Chapter 1 - Alone
Submitted April 20, 2004 Updated April 20, 2004 Status Incomplete | well this isn't a story but it is a poem that I wrote a week ago it is very sad though.
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Chapter 1 - Alone
Chapter 1 - Alone
Why am I here all alone,
And there is no one to talk on the phone.
Light at day, dark at night,
I know that I have to fight.
Fight the feeling that I am by myself,
Like a puppet on a shelf.
But can this realy be true,
My tears are a ocean blue.
As they fall from my face,
I'm thinking why am I in this place.
But I realy want to know,
Do I have to be so alone.
by Daesha10538
And there is no one to talk on the phone.
Light at day, dark at night,
I know that I have to fight.
Fight the feeling that I am by myself,
Like a puppet on a shelf.
But can this realy be true,
My tears are a ocean blue.
As they fall from my face,
I'm thinking why am I in this place.
But I realy want to know,
Do I have to be so alone.
by Daesha10538
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darkgirl92 on June 9, 2005, 10:49:36 AM
darkgirl92 on
I thought that was deep.It shows you how life can be cheep. There are times when were sitting at home waiting for someone to call to talk on the phone. Seeing your reflection through a mirrior wishing that your life could be clearer.Fujiko on May 15, 2005, 11:55:36 AM
Fujiko on
that is a very good poem you have there that it is... you have a lot of talent. Well keep it up -favs-ILoveAang on April 16, 2005, 9:28:55 AM
ILoveAang on
man.....i usually hate poetry but i have to give you 2 thumbs up i added this peom to my favorites list on my profile no questions asked......that poem was so great i cant beleive it you should be like a professional or something!heartless-sinner on February 26, 2005, 6:28:24 AM
wow strong!!! i would let you read my poems but i cant get them on the site.T-Tsoulkeeper13 on November 29, 2004, 3:12:02 PM
soulkeeper13 on
i thought it was sad *tear* keep up the good work!-kitkatoo
SS5DIABLO on April 25, 2004, 1:07:43 PM
SS5DIABLO on
not bad but if you were rely alone or sad a real person who lives like this after a while loose all feeling trust me i knowsilver_dreams on April 20, 2004, 2:59:07 PM
not bad,but not exactly 'sad'. try and get deeper into feelings and use alot of similes that noone use b4, ya kno?