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In The Garden of Eden

In The Garden of Eden

In The Garden of Eden by WindraceR
In The Garden of Eden by WindraceR

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WindraceR
Evangeline and Adam, a pairing from my short story manga: Eve of Evolution. :) I've gone far too experimental this time!

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Category Anime/Manga » - Original art » Couples/Pairings
Date Submitted
Views 3835
Favorites... 20
Vote Score 0
Comments 29
Media Other drawing
Time Taken 3 days (?)
Reference Nope, otherwise I'd mention it :3

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kairiandsora4ever on September 8, 2006, 11:14:23 AM

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kairiandsora4everplease please read this it is from someone very special.. it might make u cry..

Jenny was so happy about the house they had found. For once in her life 'twas on the right side of town. She unpacked her things with such great ease. As she watched her new curtains blow in the breeze. How wonderful it was to have her own room. School would be starting; she'd have friends over soon. There'd be sleep-overs, and parties; she was so happy It's just the way she wanted her life to be. On the first day of school, everything went great. She made new friends and even got a date! She thought, "I want to be popular and I'm going to be, Because I just got a date with the star of the team!" To be known in this school you had to have clout, And dating this guy would sure help her out. There was only one problem stopping her fate. Her parents had said she was too young to date. "Well I just won't tell them the entire truth. They won't know the difference; what's there to lose?" Jenny asked to stay with her friends that night. Her parents frowned but said, "All right." Excited, she got ready for the big event But as she rushed around like she had no sense, She began to feel guilty about all the lies, But what's a pizza, a party, and a moonlight ride? Well the pizza was good, and the party was great, But the moonlight ride would have to wait. For Dan was half drunk by this time. But he kissed her and said that he was just fine. Then the room filled with smoked and Dan took a puff. Jenny couldn't believe he was smoking that stuff. Now Dan was ready to ride to the point But only after he'd smoked another joint. They jumped in the car for the moonlight ride, Not thinking that he was too drunk to drive. They finally made it to the point at last, And Dan started trying to make a pass. A pass is not what Jenny wanted at all (and by a pass, I don't mean playing football.) "Perhaps my parents were right....maybe I am too young. Boy, how could I ever, ever be so dumb." With all of her might, she pushed Dan away: "Please take me home, I don't want to stay." Dan cranked up the engine and floored the gas. In a matter of seconds they were going too fast. As Dan drove on in a fit of wild anger, Jenny knew that her life was in danger. She begged and pleaded for him to slow down, But he just got faster as they neared the town. "Just let me get home! I'll confess that I lied. I really went out for a moonlight ride." Then all of a sudden, she saw a big flash. "Oh God, Please help us! We're going to crash!" She doesn't remember the force of impact. Just that everything all of a sudden went black. She felt someone remove her from the twisted rubble, And heard, "call an ambulance! These kids are in trouble! Voices she heard...a few words at best. But she knew there were two cars involved in the wreck. Then wondered to herself if Dan was all right, And if the people in the other car was alive. She awoke in the hospital to faces so sad. "You've been in a wreck and it looks pretty bad." These voices echoed inside her head, As they gently told her that Dan was dead. They said "Jenny, we've done all we can do. But it looks as if we'll lose you too." "But the people in the other car!?" Jenny cried. "We're sorry, Jenny, they also died." Jenny prayed, "God, forgive me for what I've done I only wanted to have just one night of fun." "Tell those people's family, I've made their lives dim, And wish I could return their families to them." "Tell Mom and Dad I'm sorry I lied, And that it's my fault so many have died. Oh, nurse, won't you please tell them that for me?" The nurse just stood there-she never agreed. But took Jenny's hand with tears in her eyes. And a few moments later Jenny died. A man asked the nurse, "Why didn't you do your best To bid that girl her one last request?" She looked at the man with eyes so sad. "Because the people in the other car were her mom and dad." This story is sad and unpleasant but true, So young people take heed, it could have been you.


READ AND PASS ON TO AT LEAST 10 PEOPLE

Please listen to this angel's request......

If you do the small favor she asks to come true, She will be sent down to guard and protect you.

Please....do it for Jenny.

Send ten copies and see what happens in four days. You will get a surprise. This is true, even if you are not superstitious.

Good luck, but please remember: 10 copies of this message must leave your hands in 24 hours.................................

kairiandsora4ever on September 8, 2006, 11:14:21 AM

kairiandsora4ever on
kairiandsora4everplease please read this it is from someone very special.. it might make u cry..

Jenny was so happy about the house they had found. For once in her life 'twas on the right side of town. She unpacked her things with such great ease. As she watched her new curtains blow in the breeze. How wonderful it was to have her own room. School would be starting; she'd have friends over soon. There'd be sleep-overs, and parties; she was so happy It's just the way she wanted her life to be. On the first day of school, everything went great. She made new friends and even got a date! She thought, "I want to be popular and I'm going to be, Because I just got a date with the star of the team!" To be known in this school you had to have clout, And dating this guy would sure help her out. There was only one problem stopping her fate. Her parents had said she was too young to date. "Well I just won't tell them the entire truth. They won't know the difference; what's there to lose?" Jenny asked to stay with her friends that night. Her parents frowned but said, "All right." Excited, she got ready for the big event But as she rushed around like she had no sense, She began to feel guilty about all the lies, But what's a pizza, a party, and a moonlight ride? Well the pizza was good, and the party was great, But the moonlight ride would have to wait. For Dan was half drunk by this time. But he kissed her and said that he was just fine. Then the room filled with smoked and Dan took a puff. Jenny couldn't believe he was smoking that stuff. Now Dan was ready to ride to the point But only after he'd smoked another joint. They jumped in the car for the moonlight ride, Not thinking that he was too drunk to drive. They finally made it to the point at last, And Dan started trying to make a pass. A pass is not what Jenny wanted at all (and by a pass, I don't mean playing football.) "Perhaps my parents were right....maybe I am too young. Boy, how could I ever, ever be so dumb." With all of her might, she pushed Dan away: "Please take me home, I don't want to stay." Dan cranked up the engine and floored the gas. In a matter of seconds they were going too fast. As Dan drove on in a fit of wild anger, Jenny knew that her life was in danger. She begged and pleaded for him to slow down, But he just got faster as they neared the town. "Just let me get home! I'll confess that I lied. I really went out for a moonlight ride." Then all of a sudden, she saw a big flash. "Oh God, Please help us! We're going to crash!" She doesn't remember the force of impact. Just that everything all of a sudden went black. She felt someone remove her from the twisted rubble, And heard, "call an ambulance! These kids are in trouble! Voices she heard...a few words at best. But she knew there were two cars involved in the wreck. Then wondered to herself if Dan was all right, And if the people in the other car was alive. She awoke in the hospital to faces so sad. "You've been in a wreck and it looks pretty bad." These voices echoed inside her head, As they gently told her that Dan was dead. They said "Jenny, we've done all we can do. But it looks as if we'll lose you too." "But the people in the other car!?" Jenny cried. "We're sorry, Jenny, they also died." Jenny prayed, "God, forgive me for what I've done I only wanted to have just one night of fun." "Tell those people's family, I've made their lives dim, And wish I could return their families to them." "Tell Mom and Dad I'm sorry I lied, And that it's my fault so many have died. Oh, nurse, won't you please tell them that for me?" The nurse just stood there-she never agreed. But took Jenny's hand with tears in her eyes. And a few moments later Jenny died. A man asked the nurse, "Why didn't you do your best To bid that girl her one last request?" She looked at the man with eyes so sad. "Because the people in the other car were her mom and dad." This story is sad and unpleasant but true, So young people take heed, it could have been you.


READ AND PASS ON TO AT LEAST 10 PEOPLE

Please listen to this angel's request......

If you do the small favor she asks to come true, She will be sent down to guard and protect you.

Please....do it for Jenny.

Send ten copies and see what happens in four days. You will get a surprise. This is true, even if you are not superstitious.

Good luck, but please remember: 10 copies of this message must leave your hands in 24 hours.................................

thalia on September 7, 2006, 1:31:51 PM

thalia on
thaliaWOW! the coulors are beautiful !!
love the clothes they are wearing

VioletAngel on September 7, 2006, 11:45:53 AM

VioletAngel on
VioletAngelWow! It's so symbolical looking! O____O I really love the coloring as well as the designs of everything, mostly the lil black lines like the ones on the bottum right corner. so pretty!

chinchilla_luver on September 6, 2006, 9:23:11 AM

chinchilla_luver on
chinchilla_luverWow! Did you color this with the joy known as copic?

WindraceR on September 6, 2006, 8:37:07 PM

WindraceR on
WindraceRNo, i used many media such as ecoline, watercolor pencils, color pencils, various markers and watercolors!

auroraflare92 on September 6, 2006, 5:15:04 PM

auroraflare92 on
auroraflare92Wow! thats so good!! I love the backdrop and the "experimental"
colouring. It looks particuarly effective with the colours of their clothing.
*faves*

KartoonKween on September 4, 2006, 7:10:18 PM

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KartoonKweenYou're ORIGINAL? Sounds interesting...

Nice colors, by the way.

littlestchristuian13 on September 3, 2006, 10:10:01 AM

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littlestchristuian13is that suppossed to be Adam and Eve???????????????? O_o

southof_InSaNe on September 3, 2006, 9:04:41 AM

southof_InSaNe on
southof_InSaNei love everything about this pic!
the colors are wonderful and i love all the little details.
*favs*

Calipso on September 2, 2006, 3:04:19 AM

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Calipsogreat background and charactre´s poses too, love it. It gives me lots of new ideas for a new picc, it´s a shame I can´t draw at this moment, im in a long trip in Europe (3 months) and I haven´t got the time, nor the materials to draw, shamie, shamie, shamie... (wello, I guess it´s more luck than shame to be in europe, but well, haha). Well, anyway, great picc and defenitly FAVS!

Calipso on September 2, 2006, 3:00:10 AM

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CalipsoYeah, love it!!!! Great

pokemonrocks on August 31, 2006, 9:18:24 PM

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pokemonrocksi love the way thebackround is done the ppls angles are great to ^-^

Neopetgirl on August 31, 2006, 2:48:16 PM

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NeopetgirlI'm gonna comment again just because this is so BEAUTIFUL

Dang you have WONDERFUL TALENT,thank you for sharing it with us,this is AMAZING!!!

I give you 1 million stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WindraceR on August 31, 2006, 8:08:54 PM

WindraceR on
WindraceRthanks ^^'

_theater_freak_147 on August 31, 2006, 9:33:04 AM

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_theater_freak_147Ahhh this is beautiful!!!

Freak_Power on August 31, 2006, 8:36:41 AM

Freak_Power on
Freak_PowerIt's so beautiful! Experiments are good! The color in this picture is SUPERB! You've got 10 kinds of talent!

kylaVegeta on August 31, 2006, 8:01:09 AM

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kylaVegetaWow this is wonderful very pretty.*favs*

winxgirl21 on August 31, 2006, 5:44:04 AM

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winxgirl21This is so awes0me!!

Neopetgirl on August 31, 2006, 5:38:37 AM

Neopetgirl on
NeopetgirlThe drawing is drop-dead goregous!

I also love their poses,wow this is very amazing ^^

I don't see a single flaw in this drawing,*looks for one*

Nope not a flaw,very NICE!

*Faves infinity times!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*

lizardwd on August 31, 2006, 5:03:30 AM

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lizardwdoh so this is one of those adam and eve things?

Neawolf on August 31, 2006, 2:14:50 AM

Neawolf on
Neawolfwow! the way your colour is amazing i love the atmosphere of the picture.

inuyasha_naruto_lover on August 31, 2006, 1:26:28 AM

inuyasha_naruto_lover on
inuyasha_naruto_loverlove it

chibibreeder on August 31, 2006, 12:12:01 AM

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chibibreederYOU NEED MORE COMMENTS!!! :D

This picture is absolutely gorgeous! The hair is beautifully coloured, and the charectars are well drawn. The background is stunning, and the effect with the ink at the bottom makes it seem like the background is everywhere. Experimenting is good, keep at it! [faves]

InoChichi on August 30, 2006, 11:32:12 PM

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InoChichiIt looks absolutely gorgeous, you don't see many traditional piccies anymore, and certainly not that good ones !
Awesome, the characters are cute, and the coloring is great.
congrats for being featured pic !

~Laura

Pocket on August 30, 2006, 11:31:00 PM

Pocket on
PocketThe detail in this is astonishing and I love the background. Congrats on the feature!

ranphasetokelly on August 30, 2006, 8:44:51 PM

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ranphasetokellywow nice pic ^^

Twenty on August 30, 2006, 4:22:21 PM

Twenty on
TwentyWow. This is a very different pic. Your diversity and blending of your medias is very good. Your colors and character positioning really display the moment that's goin on. It very much deserves featured pic. really good job. *favs*