Naruto- Rough Manga, Draft 2, Page 1
Naruto- Rough Manga, Draft 2, Page 1
Naruto- Rough Manga, Draft 2, Page 1 by nextguardian
Description
Description
My third try at drawing manga. This one took a little more time, and, as a result, has a little more detail. I'm not sure I like my OC's look with the chakra cigarette, I might go back to the mask. (btw, I do not endorse smoking. The cigarette my OC has is similar to a ration pill in effect.)
Things I know are wrong with this drawing:
Motion lines need work
certain shading needs work
lettering needs work
backgrounds need more detail
and other things that that vary by panel
Words:
Panel 1- Schwip
Panel 2a- CLAP
Panel 2b- Pwoof
Panel 3- tuk tuk tuk tuk tuk
Panel 4- The 'Dragon Boy'...Konohagakure's 'Jonin-in-Genin's-clothing...Impressive for someone with so little experience...However...
Panel 5- Glare
Panel 6- it was foolish of you to come alone. TSUKUYOMI!
THE BIG QUESTION- SHOULD I UPLOAD THESE IN A LARGER SIZE?
Things I know are wrong with this drawing:
Motion lines need work
certain shading needs work
lettering needs work
backgrounds need more detail
and other things that that vary by panel
Words:
Panel 1- Schwip
Panel 2a- CLAP
Panel 2b- Pwoof
Panel 3- tuk tuk tuk tuk tuk
Panel 4- The 'Dragon Boy'...Konohagakure's 'Jonin-in-Genin's-clothing...Impressive for someone with so little experience...However...
Panel 5- Glare
Panel 6- it was foolish of you to come alone. TSUKUYOMI!
THE BIG QUESTION- SHOULD I UPLOAD THESE IN A LARGER SIZE?
General Info
General Info
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Category Anime/Manga » Naruto series » Fan Comics (doujinshi)
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Category Anime/Manga » Naruto series » Fan Comics (doujinshi)
Date Submitted
Views 1670
Favorites... 1
Vote Score 2
Comments
5
Media Graphite pencil
Time Taken 3-4 hours
Reference Various Nartuo Manga
Media Graphite pencil
Time Taken 3-4 hours
Reference Various Nartuo Manga
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Falconlobo on June 16, 2008, 1:39:20 PM
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cool^^
maximumrideiggy on June 14, 2008, 11:38:43 AM
nextguardian on June 14, 2008, 1:53:05 PM
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animefanatic on June 14, 2008, 7:14:03 AM
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nextguardian on June 14, 2008, 11:42:56 AM
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