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Chapter 7 - Fatal Mind (request)

PLEASE READ! sorry, there really nice poems and i want a second opinion on them

commentin wudn't hurt either ^^

Chapter 7 - Fatal Mind (request)

Chapter 7 - Fatal Mind (request)


Fatal Mind

What did I do wrong?

Having to put my pain into song

About you leaving me here to lie

And I can't do anything but cry

Knowing my life isn't good enough to exists

Afraid to get you back and taking the risk

So I sit here thinking should I live this life any further

For you killing my heart and getting away with murder

Knowing my existence is no longer in need

Knowing that you leaving me, this is where it would lead

With a knife in my hand and only one choice

Fighting to go against the eerie little voice

Telling me to leave knowing no one wanted me to stay

Telling me to go so far away

Crying my last tear and going into the dark mist

Hoping she'll ever know I ever even exist

This is for archeological-mania

So sorry it took so long I was havin major major writers block, I hope u like it tho ^^


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archeological-mania on October 7, 2005, 11:44:24 AM

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archeological-maniathats AWSOME!!
very nice job!!
i like the title too!!
your very good with rhymes. ^^
luv it!!
FAVS*
thanx
bye*