Chapter 1 - Broken Love
Submitted December 2, 2004 Updated December 2, 2004 Status Incomplete | a sad poem of heartbreak
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Chapter 1 - Broken Love
Chapter 1 - Broken Love
Broken Love
The sting of love
Like a knife through the heart
It cuts deep
And the sides part
The heart is broken
Split apart
Never to be whole again
Damaged forever
Forever and a day
There is no cure
For a broken heart
After the two sides part
Tears fill the eyes
Someone always cries
As the soul dies
And the heart lies
Cold and alone
With a broken heart
Death at the door
Loving no more
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Opalescent_Flame on June 15, 2006, 9:01:24 AM
Wow...I'm heart broken...*Bows* I feel so inferior in the ways of writing....Celtic_Breeze on May 5, 2006, 5:33:13 AM
That was the most beautiful heart broken song I've ever heard! please write more! btw, just curious, did you write this through experience? You don't have to answer...only if you want to.EmiRay on January 4, 2006, 8:41:01 AM
EmiRay on
Pretty good poem. ^ ^ Keep up the good work! *thumbs up*kikyo246 on October 21, 2005, 11:17:01 PM
kikyo246 on
this poem is so sad. its sounds beatiful. it mad me feel so sad. please email me at Rhenry@ccboe.com i want 2 show my friendjoe537 on April 7, 2005, 9:24:32 AM
joe537 on
Wow... This is such a good poem! My Gf thinks that I'm a loser... She says that I make eveything at its worst... She will realize and she would want me back... But you no what Im gunna say? " How'd you treat me when we were in love? Feel the way that I felt... I hope this make you happy, you sick person... I hope you feel the way I feel!" Yup! I'm pritty selfish alright! I also can hate! Im not her ragdoll! See ya! Coment me later...keautye on March 24, 2005, 5:40:32 AM
keautye on
wow! That's really nice! I really luv it! It's really sad but really nice! *hug*raven87632 on January 23, 2005, 2:32:12 AM
raven87632 on
wow! that is so sad. it's REALLY GOOD, though!DARKNESS_QUEEN13 on January 3, 2005, 2:29:03 AM
that poem is so sad i cant belive you made that up yhat is soooooooooooooooo sad and soooooooooooooooooooooooo brillent please email me at Fishytail_Animeangel@hotmail.comyou write such lovely poems evilcheesedeamon