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Chapter 1 - Ms Naughty Kisses Mr. Persnickety

just a short story for The Mr. Men show an after ending for the episode parade where in one scene Mr Persnickety kissed and hugged Ms Naughty

Chapter 1 - Ms Naughty Kisses Mr. Persnickety

Chapter 1 - Ms Naughty Kisses Mr. Persnickety
Ms Naughty Kisses Mr. Persnickety

random story based of of the parade episode an after ending

he was not surprised he should have expected she would pull a stunt like that at the parade.

he sighed and he started to clean up the mess of the parade.

he thought even If it weren't for her he would have to clean up after the other floats anyway.

but still he had another thought on his mind.

why did he kiss and hug her?

he did not originally intend to he just lost control of his actions is what he kept telling himself but he knew deep down inside he really liked her.



she usually did not feel bad after a prank and seeing his and others reactions as well but now seeing him looking so miserable cleaning up.

after the parade alone she felt a bit odd about it a thought at the back of her mind was bugging her like crazy.

why did he hug and kiss her that he did and that she did not expect.

of course neither did he of course she did not want to let a good prank go unfinished but now she wish she had not done it cuse deep down she liked him too.

she walked up to him and he said "what do you want haven't you caused enough mischief for today?"

he was trying to hold back a blush because of him kissing her earlier. true it was a quick hug and kiss but it was still a kiss on the lips.

she also holding back a blush said "I vanted to see if you vanted some help in cleaning up i did have a hand in most of the mess after all."

this surprised him a bit "why would you of all people all of the sudden would you take responsibility for your actions?

"Let's just call it a form of an apology and it looks like you could use a hand"

"I would indeed thank you for that Ms. Naughty"

later after the clean up he said" well that's all done nothing left to do here"

He was about to leave when Ms. Naughty turned him around held him in her arms and kissed him on his lips.
It was a much longer one then the one he gave her before.

this made him blush madly which made her blush a bit too.

now they realized they both liked each other but neither needed to say it just savoring the moment and the kissing said it for them.
the end

i put v instead of w for more of the Transylvania type accent
that Ms. Naughty has
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vusCzKLqUwY

between 2:27 and 2:30 he kisses and hugs her

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Neopetgirl on August 7, 2010, 11:43:14 AM

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NeopetgirlAwh, that was so cute! I'm glad she helped clean up afterwards, that was nice. <3 Nice work, as usual. It put a smile on my face, that's for sure.

Falconlobo on August 7, 2010, 11:51:53 AM

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Falconlobothanks^^

LeandroValhalla on August 6, 2010, 12:18:29 PM

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LeandroValhallaaww! how cute :)

_ren_tao_fan_ on July 30, 2010, 11:24:51 PM

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_ren_tao_fan_Cute story. :3

Falconlobo on July 31, 2010, 2:26:00 PM

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Falconlobothough funny i never got the emails for story comments

Falconlobo on July 31, 2010, 2:25:28 PM

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Falconlobothanks i was sleeping before^^

darkwolf333 on July 30, 2010, 12:01:58 PM

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darkwolf333ohh great writting

Falconlobo on July 31, 2010, 2:25:13 PM

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Falconlobothanks^^