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Chapter 1 - Chapter 1 (How It All Began)

This story focuses on the White Angel, Spirit the Hedgehog.

Chapter 1 - Chapter 1 (How It All Began)

Chapter 1 - Chapter 1 (How It All Began)
*Spotlight turns on*

Spirit: Hello. I'm Spirit the Hedgehog, the White Angel. I want to tell you all a story about a poor little white hedgehog, who has no family, no friends, and is all alone.

*Spirit gets out a storybook*

Spirit: It all happened, way back in the past...

Story begins

Young Spirit looks up at the skies...

Young Spirit: I don't belong here. The Realm of Hell is not the perfect place for me.

Spirit's BG Voice: I have two, mean, horrible siblings that like to tear me up, beat me up, and threaten me every hour.

Young Spirit: God...help me...I'm...too young...to be...in this place...

Two dark figures appear behind Spirit

Spirit's BG Voice: I have one brother, named Daimon. He's a complete jerk.

Young Daimon: Well, well, if it isn't the White Angel.

Spirit's BG Voice: And I have a tall sister, named Scarlet. Boy, were they jerks.

Young Scarlet: May I, dear brother?

Young Daimon: Knock yourself out, sis.

Scarlet walks up to Spirit, and then, she headlocks him

Young Scarlet: C'mon, little brother! Let's get to it!

Young Daimon: I'd be honored.

Daimon punches Spirit in the face, multiple times

Young Spirit: Hey! Cut that out! Ouch! That hurts! Stop!

Spirit continues to get beaten up

Young Spirit: I don't like you guys. You're not my real siblings.

Young Scarlet: You don't like your sis, eh?

Young Daimon: We can fix that.

Young Spirit: NO! DON'T DO IT!

Young Spirit continues to get beaten up, until...

Young Spirit: What is happening?

A white energy sphere surrounds him, and he floats...

Young Spirit: I-I'm floating...but...why?

After a few seconds, Spirit disappears

Young Scarlet: Bah, he disappeared!

Young Daimon: Oh well. He's gone anyway. We will meet again, brother. Someday.

Up in the skies, a white light occurs. Spirit, was seen in the Realm of Heaven. He awakens from his unconsciousness, as he realizes...

Young Spirit: I've escaped...where am I?

TO BE CONTINUED...

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MewBerry_harmony16 on May 13, 2006, 11:18:21 AM

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MewBerry_harmony16chapter one is wonderful. i love it snd im adding it to my favorites