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Breathe

Erik was like a dream, warm and hazy. His presence would wrap around her like a blanket, until she could barely draw breath. It was a sweet suffocation. Oneshot.

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Chapter 1 - Breathe
Submitted: June 8, 2005 • Updated: June 8, 2005
Word count: 1150 • Size: 6k • Comments: 5 • views: 142

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knucklesgal on October 8, 2005, 2:22:47 AM

knucklesgal on (Chapter: 1)
knucklesgalPlease write more! That was.. very good. Wow. o_o

fudgekins8 on July 22, 2005, 10:25:40 AM

fudgekins8 on (Chapter: 1)
fudgekins8Please Continue. this is really good.

scififan25 on July 14, 2005, 11:43:05 AM

scififan25 on (Chapter: 1)
scififan25Great work love the details and the story really holds on its own... you are doing great and I would really like to know what happens next!

Gothic_Wonder on June 28, 2005, 12:53:01 AM

Gothic_Wonder on (Chapter: 1)
Gothic_WonderNow /I/ can't breath... This is awesome... You write like a /REAL/ author, I wouldn't be surprised to find this published one day!

Sharpie on June 27, 2005, 12:45:35 PM

Sharpie on (Chapter: 1)
SharpieThis is really good! Please continue