Chapter 7 - Fatal Mind (request)
Submitted August 1, 2005 Updated October 7, 2005 Status Incomplete | PLEASE READ! sorry, there really nice poems and i want a second opinion on them commentin wudn't hurt either ^^
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Chapter 7 - Fatal Mind (request)
Chapter 7 - Fatal Mind (request)
Fatal Mind
What did I do wrong?
Having to put my pain into song
About you leaving me here to lie
And I can't do anything but cry
Knowing my life isn't good enough to exists
Afraid to get you back and taking the risk
So I sit here thinking should I live this life any further
For you killing my heart and getting away with murder
Knowing my existence is no longer in need
Knowing that you leaving me, this is where it would lead
With a knife in my hand and only one choice
Fighting to go against the eerie little voice
Telling me to leave knowing no one wanted me to stay
Telling me to go so far away
Crying my last tear and going into the dark mist
Hoping she'll ever know I ever even exist
This is for archeological-mania
So sorry it took so long I was havin major major writers block, I hope u like it tho ^^
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very nice job!!
i like the title too!!
your very good with rhymes. ^^
luv it!!
FAVS*
thanx
bye*