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Beast Harry

Beast Harry

Beast Harry by TheGameArtCritic
Beast Harry by TheGameArtCritic

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TheGameArtCritic
ASBVKKCBAV,SDBKVSAK

SO THIS TOOK ME, LIKE, A BAJILLION YEARS TO COMPLETE, LOLOOLOLOLOL.

For some reason, I still feel hyper, though.

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Category Miscellaneous » Characters » RP Characters » Male
Date Submitted
Views 2725
Favorites... 4
Vote Score 1
Comments 430
Media Digital drawing or painting
Time Taken a bajillion years
Reference Fur tutorial

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TheGameArtCritic on July 30, 2012, 7:31:42 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: You wanna just go now? We can go now. I just need a disguise.

mechadragon13 on July 31, 2012, 7:30:21 AM

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mechadragon13Mia: We could go now. *gets up, and stretches, then goes to look through their stuff for things to hide Altodd's face with*

TheGameArtCritic on July 31, 2012, 7:38:53 AM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *Helps Mia look. He manages to find some gloves to cover his hands. Altodd puts them on*

mechadragon13 on July 31, 2012, 7:47:54 AM

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mechadragon13Mia: *manages to dig up a scarf, and slings it over her shoulder to pull out a large hooded coat*

TheGameArtCritic on July 31, 2012, 7:50:31 AM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *Sees this* Wasn't that for Iratus? I'm gonna be swimming in that thing... Oh well. Beggars can't be choosers, right? <:/

mechadragon13 on July 31, 2012, 9:11:56 AM

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mechadragon13Mia: At least we can be sure your face won't be seen. <:P

TheGameArtCritic on July 31, 2012, 11:24:39 AM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: ... At least. <:P *He puts everything on* Okay. Let's go. *He leaves carefully so he doesn't trip over the oversized coat*

mechadragon13 on July 31, 2012, 12:05:54 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *walks with him, taking her sword just in case. the war may be over, but the forests were still dangerous*

TheGameArtCritic on July 31, 2012, 12:09:29 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *He walks with Mia into the forest and waits for the sun to set. He takes off all his clothes so he doesn't ruin them during the transformation*

mechadragon13 on July 31, 2012, 12:22:58 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *sits down against a tree and rests her head back against it, looking up at the sky through the trees* ...

TheGameArtCritic on July 31, 2012, 12:47:27 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *He sits next to Mia and nuzzles her, waiting for the pain to start*

mechadragon13 on July 31, 2012, 12:48:20 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *nuzzles him back, kissing his cheek*

TheGameArtCritic on July 31, 2012, 12:55:18 PM

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TheGameArtCritic*Much later, the sun begins to set*

Altodd: *Kisses Mia's neck lightly* Mm... What if we just... Have a bit of fun before I turn into a drooling monster?

mechadragon13 on July 31, 2012, 1:17:34 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *lightly touches his chest* Do we have enough time...?

TheGameArtCritic on July 31, 2012, 1:22:12 PM

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TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 5:44:07 PM

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TheGameArtCriticThe Next Morning

Altodd: *Still asleep, and still quite happy. He smiles a bit in his sleep, the previous night being a good one*

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 5:47:22 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *wakes up before him, and sees this, winding up smiling herself. she lays still to avoid disturbing him* ... <3

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 5:52:26 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *A few minutes later, he groggily wakes up* Mnh...? *He looks over and sees Mia. Altodd smiles at her*

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 5:55:14 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *smiles back at him, leaning up to kiss his cheek* Good morning... :)

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 6:00:35 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: Good morning. Um... How are we going to get me into the forest by tonight? I can't be seen by anyone. :/

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 6:03:53 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: Ah... well, we could always give you something with a hood, to hide your face. <:/

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 6:18:03 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: I guess so. <:/ Maybe a mask or a scarf or something can help with that.

mechadragon13 on July 30, 2012, 1:46:18 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: I'm sure we can figure something out. <:P

TheGameArtCritic on July 30, 2012, 4:39:39 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: Alright. <:P ... I just realized that... I don't feel sick today. Not at all. :/

mechadragon13 on July 30, 2012, 4:46:03 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: ...Huh. Not sure if I should be worried or relieved. <:/

TheGameArtCritic on July 30, 2012, 6:34:07 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: Well, it... Breaks the cycle. This kinda reminds me of a pregnant woman missing her period. >___>;

mechadragon13 on July 30, 2012, 6:37:26 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: ...Interesting way to put it, but I guess you're right. Though I um... don't really know what could happen. <:/

TheGameArtCritic on July 30, 2012, 6:56:07 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: ... Hopefully nothing dangerous.

mechadragon13 on July 30, 2012, 6:58:57 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: Hopefully... *rests her head back down on his chest* ...Maybe we should go out a bit earlier today, just in case...

TheGameArtCritic on July 30, 2012, 7:16:25 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: Okay... I don't mind spending some more time in the forest, anyway.

mechadragon13 on July 30, 2012, 7:28:57 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: s'nice out this time of year anyway...

TheGameArtCritic on July 30, 2012, 7:31:16 PM

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TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 3:58:15 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *He curls up under the bed, staring blankly at the wall across from him* ...

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 4:03:05 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: ... *takes off her boots, and climbs into bed next to him, hugging him from behind and nuzzling into his back, between his shoulders* ...

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 4:12:30 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: <:) *He turns around and pulls Mia on top of him, nuzzling her neck. He holds her hands with his own*

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 4:23:39 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: ! *smiles, leaning her head back a little bit so he can do this. she rubs the side of his hand with her thumb*

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 4:25:48 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *He manages to kiss her jaw, careful not to hurt her with his teeth. He then wraps his arms around her and starts massaging her back*

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 4:35:59 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *lets out a quiet, content moan, resting her head on his shoulder as he massages her. she relaxes, tracing the lines on his chest with her finger*

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 4:38:29 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *As he massages her* ... I love you, Mia.

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 4:49:24 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *quietly* I love you too, Altodd...

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 4:51:50 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: <:) *He moves his hands to the sides of her face and touches his forehead to hers*

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 5:04:03 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *closes her eyes and smiles, happy to be there with him however changed he may be*

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 5:06:13 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *He lightly kisses her on the lips*

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 5:12:57 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *lightly kisses him back, then proceeds to kiss his cheek, his neck, wherever she could reach, hands gently rubbing at his torso* <3

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 5:14:40 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *Sighs from this, enjoys Mia's touch*

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 5:22:49 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *gets down to his chest, then just rests her head on it, listening to his heartbeat and his breathing. her fingers still wander up and down his sides*

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 5:25:27 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *He puts a hand on her head, combing his fingers through her hair* <:)

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 5:32:01 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *sighs contentedly, closing her eyes and just listening, grateful that she's been able to feel that heartbeat every night*

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 5:34:48 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *He closes his eyes, relaxed. So relaxed that, minutes later, he's asleep with his hand still on Mia's head*

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 5:37:53 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *feels his heartbeat slow slightly, and smiles, letting herself drift off too--she's asleep in minutes, happy*

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 5:42:40 PM

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TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 12:58:49 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: ... I know... That's what's special about you, though. You don't leave... And you don't die.

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 1:04:05 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: Heh... I guess not dying helps... *kisses the top of his head* Not planning on dying anytime soon either.

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 1:12:07 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *Very quietly, looking right into her eyes* ... You promise?

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 1:22:35 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *looks right back into his own eyes* I promise.

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 1:29:47 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: ... *He hugs her* ... I'm sorry. I just... Think about her sometimes. And then I think of you.

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 1:42:35 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *hugs him back, still combing through his hair* I'll be fine... I can take care of myself.

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 1:45:35 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: I-I know... I know, I know, I'm sorry...

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 2:11:09 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *nuzzles his head* It's okay.

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 2:32:53 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: No it's not -- I already said I wouldn't anymore, but here I am worrying about you like you'll drop dead any second. <:/

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 2:37:37 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *laughs a bit* Maybe it's just the moon messing with you. <:P

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 2:55:54 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: No, whenever the moon MESSES with me, it makes people look tasty. And I kinda have to ignore THAT.

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 3:00:55 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: Good point. <:P *nuzzles him* Well, worry all you want, I'll just have to prove you wrong.

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 3:09:04 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *Nuzzles her back* Right. <:P Hey, so... I'm going to go to bed, alright? <:/

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 3:19:13 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: Okay. *kisses his cheek* I'll join you in a minute.

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 3:29:47 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: Alright. <:/ *He heads up and gets into the bed*

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 3:56:27 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: ... *stops by the window, trying to see if there was anything different about the moon this week... maybe some kind of eclipse or another celestial event, but no. It didn't look any different, not from what she could tell... she heads back to the room*

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 3:57:31 PM

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TheGameArtCritic on July 28, 2012, 5:19:35 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: ... Alright. I'll just... Wait here. Can't go near any windows. Someone might see.

mechadragon13 on July 28, 2012, 5:26:23 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *nods, and heads out. she doesn't come back for a while, but when she does, she's carrying several wrapped packages of food* I'm back!

TheGameArtCritic on July 28, 2012, 5:54:15 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *Walks over to where Mia is quietly. He speaks as quietly as he walks* ... I waited for you. Like a good dog. And now I'm really happy to see you. <:c

mechadragon13 on July 28, 2012, 5:58:16 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: ...? *stares at him for a few moments, a bit confused by his behavior. she sets the food down on the table* ...Are you feeling okay?

TheGameArtCritic on July 28, 2012, 6:03:37 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: Yeah, just hungry. And very sick of looking like this. I'm sure I'll look human again after tomorrow night, though. *He sits down at the table*

mechadragon13 on July 28, 2012, 6:08:48 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *wishes she could be that optimistic. still, she nods, and sits down at the table. she pushes one of the wrapped packages towards him, one containing a decent-sized chunk of raw meat*

TheGameArtCritic on July 28, 2012, 6:12:31 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: ... Thank you. *He tears at the meat, finding it easier than before, as his teeth were now built to tear away at any sort of meat, raw or not*

mechadragon13 on July 28, 2012, 6:17:27 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *noticed that he's eating a little more wildly--normally, this wouldn't concern her, but along with everything else that's been happening the past few days... she tries to ignore it, and quietly eats her own food*

TheGameArtCritic on July 28, 2012, 6:24:28 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *He finishes quickly and wipes his bloodied mouth with a napkin. When he puts it down, he can't help but stare at his hand. How DISGUSTING it looks to him. How inhuman he now is. Neo is just as horrified by what's happened. Perhaps more so. Both miss the days when they weren't a werewolf. When they were human. Altodd missed being one person... Though he was a monster before then*

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 7:22:18 AM

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mechadragon13Mia: *notices him looking at his hand, and pauses eating to watch him for a few moments. she stays quiet, however* ... <:(

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 7:29:06 AM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *Quietly* ... I'll be fine after tomorrow night... I'll be fine, then...

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 7:39:45 AM

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mechadragon13Mia: ... *pulls her chair over next to Altodd's, and sits next to him, taking his hand in an attempt to offer reassurance* <:( ...

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 7:40:55 AM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *He looks over at Mia sadly, then leans on her, his head resting on her shoulder* ...

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 7:46:15 AM

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mechadragon13Mia: *leans her head against his, then puts her arm around him, combing her fingers through his hair*

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 12:33:21 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: ... Thank you for being here for me, Mia... For being with me for five years...

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 12:41:43 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: I wouldn't dream of leaving, Altodd...

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 12:55:04 PM

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TheGameArtCritic on July 27, 2012, 6:09:33 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: Maybe it didn't get to you yet and it's not contagious?

mechadragon13 on July 27, 2012, 6:16:05 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: Maybe. <:P *brushes away a bit of hair that was sticking to his forehead*

TheGameArtCritic on July 27, 2012, 6:21:37 PM

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TheGameArtCritic*The whole day, Altodd doesn't feel very well and doesn't get any better. In fact, as the sun sets --*

Altodd: *Starts groaning, suddenly feeling much worse*

mechadragon13 on July 27, 2012, 6:26:20 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *had gotten up for a moment when she hears Altodd from the other room--she hurries back* ???

TheGameArtCritic on July 27, 2012, 6:30:53 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *He's in so much pain that he's woken up from his heavy sleep. Altodd wheezes a few times before twisting and writhing in the bed, shaking as he slowly starts to turn* NGH -- GHUHH...!!

mechadragon13 on July 27, 2012, 6:33:38 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: D8?! Oh god, it's way too early for this...!! *panics, not knowing what to do*

TheGameArtCritic on July 27, 2012, 6:40:55 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *Oddly, the transformation starts slowing down, then comes to a complete stop after the sun has set. He's incredibly hairy, his arms and fingers are a bit longer, as well as clawed. His teeth are also wolfish and pointed, his ears long and pointed as well, and his pupils have a slight glow to them* Wh-what... Wh-why'd I stop...?

mechadragon13 on July 27, 2012, 6:43:16 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: Th-The real question is, w-why'd you start in the first place?? The full moon is TOMORROW! D8>

TheGameArtCritic on July 27, 2012, 6:48:56 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: I-I don't know... And I'm actually kind of really scared right now...! D8>

mechadragon13 on July 28, 2012, 3:26:21 AM

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mechadragon13Mia: *takes a deep breath, trying to calm herself for his sake, and sits down on the bed next to him* Just c-calm down, we'll figure something out...!

TheGameArtCritic on July 28, 2012, 5:49:02 AM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: W-well, o-on the bright side, I don't feel sick a-anymore...

mechadragon13 on July 28, 2012, 11:29:11 AM

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mechadragon13Mia: *nods* Th-That's good. *puts a hand on his shoulder, looking him up and down and taking in the changes* You are definitely not going out tomorrow...

TheGameArtCritic on July 28, 2012, 11:37:41 AM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: ... No kidding. I'd probably be hunted down. *He then gets up to put on his clothes, realizing that he's still naked from the day before*

mechadragon13 on July 28, 2012, 11:42:38 AM

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mechadragon13Mia: *also stands up* You hungry? I could go out and get us something. <:/

TheGameArtCritic on July 28, 2012, 11:47:49 AM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *He avoids looking directly at Mia, self conscious of the mutation he's gone through* ... That'd be really nice, yeah. <:(

mechadragon13 on July 28, 2012, 11:54:56 AM

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mechadragon13Mia: *notices this, and leans up to kiss his cheek* We'll figure this out, okay? <:/

TheGameArtCritic on July 28, 2012, 11:59:40 AM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *Quietly, giving her a tiny smile and finally looking at her directly* ... Okay. <:)

mechadragon13 on July 28, 2012, 12:06:56 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *returns the smile, and nuzzles him, before hurrying out* I'll be right back, okay?

TheGameArtCritic on July 28, 2012, 5:18:51 PM

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TheGameArtCritic on July 26, 2012, 6:41:43 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *He groggily wakes up, squinting from the morning light*

mechadragon13 on July 27, 2012, 11:28:51 AM

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mechadragon13Mia: ? *notices the light is bothering him, and shuts the windows* <:/

TheGameArtCritic on July 27, 2012, 1:28:45 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *Quietly* ... Thank you, Mia. *Gives her a small smile*

mechadragon13 on July 27, 2012, 4:21:19 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *returns the smile, sitting down on the edge of the bed next to him* Is there anything else I can get you?

TheGameArtCritic on July 27, 2012, 4:41:24 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: ... I'm fine... Don't bother with me, I don't need that much.

mechadragon13 on July 27, 2012, 4:43:07 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: If you say so. <:/ I'm not going to work today, so if you need anything, don't be afraid to holler, okay?

TheGameArtCritic on July 27, 2012, 4:50:08 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: ... I might... Actually need something right now.

mechadragon13 on July 27, 2012, 4:57:34 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: ! Yeah? D:

TheGameArtCritic on July 27, 2012, 5:05:32 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *He touches the spot on the bed next to him* ... I need you.

mechadragon13 on July 27, 2012, 5:10:54 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: ... <:) *goes around the bed, and climbs in next to him again*

TheGameArtCritic on July 27, 2012, 5:15:38 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: <:) *He scoots over to Mia and snuggles against her*

mechadragon13 on July 27, 2012, 5:21:41 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *snuggles against him, noticing how warm he still is*

TheGameArtCritic on July 27, 2012, 5:33:46 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *Kisses Mia. Though he is incredibly hot and uncomfortable, Mia's presence makes everything better. Altodd rarely got sick, even when the infection came along back in his home universe. This was what made him getting sick NOW so... Unnerving*

mechadragon13 on July 27, 2012, 5:41:15 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *gently kisses back, lightly touching his cheek. she was worried about him, there was no questioning that, but him getting sick like this so early before a full moon...?*

TheGameArtCritic on July 27, 2012, 5:44:05 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: ... I don't usually get sick... Especially not like this... But I'm sure I'll get better pretty quickly. I'm a healthy guy. <:P

mechadragon13 on July 27, 2012, 5:55:14 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *lies* Yeah, I'm not too worried. Just wondering what got you sick in the first place. <:P

TheGameArtCritic on July 27, 2012, 6:01:02 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: ... Maybe there's a bug going around?

mechadragon13 on July 27, 2012, 6:07:46 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: In that case, why am I not sick?

TheGameArtCritic on July 27, 2012, 6:09:04 PM

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TheGameArtCritic on July 26, 2012, 5:13:16 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: ... Jus'... Just leave it closed... There are other butchers out there...

mechadragon13 on July 26, 2012, 5:14:32 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: Okay. *leans down to kiss his forehead* I'll excuse myself from work too.

TheGameArtCritic on July 26, 2012, 5:26:39 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *He gives her a small smile and raises his hand against -- This time to gently touch her cheek*

mechadragon13 on July 26, 2012, 5:28:22 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *holds his hand to her face with her own, returning the gentle smile*

TheGameArtCritic on July 26, 2012, 5:36:54 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *He holds his hand there for a while (with Mia's help, of course), before letting out a tired, shuddering sigh and slipping his hand out of her grip and back down on the bed, closing his eyes*

mechadragon13 on July 26, 2012, 5:40:31 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: ! ... <:/ ... *lays down next to him, not bothering to get dressed*

TheGameArtCritic on July 26, 2012, 5:45:12 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *He falls asleep quickly, his own sickness helping with that. Even still, sleeping is uncomfortable for him. He's sweaty and hot and because of this, he's constantly shifting in the bed, pushing more and more of the blankets off of him*

mechadragon13 on July 26, 2012, 5:50:26 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *is woken up in the middle of the night because of all his movements, and notices his attempts to remove the sheets. she pulls them a bit farther off him, worried that he'll overheat if he stays covered up like that* <:( ...

TheGameArtCritic on July 26, 2012, 5:55:19 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *Is a bit relieved when he feels the room's cold air pass over his body, but his body continues to burn. He's sweating so bad that he shimmers under the moonlight*

mechadragon13 on July 26, 2012, 5:59:44 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: <:( ... *gets out of bed, and goes to the bathroom, dampening a small towel with cool water, then bringing it back to place it over his forehead in an attempt to help him cool down*

TheGameArtCritic on July 26, 2012, 6:09:05 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *Stirs from this, his eyes watering from his own discomfort* Mmhh... Mia...?

mechadragon13 on July 26, 2012, 6:14:49 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: ! Try and go back to sleep, Altodd... <:/

TheGameArtCritic on July 26, 2012, 6:24:39 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: ... M'kay... *He closes his eyes again and is asleep within minutes*

mechadragon13 on July 26, 2012, 6:27:24 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *watches him for a little while, then gets back into bed, still tired, also managing to fall asleep after a few minutes*

TheGameArtCritic on July 26, 2012, 6:31:04 PM

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TheGameArtCriticThe Next Morning

Altodd: *Is still asleep, but hasn't gotten any better. On the bright side, he hasn't gotten any worse either*

mechadragon13 on July 26, 2012, 6:37:36 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *wakes up that morning, and checks Altodd over as soon as she gets out of bed. Thankfully, he wasn't doing any worse. She gets up and gets dressed, though she knows she probably won't be going out today...*

TheGameArtCritic on July 26, 2012, 6:41:16 PM

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TheGameArtCritic on July 26, 2012, 7:02:11 AM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: Mm, gonna do that, then... *He enters Mia and immediately starts moving in and out of her*

mechadragon13 on July 26, 2012, 11:08:36 AM

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mechadragon13Mia: *moans, kissing him, lightly scratching at his back with her nails to encourage him*

TheGameArtCritic on July 26, 2012, 11:36:46 AM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *He also moans as he does this, rubbing Mia's back in return for her scratching his*

mechadragon13 on July 26, 2012, 12:00:42 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *keeps up the encouragement, kissing his neck and letting out the occasional pleased moan, the water evaporating into steam as it hits her skin*

TheGameArtCritic on July 26, 2012, 1:40:15 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *Soon releases into Mia, letting out a louder groan*

mechadragon13 on July 26, 2012, 1:44:43 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *groans with him, satisfied. she waits for him to relax again before kissing him deeply*

TheGameArtCritic on July 26, 2012, 1:50:17 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *He kisses her back, just as deeply, feeling very happy to be there with Mia at that moment*

mechadragon13 on July 26, 2012, 1:53:29 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *runs her hand through his hair as she kisses him, gently rubbing his back. she was happy to be there, happy to be close to him*

TheGameArtCritic on July 26, 2012, 2:00:50 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *He kisses her for a little bit longer before separating. He gives her a warm smile and touches her forehead with his. Then Altodd turns and shuts the water off, climbing out and handing Mia a towel first before getting his own and drying himself off*

mechadragon13 on July 26, 2012, 2:11:43 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *takes the towel with a quiet "thank you," quickly drying herself off, and wrapping the towel around herself*

TheGameArtCritic on July 26, 2012, 3:51:42 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *He wraps his towel around his shoulders when suddenly, he gets very dizzy. Altodd supports himself with the bathroom counter, but the feeling persists and he can't let go. He feels nothing but heat. It's like he's been stuck in a furnace, and it only takes a second for him to become drenched in his own sweat, the color drained from his face until it's a paper white*

mechadragon13 on July 26, 2012, 3:54:06 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *notices him lose his balance and raises an eyebrow, but quickly worries when he doesn't seem to recover* ! Altodd? D:> *puts an arm around him* Altodd, what's wrong?? D:>

TheGameArtCritic on July 26, 2012, 3:58:00 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *He hears Mia, though his ears are ringing and her voice sounds distant. His own voice comes out quiet and weak* I cah... I can't... I-I need to lie down...

mechadragon13 on July 26, 2012, 4:01:51 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: O-Okay, okay... alright, let me help you--*opens the bathroom door, then goes right back to Altodd, supporting him, and slowly leading him out of the bathroom and into their bedroom*

TheGameArtCritic on July 26, 2012, 4:07:22 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *Once he's in the bed, he manages to lift his hand to wipe some sweat from his cheek and brow* ... Ohh my god...

mechadragon13 on July 26, 2012, 4:12:07 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *takes his towel and gently wipes the rest of it for him, brow furrowed with worry* What happened...? D:>

TheGameArtCritic on July 26, 2012, 4:23:35 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: ... I dunno... One second, 'm'fine, the next... My head was spinning SO BAD, and I felt hot all over... Still do. Still is. S'not a full moon t'night... Must be sick or something...

mechadragon13 on July 26, 2012, 4:26:50 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: I'll have to find someone to run the shop for you tomorrow, then, unless you'd rather just leave it closed. <:/

TheGameArtCritic on July 26, 2012, 5:12:27 PM

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TheGameArtCritic on July 25, 2012, 1:30:03 PM

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TheGameArtCritic*Five years pass in Concordia after the war between its cities ends. It is a time of peace and prosperity. Men, women and children roam the streets of Life, Death, Water, Air, and Metal City -- A shame that Fire City could never recover like the others did. The place is still a smoking ruin from when it was torn apart. The group now lives in Life City, with Lucifer as its mayor. Life is good. The people are happy. The economy is booming now that world trading has taken off successfully*

Altodd: *Works as a butcher. After a long day, he comes home -- a smallish sort of place (though cozy and warm), sitting down on a rough leather couch by the unlit fireplace. The townspeople know him. He's made a bit of a name for himself, being able to catch and kill certain animals that others cannot. After only a moment of sitting, Altodd realizes that he smells of blood and meat. Not a problem for him, being a werewolf and all, but he knows Mia will not care for it. He walks over to the bathroom to shower*

mechadragon13 on July 25, 2012, 2:04:18 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *comes home from her own job, as the local smith's assistant. being immune to fire makes a job like that somewhat easier, though it was still incredibly tiring. smelling of smoke and metal, she figures a shower is in order--until, well, she sees Altodd's beat her to it. she smiles a bit, and knocks on the door* Altodd? Are you almost done, or can I join you? :3

TheGameArtCritic on July 25, 2012, 3:51:53 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: I just started, actually, so -- Join me? Hah... Sure, go ahead.

mechadragon13 on July 25, 2012, 3:55:34 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *steps into the bathroom with a grin, quietly shutting the door behind her before stripping down and joining him in the shower* Hello there. :3 Long day?

TheGameArtCritic on July 25, 2012, 4:35:01 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *wraps his arms around her and kisses her neck* Yeah... Kinda busy. Kinda really busy. I was running around all day. Long day for you too?

mechadragon13 on July 25, 2012, 4:43:12 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *wraps her arms around his neck, kissing his jaw* Mmm... Mhmm. Had me running all over town because he couldn't find one darned tool, turns out it was in the cabinets the whole time... heh...

TheGameArtCritic on July 25, 2012, 5:47:19 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *He kisses her, then pulls away -- Only a little bit, though, so his face stays close to hers* Well, we're here now... And I'll never understand how you kept your face completely unharmed during the war. It must be nice. Having such a pretty face.

mechadragon13 on July 25, 2012, 5:52:08 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *raises an eyebrow* I don't think you've looked in a mirror recently. Or maybe ever. *leans in a little closer so their lips are practically touching, and lowers her voice* Because you sir, are one of the most attractive men I've had the pleasure to meet.

TheGameArtCritic on July 25, 2012, 5:58:48 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *He has to pull away again so he can laugh a bit, before kissing her shoulder and grinning* You really think that? I thought I looked more like a caveman, heheh.

mechadragon13 on July 25, 2012, 6:16:44 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *laughs a bit herself* Naah, I rather like the rugged handsome look.

TheGameArtCritic on July 25, 2012, 6:20:46 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *Still grinning* Well... Good to know I don't have to SHAVE too often... Anywhere. *He lowers one of his hands from Mia's back to her thigh, rubbing it*

mechadragon13 on July 26, 2012, 6:04:40 AM

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mechadragon13Mia: *hitches that leg up on his waist, pulling him closer* Hey, it's one less thing to worry about. ;) *leans in to kiss his neck, while at the same time lowering a hand to his back and digging her nails in*

TheGameArtCritic on July 26, 2012, 6:13:43 AM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *Lets out a hissing laughter through clenched teeth as he's very quickly aroused by the pain. He grip on Mia tightens a bit when he does so*

mechadragon13 on July 26, 2012, 6:22:46 AM

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mechadragon13Mia: *rubs the spot where she hurt him, still kissing up and down his neck and shoulder*

TheGameArtCritic on July 26, 2012, 6:33:37 AM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: H-hurt me more... M-more than just that...

mechadragon13 on July 26, 2012, 6:37:37 AM

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mechadragon13Mia: *gladly obliges, biting his shoulder with a decent amount of force, dragging her nails down his back*

TheGameArtCritic on July 26, 2012, 6:42:51 AM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: Mnngh! Mm... M'kay... Mmm'kay that's... That's good... I can... Just do it now, right? Just get it in now? Because it's up. Right now.

mechadragon13 on July 26, 2012, 6:49:00 AM

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mechadragon13Mia: *snickers, kissing where she bit him* I can tell--you go right ahead.

TheGameArtCritic on July 26, 2012, 7:00:44 AM

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