Citrus Fantasy by luckylace222

Citrus Fantasy

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CRITIQUE WANTED.
I need to emphasize to the nice people out there that creatively badgering me about my art is most wanted, and if you have this irking thought about the eyes, face, or proportions, you better tell me or I will destroy youuuuu! *points cutely*

More realism work with women; I guarantee that when I start working with realistic men, they will look like transvestites. I switched from Open Canvas 1.1 and Photoshop Elements 6.0 on this. PS was not really used that much except for the occasional dodge and burn. ;I

HAH! The BEST girftart in the WORLD will come in a matter of 5 hours to 1 day!!! Such a nice gap of time! ENJOY or send your complaints to my fake email(fakeemail@yahoo.com)! <-- Oh god! It highlighted itself! HAH!

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Category Real People » Women
Date Submitted July 16, 2010, 10:13:46 AM
Views 2912
Favorites... 22
Vote Score 19

Comments 71
Media Digital drawing or painting
Time Taken 8 hours
Reference My hand

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TotalWeirdo666 on July 16, 2010, 8:57:28 AM

COMPLIMENTS: I love the eyes, your usage of colors and such, and the speckles around her eyes.

CRITIQUE: Her hair looks weird.

luckylace222 on July 16, 2010, 12:52:56 PM

Thanks! I kind of adore the specks myself. 8D They're like rock candy to me!

I added kind of more hair. P; I wanted her face to pop out more, but I can understand how the hair is mega strange. Go to fullview and see it kind of different. Does it look a little better?

TotalWeirdo666 on July 16, 2010, 1:22:23 PM

No... I mean more it looks uneven. I think you should've added like a little curl or something in front of her ear to even out the left and right... Sorry I'm sorta OCD and I can't even stomp one foot without stomping the other foot and then I feel uneven again so I stomp the first foot again and to even it out I have to jump on both feet a couple times so both feet are equally stomped on XD

zelosgirl120 on July 16, 2010, 7:01:26 AM

Hmm, the right side of her lips seem skinnier than the left side, unless she is half smiling. The fingers also seem a tad pit skinny and it seem like her forehead is just a little bit big, in my opinion anyway. =|
You're coloring is great. ^^

luckylace222 on July 16, 2010, 12:41:01 PM

I shaded her forehead to give a sort of bronze look to blend it more with the rest of the face. I guess part of the problem was because it was more pale then the rest of the face. ;/

I also added more flesh tot he lips to get them more equal-looking! You can view changes in fullview! thank-you so much!

zelosgirl120 on July 16, 2010, 12:53:14 PM

Looks better! ^^
You're welcomes. ^_^

Rubius on July 16, 2010, 7:49:39 AM

It is a very androgenous picture. I really can't tell if it is a woman, or a guy dressed as a woman. Although it could be I'm jaded from hanging around drag queens for a week. Anyway, your face symmetry looks spot on. The hair bothers me, it looks smoothe on the right side, but the left looks really rough. The shading is beautifully done in your style and the overall idea is wonderful. This is a good first picture for changing programs.

Can't wait to see the next one.

luckylace222 on July 16, 2010, 12:44:12 PM

Hey! I never noticed that before! I originally meant for this to be a woman with really strong face structure, but I think it would make a REALLY pretty man too! 8D Thank-you so much! ]; It took me a long time to get the eyes symmetrical.

Now, I added more hair on the left side to kind of balance off the smoothness, although I still find a little rough you know? You can view changes in fullview. Tell me if it still seems rough.

Ishida16 on July 16, 2010, 4:02:41 AM

*critiques brutally* The nose is .0034 milimeters off START OVER!!!! HMMM jk Im not a good critiquer so do not pay attention to me! Although still I really like the eyes that you draw! They are the part I look at the most!

luckylace222 on July 16, 2010, 9:21:47 AM

WRONG!!! It is obviously .00325 milimeters off, not .0034! You dare make my picture sound that bad?! I will ban you!! JUST KIDDING!

No way! I value your critique just as anyone else! BTW. SUBMIT YOUR GOD DANG ART AGAIN OR I WILL MAKE MUD PIES AT SCHOOL AND THROW THEM AT YOUR WHEN I SEE YOU!

Actually, the nose is very off. ]; The eye position seems to make it off center and stuff. I attempted to fix it, but it is a small fix~! Thanks so much little child! Sorry that I can only seem to get the time to reply to you on FAC.

Ishida16 on July 16, 2010, 12:05:54 PM

Nah naah its cool go ahead and reply on fac if you want!
But Hmm I will try and critique more but I always feel bad...Ill get over it!

Kooldude on July 16, 2010, 6:05:35 AM

Since you asked for some critic, here's my 2 cents. For some reason, the right side of her head goes outward than in, instead of sloping down like the right side of her face. I don't know if that is because of the flower she is holding in her hand, but it is something that stood out to me. I do love the gentle gaze of her green eyes.

luckylace222 on July 16, 2010, 9:31:46 AM

Thanks! I seem to have this love for blue/green eyes. Many people love my eyes, but I need to tell them all that my eyes tool FOREVER. They take so long to look symmetrical and I was afraid they would look unrealistic! D; Anyways, thanks! Your comment means a lot!

I think the problem is that the cheek pops out for one side of her face and doesn't for the other. I tried to add more skin and space for the right side and emphasized some face structures. Tell me what you think! You can check out the changes in full-view!

Gartenschlauch on July 16, 2010, 4:33:34 AM

you are improving, but i always have something to critique ok here we go..i would suggest you work more on the ear it looks odd to me and put some more hair on our left side of her head, the head structure on our right looks a bit off too so maybe you could fix that

luckylace222 on July 16, 2010, 9:25:59 AM

HAZA! It feels good when someone says I'm improving! I mean, it just makes me further supports my thoughts of...improving! ;P

I added extra hair on the left side of her head(your left), detailed the ear and added an earing(only because I'm cheap like that!), and kind of did my best to make the right side of the head more symmetrical to the left! Thanks a lot for your feedback! This kind of stuff really helps me! ;P

You can see the changes in full-view right now.

safersephiroth on July 16, 2010, 3:56:18 AM

You too have to submit more damnit >_<

Another featurable picture *clap clap*

luckylace222 on July 16, 2010, 9:18:31 AM

*claps with you* Your art will get featured again- when you submit MORE. P; BWAHHAH!

I do not know. ]; I've seen really detailed pictures not get featured, possibly because they just had these little tweaks to work with. I've got a whole bunch of things to fix with my picture that I do not think it's there yet.

Thank-you so much for your comment!

thingy on July 16, 2010, 3:39:14 AM

Sweet pic and luv the eyes it's all like pines but human and the flower thingys great

luckylace222 on July 16, 2010, 9:16:09 AM

Thank-you very much thingy! HHAHA I've always wanted to say your name in a comment like that. THINGY. THINGY! -ding- Thanks again!

SILK on July 16, 2010, 3:19:30 AM

the pic looks great. the only thing that i would critique is the nose looks a little wide at the top to me.
as for the coloring i would soften up the lines a little on the shadowing around the nose(right side)

BTW i love how you draw eyes the always look mesmerizing.

luckylace222 on July 16, 2010, 3:26:28 AM

Thank-you! I softened the nose and made it a little more thin on the top. P; I had a feeling it was too wide! I just couldn't see if it was noticeable at the end.

You can see the changes in full-view.

Really?! I always thought those eyes looked so unrealistic. ]; The eyes took forever to look symmetrical. P; I could just copy and paste, but that would be cheating, lol. I think I love blue eyes the most. I am thrilled by your nice comment!

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