Chapter 6 - chapter five

(On the phoenix)
Osric: Man, all those spheres were all connected to the Shadow palo. And we have Sam here to tell us about it, it's like he was brought here for a reason
Nina: Yeah, I know. I wonder what's the truth about him
Osric: I wonder if he's some kinda spirit or something...
Simone:(yawns)We are so close, but when is the last Shadow lord gonna pop-up?
Vidina: Yeah when is it? It better be soon, ya? Because I'm so tired of waiting!
(Simone laughs)
Vidina: What?
Simone:(laughs)You always agree with what I say
Vidina: Hmmm. I guess I do
Melanie: Okay love birds, I want some action! But right now I feel like shopping!
Nina: Oh my gosh! same here!
Yava: Oh, we got a signal from our commsphere network. It's from someone in Silverdome city. Wanna check it out?
Simone: Sure, why not?
(When the commsphere network turns on and you see Jake)
Simone: J-Jake? Hey uh...what do you need?
Jake: Hey Simone, I just wanted to ask you if you're going to the magabike racing championship. I heard you're a good racer
Simone: Oh my gosh! I totally forgot! thanks for reminding me Jake!
Jake: No problemo. I'll be waiting the entrance of the megabike racing arena. I want to see you race and cheer you on
Simone: Thanks...we'll be there
Jake: Alright, see ya there
(the commsphere network turns off)
Simone: We're going to Silverdome city!
Vidina: But what about the search for the Shadow palo?
Simone: We'll hold it off for a bit. Come on you guys, Jake's gonna be there!
Yava: Well...I'll go but right after the megabike races then we're leaving
Melanie: Yeah I'm going!
Nina: Like me too! Silverdome City has the biggest mall and I'm so not missing out!
Osric: Well I might as well too
Chelsey:(standing next to Sam)Us too. I love Silverdome city!
(everyone looks at Vidina)
Vidina: Alright I'll go! As long as it doesn't take too long then we'll go
Osric: Alright we're right over the city! here we go!
(At Silverdome city)
Nina: Oh yeah! I looove this place. I can't believe Mom didn't want to live here, but then again she prefers quiet boring places...
Chelsey: Well, that's Mom
(When you arrive at the arena entrance)
Jake: Hey, Simone. Hey guys
Simone: H-hey Jake
Jake: Are you excited to race?
Simone: Of course! I've been racing since I was fifteen!
Jake: Oh...right. I wish you the best of luck(places a hand on Simone's shoulder)
Simone:(smiles and blushes)T-Thanks
Vidina: Okay pal that's enough. She has to go, ya?
Jake: Oh, of course good luck.(looks at Vidina and gives him a sly smile)
Simone: Thanks. See ya guys!
Yava: Go kick some @$$!
Melanie: Yeah, go get e'm Kool Katt!
Simone:(giggles)Don't worry I will
(As she walks off Vidina looks at her and has a worried look on his face then turns to Jake to see him smiling suspiciously)
Vidina:(thinking)What the hell is he up to?
(Now in the megabike cages)
Simone:(gripping her handlebars)Come on Simone, you can do this!
announcer: Ladies and Gentlemen! the annual megabike racing championship has begun! And all of the best Megabike racers from all over Spira has gathered for this event. First we start with the alpha league which is the league for beginners, then the Beta league for those with little experience and of course the Delta league for the experts!
(A biker on a bike next to Simone starts talking)
Biker: Hey, good luck. After the other leagues race, the race begins.
Simone: Good luck to you too. I can't wait to race
(After a while)
announcer: Now the Beta racers have finished, may the Delta racers bring their bikes to the start line
Simone: Yes! It's starting! It's racing time!
(After all the races and you win the tournament while the announcer talks you see Simone waving to everyone holding the cup)
announcer: Congradulations to the youngest member in the league, Simone, the eldest daughter to high summoner Yuna a and a girl of only seventeen! And she's as good as she is! She will receive the Delta cup and is the official champion!
(Back at the arena gate)
Vidina: Wow Simone, you were great!
Nina: That was so totally wicked Sis! you made those suckers eat your dust!
Melanie: Yeah you like, so did!
Osric: You are so talented, you're a good singer and a megabike racer! oh and a good fighter!
Simone: Thanks guys, wait...where's Jake?
Sam: I dunno. Haven't seen him since you won
Yava: Yeah, I could've sworn he was with us
Chelsey: Hey look! a sphere on the ground! and it has the Mcclouds symbol on it...
Nina: Mcclouds symbol?
Simone: Let's see what it's about...
(when you turn on the sphere)
Mckelly: Ahem, hey there Chickenwings! you probably realized that Jake has gone missing by now...but he's with us as a hostage! we won't hurt him if you give us more info on the Shadow palo. But if you don't...You'll regret it. He's being held at the top floor in Silverdome heights, the tallest building in the city. Give me the info there, tata for now! HAHAHAAHAHAHAHHA...coughcough(takes puffer)Yeah, like I said haha
(Sphere ends)
Simone: Jake! we have to save him!
Vidina: We have more important things to do Simone! We'll get ourselves into something if we go there
Simone: But Vidina! I'm not gonna leave him there! I'm going to save him!
Nina: I'm like sooo helping!
Chelsey: Me too!
Yava: Don't forget us!
Sam: Man, this is so cool! we're going on a rescue mission!
Vidina: Come on you guys! You honestly want to save him?
Simone: Well I'm going to save him. Let's go Eaglewings!
Melanie: Those mccows are gonna taste bad milk!
Yava: Bad milk?
Melanie: Whatever
(The others run off)
Vidina: Oh fine I'll go!(runs after the others)
(In Silverdome heights)
Chelsey: Whoa, this place is huge! And so fancy!
Simone: Okay we have to split up, they might have something planned so best not be together. Nina and Chelsey go with me, Melanie sticks with Yava and the boys stick together, got it?
All: Got it!
Simone: Let's go!
(When you arrive at the top floor, Jake is standing with his back facing Simone and her sisters)
Simone: Jake! You're okay!
Jake:(turns around)Of course I'm okay, why wouldn't I be?
Simone: They kidnapped you! And they're gonna hurt you if we don't get outta here!
Jake:(laughs)You still haven't figured it out haven't you, Simone?
Simone:(blinks surprised)Figured out what?
Mckelly: You really are pathetic aren't you?(walks from out of nowhere and stands beside Jake)
Simone: Mckelly! Stay away from him!
Mckelly: Why should I?(points a gun at Simone, Nina and Chelsey)
(Then Jake takes out a gun and points it at the girls as well)
Nina: Uh...dude you're like pointing the gun the wrong way hehehehe...
Jake: No I'm not. Simone, I'm with the Mcclouds
Simone: WHAT?
Mckelly: Jake never was your boyfriend, he never liked you. He was spying on you. Jake is really my boyfriend and has been for two years!(She and Jake kiss)
Chelsey: You're a witch!
Jake: Maybe next time, Simone
Simone:(clenches her fist)You betrayed me
Jake: No, I was with Mckelly the whole time. You're the traitor, you have no idea what you got you and your friends into.
Mckelly: My father needs you three for his plans. That's why we're here! Boys! grab them!
(The Wattson brothers come over and try to tie up the girls)
Simone: Oh no you don't!(jumps into the air and kicks Simon)
Simon: You wanna fight huh? Okay, we'll fight!
AFTER BATTLE
(The girls are on the ground passed out)
Nick: Yes! we actually won! It's a miracle!
Charlie: Those girls finally got what they deserved!
Simon: Ha! they sure did!
Mckelly: Alright boys, carry them to the ship. We have to bring them to the Fiona plains by tomorrow night, my father is waiting
Jake: We finally did it love, your father's plan will work and Spira will suffer!
Mckelly: You're right. First I have to call my father(calls her father on her cellphone)Father, we have them! we're on our way!
????: Excellent job Mckelly. You too Jake, we have suceeded. I'll see you at the Fiona plains
Mckelly: Of course Daddy. Alright let's go men!
(A bunch of lizard brutes come over with the Eaglewings)
lizard: Look! we found their friends!
Vidina: Where's Simone? where is she?(then spots Simone lying on the ground)SIMONE!(runs over to her body)Simone, wake up! wake up!
Jake: She's fine, she just passed out. I told you to watch your back, HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Vidina:(glares)You asshole!(Goes to punch Jake but he misses and a lizard brute grabs him)LET ME GO! I'LL GET YOU JAKE! YOU'LL PAY!
Jake: Uh-huh, sure I will!(goes over to Simone and picks her up and carries her)
Mckelly: Alright to the Fiona plains!
(After a while, you see the Mccloud airship take off into the night sky and Mckelly and Jake are standing on the deck and Jake is holding Simone)
To tell you the truth I was surprised what had happened, But if this never happened, what was going to happen next would've never happened either...
MEANWHILE IN BESAID
(You see the outside of Tidus and Yuna's house then you see Yuna moving around in bed)
Yuna:(in her sleep)What do you want from me? What do you want!
(Yuna's dream starts)
(You see the girls running from a huge hooded figure screaming)
girls: Mom! Help!
Yuna: Girls! I'm coming!(runs after them then they disappear and six glyphs appear in the darkness)What the- the glyphs!
(Then an image of the Shadow palo appears and then a bunch of Whistlers fly around Yuna)
Yuna: What are they?(then shows the sun being eclipsed and Spira is in pure darkness)An eclispe?
(Then Seymour appears out of nowhere laughing)
Seymour: I will get my revenge on you, Yuna...MUAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
(Then you see Simone, Nina and Chelsey falling into darkness screaming)
Yuna: GIRLS!!!!
(Then you see an island, Timothy and Serena, then a huge shadow-demon creature and then she hears someone shout "Yuna!" then Yuna wakes up)
Yuna: Whoa...what a weird dream. It was like the other one I had.(breathes hard)
Tidus: Yuna...are you okay? You were moving around like crazy
Yuna: Oh sorry honey...I had a bad dream(sits up in bed)
Tidus: What was it about?
Yuna: Well...The girls were screaming and they were falling into darkness, then the sun was being eclisped and...I saw Seymour
Tidus: Seymour? Why would he be in your dream?
Yuna: Well, he said: "I will get my revenge on you, Yuna". But how would he get his revenge on me? What if he's still alive? Maybe that's what my dreams have been telling me!
Tidus: Yuna, he can't be alive. You sent him to the Farplane twenty years ago, he can't come back. Just go to sleep, it's just a dream after all. And besides, I'm right here I won't let anything happen to you
Yuna:(sighs)I guess you're right, Tidus
(Then Scruff starts barking)
Tidus: Shut-up Dog!
Yuna: Tidus, Scruff's trying to tell us something!
Tidus: Like what? we don't even know what he's saying! he's a dog!
(Then they hear a thump)
Yuna: There's someone downstairs! Show us Scruff!
(Scruff runs towards the stairs growling)
Tidus:(grabs his sword)Alright let's go!
Yuna:(nodds and grabs her staff)Try not to be noisy okay?
(Tidus, Yuna and Scruff walk slowly down the stairs and spot a person in the dark)
Tidus: Hey! get out of our house!(Jumps off the stairs and gets ready to swing his sword and the person is Pacce)
Pacce: AAAAHHHHH!
Tidus:(swings his sword and it misses Pacce)Oh my gosh! Pacce! I'm so sorry, I didn't know it was-
Pacce: It's alright, I'm sorry for sneaking in here like that. I thought you wouldn't mind if I just walked in
Yuna: Pacce...why are you here at this time of night? Shouldn't you be looking over the Youth league?
Pacce: There is something I need to tell you my lady. It is very upsetting, the Youth league got a message from Shinra corp that they saw something tragic on their commsphere network and told one of us to tell you
Tidus: What?
Pacce: Your daughters...they were kidnapped in Silverdome city
Yuna: My babies! We have to save them!
Pacce: Their friends were kidnapped as well. The kidnappers were an organization known as the Mcclouds, and they took them on an airship I believe somewhere around Mt. Gagazet, I'm not sure
Yuna: We have to tell everyone, including Wakka and Lulu since Vidina was kidnapped too
Tidus: Right, let's go!
(When you go to the temple, a scene begins. Yuna is standing in front of her father's statue and Wakka and Lulu are with Tidus)
Yuna: What can I do father? my daughters are in danger and I don't know how I'm going to save them...(her eyes fill with tears)I'm so worried
Lulu:(crying)Poor Vidina, I hope he's okay. We gotta save him!
Wakka: Nobody takes my son! Nobody!
Tidus: Don't worry, we'll rescue him and his friends. I hope the girls are okay...
Yuna: How will we catch up to the kidnappers? they're on an airship, and there's no way we can catch them on a ferry
Lulu: Don't Rikku, Brother and Cid have an airship? the Celsius?
Yuna: Yes, they do! Good thinking Lulu, I'll call Rikku in a few minutes
Priest: Good luck on saving your daughters Lady Yuna. Before you leave we must have a ceremony to wish you good luck
Yuna: Thank you. Now, I must go home and call Rikku. Come on guys!
(Yuna, Tidus, Lulu and Wakka walk out of the temple)
(Now at sunrise, the leaving ceremony starts. Yuna walks out of the temple with her hair in a bun a beautiful high summoner dress on with a shiny cape and is wearing shiny black high heels and stands in front of everyone holding her staff)
Yuna: People of Besaid, as you've heard my daughters and their friends have been kidnapped last night, and I am leaving Besaid untill I have found them. I will pray for all of you to make sure you're safe, I might not even come back at all, I might die on the way. So, wish me luck
(Everyone bows their heads as Yuna along with Tidus, Lulu and Wakka walk past them, then the Celsius comes down from the sky and hovers over the island)
Lulu: Finally, they're here
(The huge door latch opens and Rikku jumps down to the ground)
Rikku: Hey everyone! Ready to rescue them?
Yuna: You bet I am Rikku
Rikku: Oh my gosh! Yunie, I loooove your dress! Can I borrow it one day? It's soooo gorgeous!
Yuna:(brushes her dress)One day you can, it is nice. So, who else is with you?
Rikku: Uh...Paine, Brother, and my Dad. That's it really
Tidus: Hey, Rikku! Thanks for giving us a lift
Rikku: No problemo. Anything for you guys. Oh...Yunie...You shouldn't wear that dress...
Yuna: Why?
Rikku: You might get it wrecked. We have time go get changed
Tidus: Come on! we don't have much time!
Yuna: Oh...right(picks up her dress and Tidus helps her climb aboard the Celsius)
Wakka: Wow, I love this ship! And this is the first time I get to go on it for awhile, ya?
Lulu: Stop wasting time, Wakka. Let's go
(Everybody goes on the Celsius and the latch closes and takes off)
(In the celsius)
Rikku: Whooo-hooo! Full speed ahead! Yeaaaahhhhhooooooo!
Brother: Lyms tufh, Rikku(Calm down Rikku)
Paine: So, they're around Mt. Gagazet right?
Yuna:(nodds)Right
Cid: Boy, it's been awhile since I've been on a rescue mission. I'm getting old now and this might be my last journey
Tidus: And it'll be a great one! If anyone stands in our way, we take them on!
Wakka: Now you're talking!(high fives with Tidus)
Paine: Save your energy Tidus, you're gonna need it to kick @$$
Tidus: Oh right
Yuna:(walks over to Cid)How long will it take to reach Mt. Gagazet?
Cid: It depends, Yuna. Don't worry we'll get 'em!
Rikku: Yeah no need to worry Yunie, we'll find them!
Yuna:(nodds then walks to the huge window and stares out thinking)Don't worry girls, I'm coming
MEANWHILE ON THE MCCLOUD AIRSHIP
(Simone, Nina and Chelsey are in a little jail cell and Simone slowly wakes up)
Simone:(looks around)Where Am I?(gets up)What is this place? Nina, Chelsey, wake up!
Nina:(wakes up)Uh...Why are we like in a jail cell?
Chelsey:(wakes up)Uh...Where are we?
Simone:(looks at the wall and sees the Mccloud symbol)We're in the Mccloud ship! they've captured us!
Nina: Grrrrreat. How are we gonna get out?
Chelsey:(looks up and spots a vent)Hey! we can crawl through that vent! Maybe the others are on the other side!
Simone: Maybe, okay, into the vent!
(The girls jump up and go into the vent then crawl through it, then they go through an opening and there are three vents)
Simone: Okay, we're gonna have to split up, and we'll meet each other somewhere okay?
Nina+Chelsey: Okay!
Simone: Let's go!
(Each of the girls go down a vent and you see Simone go down and land in a hallway)
Simone: Alright here I go!
(After you reach the elevator and then you see Nina land in the food court)
Nina: Of all places! I like hope I don't get caught. And something smells good
(After you reach elevator and you see Chelsey land in the engine room)
Chelsey: Great, I'm in the engine room! Well, I'm here and might as well go on!
(After you reach the elevator and the girls reunite)
Nina: Chelsey! You made it!
Simone: Now, where are the others?
Melanie: Psst. Guys, over here!
(Simone looks around then spots a jail cell with the others)
Chelsey: Are you guys alright?
Vidina: Yeah, we're fine. Just get us out!
Chelsey: Hold on, we have the key. I stole it from one of the guards.(unlocks jail cell and Mckelly, Gawk, and the Wattson brothers show up)
Mckelly: How did you escape???
Nina: We're not telling you!
Mckelly: You three are so dead! I won't let you escape, my father needs you for his plan and I won't let him down!
Gawk: Yeah! Chicken wings!
Simone: Tell your Dad to kiss my @$$!
Yava: Oh! that's a burn!
Mckelly: YOU'RE GOING TO PAY FOR THAT!
AFTER BATTLE
Mckelly: You may have won but that'll be your last time! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH...coughcough(takes puffer)
Simon: Boss! we've arrived at the Fiona plains!
Mckelly: Good. Boys, hold on to these troublemakers and bring them to my father!
Nick: Yes, boss!
(At the Fiona plains at nightime)
Nina: Ow! Stop pulling my hair!
lizard brute: Shut-up and keep moving!
(Mckelly walks to a hooded man)
Mckelly: Father, we brought them
????: Excellent, you've done well Mckelly. I'm proud of you.(looks at the girls)Ah, the daughters of Lady Yuna
Simone:(glares)What do you want with us?
????:(laughs)I need you and your sisters for a plan. A plan to take over Spira
Chelsey: We won't join you! And you can't make us!
????: That's not it.(looks at Simone)Simone isn't it? You're the oldest I presume?
Simone: Yeah, I am. Why do you care?
????:(smiles)The reason why you're here is because I need your lives, you three hold the fighting skills of both your parents and are very powerful. And if I take your lives, I will become invincible and so will my god. You three are sacrifices
Nina: What? Nuh-uh, no way! We won't let you take our lives!
????: It's not up to you. You see, it's not really your fault, it's your mother's fault. You can blame her for all of this. Twenty years ago, that's when it all started. I was an innocent soul trying to help out your mother try to stop Sin but no, she had to do things her own way and ruined my life. She will suffer, but right now, you three must die
Simone:(takes out her sword)My mother would never do such a thing! You're lying, you may want our lives but you're not having them!
????:(laughs)Such a foolish child you are, as foolish as your father
Simone: That's it!(charges at ???? with her sword then jumps into the air ready to strike him but ???? raises his hand and blasts Simone with a thunder spell and she screams as she is flung back onto the ground and she is unconscious)
Vidina: SIMONE!(runs to Simone's body but Jake jumps out in front of him holding a black and red sword with weird glyphs on it)
Jake: Tsk tsk. You care for her yet you can't save her. What a pity, you are weak, you are no match for the powers of darkness!
Vidina: GET OUT OF MY WAY!
Jake:(looks at ???? who nodds at him then Jake nodds back then strikes Vidina with his sword and strange lightning comes out of it)WEAKLING!
Chelsey: VIDINA!
Osric: OH NO DINE!
(then Vidina passes out and falls to the ground)
Jake: He's not dead, but he is unconscious. He will die soon though. You're all weaklings, all of you
Chelsey: H-How could you do this? To my sister and my friend? You're soul has been swallowed by your greed for power, now your soul no longer exisits...
????: What the hell are you talking about little girl? He is powerful...his dark powers are quite useful you see, He has been quite useful. But now you're all starting to get on my nerves...Guards! take the girls to the tower and lock up their friends away from them.
guards: Yes sir!(The guards grab Nina and Chelsey and drag them to the tower)
Nina: Ow! my hair!
Chelsey: Please! let us go!
(Then Jake picks up Simone's body and carries her to the tower)
????: Revenge is sweet. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
MEANWHILE ON THE CELSIUS
Cid: Hey! we got a signal! It's from Mt. Gagazet!
Tidus: A signal? and aren't we heading for Mt. Gagazet?
Rikku: It means we're close by! we're gonna save the girls and their friends!
Lulu: That's good. We should be prepared just incase we have to fight
Paine: Wait, doesn't Kimahri have an army of ronso warriors?
Rikku: Oh yeah! Paine and I visited him last week!
Yuna: Kimahri...I haven't seen him for such a long time
Wakka: Why don't we ask Kimahri and his warriors to join us? Just incase we end up in a huge battle, ya?
Yuna: Sounds great. And then we'll search for the girls!
Tidus: Yeah! this will be a piece of cake!
Cid: Brother! On to Gagazet!
Brother: Oac, Vydran!(Yes, Father!)
(At Mt.Gagazet gates, when you walk to Kimahri)
Yuna:(runs over)Kimahri!
Kimahri: Yuna!
Yuna:(hugs Kimahri)I missed you you big furball
Kimahri: Kimahri miss Yuna. Why is Yuna and friends here?
Tidus:(walks over)We're on a rescue mission. Our children have been kidnapped and we're going to save them!
Yuna: Do you know where they might be? All we know that they were taken on an airship
Kimahri: Kimahri see big airship fly over Gagazet last night. Heading straight for Fiona plains
Tidus: Fiona plains?
Paine: It's a part of New Spira and also a part of Gagazet. Remember that huge space between Gagazet and Zanarkand? that's where the Fiona plains is
Tidus: Well, let's go!
Lulu: What about the warriors?
Yuna: Oh right...Kimahri, would you like to join us? And your warriors as well?
Kimahri: Kimahri do anything for Yuna. Follow Kimahri to summit and head for Fiona plains)
Yuna:(nodds and smiles)Everyone, let's go!
(When you arrive at the summit region)
Kimahri: It is nightime, Kimahri bring warriors(a group of ronso warriors stand behind him)
Tidus: Whoa, they're pretty mean looking. And where did Cid go with the Celsius?
Lulu: He said he was going to check for clues and let us know but that's all he told me
Wakka: Man we are prepared. Those warriors seem pretty tough, ya?
Tidus:(patts Kimahri's arm)So, where do we go?
Kimahri:(points ahead)Over there
Rikku: Oh yeah! It's party time!(runs ahead)Come on Yunie!
Yuna:(giggles)I'm coming!
Tidus: Let's go guys!
(In a path full of crystal trees)
Rikku: Brrr. This place is pretty but it sure is cold!
Lulu: It almosts resembles Macalania woods. Only some parts are forested, most are just empty plains
Paine: I wonder what kind of fiends live here?
Wakka: Beats me. Why would the kidnappers take the children here, ya?
Tidus: Maybe they were expecting us. Maybe they wanted us to find them for a reason
Yuna:(sighs)I just hope the girls are alright. What kind of a person would want my girls?
(Then you see a rushing figure in the bushes)
Paine: What the hell was that?
Rikku: Maybe it was a fiend!
Lulu:(looks up and spots someone in a tree)They've been watching us all along!
Yuna: Are you sure it's them?
Lulu: I think so!
Tidus:(swings his sword)Hey! Show yourself!
Kimahri: It's headed that way!
(After Yuna and the others run ahead, you see the lizard brute turn to another direction and then minutes later he arrives at the Mcclouds site)
lizard brute: Sir! I spotted Lady Yuna and her entourage! They've found out where we are!
????: Well isn't that promising?
lizard brute: Should we ambush her?
????: No, do not harm her. I have business with Lady Yuna that I need to discuss
Mckelly: Daddy, I'm Boooooooored
????: Will be quiet Mckelly? if you're a good girl I'll give you a cookie
Mckelly: YAYYYY!
Jake: Hey if this Lady Yuna shows up what are we gonna do?
????: Didn't you hear me? I need to talk to her. But after then you can do what you want with her friends
Jake:(holding his blade)Don't worry, I know exactly what to do
(Now you see Yuna and the others running through the woods then Tidus stops)
Tidus: Oh, I'm sooo tired! Maybe we should rest for a bit...I mean we're probably close
Lulu: We'll rest only for a bit. They could take off
Rikku: Well who's gonna start the fire?
Wakka: Tidus and I will get the firewood
Tidus: Yeah, be right back
(After you collect the firewood, a scene starts with everyone sitting around a fire)
Yuna:(thinking)Oh, girls please be safe
Tidus: You worried?
Yuna:(sighs)Of course I'm worried! My heart is pounding really fast. I'm very worried...I can't stop thinking about them
Tidus: To tell you the truth me neither. But don't worry, we'll save them
Rikku: I'm so tired. I need more time to rest
Yuna: No!(everyone looks at her)No more rest. I want my daughters! I want to make sure they're safe! And I'm not resting until I find them! I love them more than anything!
Paine: Now that's a mother!
Rikku: We're with you Yunie!
(everyone cheers)
Yuna:(smiles)Now let's go save our loved ones!
(When you're out of the woods and you arrive at the Mccloud site)
Tidus: Look! I see them!
Yuna: Hey you! where's our loved ones?
(???? turns around)
????: Men! surround them!
(The lizard men surround Yuna and the others)
????: Lady Yuna, it's been twenty years
Yuna: Who are you?
Wakka: Where are the kids?
????: Oh, the other children aren't that important to me. They'll live
Tidus: Where are my daughters?
????: So Yuna, I see you married that idiot and together you had three girls
Yuna: Your voice...It seems so familar
????: Don't you remember me Yuna? You ruined my life! And I'm your worst enemy!(takes off his hood and he's a guado man with scars all over his face)
Tidus+Yuna: SEYMOUR!
Seymour: Yes it is me, shocked aren't you?
Yuna: But...But how? I sent you to the Farplane twenty years ago!
Seymour: Yes, but I managed to escape! After you defeated Vegnagun, you forgot to close the holes it made. Thanks to you, I escaped from those holes and came into the living world to do what I was supposed to do: Destroy Spira
Yuna:(glares)What have you done with my daughters?
Seymour: Your daughters are still alive...for now! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! When I am ready, and have found the Shadow palo, I will call upon my god and steal the lives of your daughters and my God and I will become invincible!
Yuna: No! I won't allow it!(eyes fill with tears)
Seymour: It is a pity though, If only you listened to me and helped me twenty years ago. None of this would've happened.
Yuna:(shakes her head while crying)No, No! Please! let them go! I'll do anything! Please don't kill them, I love them!
Seymour: It's too late, this is my way of getting revenge on you
Yuna:(crying)my dreams were right...they were right all along...they were telling me you'd come back and drag my little girls into darkness...
Tidus: Yuna! don't listen to him! send him!
Yuna:(wipes her tears)Right!(grabs her staff and starts sending Seymour then he raises his hand and makes her stop)
Seymour: How pitiful. A mother's love, touching but foolish. Men! get rid of these fools!
(A bunch of Lizards and Guado appear)
Tidus: You won't get away with this, Seymour!
Yuna:(crying)What do we do now? He's going to kill my babies!
Lulu: Why don't we hold the guards off while you find the girls and their friends and free them!
Kimahri: We fight! warriors! battle!
(everyone fights while Yuna runs off)
Yuna: I'm coming, girls!
(When you're near the tower a scene starts)
MEANWHILE IN A DUNGEON
Yava: Come on Dine! wake up!
Osric: Man, Jake really hurt him didn't he?
Yava: Yeah, I tried every healing spell I know but it won't work
Melanie: What if he's dead...what will we tell Simone? heck even his parents?
Osric: I don't know...He was a great guy, and a good friend. I only wish that jackass Jake never struck him...Why did we trust him?
Sam: Well, you didn't know anything about him so it's not your fault...
Osric: Yeah...I hope Vidina's still alive...I just hope...
(Vidina moves a little)
everyone: VIDINA!
(Now meanwhile up in the tower, the girls are all chained up)
Nina:(singing)Itsy bitsy spider went up the water spout, down came the rain and washed the spider out, out came the sun and dried up all the rain and the itsy bitsy spider went up the spout again
Simone: SHUT-UP! Sheesh, you've been singing kiddy songs for an hour now!
Nina: Well I'm trying to cheer myself up
Chelsey: What, by annoying us?
Nina: Duh! So...what do you think of Mckelly's father? I think he's kinda creepy. And psycho
Simone: Too bad we don't really know what he looks like, he has that hood covering his face. But he's probably ugly. Maybe that's why Mckelly's so ugly
Nina: I want my Mommy!
Chelsey: She doesn't know that we're here though. So she can't save us
Simone: Well maybe she could, Mom has her motherly instincts
Nina: I want to go home! I'm gonna keep singing until someone comes and rescues us
Simone: If you keep singing again...I'm gonna kick your @$$!
Nina: You can't your chained up so bite me!(sticks out her tounge)
Simone: Alright that's it!
Chelsey: Guys, stop! Arguing isn't going to solve anything! we'll just have to wait. If no one comes, then we're screwed
Simone:(rolls her eyes)Whatever
(Outside of the tower)
Yuna: So, this is where they are? Well, this better be the place
(When you go into the tower then go to the very top of the stairs then you see two lizard guards)
guard#1: Hey, did you hear footsteps?
guard#2: No, why?
guard#1: Are you honestly that deaf? We're on a lookout for Lady Yuna, she's here to save her daughters remember? That could've been her!
Yuna:(hiding behind a corner)(thinking)Hmmm. They don't seem too smart. Maybe I can fool them(walks over to the guards)
guard#2:(points his gun)Hey lady! who are you? and why are you here?
guard#1: Hey, aren't you that High Summoner Lady Yuna chick?
Yuna: Uh...(thinking)Come on Yuna, think of something
guard#1: Well?
Yuna: Oh no, I just look like her. I'm one of Lord Seymour's messenger ladies. He sent me here to watch the prisoners so you can help fight those fools outside.(does a curtsey)My name is...Yoko
guard#2: Really? Well, here's the keys Yoko.(gives Yuna the keys)Make sure those brats don't escape!
Yuna: Brats? they're my-uh...uh...Right. Don't worry I will!
guard#1: Alright! let's go!
(the two lizard guards take off and Yuna walks off)
(When you go to the dungeon)
Simone: Hey, I hear footsteps
Nina: Oh no! what if it's that Guado dude?
Chelsey: Oh no! I don't want ti die! there's so much I could've done with my life!
Simone: Nina, Chelsey I love you guys!
Nina: The footsteps are getting louder...and louder and....AAAHHHHHHH!
(the girls scream and Yuna appears)
Yuna: GIRLS!
Simone: Mom? uh...what are you doing here?
Chelsey: Mom! we're soooo glad you're here!
Nina: Whoa, he sounds alot like Mom. And looks like Mom too! boy he's good
Simone: Nina, it is Mom
Nina: Well, how do you know?
Yuna:(giggles)Honey, it is me.(takes out the keys and unlocks each of the girl's chains)Don't worry, we'll be heading out soon. I'm taking you home
Nina:(stands in front of Yuna)Well, I don't think it's Mom. Prove it!
(Then Yuna hugs the girls tightly)
Nina: Okay it's her
Simone: Can't...breathe...
Yuna:(lets the girls go)Are you three okay? Did he hurt you? I was so worried about all of you
Simone: We're fine Mom. How did you get here anyways? And how did you find out we were here?
Yuna: I flew here
Nina: What you have wings?
Chelsey: It means she came here on an airship, Nina
Nina: Oh. Go on
Yuna: Ahem. Well, back home in Besaid, I was told that you three and your friends were spotted being kidnapped on a commsphere and taken on an airship here.(smiles)You know I'd never let anything happen to any of you
Simone: Yeah, that Guado dude wanted our lives so he could become "invincible"
Yuna: Guado dude? oh right. I knew him from the past...twenty years ago
Simone: You did? What's his name?
Yuna: His name is, Seymour
Nina: Seymour? you never told us about him
Yuna: I know.(turns around and walks to a ledge and sits down)There's something I need to tell you, girls. There's a reason why Seymour hates me. Um...twenty years ago, Seymour was one of the maesters of Yevon
Nina: Ooooh I love stories!
Chelsey: Why you never read, well because you can't read
Nina: Sure I can! Well, I like it when Mom tells stories
Simone: what's a maester?
Yuna: a maester was one of the leaders of Spira. There were four maesters: Mika, Kinoc, Kelk and Seymour. But they hid secrets from Spira and betrayed us all. Seymour had asked me to talk to him in Guadosalam during my pilgrimage. And well...he...uh...he asked me to marry him!
girls: WHAT?!
Yuna: I was was as shocked as you are now. Then later, I found a sphere of Seymour's father Jyscal and I realized Seymour had killed Jyscal. So I decided not tell your father or my guardians about it until it was all over. I wanted Seymour to be turned in the court of Yevon. So I went with him to the Macalania temple and spoke with him there
Simone: Then what?
Yuna: Your father and my guardians showed up and they found out about Seymour killing Jyscal. Seymour was about to fight them but then I fought too because my guardians were my friends and I couldn't watch them be hurt. Then after...I killed him
Simone: I never say this but...Go Mom!
Yuna:(giggles)Anyways...um...It wasn't really the best moment.(while she talks you see a flashback from FFX of Yuna and the others surronding Seymour dead)We were branded traitors. So the Guado chased us out of the temple and we fell deep into the lake ice. Then Sin appeared and we all got separated
Nina: Then what?
Yuna:(sighs)The Guado had captured me in the Bikaniel desert and brought me to Bevelle, along with Seymour who was an unsent now and he made me marry him. So I just went along with it because that was my chance to send him. Then your father and my guardians showed up but before he could save me, I kissed Seymour...
(Girls drop their mouths open at the same time)
Nina: EEEWWWWWW!
Chelsey: Gross!
Simone: Was there any mouth wash?
Yuna:(smiles)No there wasn't...Then later on inside of Sin we fought Seymour for the last time and I finally sent him. So that's why he's willing to get revenge on me...
Chelsey: You sent him? Then what is he doing here?
Yuna:(shakes her head)I don't know Chels. He said he escaped from a hole that Vegnagun made...(stands up)Well, let's go.(starts walking towards the stairs)Come on girls! we're going home!
Simone: Home? now?
Yuna:(giggles)Of course sweetie. Where did you think we were going?(walks down the stairs and the girls follow her)
I didn't want to go home yet, I wanted to finish off Seymour and stop whatever he had planned. But the look on Mom's face, her smile, I could tell she really was glad to have us back. So I just kept my mouth shut for a while...
(When you down the stairs and outside of the tower)
Tidus:(runs over panting)You found them! Wakka and Kimahri rescued the other kids.(then he falls down and Yuna panicks and runs over to him)
Yuna: You have a big wound on your arm. Are you okay, honey?
Tidus: Yeah, I'm fine...OW!
Yuna: Stand still I'll heal it.(closes her eyes and rubs her hand on the wound and uses a healing spell)There, feel better?
Tidus: Yeah thanks Yuna.(tries to stand up then Yuna helps him up then he looks at the girls)So, are you three okay?
Simone: Never better!
Tidus: That's good. Cid should be here any minute, we'll be home soon enough
(Rikku and Paine run over)
Simone: Aunt Rikku!
(the girls run over to Rikku)
Rikku: Hey girls! Are you guys okay?
Nina: Of course Aunt Rikku!
Rikku: In a few minutes, my Dad'll be here and we can get outta here!
Paine: Cid better hurry, more of those lizards could come
(Then everyone else walks over)
Melanie: Guys!(waving her hand)
Yava: You're okay!
(The girl's friends run over)
Vidina: Uh...You okay Simone?
Simone:(nodds)Yep. Why were you worried about me?
Vidina: Uh...yeah well, you're my friend I'm supposed to worry right?
Simone:(giggles)Oh, Dine. You always were a worry wart
Vidina: Hey that's not funny, ya?
Osric: We thought that Mckelly's Dad killed you guys. We were worried
Simone: well we found out his name's Seymour, and he's a foe of my mom's past
Wakka:(pats Vidina's back)Oh boy, can't wait to go home, ya?
Lulu: Me neither. I'm glad everyone's safe
(Tidus and Yuna walk over and stand by the girls)
Yuna: Me too. Oh, and Chels...you can tell me about that story you're working on too. On the way home
Chelsey: How do you know about it?
Yuna: You left it at home and I read some of it. It's pretty good actually
Chelsey: Uh...Thanks(hugs Yuna)I'm so glad to be with my family again. I can't wait to go home!
Yuna:(hugs Chelsey)Me neither
Seymour:(laughs)keep dreaming!
(Everyone turns around to see Seymour, Mckelly, Gawk, Jake and the lizard and guado men)
Nina:(whispers to Chelsey)Ewww I can't believe he kissed Mom! he's like sooo ugly! gross!
Chelsey: Tell me about it
Tidus:(draws his sword)Seymour!
Yuna:(steps forward with her arm out)Girls! stay back!
Simone: Why? we can take him
Yuna: I said stay back!
Seymour: A family reunion I see, to tell you the truth, I kinew you'd come here and rescue your daughters, Yuna. You aren't like other mothers, you'd travel far from home just to see your daughters again. But I'm not letting you get away with them. I need their lives! men, grab the girls!
Yuna: Oh no! GIRLS! RUNNNNNNN!!!
Simone: No! I'm gonna fight!
Tidus: Just listen to your mother and run!
Chelsey: Simone, come on!
Simone:(looks at everyone then nodds)Okay, let's go!
(The girls run off)
Vidina: Come on guys, I'm going with them!(runs off)
Osric: Hey! wait up Dine!
(Vidina and his friends run after the girls)
Seymour: You can run but you can't hide!
Tidus: Alright everyone, we fight them and then go after our young ones, okay?
Wakka: Right Brudda!
(Now you see Simone running but then she stops to take a break)
Simone: Why am I running? I should be fighting!
Nina: Well, that Seymour guy would have like totally killed us if we didn't run
Simone: But I'm not a coward!(takes out her sword)I fight back!
Chelsey:(sighs and shakes her head)Give it a rest Simone. Mom, Dad and the others will catch up to us later. Right now we have to hide
(After you go halfway through the forest)
Vidina: Guys!!!
(The girls turn around)
Nina: You guys were following us?
Vidina: Yeah, I wanted to talk to Simone
Simone: What for?
Vidina: Just come with me
everyone: Ooooooohhhh
Vidina: It's nothing like that! come on Kool Katt, come with me
(Now you see a scene start with Simone and Vidina talking)
Simone: You were right, Dine. About Jake, he was one of the Mcclouds all along. I should've listened to you...I'm sorry. I feel like such an idiot
Vidina: No, Simone...you didn't know. It's okay I forgive you. I should apologize for being jealous everytime you date someone
Simone:(smiles and giggles)So, you admit it?
Vidina:(scratches the back of his head)Uh...it's not that easy to uh...say uh...I just don't want anything to interfere with our friendship, ya?
Simone:(smiles)Uh-huh sure
Vidina: Hey I'm serious, ya? It's just things haven't been easy for me since we became teens...I dunno it's hard to say
Simone: Well um...
(the others show up)
Nina: Are you guys like done yet? we have to keep going!
Melanie: Yeah, are you sure you guys aren't talking about something else?
Vidina: Alright Alright let's go!
(Everyone starts walking and Osric walks beside Nina)
Osric: Hey, Nina
Nina: Hey Ozzy. So, what do you need?
Osric: Oh, Uh...I wanted to ask you if you were okay...
Nina: Of course I'm okay! are you alright Ozzy?
Osric: Yeah, I just uh...oh never mind
(When you go out of the woods)
Chelsey: Let's wait here. Our parents are probably on their way now
Sam: We gotta find the Shadow palo! Seymour and the others will find it if we go home!
Simone: Yeah, I know. What are we gonna tell our parents?
Nina+Melanie:(shrug)I dunno
Yava: Tell them that uh...we really have to find the Shadow palo and if Seymour does, we're doomed!
Vidina: Hey look! our parents! Heyyyy!!!
(the girls and their friends wave to the adults)
Wakka: You guys made it okay?
Vidina: Of course, Dad
Yuna:(stands by the girls)Uh...have you seen an airship around? It should be here
Chelsey:(shakes her head)Nope. Sorry Mom
Simone: What happened to Seymour? And Mckelly?
Tidus: We fought off the lizard guards but after we fought them, Seymour and his henchmen disappeared
Yuna:(sighs with relief)At least they're out of our problems now. Now we can go home
Simone: You mean, Seymour took off?
Tidus: Uh...yeah Simone. What else could I have meant?
Simone: We have to stop him! He'll destroy Spira if we don't!
Seymour: You're right. I will
(everyone gasps and turns to see Seymour, Jake, Mckelly, Gawk, the Wattson brothers, and the guards)
Mckelly: You still haven't won yet!
Jake: You still have a long way to go!
Simone:(clenches her fist)We're gonna stop you! you'll see!
Mckelly: Let's see you then
Simone: Don't worry, we will
Yuna: You just don't give up do you?
Seymour: Giving up isn't in my volcabulary Yuna. I see it isn't in yours either.(walks towards Yuna)I have had visons Yuna, you and I will rule Spira. We will turn the world of the living into a living hell, everyone will feel Eternal pain, and you will become immortal. You'll become powerful, think about it, you'll possess powers you never had. You'll be my queen(reaches out his hand)Join me Yuna, Join me!
Yuna: No! I'll never join you! Power means nothing to me!
Seymour: You'd rather be weak? Spend the rest of your life with your pathetic family?
Yuna: Yes, I would
Seymour: What a pity. Then you will suffer the most pain. But for now, men!
Yuna: No! Don't please!(Seymour grabs her arm and holds her against him tightly)
(A group of Guado grab Simone, Nina and Chelsey and take them to Seymour)
Tidus: Noooo!(runs towards Seymour but the guards hold him back)
Nina: Ow! let me go! you're messing up my hair!
(The girls try to brake free)
Seymour: Join me! or else I'll kill them now!
Yuna:(looks up at Seymour and tries to wiggle free out of his arms)Fine, I'll join you!
Chelsey: What? no Mom!
Yuna:(smiles)I'll be your queen(strokes Seymour's cheek and he smiles at her)
Seymour: You have chosen well Yuna
Tidus: Yuna! What are you doing?
Yuna:(looks at Tidus and winks then looks back at Seymour)Oh, Seymour...I missed you
Tidus:(nodds and smiles)Go, Yuna
Rikku:(whispers)I don't get it, why did she wink?
Tidus:(whispers back)She's pretending! she's trying to make him trust her so behind his back she can take back the girls
Paine: smart move
Seymour: Well, something doesn't seem right.(looks at Yuna who is smiling)I don't know if I can trust you
Simone: Alright guys, let's fight!
Chelsey:(sighs and shakes her head)Oh boy...there she goes again...
Simone:(kicks one of the Guado and punches another)Come on guys!(runs off)
Chelsey:(pulls free and kicks a Guado)Simone!(runs after Simone)
Nina: Hey! wait up!(punches a Guado and runs after her sisters)
Seymour: Those little brats! They keep getting away! After them!
Mckelly: You heard my father! after them you fools!
(The guado and the lizards chase after the girls)
Jake: I'll go to, I'll bring them back too
Yuna: Oh no! Girls!
Seymour:(pulls Yuna close to him)Kiss me, Yuna
Yuna: Never!(slaps Seymour and runs off)Come on! we have to save them!
Tidus: right! let's go guys!
(Simone, Nina and Chelsey run as fast as they can and then you see a group of Guado and lizard brutes after them)
Simone: sheesh leave us alone!
(After some battles and you reach a save point and walk a little past it)
Nina:(breathing heavily)Man, we probably could join the cross country club someday. We do just just as much as them and...Oh snap! my shoes are dirty!
Chelsey: Nina how could you be so worried about your shoes? we're running away from our deaths here!
Simone: I've had enough of this, I'm going to fight and no one's gonna stop me!
(Then Jake appears with his blade and looks at Simone)
Jake: So, it has come to this. I'm not letting you three get away, my leader needs your souls and your souls he will have
Simone: Shut-up Jake! You're just a dumbass puppet being controlled by Seymour
Jake: I'm no puppet, you three are though
Nina: We are? I don't see any strings attached to me
Jake: You must not get what I'm saying then...(then she swings his blade and some kind of darkness swirls around him)You should join the darkside, it's way better and more poweful. But it's too late to choose now, You are going to Seymour conscious or unconscious
Chelsey: Please Jake, don't let the darkness take over you! Stop this!
Simone: It's no use Chels, we're gonna have to fight him. let's get him!
Chelsey:(sighs and shakes her head)Why do I get into these things?
(the girls run towards Jake)
AFTER BATTLE
(The girls are panting and so is Jake and he glares then runs off. Then the girls stand up and the ground starts shaking)
Nina: W-What is going oooonnnnn?
Simone: I don't know. Let's head back now!
(Then the ground stops shaking and Simone and the girls feel dizzy)
Chelsey: What is wrong with me? Why do I feel dizzy?
Nina: It's like I just got off a rollar coaster(then some creepy black vine crawls up her leg from the ground)AAAAHHHHHHHH! WHAT THE HELL IS THAT!!!
Chelsey: Nina! hang on I'll cut it!(slashes at it with her daggers but it's no use then a black vine crawls up her leg)Get off me!
Simone: Oh no!(then a black vine slithers up her leg)No! not me too!
(The girls try to brake free of the black vines as they silther up their bodies and tie up their legs then their arms)
Simone: HELLLLLPPPPP!
Vidina: SIMONE!
Simone: VIDINA! HELP US!
(Vidina and his friends show uo and Vidina tries to rip off the vines but they're too tight on her)
Melanie: Oh my god! what are those???
Nina: I don't know but GET THEM OFF ME!
Vidina: Don't worry, I'll save you guys!
Sam: Oh no...Vidina there's nothing we can do, they've been called down to the Underworld!
Osric: What do you mean called down:?
Sam: I mean that those vines are going to take them to the Underworld!
Nina:(crying)No! I don't want to go there! Why does this have to happen to us???
(Then all of a sudden a hole opens up and the girls fall back screaming)
Vidina: SIMONE!(reaches out his hand down the hole)
Simone: VIDINA!!!
(Then the girls keep screaming as they fall down and you can't see them anymore)
Yava: Oh no...
Melanie: It's too late. we lost them
(Yuna and the others walk over)
Tidus: Where's the girls?
Vidina:(looking sad)I'm sorry, they fell down this hole. We couldn't save them on time
Yuna:(yells down the hole)GIRLS!!!!(her voice echoes down the hole and her eyes fill with tears)It's just like my dreams...No, No!(Yuna gets ready to jump into the hole but Lulu holds her back)
Lulu: You can't Yuna, it might be too late
(Yuna nodds then walks off crying then everyone walks off)
(Now meanwhile down the hole, you see Simone falling slowly down the hole in darkness then you see Nina and Chelsey falling too)
Luckily we didn't die, we were headed for the world below. "Why were we called to the Underworld?" I thought to myself. I wanted answers, and we were about to discover some strange answers that would change us forever...
(Simone opens her eyes and looks around at the Eternal darkness. She looks around for her sisters then she and her sisters fall down fast. Now you see Simone falling from clouds and heading down straight for land and she screams then all you see is light)
Simone:(wakes up slowly to see herself on a beach)Huh? Why am I on a beach?(Then she looks around and notices she is on Besaid Island)Besaid Island? I'm home? But wasn't I falling...down a hole?(looks up at the sky and it is a little unusual then she looks and notices her friends Yuffie, Selphie, Garnet, and Rinoa)Hey! guys!
(When you run over to Simone's friends)
Simone: Hey guys, can you tell me what's going on?
(Simone's friends just stand there)
Simone: Uh hello? it's me Simone? Kool Katt? stop ignoring me!(Then she puts her hand out and it goes right through Selphie)Ah! what's going on?
????: Can't you see yet, this isn't really your home. It's a dream of it
Simone: A dream of it? so this is a dream?
????: No, your home is the dream...Haven't you noticed that?
Simone: Uh...no. I know my Dad is a dream of the fayth but I'm pretty sure I'm real right?
????: In some ways yes, but you and your sisters aren't like other humans...you three have powers so poweful you don't even know it
Simone: What is going on? and how is my home a dream? Hellllooooo! Answer Dammit!
????: You'll find out soon enough, Simone
(Now Simone finds herself falling back slowly and she falls into the sand and falls down into more darkness and her eyes close as she falls down and down)
I had no idea what the voice meant, My home a dream? I didn't know what to think...I really wanted the answers as soon as possible
(Now you see the Farplane abyss and the girls are laying down in a little field of grass *The field Yuna was laying on in FFX-2*)
Simone:(wakes up slowly and looks around at all of the pyreflies)Huh? What just happened? I'm so confused...how is my home a dream? oh...maybe I had a dream about that, maybe it isn't true. Where am I anyways?(looks to see waterfalls then stands up and looks up at the sky)We've fallen a long way.(looks at Nina and Chelsey and walks over to them and tries to wake them up)Guys! wake up! wake up!
Chelsey:(wakes up)What? huh?(sits up)Where are we?
Simone: It seems like the Farplane. Is this the Underworld?
Nina:(wakes up)Oh snap, are we alive?
Chelsey: Yes we are Nina
Nina: Whoa! where are we? where's the others?
Simone:(points to the sky)Up there
Chelsey:(looks at the waterfalls)This place is very pretty but pretty creepy at the same time
Fayth: Ah, Simone, Nina and Chelsey. I've been expecting you three
(Simone turns around and sees the fayth)
Simone: You..why do I feel like I know you...?
Fayth:(laughs)I'm a fayth remember? The fayth cannot live in the living world anymore so we stay down here
Nina: Look pal, I want to go home! Is there a way back up?
Fayth: Unfortantely there isn't...
Nina: You meam we're stuck down here forever? I didn't even get a chance to become a fashion designer!
Chelsey: I'll never see Mom or Dad again...
Fayth: There is a reason you three fell down here
Simone: Why? what's the reason?
Fayth: Those holes...in the Upper world, you saw them didn't you? The shadow lords have gathered energy from the Shadow palo for at least one million years. They have been summoned to bring chaos to Spira and search for the evil one. The one who is to bring the mighty god of darkness!
Chelsey: That still doesn't answer our question. Why were we brought down here?
Fayth: Don't you see? You three are meant to save Spira, you aren't like any other teenager. You three have more powers than you know, and they are very powerful but you never knew about them because they are deep inside each of you. And as I recall only one of you has the powers of darkness, but I'm still not really sure if you three are the chosen ones...
Simone: What are you talking about?
Fayth: I have had a glimpse of the future. You have become famous and saved the world from oblivion. But then I had a glimpse of the future if darkness prevailed...I'll show it to you(closes his eyes then the girls close their eyes and see the future. Everything is dead and the sky is black)
Nina: Whoa! it's so creepy! where is everyone?
Fayth: Dead. Spira was destroyed by the shadows and the god and all living things have been destroyed. Except for them
Simone: Who?
(Now you see Seymour sitting on a throne with Yuna beside him and Mckelly is standing by them)
Fayth: Seymour is the future ruler of darkness, the king I should say...and your mother will be his queen
Simone: So in the future, my mom becomes evil?
Fayth: Not exactly. Seymour told your mother that if she joined him he'd spare your lives and not steal your souls. But he somehow brainwashed her...then he stole your lives and became immortal
Chelsey: Immortal? isn't he dead? an unsent?
(Now everyone opens their eyes)
Fayth: No he isn't dead or alive. I'm not really sure what he is but we must stop him as soon as possible. So, the reason for you three is to destroy Seymour and the Shadow palo. If you don't, Spira is done for
Simone: But we don't know where the Shadow palo is! How can we destroy it if we can't find it?
Fayth: You do know you have to destroy all six shadow lords to find out, right? So, you have destroyed five of them, the last one lies in the Underworld. Balora, she is not strong enough against light yet but she is the toughest of the shadow lords. She's still gathering energy to rise so go now before to destroy her. Okay?
Nina: Yes sir!
Fayth: And remember, you three are the mightiest of all, don't you ever wonder why only you three can defeat the Shadow lords and no one else? And how can you use powerful attacks during battle?
Simone: Uh yeah but...So, what are we? why aren't we like anyone else?
Fayth: I don't have much time to explain but you three are the Angels of Eternal light, only you three can stop the darkness and destroy Seymour for good. Hurry now, good luck Angels...
Nina: A-Angels?
Simone: Come on let's go!
Fayth: You'll find out more on your journey, good luck!
(A black hole opens up down in the depths and the girls jump down. Now you see the girls falling slowly into the Underworld and they land on a platform)
Nina:(shakes)Uh guys...this place is creepy
Chelsey:(looks around)It's so dark. I can't see a thing...
Simone: We to find the last shadow lord...then we'll go home
(Now a bunch of glyphs shine around the girls and a bunch of eyes appear around them)
Chelsey: I want to go home!
Simone: Dont' worry, we will. And find out more about us being angels. Come on!(runs off then the girls follow)
(When you go to another platform)
Suka: Look Denya, it's those three twerps who destroyed our plan!
Denya: Oh great, but they can't do nothing now, they're in our world now! hahahahahahahahaha
Simone: Get out of our way you stupid demons!
Suka: Why should we? we're not just gonna let you through just because you three are the Angels of Eternal light. It's probably a joke anyways
Denya: Of course it is Suka, those three brats...the power all mighty Angels of Eternal light? HA! I expected the Angels to look better than that!
Chelsey: We're no brats! and besides, we don't know much about this yet. But soon we will, after we finish you off
Denya: Finish us off? please you wish! let's get em Suka!
Suka: right behind ya sis!
(light shines around Suka and Denya and they combine together)
Denya: Try to fight us now you wretched humans!
AFTER BATTLE
Chelsey: wrecthed Humans...sure. They messed with the wrong girls!
Simone: Hmmmm, could we really be the Angels of Eternal light? I wonder what we can do
Nina: I dunno but the longer we chat the easier those shadows could kill us!
Simone: Oh right let's get outta here!
(At the end of the path in a dark chamber)
Nina: Well, where is it? I want to go home now! This place is very scary!
Simone: Hey, what's that red light over there?
(A red light is shining in the darkness)
Chelsey: Beats me. It's like an infrared light...but why down here?
(Then it appears to be two eyes and a huge demon walks towards the girls holding a huge spiked club)
Chelsey: It's not a red light! It's the last Shadow lord!
Simone: Alright girls, we fight for our return home!
Nina: You're so totally right!
AFTER BATTLE
(Balora falls down and a bunch of pyreflies out of her, then Chelsey hears a voice)
????: Well done
Chelsey: Who said that?
Nina: said what?
Chelsey: Didn't you hear it? I heard a spooky voice and it said: "Well done"
Simone: Sorry Chels, but we didn't hear anything
????: You have unlocked the seal of the Shadow palo. Now it is able to be lifted from it's recess
Chelsey: See? didn't you hear that?
(Simone and Nina shake their heads)
Chelsey: Argh. Maybe only I can understand it, because only I was able to understand Denya...maybe I can talk to Shadows too! Because I'm a fiend speaker! No wonder you guys can't hear it!
Simone: Well, ask that thing where is it or what is it?
Chelsey: Show yourself!
(Then a spirit of a young woman appears)
????: I am the spirit of Balora. I was transformed into that monster and stuck in the darkness for so long. I was human one million years ago but the evil god made me transform into a shadow lord
Chelsey: So you're not really evil? you're just a human spirit?
????: Kind of but I'm still a shadow. My real name is Kirana, I was one of Serena's friends, I was a sister to her. The other Shadow lords are my friends as well, their human spirits are resting in the Farplane now. And I am to go there as well
Chelsey: Why are you talking to me?
Kirana: Because you are a fiend speaker, are you not? all the shadow lords know about you, infact Denya and Suka told us that. And the truth that no one knows about is that me and that me and the other shadow lords aren't evil at all. In fact we're good
Chelsey: That's impossible! you're shadows, you're full of pure evil aren't you?
Kirana: That's what you were told. We were supposed to bring chaos to the Upper world, but we disobeyed our orders. We were trying to help you by warning you
Chelsey:(shakes her head)That can't be right! you tried to kill us!
Kirana: No we weren't. All six of us tried to warn you but you weren't listening close enough, so we fought you so you would kill us. And so you could unlock the Shadow palo seal and destroy it. Plus, we sensed Serena's presence near you. So we went to you and helped you in a way
Chelsey: So, nothing is pure evil then. What comes from the heart is pure, the Shadows aren't all evil, maybe they can be nice gentle creatures
Kirana: You have learned much young one. Unfortunetly I can't stay any longer. I must go to the Farplane and rest while I can before the darkness swallows it up. All six of us are counting on you...save your world and destroy the Shadow palo before the evil one get's his hands on it!(starts to dissolve into pyreflies)
Chelsey: Wait! where is the Shadow palo?
Kirana: It is on Glitterenta island. You'll have to find it since no ones knows about it. Remember, you three are the mightiest of all, you're the Angels of Eternal light the keys to unlocking the gateway to eternal light. Farewell, young one(dissolves as pyreflies and goes towards the Farplane and a portal appears in her spot)
Simone: Well, what just happened?
Chelsey: I'll explaine later, we don't have much time. We have to go through this portal. If it's the way back up
Nina: You first, Chels
Simone: Yeah, you first
Chelsey: Oh fine(takes a deep breath in and out and walks into the portal)
Nina:(shaking)Okay, like you next Simone
Simone: Whatever(pushes Nina into the portal then looks for a minute and goes in. After, the portal dissolves)
(Now you see the girls being sucked up to the surface then you see a bright light)
(Now Simone opens her eyes and the girls find themselves on the Fiona plains)
Simone: We made it! we're home! well, not exactly at home in Besaid but what the hell
Nina:(jumps up and down)I can't believe we're alive! ALIVE!(hugs Chelsey)
Chelsey: Hehehehe...hoaray...
Simone: Where's the others?
Nina: maybe they took off thinking we were dead...oh snap!
Chelsey: Well let's find them, and tell them we're the Angels of Eternal light!
Simone:(thinking)And find out what the fayth meant about Besaid being a dream...
(After you find the others walking ahead)
Simone: Heeeeeeyyyy! Did you miss us?
(Everyone turns around, the girls's friends are excited and wave then Yuna turns around and smiles)
Yuna: Girls!(runs over to the girls)
Tidus: Girls? You guys are alive!
(Yuna hugs the girls tightly while crying and cuddles against them)
Nina: Ah...home
Yuna: Are you three okay? I was sooooo worried! I thought I lost all of you!(kisses each of the girls on their cheeks)
Simone: Well, you didn't lose us yet!
Tidus: So...what happened?
(Yuna lets go of the girls and everyone gathers around to listen)
Chelsey: Well, it's a long story to tell you the truth...
Nina: Well, we were very scared, and it was like pure dark down there and like we couldn't see a thing...and there were like monsters...yeah
Simone: Nice, Nina
Lulu: It's a miracle you returned. The Underworld seems like a place of no return
Kimahri: Yuna's daughters strong, Kimahri see Yuna worry, but Kimahri knew daughters would return
Nina: Well we are the Angels of Eternal light after all! That's what we found out!
Yuna: Angels of Eternal light?
Tidus: Huh? What are we talking about?
Sam: The keys to the gateway of eternal light, the only ones who can truly destroy the darkness and the Shadow lords. I knew you three were the angels, you fought those shadow lords like they were nothing!
Chelsey: Speaking of Shadow lords, we fought the last one!
Vidina: Alright! now we can find the Shadow palo! But...how are you guys Angels?
Sam: That's all I know, I never really knew much about them in the first place
Tidus: You sure know alot Sam. No wonder you and Chelsey are friends
Nina: Oh snap! what about Seymour?
Tidus: He and his henchmen took off on a huge airship, they were gonna search for you girls
Paine: And Cid isn't here yet...
Rikku: Oh what is taking him?
(Then everyone hears the Celsius coming down and everyone looks up)
Cid:(on spekaer)Sorry I'm late! There was something wrong with the engine so we had to fix it...anyways did you get them?
Yuna:(giggles)Yes we did Uncle Cid!
Cid: Good then(presses a button and opens latch)Climb aboard!
Yuna: Come on, let's go home
(everyone runs on and the girls are giggling)
(On the Celsius when you go to bridge)
Rikku: Vydran! fro teth'd oui vea dra ahkeha pavuna fa mavd?(Father! why didn't you fix the engine before we left?)
Cid: Ur, cdub ouin lusbmyehehk!(Oh, stop your complaining!)
Rikku: Cunno(sorry)
Cid: So, on to Besaid right?
Tidus:(nodds)Yeah!
Brother: It'll take almost a day to get there, in the meantime we should keep an eye out for Seymour's airship, they could attack us! But good thing we have missles!
(After you go to the cabin to rest And go back)
I waited too long, I had to finally say it
Simone: We can't go home!
Wakka: Why noy? you of all people should want to go home after what you've been through, ya?
Simone: But we need to stop Seymour and his henchmen! He's gonna destroy Spira if we don't do something!
Yuna:(steps forward)Simone, we're going home! There is no way I'm putting you and your sisters in harm's way!
Simone: But, Mom!
Tidus: Simone, listen to your mother! she's trying to protect you!
Yuna: I will not put you in any danger! Not again!(starts to have tears)I almost lost you once and I won't lose you again! do you understand, honey?
Simone: When will you treat me like I'm older! I'm not a little girl anymore! I want to save Spira! heck, not even Nina and Chelsey are little anymore! We're the Angels of Eternal light! we have to save Spira!
Yuna: I don't care what you are! You are all my daughters and I'm not going to let you go and get yourselves killed! That's it!
Nina:(whispers)Hey, Chels. Should we step in?
Chelsey:(whispers)Nah,it won't work
Simone: Just, let us grow up
I kinda felt rude talking that way to Mom. I knew she wanted to protect us but I wanted her to understand that we were older...and not little anymore. And that we were the only hope for Spira...
(When you walk around the whole ship and talk to your friends then go back to the bridge)
Rikku: Simone, Nina, Chelsey...tu oui fyhhy dno du tneja dra yencreb?(Simone, Nina, Chelsey...do you wanna try to drive the airship?)
Simone: yna oui gettehk Yihd Rikku?(Are you kidding Aunt Rikku?)
Rikku: No I'm not
Tidus: Wow, you guys can speak Al Bhed?
Simone:(nodds)Yep, Aunt Rikku taught us
Tidus: Cool, my daughters speak Al Bhed!
Yuna: I've always wanted to learn Al Bhed, maye you girls can teach me!
Wakka: Well, I've been studying a little bit so I can kinda understand it
Lulu: Sure you can Wakka
Nina: Then try to translate this!
Simone: Wakka's cdusylrec cu pek!(Wakka's stomach is so big!)
Nina: Oayr, ed'c mega ra'c bnakhyhd!(Yea it's like he's pregnant!)
Chelsey: fa lyh ehcimd Wakka ymm dra desa yht ra lth'd ihtancdyht ic!(We can insult Wakka all the time and he can't understand us!)
(The girls start laughing and Rikku laughs too)
Wakka: What? what did they say?
Rikku: Something about you looking pregnant!
(Everyone laughs and Wakka get's mad and crosses his arms)
Wakka: Hey! oh you are all in trouble when we get home, ya?
Simone: Oh, I'm sooo scared!
(The girls start laughing again)
Brother: Hey, we picked up something on the radar! Like a colony of birds...big birds!
Rikku: Show us on the screen Brother!
(The screen shows a colony of Whistlers flying in the sky by the Celsius)
Chelsey: The Whistlers!
Wakka: Wha-What? What did you say, Chelsey?
Vidina: It's the Whistlers from one of the movie spheres! But, what are they doing here?
Sam: How can it be? they became extinct a million years ago...unless...
Nina: Let's go see what they look like up close!
Melanie: Yeah! they look so cool!
Yuna: I don't know, what if they bite?
Simone: Everything bites to you, Mom
Osric: Can we please go see them?
Chelsey: Yeah, can we Mom?
Yuna: Well...(sighs)Okay. But be careful...
Simone: Let's go!
(The girls and their friends go into the elevator)
(After you walk halfway on the celsius deck)
Nina: Huh?(looks around then looks up)Wow!
(a colony of Whistlers are flying above the ship and are making dolphin-like noises)
Osric: The Whistlers...they're beautiful!
Yava: I wonder why they're still alive...and nobody's ever seen them
Sam: Whistlers were supposed to be extinct one million years ago, Humans kept hunting them down and killing them form their crystal scales and sell them for tons of gil
Melanie: That's so mean! They killed poor innocent creatures just for money!
Sam: But, I guess this colony managed to survive...but how?
(Three Whistlers fly down onto the deck)
Vidina: Look out! here comes three of them!
(One of the Whistlers makes a dolphin-like sound and walks over to Chelsey)
????: Hello there, my name is Byrn, my two brothers are Dasher and Skywalker. We never thought we'd ever find another fiend speaker
Chelsey:(gasps)Whistlers can talk too?
Nina: Like what do you mean? I didn't hear anything!
Chelsey: Wow, I can talk to Whistlers too!
Simone: Well, what are they saying?
Byrn: We can sense fiend speakers, they are the only humans we can trust since they have a gift to talking to certain creatures.
Dasher: Not only that, we came to help the Angels of Eternal light. We sense that something bad is going to happen!
Chelsey: What's going to happen?
Skywalker: You'll see soon enough
Chelsey:(turns to her friends)Ahem. Well, their names are Byrn, Dasher and Skywalker. And they're here to help the Angels of Eternal light which is Simone, Nina and I
Vidina: Help you guys? for what?
Chelsey:(shrugs)I dunno
(Nina goes on Dasher's back)
Nina: Yeehaw! look at me! I'm riding a Whistler! yahoo!
Chelsey: hehe...sorry, my sister's crazy!
Simone:(goes on Skywalker's back)Sweet! A Whistler's back feels much safer than a chocobo's back!
Chelsey: Well, I might as well try(goes on Byrn's back)Hey, this feels cool
Yava: Uh...You should be careful guys...
Nina: What do you mean?
(Then Skywalker, Dasher and Byrn start to take off)
Nina: AAAAAAAHHHHHHH!
Simone: Whoa!
Chelsey: Hey! what's going oooonnnnnnnn!
(The three Whistlers fly into the sky and the girls's friends on the ship are waving to them)
Simone: Wow! This is actually pretty cool!(opens her arms and feels the wind in her face)YOHOOOOOO!
Nina: I want off! I'm going to die!
Chelsey: Relax Nina, this is fun!
Simone: Hey guys, try this!(stands up on Skywalker's back)Now this is awesome!
Chelsey:(stands up on Byrn's back giggling)Come on Nina! You gotta try this!
Nina: No, I can't! There is no way I'm doing that!
Simone: Just do it!
Nina: Fine!(stands up carefully then smiles)Hey, this is cool! Yahooo!
(the girls start shouting with excitement laughing then the Whistlers fly through clouds then through a rainbow)
To tell you the truth, I wanted to go again. I felt so free, that all my problems just swept way...and then
(After the Whistlers land back on the deck, and the girls get off)
Chelsey: That was sooooo much fun!
(Then the door opens and Yuna and Tidus come out)
Yuna: Are you okay? Girls?
Nina: of course we're okay, Mom
(Yuna walks over and hugs all of the girls)
Chelsey: Mom, we can'y breathe here
Yuna: What were you thinking? Your father and I were so worried about you girls! What do you have to say to this, Tidus?
Tidus: How did you do that? Was it cool?(Yuna steps on his foot)Ow! er...I mean...how could you do something that would give your Mom a heart attack?
Yuna: You could have fallen off those singers!
Chelsey: Whistlers...Mom
Yuna: Do not correct me, young lady! I told you to took at them, not ride them and be killed!
Nina: But...we wanted to have fun!
Yuna: You can have fun when we're home!
Simone: How can we ever have fun when all you do is worry! You're so over-protective of us!
Yuna: I'm over-protective of you because I want to keep you safe! I love all of you, and would not want to lose any of you!
Simone: Well, can't you give us a chance? You know? we're teenagers now, not toddlers! And we want to have fun!
Yuna: Honey, you're allowed to have fun, but not the kind that'll get you killed!
Simone: Well, we can never have fun 'cause you always ruin it!
Yuna: That's not true!
Simone: Yes it is! Leave us alone! and let me grow up!(stomps off to the elevator)
Yuna: Do I really ruin fun?
(Nina and Chelsey scracth their heads then run into the ship and Yuna hugs Tidus and starts to cry)
(In the Celsius when you go to the bridge)
Tidus:(walks in)Hey, guys. How much longer?
Rikku: Where's Yunie?
Tidus: She wanted to be alone
Rikku: Oh, is she upset?
Tidus: Uh...you can say that
Paine: About what?
Chelsey: Simone yelled at her
Nina: Yeah, and like totally being rude! go apologize to her!
Chelsey: Mom doesn't deserved to be treated that way!
Simone: Oh fine I'll apologize! But you owe me!(walks off)
(When you go to the deck)
I kinda was going to apologize to Mom anyways, I felt like a snob, so I did
(Simone starts walking towards Yuna who is standing at the end of the deck then starts to turn around)
Yuna: Simone! I need to talk to you
(When you go over to Yuna)
Simone: What is it now?
Yuna:(sighs)You and I have had a very bitter relationship. We're constantly arguing and we don't really laugh about things together, you know? I want to get along with you(Simone nodds)Just because you get into trouble alot doesn't mean I don't love you. I love you so much Simone, I don't mean to ground you, yell at you and be very protective. You're my daughter and I'm your mother, and in order to teach you and keep you safe, I have to do these things.(A tear goes down her cheek)I always feel that you and I will never get along...I want to though...
Simone: I'm sorry, I mean it. I didn't mean to be rude, I just want to be treated my age
Yuna: I know. But be glad that you have me, my parents died when I was very young. I never knew what it's like to argue with my mother or feel the way you do. And you never know when I'll leave this world...
Simone: I know, I'll try and do better. No, I will do better, I promise Mom
Yuna: Are you sure
Simone: Yeah, cross my heart
Yuna: I love you Simone
Simone: I love you too Mom
Yuna: Can we please learn to get along? It's not too late
Simone: Okay(stays silent for a moment)Uh...Mom?
Yuna: Yes?
Simone: What do you think of Vidina?
Yuna: Vidina? um...a fine young man(looks at Simone)Why do you ask?
Simone: I dunno. Vidina's been acting weird around me lately...
Yuna: Really?
Simone: Yeah
(Tidus walks out on the deck)
Tidus: Hey, what are you guys talking about?
Yuna: Oh, just girl talk(puts a hand on Simone's shoulder)
Tidus: Okay, Then I guess I should leave you two alone then(walks back into the ship)
Simone: Hey, Mom?
Yuna: Hmm?
Simone: Uh...I...uh...(Then the ship starts to shake)Whoa! what's going on?
Cid:(on speaker)Everyone! we're being attacked by something huge!
(The Whistlers start to squeal)
Yuna:(panicks)Follow mw Simone!
(Then the Celsius starts shaking violently again and Yuna starts slipping towards the edge)
Simone: Mom!(Yuna almost falls off the edge but Simone grabs her hand)Don't worry Mom! I won't let you go!
(In the celsius)
Wakka: Who would wanna attack us, ya?
Nina: Make it stop! I don't wanna die now!
Chelsey: Maybe it's an aerial fiend! a big one!
Tidus: Wait, aren't Yuna and Simone on the deck?
Lulu: Yes, they are!
Kimahri: Yuna!
Tidus:(runs to the elevator)Yuna, Simone! I'm coming!
(Nina and Chelsey run after)
Chelsey: Hey! wait up Dad!
Sam: What about the Whistlers?
Osric: Oh right! They might get killed!
(Now on the deck)
Yuna:(her hand starts to slip)Honey, you're gonna have to let me go!
Simone:(shakes her head)No! I won't let you die!
(Tidus and the girls run out of the elevator)
Nina: Simone! Mom!
Chelsey: Don't worry! we're here to help!
(Nina and Chelsey grab Simone and pull)
Nina: Man, you guys are heavy!
(Then Tidus helps pull and Yuna gets back up)
Yuna: Thank you guys. Who's attacking us?
(Then everyone turns around and the huge Mccloud airship is beside the Celsius getting ready to fire)
Chelsey: The Mcclouds!
(The Whistlers start squealing louder)
Simone: Oh, look what the cat's brought in
Mckelly:(on a speaker)I see you three brats survived, but too bad we're gonna destroy your ship then my father will take your lives!
Seymour: Give up now Lady Yuna, face it, you lost! Your daughters will be mine!
Tidus: Give it a rest Seymour!
(The Whistlers start to shoot blasts at the Mccloud airship)
Chelsey: The Whistlers are helping us!
Seymour: Those pitiful creatures are on your side too? Then they'll die as well!
(A latch opens on the Mccloud airship and a huge machina bird flies over)
Yuna: Girls! get inside! Your father and I will fight that machina bird!
Simone: No! we'll fight that machina bird! You and Dad should go inside and tell Cid to activate the main guns!
Tidus: Yeah, they'll hold it off! Let's go Yuna!
Yuna: Are you sure you'll be alright, girls?
Nina: Positive! we are the Angels of Eternal light after all!
Yuna:(nodds)Okay, we're counting on you!
(Tidus and Yuna run inside then the girls run towards the machina bird)
Simone: You're going down tin can!
AFTER BATTLE
Seymour: How did they do that?
Mckelly: Trust me, they can do things Father. weird things.
Gawk: Very weird things yep yep
Jake: Hmmm, sometimes I wonder if they are even ordainary...
Seymour: Well, they haven't won for long! wait till they see this!
(On the Mccloud airship, all the cannons fire at once at the Celsius. Inside the Celsius everyone runs out to deck then the Celsius starts spinning up into the sky then down near the water and everyone is hanging on tight)
Simone: HANG ONNNNN!
(Then the Celsius starts to blow up and everyone falls off it and Simone looks down below and her eyes close as she falls and sees a ray of light)
CHAPTER FIVE IS COMPLETE!

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