Kitty Gal
Kitty Gal
Kitty Gal by shoujoneko
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Description
I've had this lineart since January, and I'm using it for my Prac Extension in art. What do you think? Please give some critical feedback, I want the major to be awesome!!
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Category Anime/Manga » - Original art » Characters (Female)
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Category Anime/Manga » - Original art » Characters (Female)
Date Submitted
Views 1735
Favorites... 7
Vote Score 1
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Amaya_Ivanov on March 10, 2006, 1:00:19 AM
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Crystalhawk on March 9, 2006, 11:53:36 PM
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Please don't hate me, but I take stuff like "give me critisism" quite literally, so, here I go (and I don't try to be mean, honnestly):Her legs are a little too big, and, you know muscular, like a sledge thrower (might be exagerating a tad there) Her breast looks somewhat like se's stuffed two oranges down her shirt, too round. Her right shoulder is a little too smooth, might need to be a tad pointier, like the left one. Se would probably look a little more human if you added pupils as well, but tat's a judgement call.
Colouring looks really good, so does the head, perticularily the hair, might want to have the ears a little smaller...
Again sorry, if I went too far just ignore me...
love the eyes and mought^_^