 15, 2009, 9:54:36 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: .... *walks to him, and sits down in front of him. he looks rather weird in his half-way form, but it's either that, or a big pretty dragon. XD* <not doing too well, huh? you don't have to talk if you don't want to, eclipse. i know it's hard right now....>

me: sorry, i was replying to my german pan pals :) whee! they have weird english, LOL! XD

TheGameArtCritic on May 15, 2009, 10:10:50 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: ... ... *finally, he speaks for the first time in weeks. It is slurred, mumbled, and just plain hard to understand* gd... wy...

mechadragon13 on May 15, 2009, 10:15:49 AM

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mechadragon13Me: go away?

Mikenno: *doesnt move, and kinda just sits there* .........

Me: you gotta make what eclipse's saying clear to me at least, so mikki knows what he's saying. mikki's a mind reader, but if he doesn't have anything to read (which there always IS something on someone's mind) he kinda just looks a bit stupid....

TheGameArtCritic on May 15, 2009, 10:27:52 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: yes. He said 'go away'. Also, I'll be sure to tell you what he said next time as well ^^

Eclipse: ... *starts shifting back into his corner*

mechadragon13 on May 15, 2009, 10:34:16 AM

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mechadragon13Me: THANK you. i felt like an IDIOT.

Mikenno: *quietly, as to not bother eclipse to much and to not attract the attention of the doctors* ...eclipse, wait. don't shun me just yet....

TheGameArtCritic on May 15, 2009, 10:43:12 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *pauses his strange self-shoving-into-wall behaviour* ...wy nt...?

Me: 'why not'?

mechadragon13 on May 15, 2009, 10:46:52 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: because you don't really want me to go. *shakes his head* you wanna know why I'm still here, eclipse? Why I'm still tied to Mobius, and not burning in hell again?

TheGameArtCritic on May 15, 2009, 10:57:15 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: ... *lets out a small, weak grunt*

Me: you already know that means yes.

mechadragon13 on May 15, 2009, 11:05:24 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: I'm still here because you kept me here. A part of you knows exactly what's going on, and it was begging me for help. It was so hard to ignore, in fact, then it kept me from leaving. That, along with the ties i have to our friends, was what kept me here. It was mostly you, Eclipse, and I know you know that.

Me: i just realized these guys would make a great yaoi couple XDDDD just like Breeder and Shadow-dude XDDDDDD

TheGameArtCritic on May 15, 2009, 11:17:39 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: OMG I KNOW, RIGHT??

Eclipse: *shoots him a dark glare* ...lsss...

Me: 'lies'

mechadragon13 on May 15, 2009, 11:25:25 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: .......search your mind, eclipse. you know it's true.

Me: lol..... if only i was so objected to drawing yaoi/yuri... and if only these characters weren't straight..... XDDDD remember how i ALMOST did that fs meme the first time? XD

TheGameArtCritic on May 15, 2009, 11:40:10 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: ... ... ...

(NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO)

Me: XDDDDD

Darth Vadar: |C

mechadragon13 on May 12, 2009, 2:16:45 PM

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mechadragon13Lightning: tell me when to stop.

Skye: *stands by vorace and smiles at him, as if to assure him that lghtning wasn't going to hurt him*

TheGameArtCritic on May 12, 2009, 2:27:07 PM

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TheGameArtCriticJacob: another thirty minutes, Light'...

Eclipse: *seizures and wheezes*

Vorace: *calms down a little*

mechadragon13 on May 12, 2009, 2:53:21 PM

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mechadragon13Lightning: *nods* .........
Electricity: bzzzzzzzz.....

Skye: ^^ you'll be fine, vorace.

TheGameArtCritic on May 12, 2009, 3:31:33 PM

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TheGameArtCriticVorace: it is instinctive for me to fear it... like a cat fears water.

*thirty minutes pass*

Eclipse: *bleeding out of his nose and mouth, mirroring how Luminos looked before he died*

Vorace: *bad memories get triggered* !!!

mechadragon13 on May 12, 2009, 9:36:00 PM

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mechadragon13Lightning: *takes his hands off eclipse, and looks him over, worried*

Skye: *takes his hand* i know.... you'll be ok......

TheGameArtCritic on May 13, 2009, 8:47:18 AM

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TheGameArtCriticVorace: *whimpers*

Eclipse: *though he's barely breathing, he's alive, nonetheless.

Jacob: *cleaning Eclipse's blood* he'll be fine. He just suffers more from the electricity because of the demekarr.

mechadragon13 on May 13, 2009, 11:18:47 AM

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mechadragon13Skye: *reassuring him* it's all okay.. it's over now.....

Lightning: you should have told me to use less, then! D:>

TheGameArtCritic on May 13, 2009, 11:23:13 AM

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TheGameArtCriticJacob: no! That was the perfect amount! Don't worry yourself, Lightning! He's fine. I'll go and contact the doctors. *walks out of the room*

Eclipse: *just... lies there. Unconcious, and still twitching a little*

Vorace: *snrk*

Me: did you click the link to hear Rorchach's voice? YOU MUUUUSSSST.

mechadragon13 on May 13, 2009, 11:28:01 AM

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mechadragon13Me: i caaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaant! i cant youtube if mah aprents are around. they dont like it O_O

Lightning: *mutters to himself* pfft. yeah right. that was wayyyy too much, or i'm a canary.....

TheGameArtCritic on May 13, 2009, 11:41:52 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: wait 'till they're NOT arouuuuuund!

Vorace: ...

Eclipse: *...*

*ten minutes later*

Jacob: *comes in* alright. They agreed to it.

mechadragon13 on May 13, 2009, 11:46:27 AM

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mechadragon13Lightning: good. don't wanna have to do THAT again........

Skye: okay.... is it ok to go now? vorace is getting a bit twitchy......

Mikenno: *had sat down in a corner, the lute resting on the floor next to him*

TheGameArtCritic on May 13, 2009, 12:11:53 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *his eyes are still closed, but he asks a question directed to all of them in a monotone voice* what did you do to Nocturnal...? Why isn't he waking up...?

Jacob: !! O_O

Vorace: *was going to leave, but turns around, and stares at Eclipse*

mechadragon13 on May 13, 2009, 12:18:07 PM

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mechadragon13Skye: uhh... uhh.....

Mikenno: *doesnt move either* we fried him.

TheGameArtCritic on May 13, 2009, 12:24:17 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *pauses* no... wait... he's rebooting... you haven't won... HA...

Vorace: *worried*

mechadragon13 on May 13, 2009, 12:27:27 PM

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mechadragon13Skye: umm.... should i go get a straightjacket......?

TheGameArtCritic on May 13, 2009, 12:35:14 PM

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TheGameArtCriticJacob: don't bother. He's too weak to do anything. See how he's still wheezing?

Eclipse: you haven't won... you haven't won...

mechadragon13 on May 13, 2009, 12:54:26 PM

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mechadragon13Skye: *sees* ah. ok.

Mikenno: not yet, we havent..... *picks up the lute, and starts playing again*

TheGameArtCritic on May 13, 2009, 2:01:35 PM

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TheGameArtCriticJacob: stop. If you do anymore, Mikenno, Nocturnal may suspect something.

Eclipse: *glares at them*

mechadragon13 on May 14, 2009, 6:14:23 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: *stops playing abruptly* if you haven't noticed, i'm still dead, and my body's still lying over there. *points* not much i can do about anything right now.

SKye: ...... *looks at the body and shivers* how exactly are you still here, mikki? and how do we get you back?

Me: could eclipse's subconscious be keeping him here? like, deep down, he knows it's all wrong and he's screaming for help? and mikki can hear it, even though maybe nocturnal hasn't gone that deep yet? sorry, just a thought.....

TheGameArtCritic on May 14, 2009, 8:45:38 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: YES.

Eclipse: *lies there* ... stupid government scum...

Jacob: stupid crazy-@$$ paranoid hedgebat.

Eclipse: wanna say that to my face?

Jacob: I dunno, you might foam at me.

Eclipse: *snarls at him*

mechadragon13 on May 14, 2009, 8:49:01 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: cool it, eclipse. if you attack us, we'll have to zap you AGAIN. .......

SKye: so...?

Mikenno: i told you before. i got held back. my friends kept me rooted here. ya didn't want me to go. i dunno how it works, but that's how it goes......

TheGameArtCritic on May 14, 2009, 9:05:15 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: FILTH! I DON'T WANT YOU HERE!

Vorace: well, he got his voice back...

Jacob: *ears flatten*

mechadragon13 on May 14, 2009, 9:38:00 AM

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mechadragon13Lightning: *ears flatten, but less in fear and more in anger. he's been called "filth" one too many times in his life* ......................

Skye: *same as lightning* ................

Mikenno: *same as the other two, but only during his mortal life. it recalls painful memories* ...............

TheGameArtCritic on May 14, 2009, 9:44:47 AM

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TheGameArtCriticVorace: *feels the tension, and hugs Skye*

Eclipse: Don't like that do you? DO YOU?

mechadragon13 on May 14, 2009, 9:51:01 AM

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mechadragon13Lightning: *growls at him* don't you start, eclipse.

Skye: *doesnt move. she never expected to hear something like that out of eclipse, especially directed at them* ............

Mikenno: *feels the tension from all the hybrids in the room that feel the same, and shudders. there's a BIT too much....*

TheGameArtCritic on May 14, 2009, 10:09:49 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: I've already started, AGENT Lightning... *tries getting up, but only falls bacck down onto his knees* GRRF!

Vorace: *whispering into Skye's ear* ignore what he says...

mechadragon13 on May 14, 2009, 10:15:31 AM

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mechadragon13Skye: it's hard to......

Lightning: *has to hold himself back, and merely growls at him* rrrrr.......

Mikenno: *can't stand the tension anymore, and stands up* ok guys, just cut it out. it's driving me nuts.

TheGameArtCritic on May 14, 2009, 10:18:49 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: YOU SILENCE YOURSELF, DEMON!

Jacob: *shudders* he just sounded like me when I was Angel...

Vorace: ...

mechadragon13 on May 14, 2009, 10:21:00 AM

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mechadragon13Lightning: *snarls*

Mikenno: *wants to explode, but hides it easily. and very well* *sigh* eclipse, stop being such a hypocrit. you're acting just like what you swore you would never become.

Skye: *is becoming increasingly agitated*

TheGameArtCritic on May 14, 2009, 10:32:58 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: ... ... shut up! SHUT UP!! It's different now! I know things now! Things you don't want me to know!!!

Vorace: ...

Jacob: ...

mechadragon13 on May 14, 2009, 10:38:50 AM

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mechadragon13Mikenno: .....if we didn't want you to know, we would know what it would be. tell us, what do you think we were trying to keep from you? it would do no harm, since we alredy know it.

Skye: ...............

Lightning: ...............

TheGameArtCritic on May 14, 2009, 10:44:14 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: I now know that you are working for the government! You evil monsters!!

Vorace: D: