Chapter 1 - Poem
Submitted February 2, 2006 Updated February 2, 2006 Status Incomplete | I'm thinking of entering this into a contest I know it's bad and it doesn't rhyme all to well but I've never written poetry a day in my life but please be honest and tell me what you think.
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Chapter 1 - Poem
Chapter 1 - Poem
She was a lovely young lady,
Beautiful in every way,
Her parents were strict,
Never seeing her astray,
But she met the wrong guy,
All he thought was what to buy,
With all her money, his 'love' was a lie,
When he asked for her hand,
She could not deny,
But that desiction lead her to become our own Corpse Bride.
Beautiful in every way,
Her parents were strict,
Never seeing her astray,
But she met the wrong guy,
All he thought was what to buy,
With all her money, his 'love' was a lie,
When he asked for her hand,
She could not deny,
But that desiction lead her to become our own Corpse Bride.
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corpsebecky on August 4, 2006, 7:53:05 AM
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mu_mu on March 3, 2006, 9:06:40 PM
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Simple, straight forward and funny,why the BEEP did you tittle this as "My horrid Emily peom" People might think that it is horrid when it is good.
Enigma_Girl on February 20, 2006, 3:06:07 AM
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OMSG! (Oh My Spigin' God) kick @$$!!ButtNugget on February 11, 2006, 7:52:15 PM
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AWESOME!!! i feel so sorry for Emily and its all because of lord barkis, pffft! i cant write a decent poem if my life depended on it!!! yet you did it sooooo well!!! keep it up!!The-Ragdoll-Sally on February 8, 2006, 10:40:02 AM
OMG this is a awsome Bubbles, i dont understand why dont like it its really very very good, i wish i could write poems i can never find words that rhym tho lol lol *FAVEZ*
~favz~