Naruto- Trying my OC Again by nextguardian

Naruto- Trying my OC Again

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Trying my OC, Ekyt, again. Not sure I like this pic. I can pick out a number of things wrong with it, like any drawing. Conceptually, something seems wrong. Maybe too Kakashi-ish? Oh well, I'll fix it eventually.

Please comment!

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Category Anime/Manga » Naruto series » Fan Characters (OC's)
Date Submitted October 29, 2007, 9:32:35 PM
Views 1238
Favorites... 1
Vote Score 4

Comments 9
Media Graphite pencil
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Lepper on April 8, 2008, 11:51:32 AM

constructive criticism: it is a lot like kakashi.
anyways...it looks very good.

Midnight_Chaos on November 17, 2007, 6:00:50 PM

Looking good Nextguardian :) You're definitely improving!! I like the shading, and his pose is very well done ^_^ Great Work!!

Neopetgirl on November 11, 2007, 11:30:17 AM

Not too Kakashi-like. Well the pose does kind of resembles Kakashi-sensei. But I really like how you did one! I mean the pose-excellent! I try my best to hide the hands of a character but I can't even make them look right in their pockets! @_@
Nice though :D

KisaShika on October 31, 2007, 1:03:58 PM

I say if you get rid of the mask and the thing over his eye, he won't look so much like Kakashi. Other than that, it's an awsome picture! *thumbs up*

MrGimp on October 30, 2007, 5:21:27 AM

ooh! Nice d00d! I dont know much about naruto but i know this looks good! I dont see any mistakes really. O_o

nextguardian on October 29, 2007, 3:03:27 PM

Alchemest1 makes a good point. The profile says:

Name: Ekyt
Age: 15
Village: (Leaf Symbol)
Instructor: Varies
Team: Varies
Specialties:
-Genjutsu torture
-taijutsu
-various ninjutsu
Enemies:
Chakaro Tamaki- Betrayl
Gaara- Destroyed eye
Kabuto- Hurt Chakra Coils
"The Jonin in a Genin's Body"

Falconlobo on October 29, 2007, 4:12:34 PM

maybe put that in the description instead of comment^^

just copy and paste and update^^ still a great pic

alchemest1 on October 29, 2007, 2:58:57 PM

Sweet pic mate. It likes okay. It does have a few flaws but nothing to dislike about it! I wish I could read the profile part though. Great work mate!

Falconlobo on October 29, 2007, 2:36:26 PM

cool^^ nice outfit