Chapter 1 - Speak

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CresentStar

Submitted
August 1, 2005
Updated
October 7, 2005
Status
Incomplete

Chapters: 7
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Words: 886
Comments: 18
Views: 1,198
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PLEASE READ! sorry, there really nice poems and i want a second opinion on them

commentin wudn't hurt either ^^

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Category: Miscellaneous

Chapter 1 - Speak

i wanna hear your thoughts
feel your every move
i wanna know your anger when you've got sumthin to prove
i wanna feel your pain, n take it away
i wanna shed your tears when you've been betrayed
i wanna smile when your happy
cry when your sad
i want you to let go of the past that you once had
i want your soul to fly
and never shed a tear
i want you to love me
i wanna take away your fears
i wanna make you feel special
like your someone to treat
i wanna know how you feel
all you have to do is speak

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FFXgirl on May 4, 2006, 6:30:45 AM

That's an AMAZING poem!!!! It would make a GREAT song!!!! *favs*

fariydust on December 7, 2005, 5:29:41 AM

That is soooooooooo good!! favs

dulce on November 23, 2005, 1:57:46 AM

Hey Sid dis is great. keep on writing:D

dulce on November 23, 2005, 1:57:45 AM

Hey Sid dis is great. keep on writing:D

Ocelot on November 17, 2005, 7:20:11 AM

oh, great job. i love it so much.

Star_Dreamer on November 15, 2005, 8:05:39 AM

Cool i like your poem.its really nice. *+favs.*

archeological-mania on September 22, 2005, 8:54:00 AM

hey, that is nice!!
i never know what to say about poems, so im sorry about the short and un-meaningful comment. -__-
but i do like it. ^__^
i just don't know what to say. lol.
favs*

Electra_Cheez on September 6, 2005, 11:43:57 AM

yus, berry good poem! *applauds* but i think you should make it a song. O.o just an idea for you to ignore! XD k... bi
~Electra
ps HOOP-BLAH!!!