Cut Along the Dotted Lines
Cut Along the Dotted Lines
Cut Along the Dotted Lines by VR_Jay
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This is a poem speaking out against suicide. I knew someone who used to draw dotted lines on their wrists as a sign that they were contemplating suicide. Please, don't ever take the "easy way out". There is always a better way.
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ShadowOfDarkness on November 14, 2004, 6:37:45 AM
dude - i really agree with what everyone else said. thats great, really deep - so to speak...LadyoftheDeadlyDance on September 16, 2004, 11:46:22 AM
ooooh...chillingly good. Comparing the dotted lines to the directions in a children's book was disturbing, it gave me goosebumps. Very good job, that was deep, dude. +favsplungergirl on September 16, 2004, 6:09:43 AM
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I really like this, the feeling and everything behind it...the dotted lines thing is kind of disturbing... I think it's well written, but then again, I don't know a heck of a lot about poetry... meh, I try... good job...Furby_Killer on September 15, 2004, 1:31:37 PM
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that....... is so awesome............... dude..... you rock.......cptShort on September 8, 2004, 3:34:37 PM
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I love you. Jeez.VR_Jay on August 22, 2004, 12:43:23 AM
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Hey, thanks for all the great comments on my poem. Had no idea it would actually effect somebody ^_^start_fire on August 9, 2004, 5:08:05 PM
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that is great, wow... it makes me think, I write poems like that I just dont share them with anyone but that poem is... i dont know its really great thoughKemnin on July 29, 2004, 2:55:24 PM
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art never really talks to me but ive been thinking about suicide alot latly and ive read this pic like 10 times and i rethinking it now.... thanksLost_in_prisms on May 11, 2004, 8:54:49 AM
That is beautiful...<br />everyone knows someone... and I happen to know two...<br />
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*hug*
Sorceress_Ultimecia on May 11, 2004, 8:37:43 AM
You write better than I. I'm offended.