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Hmmm. I would work on your proportioning. See how the girl is larger than the door? And how the concrete for the sidewalk is taller than the window?

Work on that and you'll have a lot of improvment! ^-^

congrats on pic of the hour

hi!

Okay, since you asked for it, here I go... Don't take me badly, okay? I'm just trying to help.

Well, first things first, you need to work a bit more on perspective. The picture looks kinda flat, you see.

Don't just draw the building in a simple square shape. Draw it as a cube, a box shape. How you should draw it, and from what point of view, (from above, from below) you decide.

Next is the sidewalk. See those six lines up front? When draing them from the front view, draw it like this:

/// *then a straight line in the middle of the focus of the pic,then* \\\. Slant it little by little as you go along the sides. The same thing can be applied to the lines on the streets. Draw them in longish parallelograms.

As for the manhole, draw it as an oblong shape. It will give more realism. Is that water in the gutter? Don't draw its lines so hard.

Well, for the girl, I'd say that in comparison to her hands and body, the head is too big and too long. The space between the eyes and mouth is a bit too much. And also, the lower legs are too short for the thighs, while the upper are a bit too short. They should be at waist level. Overall, the girl is too tall in comparison to the building.

Don't get me wrong though, I like how the background is so creative. I can't draw creative bacgrounds too much >.< . FYI, most of the backgrounds in my pics are just plain white @_@...

If you don't understand a thing, just tell me, and I'll be happy to explain some other time. I hope I helped ^_^! Bye now.

That's cool! Very good!

it is NOT weird!!! its okay for it to be on lined paper, my bro draws only on lined paper....her weird like that... so anywho! i like this! marthas pub! YEY!

Hey hey! Not too bad! ;-) I really like the girl!
Hope to see more pics from you up here!
mfg, Goemon14th

Aaaaww it's really cute! ^__^ A tip? hmm... get a black marker and full in the lines! ^__^ then the picture gets more....visible! XDD tis cuuuuuute!