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Chapter 1 - The Present

Rachael, a 13-year-old angel, recieves a nutcracker for Christmas, but she doesn''t know it''s from Jon!

*FINISHED! Go read it, if you wish to!

Chapter 1 - The Present

Chapter 1 - The Present
Rachael was openning presents from under the tree, and she recieved a Meemee plush (from Super Monkey Ball!), a Professor Layton game, some little Ojamajo Doremi figurines, and a Lolo figure. She was opening another gift right now.

Rachael: My heart's beating-beating... ah! A nutcracker? How adorable! Hope-chan, did you make this?
Hope (my 12-year-old cousin): No, I didn't... one of Santa-san's helpers must of made it!
Aaron: Of course.
Andrew: Oooh, fail.

Rachael set her nutcracker on the floor, and it began to dance!

Hope and Jimmy (my cousin who's about 17 or 18?): Wooow!!
Andrew: Amazing...
Aaron: *rolls eyes*
Dad: I don't like dancing Nutcrackers!
Rachael: But I do!
Dad: *facepalm* Look, Rach, I just need to take it away.
Rachael: No! No, no, no, NO!!!!!!! *starts to cry, grabs the Nutrcracker, and runs to her room*
Hope: I can help her... *follows Rachael*
--5 minutes later, in Rachael's room...--
Rachael: *clutching onto her Nutcracker, and a tear lands on the Nutcracker's hat*
Nutcracker: Rachael! Jon made me!
Rachael: Huh?! Jon actually made you?!!
Nutcracker: Yeah... pretty neat, huh? Want me to take you to California?
Rachael: Yes, and then bring me to where Rae lives, too!!!

Rara, who was wearing a red-and-green dress, flew to Rachael.

Rara: Rarara?
Rachael: Okay! *gets out a pink-and-yellow cell-phone*
Rara: *transports herself into the phone*
Rachael: Fly away~! *quickly turns her pink laptop on*
Rara: *transports herself into the pink laptop*
Rachael: Good! We're ready!
Rara: *in her Pataraine form* Yeah! And best of all, I'll get a chance to see Lego Jon again~! *flies out of the laptop* Let's go!
Rachael: *puts the laptop, cell-phone, some food, and a container that has Christmas DVD's in it* Ready!
Nutcracker: Let's go to Jon's place!
Rachael and Rara: Yeah!!
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Like the idea so far, guys? And this story'll have Rae and Ellie's appearances in it! Well, look foward to it!! :D

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RaeAshleyRodri on December 5, 2010, 4:30:32 AM

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RaeAshleyRodrihaha, i was planning on making a nutcracker story too...XD

CreamandPoppufan166 on December 5, 2010, 4:44:06 AM

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CreamandPoppufan166Holy crud... o3o

Anime_Ellie on December 5, 2010, 3:04:05 AM

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Anime_EllieCool! Will Lolo be in this version? I was wondering since Rara was in here.
(ps I might be close to the area Rae's in.We live in the same state! XD)

CreamandPoppufan166 on December 5, 2010, 3:16:16 AM

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CreamandPoppufan166Lolo'll be in this! :D

(Holy crud! XD
The only chance I MIGHT see Rae is when I go to Disney World in Summer of 2011... XD)

waluigiguy22 on December 5, 2010, 3:58:11 AM

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waluigiguy22Disney WORLD? :D

CreamandPoppufan166 on December 5, 2010, 4:16:51 AM

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CreamandPoppufan166Yep! :3 We're going to Florida for 2 weeks

waluigiguy22 on December 5, 2010, 4:21:21 AM

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waluigiguy22Is this your first time?

CreamandPoppufan166 on December 5, 2010, 4:59:03 AM

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CreamandPoppufan166No.

waluigiguy22 on December 5, 2010, 5:10:44 AM

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waluigiguy22How many times have you gone before?

CreamandPoppufan166 on December 6, 2010, 10:15:51 PM

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CreamandPoppufan166I've been there 5 times?
And we aren't going to Universal 'cuz Dad thinks we hate the rides... DX

waluigiguy22 on December 5, 2010, 4:23:58 AM

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waluigiguy22and where else are you going to in Florida? :D

waluigiguy22 on December 5, 2010, 12:48:49 AM

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waluigiguy22The Dad in this story is Squidward in human form XD

CreamandPoppufan166 on December 5, 2010, 12:50:28 AM

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CreamandPoppufan166Actually, it's my dad... XDDD
My cousin Hope's really cute, though!