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Naruto- Rough Manga, Draft 2, Page 1

Naruto- Rough Manga, Draft 2, Page 1

Naruto- Rough Manga, Draft 2, Page 1 by nextguardian
Naruto- Rough Manga, Draft 2, Page 1 by nextguardian

Description

Description
nextguardian
My third try at drawing manga. This one took a little more time, and, as a result, has a little more detail. I'm not sure I like my OC's look with the chakra cigarette, I might go back to the mask. (btw, I do not endorse smoking. The cigarette my OC has is similar to a ration pill in effect.)

Things I know are wrong with this drawing:
Motion lines need work
certain shading needs work
lettering needs work
backgrounds need more detail
and other things that that vary by panel

Words:

Panel 1- Schwip

Panel 2a- CLAP
Panel 2b- Pwoof

Panel 3- tuk tuk tuk tuk tuk

Panel 4- The 'Dragon Boy'...Konohagakure's 'Jonin-in-Genin's-clothing...Impressive for someone with so little experience...However...

Panel 5- Glare

Panel 6- it was foolish of you to come alone. TSUKUYOMI!

THE BIG QUESTION- SHOULD I UPLOAD THESE IN A LARGER SIZE?

General Info

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Category Anime/Manga » Naruto series » Fan Comics (doujinshi)
Date Submitted
Views 1670
Favorites... 1
Vote Score 2
Comments 5
Media Graphite pencil
Time Taken 3-4 hours
Reference Various Nartuo Manga

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Falconlobo on June 16, 2008, 1:39:20 PM

Falconlobo on
Falconlobocool^^

maximumrideiggy on June 14, 2008, 11:38:43 AM

maximumrideiggy on
maximumrideiggylarger size!! LARGER SIZE!!! BUHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA!

nextguardian on June 14, 2008, 1:53:05 PM

nextguardian on
nextguardianYou got it! Larger size coming up next time!

animefanatic on June 14, 2008, 7:14:03 AM

animefanatic on
animefanaticWow. Cool!

NO HURTING ITACHI-SAMA!

BAD RYOUKO!

*takes cigarette*

Here... have a ration pill.

okay... i go die here now. *dead8

nextguardian on June 14, 2008, 11:42:56 AM

nextguardian on
nextguardianlol.

But Itachi attacked him! And he was likely after Sakura or something, to tick Ryouko off.

And...he can't swallow pills, lol. hence the cigarette.